【期末考点复习】2022-2023学年外研版英语九年级上册-期末备考-专题12 单元话题书面表达精练精析23篇

这是一份【期末考点复习】2022-2023学年外研版英语九年级上册-期末备考-专题12 单元话题书面表达精练精析23篇，共32页。试卷主要包含了认真审题抓要点，巧用过渡词，句式多变，书写规范工整等内容，欢迎下载使用。

专题12 单元话题书面表达精练精析23篇
书面表达是中考英语必考题型，也是考生最容易失分的题型，其主要考查学生的语言运用能力、思维能力和书写能力，在中考中占有重要的地位。
写作步骤和技巧：
一、认真审题抓要点
在写作之前认真审题，确定好文章体裁，抓住要点。常见的文体有记叙文、说明文、议论文和应用文等。
1. 记叙文写作要点：(1)时间、地点、人物、事件经过和结局。(2)选用正确的人称。(3)线索一般为时间，即按照事件的发展顺序来写。(4)重点突出，层次分明，详略得当。(5)注意文章的完整性。(6)通常用一般过去时。
2. 议论文写作要点：(1)观点鲜明，要有一个明确的中心论点。(2)层次分明，中心论点和分论点要层次分明，过渡要清晰自然。(3)结尾要得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。(4)通常用一般现在时。(5)语言简洁有力，一般不用口语。
3. 说明文写作要点：(1)抓住事物的特征，以简明的文字介绍事物的形状、性质、构造、变化、功用和特性等。(2)说明事物要有一定的条理性和逻辑性。(3)说明文常见的顺序有时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等。
4. 应用文写作要点：应用文包括书信、通知、请假条、邀请函、感谢信和便条等。(1)写清楚称呼语。(2)具体时间、地点、概括性内容、涉及对象及有关注意事项。(3)语言要自然、平实、简洁。(4)结束语要向对方表示友善或亲切的问候。
二、巧用过渡词
文章都有一个先后顺序，一个逻辑结构，如何使文章结构清晰，要点明确，中心突出，这时巧妙运用过渡词，可以规范自己的逻辑思路，在有压力的写作之下能够做到临危不乱，有条不紊，层次清晰。
三、句式多变
在写句子的时候，不要只用那些清一色的简单句，要尽可能的变换句式和结构，让文章富于变化，错落有致。可以尝试使用更多的复合句，以及尝试变化语态。这样一定会使文章增加获胜的筹码。　
四、书写规范工整
书写是态度的体现，书写的规范和工整，直接影响到阅卷者的第一印象，从而决定一篇文章的得分高低，所以必须注意大小写、标点等的运用正确和规范。
M1话题：旅行
1．假如你是李华，你参加了由三星堆博物馆组织的“志愿小导游“活动。请根据以下内容写一篇短文，向外国游客介绍中国的三星堆遗址(the Sanxingdui Ruins)。
提示：1. 1929年首次意外被一个农民发现；
2. 1986年因发现上千件文物而引起广泛关注；
3. 最近科学家发现约500件距今3200多年的文物；
4. 遗址总面积约12平方千米；
5. 它的发现证明长江也是中华文明的起源之一。
参考词汇：cultural relic   文物      artifact   手艺品       discover    发现        civilization     文明
         It’s my great honour to be your tour guide today. ________________________________________________
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2．“研学旅行”是以组织中小学生集体旅行的方式走出校园，以各种不同的形式亲近社会与自然而开展的研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的教育活动。每个学期学校都会组织类似活动，大部分学生会参加，他们认为通过研学活动可以增加不一样的体验，也有小部分学生不参加，他们认为学习时间过于紧张，不如在学校自习。对此，你的看法是什么？请根据以下要点提示为校刊写一篇英语短文。
1、要点提示：①介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
②表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由(至少2点)。
2、注意事项：①短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
②80词左右；
③文中不得出现个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：研学旅行 study trip； 乘骑设施 ride
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. ______________
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M2话题：节日
3．我国的传统节日源远流长，越来越多的外国友人也开始热衷于了解中华传统节日。假如你的学校正在举办“讲好中华传统节日，一起向未来 ”英语的活动，请你以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Festival”为题，向外国友人介绍一个你最喜欢的传统节日。描述你及家人节日里的活动，并谈谈你的感受。
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4．请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇英语作文，畅谈中国传统佳节，弘扬中华传统文化。
1.内容提示：（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日，如名称、时间等；
      （2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式，如食物、活动等；
      （3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
2.写作要求：（1）内容包含以上要点，词数80—100；
（2）语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
          （3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
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M3话题：英雄
5．以“The hero in my heart”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
提示：可以谈论一下你心中的英雄是谁；她(他)有什么样的事迹或故事；你喜欢她(他)的原因及应该怎样向她(他)学习。
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6．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80~100。
习近平总书记在多次讲话中强调“新时代，呼唤英雄”。其实，英雄就在我们身边。这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、同学、朋友、老师……请介绍一下你心中的“小人物，大英雄”。
提示：①你心中的英雄是谁。
②记述你印象深刻的一件事。
③对你的影响。
要求：①语意连贯，层次清晰，书写清楚。
②文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
③文章开头已开出，不计入总词数。
A Hero in My Heart
Everybody has a hero in his heart. ____________________________________________________________
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M4话题：经历
7．请以“Staying at home alone was ______ for me”为题，讲述一下你某次独自在家的经历。
要求：1.先把题目补充完整，空格处词数不限；
2.叙述有条理，时态运用准确；
3.80词左右。
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8．假如今天是3月10日，星期六，父母去北京出差，你一个人在家。请根据下面提示，以“Home alone for the first time”为题，写一篇70词左右的英文日记，记录你今天的生活。可适当发挥。
提示:1.上午:整理自己的房间，洗了自己的衣服；
2.中午:做了一顿简单的午餐；
3.下午:做作业，看电视。
Saturday，March 10 Sunny
Home alone for the first time
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M5话题：规则
假如你陪你的外籍老师去某音乐厅，在门口的布告栏里看见一张观众须知，内容如下:
观众须知:1. 一人一票凭票人场；
2. 场内严禁吸烟；
3. 食品和饮料请勿带进场内；
4. 演出时请勿照相；
5. 演出时请勿使用电话；
6. 提前30分钟入场。
Smith先生不懂中文，他很想知道布告栏里写的什么。现在，请你把观众须知的内容用英文告诉Smith先生，并把要讲的话写下来。
Mr Smith，it is a notice to the audience. ________________________________________________________
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10．你家附近有个大图书馆，馆内有许多书，请你将这个图书馆的要求介绍给你的同学，以便他们去那儿看书时能遵守这些规定。
规定：1. 不要把包带进图书馆 ；
2. 看书时保持安静，不要大声喧哗，到处跑动。
3. 馆内禁止吸烟；
4. 每次可借四本书；不能将书转借给别人；按时还书；
5. 下午六点前离开图书馆，图书馆六点关门。
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M6话题：提出建议
11．英语变得越来越重要了，但是对于很多学生来说学英语很难。请你结合自己的学习经验给他们提些建议。词数不少于80词。
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12．英语是中学里一门重要课程，但是有的同学因学习方法不当导致效果不佳，有的同学因畏惧困难而放弃英语学习。针对这些现象，同学们展开了“怎样学好英语”的大讨论。请你以“Talking about English Learning”为题，写一篇征文，谈谈你对英语学习的看法以及你学习英语的成功经验，给学习有困难的同学说几条学好英语的建议。
1.提示：
1）Why do you learn English?
2）How do you learn English?
3）Your suggestions.
2.要求：
1）短文应包括所有要点，要点顺序可以自己安排，词数100左右；
2）语句通顺、连贯，能表达自己的真实思想；
3）所提建议不少于两条。
Talking about English Learning
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M7话题：阅读
13．“读书之法无他，惟是笃志虚心，反复详玩，为有功耳。”在每个人的成长过程中，阅读都起着举足轻重的作用。请以“I love reading”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点：
(1)喜欢读书的原因；
(2)可以读的内容；
(3)你的阅读习惯。
2. 要求：
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
(2)词数80—100。
I love reading
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14．请以“My Favourite Great Book”为题，根据下面的问题写一篇80个词左右的短文，注意适当表达自己的看法。
1. Who is the writer of the great book? 2. What is the main idea of the book?
3. Who are the important characters? 4. What’s the title of the story?
      My favourite great book is ___________________________________________________________________
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M8话题：运动
体育运动是中学生的共同爱好。请你根据下面的提示写一篇题为“What We Get from Sports”的英语短文，短文应包含以下要点：
1．学生参加体育运动的理由各异；
2．多数学生学习疲倦时，通过运动来放松自己；
3．男孩们参加各项体育活动，希望运动能使自己更强壮；
4．女孩们也喜欢运动，希望运动能帮助自己减肥和保持苗条；
5．你对运动的观点。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．80～100词，不可逐字翻译，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：lose weight减肥；keep slim保持苗条
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16．书面表达
根据提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，要求条理清楚，文理通顺，意思连贯。
为加强中学生的身体素质，教育部开展全国学生“Exercise one hour a day”——“阳光体育”的活动，学生们非常赞成这一举措，但又不少家长们对这一活动持反对意见。
请你以“Should students exercise one hour a day？”为话题，参照表格的信息，写一篇短文。
Parents' ideas
Your ideas
1. have less sleeping time
1…
2. have less time for study
2…
3. get hurt possibly
3…

要求：
1.所写内容必须包括表格中家长的想法和你的至少三个想法。
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Now students are supposed to have sports for an hour every day. But parents have different opinions.
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M9话题：发明
17．近几年来，人们的交流方式发生了天翻地覆的变化。几年前我们通过写信、打电话和发邮件与他人联系，现在越来越多的人使用微信(WeChat)交流。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对微信的看法。
写作提示：1.使用微信交流的好处；
2. 微信带来的问题；
3. 你对微信的态度。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右。
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18．最近，用手机app买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富，洗净配好，预约送菜……外国朋友对此也很感兴趣。请你以A new use of the mobile phone为题，写一篇英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利，让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。
注意：
1.词数80～100；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
A new use of the mobile phone
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M10话题：景点
19．请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的日记。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
假如你是李明，今天游览了世界自然奇观之黄山。黄山位于安徽省南部，每年都吸引数百万的游客来游览。清晨，你乘汽车到达黄山，那时天正在下雨。你一下车就开始登山。大约半小时后，云开始散开，雨停了，太阳也出来了。在登山过程中，你领略了云海、奇松( wondrous pines)、怪石( unique rocks)等美景。
Monday, August 13 Rainy &. Fine
Today I visited Mount Huang, one of the wonders of the natural world._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
20．假如你是林浩，你的美国笔友David想来中国旅游。请你根据表格中的提示内容给David发一封电子邮件，给他推荐一些旅游地。80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
北京
中国的首都，历史悠久，名胜古迹不胜枚举，如长城、故宫(the Forbidden City)、颐和园(the Summer Palace)等。夏天和秋天是来北京的最佳时节。
大连、青岛
夏季比较适宜游玩，可以在海滨冲浪。
海南
四季如春，是潜水(scuba diving)的好地方
Dear David,From your email I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Lin Hao
M11话题：摄影和照片
21．请根据提示, 以“My Favourite Photo”为题写一篇短文, 80～100词。
提示：
1.Where was it taken?
2. What does it show?
3. What are the main colours of the photo?
4. Why do you like it most?
My Favourite Photo
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M12话题：保护环境
22．学校是我们的家园，爱护学校是我们的职责，请你根据提示，写一篇80词左右的文章。
提示：1. 不要随地吐痰、扔垃圾，地上有垃圾应捡起来并投入垃圾箱；
2. 不要踩、摘花草，不要在墙上和课桌上乱涂乱画；
3. 要节约能源（energy），不用水、灯时应及时关上开关；
4. 收集废纸等东西以便回收利用；
5. 步行或骑自行车上学；
6. 不要购买或使用一次性的杯子和碗筷。
要求：1. 文章必须涵盖所有提示，可适当发挥；
2. 力求阐述提示，80词左右；
3. 文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
School is our home. It’s our duty to protect our school environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
23．假如你是一所国际学校的学生会主席李华，你想以学生会的名义写一封保护环境的英语倡议书，让全校学生行动起来共同保护地球。
内容包括：
1. 地球面临的问题；
2. 应该采取的措施；
3. 提出倡议。
要求：
1.词数80-100，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
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The Student Union

参考答案：
1．例文
         It’s my great honour to be your tour guide today. In 1929, a farmer found the Sangxingdui Ruins by accident. People found some artifacts, but didn’t know how important they were. After “sleeping” for more than 3,000 years, the Sanxingdui Ruins surprised the world in 1986. Scientists found more than 1,000 cultural relics then.
        The surprises didn’t stop there. Scientists recently found about 500 cultural relics that date back more than 3,200 years. The total area of the Sanxingdui Ruins is about 12 square kilometres.
        The Sanxingdui Ruins are thought to be one of the world’s greatest discoveries of the 20th century. The discovery shows that the Chinese civilization started not only along the Yellow River, but also along the Yangze River.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干中的提示内容向外国游客介绍中国的三星堆遗址，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要讲述三星堆的发现过程以及发现的上千件文物；第二段描述最近的三星堆发现；第三段介绍发现三星堆的意义。写作时保证语言的准确性，保证无单词拼写和语法错误。
2．例文：
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Last year, we went to the USA. We had a good time there. We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. We studied English with them. I think a study trip is a good way for students to study.
When we have a study trip, we can visit many places of natural beauty. During the study trip, we can learn many things that we can’t learn at school. We can be served with different new food and know more things about different customs.
In my opinion, we should hold more activities like this. If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries.
I hope study trips are becoming more and more popular.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”关于研学旅行的写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出，点名主题，“研学旅行”现在很受学生欢迎；
第二步，介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
第三步，表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由；
第四步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②have a good time玩得高兴
③be served with向……提供
④in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. (who引导的定语从句)
②If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries. (If引导的条件状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句)
3．范文
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Festival
There are some traditional festivals in China. My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family get together. We have a big dinner at my grandparents’ home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books. Sometimes, we greet other people on the phone.
The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it’s the beginning of a new year. I’m always happy at the Spring Festival.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Festival”为题，介绍一个你最喜欢的传统节日，内容中要包含节日里的活动以及你的感受，注意要点齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出想要介绍的自己最喜欢的节日；
第二步，介绍在这个节日里通常会做哪些事情，要详细具体；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have lots of fun玩得开心
②get together相聚一起
③go shopping购物
④buy...for...为某人买某物
[高分句型]
①My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it’s the beginning of a new year.（形容词最高级句型；because引导的原因状语从句）
4．例文
My Favorite Chinese Festival
There are some traditional festivals in China. My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family get together. We have a big dinner at my grandparents’ home. I always eat a lot of delicious food, such as dumplings and fish. My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books. Sometimes, we greet other people on the phone.
The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it’s the beginning of a new year. I’m always happy at the Spring Festival.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，介绍一个你最喜欢的中国节日，内容中要包含节日里的活动以及你的感受等，注意要点齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出想要介绍的自己最喜欢的节日；
第二步，具体阐述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受以及喜爱它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①have lots of fun玩得开心
②get together相聚一起
③go shopping购物
④buy...for...为某人买某物
[高分句型]
①My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it’s the beginning of a new year.（形容词最高级句型；because引导的原因状语从句）
5．例文：
The Hero in My Heart
Jackie Chan is one of the most famous film stars in China. And he is also a hero in my heart.
He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work, he has made over 80 films. He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect. As a Chinese, he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well. He gave away much money to help the children in poor villages.
From Jackie Chan, we can learn a lot, such as the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others.
【详解】1.题目解读：本文属于记述人物类作文，题目为我心中的英雄，文中要指出谁是我心中的英雄; 接下来崇拜他的原因，有哪些值得我崇拜的地方，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文采用第三人称来叙述，时态上主要用一般现在时；写作时要思路清晰，层次分明，时态运用正确，做到语言具有连贯性，表达具有条理性。
6．One possible version：
A Hero in My Heart
Everybody has a hero in his heart. My hero is my mother, because she has been working hard all the time and never gives up.
Once she would have a difficult exam. To pass it, she must read four books. But my mother did not have so much time because she had to take care of me. One night, when I woke up suddenly at 2 o’clock, I found her staying up late to read her books. I was shocked by my mother.
My mother always sets a goal and manages to finish it. She is a hero in my heart and encourages me to work hard.
【详解】这是一篇命题作文。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点、跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上。此篇作文需要用一般过去时态进行叙述心目中英雄的事情，人称为第三人称。注意动词过去式的形式要正确。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，可以使用大量的固定句式和短语，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】这篇短文使用的主从复合句比较多，比如“when I woke up suddenly at 2 o'clock, I found her staying up late to read her books”，按照动作发生的先后顺序，使得句子更加有层次感，文章避免单纯的重复，使短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对作者的母亲有了比较全面的了解，不失为一篇上等作文。
【高分案例一】My hero is my mother, because she has been working hard all the time and never gives up.（我的英雄是我的母亲，因为她一直努力工作，从不放弃。）because引导的原因状语从句引出我的英雄是我妈妈的原因。【高分案例二】She is a hero in my heart and encourages me to work hard.（她是我心中的英雄，鼓励我努力工作。）鼓励某人做某事的结构encourage sb. to do sth.用不定式结构使得句子结构更加清晰，表达更加明了。
7．例文：
Staying at home alone was not difficult for me
When I was ten, both of my parents went to another town to look after my sick grandfather, and I was all by myself for 24 hours.
At first, I was a little afraid because I had never been home alone before. But soon I forgot about it because I threw myself into an interesting book. I spent the whole morning reading it. At noon, I took the food out of the fridge and heated it. Mum cooked a lot of food before she left. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, Iwashed my clothes in the afternoon. In the evening, I finished my homework and watched two movies. Then I went to bed at 10:30.
Being home alone was not as difficult as I had thought. I really felt proud of myself.
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达是一篇话题作文。要求我们“Staying at home alone was ______ for me”为题，讲述一下我们某次独自在家的经历。
2.写作指导：本篇书面表达讲述的是过去的一次经历，故应使用一般过去时态；叙述事情的经过要有条理，按照时间的顺序，把事情的前因后果叙述清楚，最后来说明自己的感受，回应题目；写作时，应注意英语句子表达和汉语的不同，正确使用动词、名词、形容词，还应使用一些固定的短语和句型来表达，句子之间使用一些过渡词和连词，使文章意思连贯、表达流畅。
8．例文
Saturday，March 10 Sunny
Home alone for the first time
My parents have gone to Beijing on business，so I stay at home alone. In the morning，I tidied up my bedroom and washed my clothes. At noon，I cooked for the first time. It was a very simple，but simply delicious lunch. In the afternoon，I did my homework first，and then watched TV.
Although I've never stayed at home alone before，I'm doing very well，I'm really proud of myself.
【详解】假如今天是3月10日，星期六，父母去北京出差，你一个人在家。请根据下面提示，以“Home alone for the first time”为题，写一篇70词左右的英文日记，记录你今天的生活。可适当发挥。这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:so I stay at home alone. In the morning，I tidied up my bedroom and washed my clothes.。平时我们写作的时候要注意收集一些。
9．Mr Smith，it is a notice to the audience. It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts. One person one ticket， Admission by ticket only. As a rule， food or drink should not be taken into the hall. Of course，smoking is not allowed in the hall， either. Please don't bring your digital cameras with you because no photos can be taken during the concert. And what is more， mobile phones must be turned off during the concert.
【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下观众须知。所提供的材料中列举了观众须知的内容。主要从1. 一人一票凭票人场；2. 场内严禁吸烟； 3. 食品和饮料请勿带进场内；4. 演出时请勿照相；5. 演出时请勿使用电话；6. 提前30分钟入场。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts. 它说我们应该在音乐会开始前30分钟进入音乐厅。
句子that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts.是由that引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】Please don't bring your digital cameras with you because no photos can be taken during the concert. 请不要随身携带数码相机，因为音乐会期间不能拍照。
句子because no photos can be taken during the concert.是由because引导的原因状语从句。
10．例文：
There is a big library near my home. It is very good and I often go there to do some reading. There are all kinds of books in it. When you read in the library, you should follow these rules:
Don’t take your bags into the library. You must keep quiet while you are reading. There is no shouting or running around in it. You mustn’t smoke in the library. You can borrow four books at a time, but you mustn’t lend them to others. Remember to return the books on time. You’d better leave the library before 6:00 pm, because it closes at 6:00 pm.
Follow the rules and you’ll enjoy yourself in it.
【详解】1.题干解读：.在你家附近有个大图书馆，馆内有许多书，你把这个图书馆的要求介绍给你的同学，以便他们去那里看书时能遵守这些规定。写作时，必须包含所列举的五条规定。
2.写作指导：因为文章大部分写的是图书馆的规则，所以使用祈使句较多。写作时，第一段对图书馆进行介绍，用“there be”句型介绍，要求遵守那里的规定；第二段具体的那些规则和要求；最后总结遵守规定的重要性。
11．例文
As we all know, English is used very widely in the world. So it will be helpful for us to master it. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to English songs and watch English movies. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we will make. Third, we should read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should keep a diary in English.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明英语的重要性，并引出要给出自己的建议；
第二步，具体阐述如何学好英语；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know众所周知
②listen to听
③be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we will make.（“the+比较级..., the 比较级”结构）
②In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.（“as long as”引导条件状语从句）
12．例文
Talking about English Learning
English is spoken by many people in the world. It’s becoming more and more useful in our life.
I have learned English for many years. In class, I try to listen to the teacher carefully and speak English more. After class, first I go over the lessons. Then I listen to tapes, watch English programs on TV, read English, join the English Corner and so on. I study hard so I’m good at it now.
By the way, here are some suggestions for you. First, believe yourself, and try to read or speak English loudly. Second, learn English words and useful phrases or sentences by heart. Third, try to use English as much as possible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给英文提示，介绍你对英语学习的看法以及你学习英语的成功经验，给学习有困难的同学说几条学好英语的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你为什么学习英语；
第二步，介绍你是如何学习英语的；
第三步，给出你自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听；
②be good at擅长；
③as much as possible尽可能多
[高分句型]
I study hard so I’m good at it now.（so连接两个独立的句子）
13．例文
I love reading
Reading is very important in our life. I love reading because I can get knowledge. It can not only open my mind but also open my eyes to other cultures. Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English. Textbooks, newspapers and magazines can help me know more about the outside world and grow into an excellent person. Every month I read at least two books. And I especially love reading every night before I go to bed. It can make me feel relaxed and peaceful. I love reading books about history, travelling, painting and so on.
I have got a lot through reading. It makes me become better and better. I love reading forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点和要求已给出，考生要注意，在符合写作要求的前提下不要遗漏写作要点，并有所突出；可以适当增加细节，使得文章结构、内容完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述写作内容。简单介绍自己喜欢阅读，重点从“喜欢读书的原因、可以读的内容、自己的阅读习惯”三个方面进行说明；
第二步，书写结语。再次点明读书的好处以及自己对阅读的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also不但……而且……
②grow into an excellent person成长为一个优秀的人
③at least至少
④and so on等等
[高分句型]
①Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English.（“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”句型）
②It makes me become better and better.（比较级+比较级，表示“越来越……”）
14．例文：
My Favourite Great Book
My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever young boy. He lives with his auntie Polly. His auntie is very strict with him, so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends, Huck Finn and Joe. With Huck, he goes looking for treasure. With Becky, he gets lost in a cave, and finally they find a box of gold.
Tom is the hero of the story, but there are other important characters. Huck is an outsider. Becky is pretty with fair hair. Joe is Tom’s best friend, and Injun Joe is the bad man of the story.
The themes of the story are to do with children growing up and becoming more serious.
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达是一篇话题作文。要求我们以“My Favourite Great Book”为题，根据书的作者，主要人物，故事的主题等方面的问题，写一篇80个词左右的短文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；写作时首先介绍自己最喜欢的书名以及作者；其次陈述这本书的中心思想；然后说出这本书里面的重要人物；最后说出故事主题。
15．例文：
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common—an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports.They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. Girls also like sports. Some of them want to lose weight, to be slim and pretty by doing sports.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have,we all can get a lot from sports.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，写作时要议论文格式写。在写作时第一段介绍学生们都喜欢运动；第二段介绍男生和女生对运动的不同观点；第三段表达我对运动的观点。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，分析男生和女生想从运动中得到的东西，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：have … in common；take part in；want to do sth；relax oneself；all kinds of；in order to；in one’s opinion。
句型：时间状语从句when they feel tired after study；让步状语从句no matter what reasons we have。
16．Now students are supposed to have sports for an hour every day. But some parents have different opinions. They think if teenagers exercise one hour a day, they will have less sleeping time. And they also have less time for study. Besides, they may possibly get hurt if they are not careful.
In my opinion, we teenagers should have more time to do sports in the morning or after school. As we know, exercise can make us strong and relaxed, and it can make our school life more colorful. So I think exercise for one hour a day is necessary. Maybe we can study harder and better.
【详解】这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be supposed to do，get hurt，get good grades，be careful，in my opinion，have more time to do，do sports，in the morning，after school，as we know，study harder and better等。而固定句型They think if teenagers exercise one hour a day, they will have less sleeping time. / Besides, they may possibly get hurt if they are not careful./ So I think exercise for one hour a day is necessary.等复杂从句的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
17．范文：
WeChat is becoming more and more popular now. A few years ago, people got in touch with each other by sending letters, calling or writing e-mails, but now more people are using WeChat. By using WeChat, making friends is becoming easier. We can also share our life experiences. However, there are also some problems. If we use WeChat too often, we will have less time to study. Sometimes it is not safe for students to make friends by WeChat. I think WeChat is helpful in our life, but we should use it carefully.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。题目要求是根据提示要点写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对微信的看法。要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；语句要通顺，条理要清晰，详略要得当，书写要工整书，100词左右。
2.写作指导：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
18．例文：
A new use of the mobile phone
Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help.
These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You can order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like, they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier.
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，介绍手机买菜带来的便利，让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化，要写明这种应用软件的功能及好处，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.写作指导：本文应采用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时，叙述要完整，保证条理清晰，写作中注意运用代词，多种句式交替运用，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
19．例文：
Monday, August 13 Rainy &. Fine
Today I visited Mount Huang, one of the wonders of the natural world. Mount Huang lies in the south of Anhui Province and attracts millions of tourists every year. Early in the morning, when I arrived there by car, it was raining. As soon as I got out of the car, I began to climb the mountain. About half an hour later, the clouds suddenly began to clear and the rain stopped. The sun also rose. While I was climbing the mountain, I enjoyed the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks. I really had a good time.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，要求我们以李明的身份来叙述去黄山的一次旅行，简单介绍一下黄山的风景。在题目中给出了我们具体的写作的提纲，包括黄山的地理位置，黄山的风景特色，旅游的行程等。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容翻译出来，注意书写时要有条理，按照时间的顺序来写。同时还有去黄山的交通工具、当时的天气情况等这些小的要点，不要遗漏。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述，且因为这里是记叙一次旅行，故本篇短文应该使用一般过去时态，所以要注意每句话中的谓语动词的形式，同时要注意语句之间的衔接，使文章表达完整、流畅。
20．例文：
Dear David,
From your email I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea. As you know, Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history. In Beijing there are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. The best time to come here is summer and autumn.
It’s fun to go surfing in Dalian or Qingdao in summer. Besides, you can visit Hainan. It’s like spring all the year round there. And you can go scuba diving. I think you’ll enjoy yourself in China.
I hope you’ll come soon and wish you a lot of fun.
Yours,
Lin Hao
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封回信，信中主要是向朋友介绍中国的一些旅游地，表格中给出了北京、大连、青岛和海南这四个地方以及它们的特点，在写作时，每个城市的特点都要描述，不要遗漏。
2.写作指导：本文是一封回信，信的开头和结尾已经给出。文章主要是推荐一些中国的旅游地，用一般现在时。第一段讲述北京的特点；第二段主要介绍其他地方的特点。在写作时，要注意运用连接词以及不同的句式介绍各个城市的特点，使文章逻辑清楚，流畅自然。
21．例文
My Favourite Photo
My favourite photo was taken 3 years ago in the concert. It shows a band called Crazy Feet. The band is very famous and many people like it. In the photo, there are lots of orange, red and purple lights. At the front is the singer, and at the back is the young man who plays music. I like the photo very much, because it shows the fun everyone is having. It also reminds me of the happiness I had in the concert.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文，以“My Favourite Photo”为题的一篇作文，作文内容要包括文章所提示的四点内容。
2.写作指导：结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时态 ，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
22．例文
School is our home. It’s our duty to protect our school environment. Everyone can do something useful to improve the environment. First of all, we shouldn't litter everywhere or spit in public places. Pick up the rubbish and throw it into the dustbins if you find it on the ground. Second, we mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. Don’t draw on the desk or public walls. Third, we should save energy. Turn off the taps and lights in time when we don’t use them. Fourth, we can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. Fifth, it’s good for us to walk or ride bikes to school instead of taking cars. Last but not the least, we shouldn’t buy or use cups, chopsticks or bowls that can be used only once.
In a word, if every student makes a contribution to protecting the environment, our school will be much more beautiful. Let’s take action.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容，写一篇作文，介绍下如何爱护学校。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。写作时可适当使用衔接词，比如first，second，third，fourth，fifth以及finally等，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
23．例文
Dear fellow students,
With the development of modern agriculture and industry, large quantities of waste are created every day, making the environment worse and worse, which can lead to the disappearance of a lot of plants and animals, and even the mankind eventually. So it is time that we should take measures to protect the environment.
First, walking to school is a good way to reduce pollution. Second, we should plant trees every spring to protect the soil from being washed away. Third, it’s also important to recycle everything useful. We should keep our school clean by picking up any litter. Finally, remember to turn off the water taps after finishing washing and turn off the lights when leaving the classroom. In a word, only when we form the good habit of environmental protection can we make the earth more beautiful tomorrow.
Let’s take action to protect our mother — the earth now.
The Student Union
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以学生会的名义写一封保护环境的英语倡议书，号召全校学生行动起来共同保护地球。注意不要漏点，结合要点提示可以适当地添加合理内容；在介绍措施时，可以适当地使用逻辑词，使文章条理清晰。
2.写作指导：这是一篇倡议文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。例文采取三段式的写作手法：第一段说明目前环境污染的严重性，保护环境的重要性；第二段分点介绍保护环境的措施；第三段提出倡议，号召大家参加行动。