(新高考)高考英语一轮复习课件选择性必修一 Unit 5 Working the Land (含详解)

这是一份(新高考)高考英语一轮复习课件选择性必修一 Unit 5 Working the Land (含详解)，共60页。PPT课件主要包含了root　，reality　，entirely　，salty　，depth　，extension　，poverty　，essential　，generate　，domestic　等内容，欢迎下载使用。

【话题词汇】1.beneficial adj. 有好处的2.refresh v. (使)精神振作，(使)精力恢复3.harmful adj. 有伤害的4.tasty adj. 味道好的5.reduce vt. 减少，缩减6.serve vt. 招待(顾客等)，服务7.strengthen v. 增强8.acute adj. 严重的；(疾病)急性的
主题语境：人与自我(健康的生活方式)
9.allergic adj. 过敏的10.appetite n. 食欲，胃口11.bitter adj. 苦的，有苦味的12.depressed adj. 抑郁的，沮丧的13.digest vt. 消化；领会14.disease n. 疾病15.nutritius adj. 营养的16.pisnus adj. 有毒的
【话题短语】1.be beneficial t 对……有益2.lead t water and sil lss 导致水土流失3.be rich/abundant in 富含……4.be high/lw in 含……高/低5.alleviate fd shrtage 解决食物短缺6.keep eclgical envirnment 保护生态平衡7.build up ne's bdy 增强某人的体质8.prtect the natural balance f the envirnment 保护环境的生态平衡9.keep healthy bth physically and mentally 保持身心健康10.develp a healthy eating habit 养成健康的饮食习惯
【话题佳句】1.Every single grain n yur plate is the result f hard wrk.谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。2.It is widely believed that plenty f fresh air cntributes t gd health.人们通常认为足够的新鲜空气有助于健康。3.Yu'd better exercise regularly and have a healthy diet, which is the mst imprtant way t help yu stay away frm an infectin.你最好经常锻炼并健康饮食，这是帮你远离感染的最重要的方法。
【话题练习】1.As lng as yu stp eating that much every day, yu can lse sme weight.只要你每天不吃那么多，你就可以减一些体重了。2.If I were yu, I wuld wrk ut regularly and get int gd eating habits in rder t keep healthy.如果我是你，我会经常锻炼并养成良好的饮食习惯以保持健康。
Ⅰ.重点单词1．________________ n. 根；根茎；根部；2．________________ n. 现实，事实，实际情况3．________________ adv. 全部地，完整地，完全地4．________________ adj. 含盐的5．________________ n. 深度，向下或向里的距离6．________________ n. 扩大，延伸7．________________ n. 贫穷8．________________ adj. 完全必要的；极其重要的
9．________________ n. 消费；消耗；10．________________ vt. 产生；引起11．________________ adj. 国内的；家庭的；驯养的；12．________________ adj. 热切的；十分强烈的；激烈的13．____________ vt.&vi. 克服；胜过(pt./pp.) ________________14．__________ n. 危机；危险期；决定性时刻(pl.) ___________15．________________ n. 特点，特征，品质adj. 典型的，独特的16．________________ n. 想象；视力；视野；影像
vercame/vercme　
characteristic　
Ⅱ.拓展单词1．________ vt.献身；专心于→________ adj.忠实的；深爱的→ ________ n．关爱；献身；奉献2．________ n. 缺乏，缺少；不足→ ________ adj. 短的；不足的→ ________ vt./vi.缩短；减少；3．__________ vt.使信服→ __________ adj.令人信服的→ __________ adj.坚信不疑的4．________ vt.获得；到达→________ adj. 可得到的；可达到的→ ________ adj. 做不到的；难到达的→ __________ n. 达到；成就；学识5. ________ adj. 传统的；常见的；惯例的→ ________ n. 大会；惯例； 约定；协定；习俗→____________ adv.按照惯例→ ________ adj.不依惯例的
attainable　
unattainable　
attainment　
cnventinal　
cnventinally　
uncnventinal　
6．__________ n．假定；设想→ __________ vt.假定；设想→ ________ cnj.假设7．________ n．&v. 估计，估价；判断，看法，估量→pt./pp. ________________→________ adj. 估计的；预计的；估算的8．________ n. 名人；名声→ ________ adj. 著名的；有名望的9．________ adj. 营养(物)的→ ________ n. 营养；滋养→ ________ adj.有营养的10．________ vt.&vi.消化；vt.领会；领悟→ ________ n．消化，领悟→ ________ adj.助消化的
estimated/estimated
celebrated　
nutritinal　
联想拓展不可数名词集锦①prgress 进步②infrmatin 信息③fun 乐趣；快乐④luggage/baggage 行李⑤advice 建议⑥furniture 家具
后缀­hd名词集锦①neighbrhd 邻里②childhd 童年③brtherhd 手足之情④adulthd 成年⑤manhd 男子气概⑥parenthd 父母身份，亲子关系
Ⅲ.核心短语1．________________ 由……组成2．________________ 相应地，转而，一次，轮流3．________________ 完全没有，远不及4．________________ 致力于；献身于5．________________ 例如，比如6．________________ 事实远非如此7．________________ 在内心深处8．________________ 利用9．________________ 抱怨10．________________ 想起；想象出(不寻常的事物)；凭空设想
be cmprised f　
nwhere near　
devte ne's life t　
fr instance
be far frm the case　
make use f　
cmplain abut　
联想拓展in＋名词短语荟萃①in advance 提前②in turn 依次；反过来③in persn 亲自④in return 作为回报⑤in additin 此外，而且⑥in fact 事实上
表示“聪明”的形容词荟萃①smart 聪明的；机敏的②gifted/talented 有才能的③wise 明智的④brilliant 杰出的⑤intelligent 聪明的⑥creative 富有创造力的
Ⅳ.重点句型1．what引导主语从句Hwever, ________________________ (最让他担心的事) was that farmers ften had pr harvests and smetimes even had a serius shrtage f fd t eat.2．介词＋关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句Indeed, his slim but strng bdy is just like that f millins f Chinese farmers ________________________.(他奉献了一生)
what cncerned him mst
t whm he has devted his life
3．It is/was＋过去分词＋, _______________ (据估算) abut 60 percent f dmestic rice cnsumptin in China is cmprised f crps generated frm Yuan's hybrid strains.4．given that...引导的状语从句________ (鉴于) Yuan's hybrids have made him quite wealthy, ne might think he wuld retire t a life f leisure.
it is estimated that
高频考点探究Ⅰ.核心词汇1．devte vt.把……献(给)；把……专用于；专心于【教材原句】Indeed, his slim but strng bdy is just like that f millins f Chinese farmers, t whm he has devted his life.事实上，他瘦削但结实的身躯看起来和农民一样，而他为千千万万中国农民奉献了一生。(1) (ding) sth. 把……献给(做)某事devte neself t＝be devted t 献身于；专心致志于(2)devted adj. 忠实的；深爱的devtin n. 奉献；关爱
【练透考点】单句语法填空①The ld teacher ________ all his life t educating his ________ students and he was admired fr his ________ t the educatin cause. (devte)②________ t learning English fr years, I think I am qualified fr the jb because I am capable f cmmunicatin with freigners in English fluently.(devte)③He devted all his spare time t ________ (help) his students with all their English.④He made up his mind t devte all he had ________ (help) thse pr children.
【佳句背诵】Vlunteers came with the carlads f dnated clthing and tys. Neighbrs dnated their spare time t helping thers rebuilt.志愿者们带来了一车车捐赠的衣服和玩具，邻居们用他们的空闲时间来帮助别人重建家园。 
2．cnvince vt.使相信；使确信；说服【教材原句】Yuan was cnvinced that the answer culd be fund in the creatin f hybrid rice.袁隆平确信，答案可以在杂交水稻的培育中找到。(1)cnvince sb. f sth. 使某人相信某事cnvince sb. that... 使某人相信……cnvince sb.t d sth. 说服某人做某事(2)cnvincing adj. 有说服力的cnvinced adj. 确信的；坚信的be cnvinced f 相信……be cnvinced (that)．.. (某人)相信……(3)cnvincingly adv. 有说服力地， 令人信服地
【练透考点】单句语法填空①He tried t cnvince me f the truth f the news, but he culd nt prvide ________ prf. Therefre, it seemed that he did nt speak ________.(cnvince)②________ (cnvince) that the Belt and Rad Initiative will benefit the China's ecnmy, we are ptimistic abut the future f ur cuntry.③Scientists are cnvinced ________ the psitive effect f the laughter n physical and mental health.
cnvincingly　
【佳句背诵】Only by presenting facts and reasning things ut can we cnvince peple.摆事实、讲道理， 才能让人服气。
3．assumptin n．假定；设定；(责任的)承担；(权利的)获得【教材原句】The cmmn assumptin then was that it culd nt be dne.当时人们普遍认为这是不可能的。 (1)make an assumptin that... 认为；假定n the assumptin that... 假定……(2)assume v. 假定；设想assume sb./sth. t be 假定/假设某人/某事为It is assumed that... 一般认为……assuming (that)．.. 假设/假定……
【练透考点】单句语法填空①Dn't ________ that yu are a princess and stp living in ________ any mre. (assume)②________ is generally assumed that stress is caused by t much wrk.③With the rapid develpment f the ecnmy, China is assuming ________ greater rle in the prtectin f the envirnment.④We are wrking n the plan ________ the assumptin that everyne invited will turn up.
assumptins　
【佳句背诵】It is universally assumed that glbal warming and climate change culd cause even mre disasters in the future.普遍认为全球变暖和气候的变化在将来会导致更多的灾难。
4．expand vt.&vi.扩大；增加　vt.扩展；发展(业务)【教材原句】This hybrid enabled farmers t expand their utput greatly.(课本P50)这种杂交使农民的产量大大增加。  把……扩展/发展成……expand int... 发展成/扩大成……expand n... 细说(阐述)……expansin n. 扩展；扩张；膨胀；扩大
【误区释疑】expand vt.&vi.使变大；伸展expend花费【构词法】ex­前缀：①表示向外；②表示前任；③表示加强的作用eg：exit 出口 　　　　exprt 出口exceed 超过，超出 　 extract 提取，抽出
【练透考点】单句语法填空①[2017·天津卷书面表达]In rder ________ my knwledge f Tianjin, such as its histry, traditin and fd, I spend every spare mment I have in the library. (expand)②It's a fact that irn ________ when it is heated. (expand)③________ (expand) yur knwledge by reading mre bks is a wise chice.④Culd yu expand ________ that pint, please?
【佳句背诵】Our vcabulary expands thrugh a wide range f reading.我们的词汇量通过广泛的阅读而扩大。
5．alternative n．可供选择的事物；adj.可供替代的；非传统的【教材原句】As an alternative, sme farmers have switched t rganic farming, and many custmers have turned t rganic fd when they shp at the lcal grcery.作为一种选择，一些农民转向有机农业，许多顾客在当地杂货店购物时转向有机食品。
(1)have n alternative/chice but t d sth. 别无选择只好做某事(2)have the alternative f ding sth. 有做……的选择，可以做……(3)there's n t d sth. ……别无选择只好做某事(4)an alternative t... ……的替代品(5)alternatively adv. 要不，或者
【知识拓展】“别无选择只好做……”的其他表达形式：(1)have n chice but t d sth.(2)can't d sth.but d sth.(3)can d nthing but d sth.
【练透考点】单句语法填空①The manager said that they had ________ alternative plan if the plan they had put frward was nt accepted.②The Internet als prvides us with a cheap alternative t ________ (cmmunicate) with thers.③It was s serius a matter that I had n alternative but ________ (call) the plice.④The agency will make travel arrangements fr yu.________ (alternative), yu can rganize yur wn transprt.
cmmunicating　
Alternatively
【佳句背诵】Anyhw，there is n alternative but t take measures t prtect thse ancient buildings frm any harm.无论如何，除了采取措施保护这些古建筑免受任何伤害，别无选择。 
Ⅱ.核心短语6．be cmprised f包括；包含；由……组成(或构成)【教材原句】Tday, it is estimated that abut 60 percent f dmestic rice cnsumptin in China is cmprised f crps generated frm Yuan's hybrid strains.今天，据估计，中国大约60%的国内大米消费是由袁氏杂交水稻生产的。【拓展延伸】cmprise v．组成；构成；包括；包含“由……构成的”词组：cnsist f (无被动语态), be cmpsed f，make up, be made up f, be frmed f
【练透考点】完成句子①Wmen cmprise mre than half the wrd's ppulatin, 70% f the wrld's pr, and tw­thirds f thse wh ________ (be) nt taught t read and write.②The cncert cmprised ________ dances and sng perfrmances were all put up by ur very wn talented students!
【佳句背诵】Life is cmprised f nt nly sunshine but als strms.生活不仅有阳光，而且还有风雨。 
7．in turn 相应地；转而；依次；轮流This affects the crps grwn n the land and, in turn, the animals and humans wh digest them.这影响了生长在土地上的作物，进而影响消化它们的动物和人类。
【拓展延伸】in ne's turn　　　轮到某人；接着by turns 轮流；依次take turns ding/t d... 轮流做……It is ne's turn t d sth. 轮到某人干某事【误区释疑】in turn 相应地；转而；依次；轮流in return 作为回报
【练透考点】单句语法填空①It is ur respnsibility t take care f ur sick mther ________ turns.②When it was his turn ________ (deliver) his speech，he walked twards the platfrm，nervus and embarrassed.③He spends t much time n maths，and this ________ turn affects the prgress f the ther subjects.④At the meeting they tk turns ________ (put) frward a number f suggestins aiming t prmte the refrm f educatin system.⑤When it was ________ my turn，I was t excited t speak.
【佳句背诵】As we all knw，all theries cme frm practice and in turn serve practice.我们都知道，所有的理论都来自实践，反过来又服务于实践。 
8．nwhere near 完全没有，远不及【教材原句】Organic farming is nwhere near able t meet that need.有机农业完全不能满足那样的需要。 nwhere near 完全没有，远不及，离……很远g/get nwhere 没有结果，没有进展get sb. nwhere 让某人毫无进展in the middle f nwhere 在遥远偏僻处ut f/frm nwhere 突然出现，突然发生
【练透考点】完成句子①已经得到他们的帮助，但这种帮助还远远没达到我们的期望。Help has already cme frm them, but the aid is ________________ what we expected.②黑夜里一只大狗不知从哪儿冒出来，吓了我一跳。A dark night, a big dg ________________， which gave me a fright.③消极的态度会让你一无所成。A negative attitude will ________________.④我们是在一个荒无人烟的地方，这儿没有公路，没有汽车，什么都没有，只有一条长长的土路和树丛。We were ________________________.There were n rads, n cars, n nthing, just a lng dirt rad and a bunch f trees.
nwhere near
came ut f nwhere　
get yu nwhere
in the middle f nwhere
【佳句背诵】I am nwhere near perfect, thugh, and I have a lng way t g befre becming fluent in English.不过我距离完美的境界还远得很，要说一口流利的英语那还有很长一段路。
Ⅲ.典型句式精析9．Given that Yuan's hybrids have made him quite wealthy, ne might think he wuld retire t a life f leisure.考虑到杂交水稻使袁隆平变得相当富有，人们可能认为他会退休享受闲适的生活。【句式分析】given that...引导的状语从句given prep.　　　　鉴于，考虑到adj. 赠予的；沉溺的；规定的prviding that 如果，只是
【练透考点】完成句子①他们要在规定的时间和地点会晤。They were t meet ________________________.②根据我的背景和经验，你认为我刚开始从事这份工作会遇到的最大的挑战是什么？________________________________， what d yu think will be the greatest challenge fr me in the career in the beginning?③倘若她真的对孩子感兴趣，教师这一职业对她来说很合适。__________________________________， teaching was a prper career fr her.
at a given time and place　
Given my backgrund and experience
Given that she was really interested in children
10．Hwever，what cncerned him mst was that farmers ften had pr harvests and smetimes even had a serius shrtage f fd t eat.然而，最让他担心的是，农民经常粮食歉收，有时甚至严重缺乏食物。【典型例句】What struck me mst in the mvie was the father's deep lve fr his sn.影片中最打动我的是父亲对儿子深厚的爱。
【句式分析】what是连接代词，引导的从句可以作主语、宾语或表语；what本身在从句中可作主语、宾语或表语。【误区释疑】that引导名词性从句只起连接作用，在从句中不作任何成分，无意义，在宾语从句中通常省略，但在主语从句、表语从句和同位语从句中均不能省略；what除引导从句外，还在从句中作成分，意为“所……的(东西)”，在含义上等于“名词＋that”。
【语境速测】单句语法填空①________ upset me was ________ ur flight was delayed because f the terrible strm.②It was when we were returning hme ________ I realized ________ a gd feeling it was t have helped smene in truble.③When we arrived at ________ used t be called the City f Fg，we fund Lndn had cmpletely changed.④[2018·北京卷]Withut his supprt，we wuldn't be ________ we are nw.
【佳句背诵】[2018·北京卷]This is what my father has taught me—t always face difficulties and hpe fr the best.这就是父亲教给我的——永远面对困难并寄予最大的希望。
Ⅰ.高考能力同步化——单句语法填空1．[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]The fashin shws in New Orleans and Brklyn is ________ (expand)the fashin market.2．[2020·江苏高考]He said that ne f the bxes ________ (generate) arund $13,500 in revenue (收入)a mnth and cst nly abut $400 t rent.3．[2020·江苏高考]The speed f 6G will exceed 125 GB/s, allwing fr a new generatin f virtual ________ (real)．4．[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]He says it's nt easy ________ (cnvince) peple that nutria fur is green, but he has n dubt abut it.5．[2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷]Accrding t a recent study in the Jurnal f Cnsumer Research, bth the size and ________ (cnsume) habits f ur eating cmpanins can influence ur fd intake.
6. The manager said that they had ________ alternative plan if the plan they had put frward was nt accepted.7．They ________ (vercme) difficulties ne after anther and finally realized their gals.8. The cncert ________ (cmprise) f dances and sng perfrmances were all put up by ur very wn talented students.9. Junk fds are anything but ________ (nutritin), s students shuld avid them.10．________ is estimated that the annual value f industrial and agricultural utput will be dubled. 
Ⅱ.必备知识试题化——完成句子1．This kind f fd ________________ (富有营养)，and in particular it cntains a lt f minerals.(nutritin)2．His effrts paid ff, and he ________________ at last(达到目标)．(attain)3．______________ (据估计)the number f turists wh travel abrad has dubled in the past decade.(estimate)4. Yu will never gain success unless yu ______________________ (全身心投入工作)．(devte)5．_______________________ (鉴于任务困难), yu have dne really well.(given)
is rich in nutritin
attained his gal
It is estimated that
are fully devted t yur wrk
Given that it was a difficult task
Ⅲ.教材语篇高考化——语法填空阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Yuan Lngping is ne f China's famus scientists, wh is 1.________ (knw) as the “father f hybrid rice”．He was brn in 1930 in Beijing. Because he wanted t tackle 2.________ prblem f lw yield, he 3.________ (chse) t study agriculture at cllege. After graduatin, he wrked as a researcher and 4.__________ (cnvince) that it's pssible t create hybrid rice.
was cnvinced　
After hard wrk he succeeded in 5.________ (develp) the first hybrid rice in 1974.Because f his invaluable cntributins, Yuan has received numerus 6.________ (award) bth in China and abrad. Althugh his hybrids have made him quite 7.________ (wealth), he cares little 8.________ celebrity and mney. Instead, he makes large dnatins 9.________ (supprt) agricultural research. Nw Yuan still tries t fulfil his new dreams and everyne is waiting t see 10.________ he will dream up next.
[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。题目：My Weekend
Step 1　斟酌打磨　丰富句式1．精挑细选——核心词汇想周全①________________ 各种各样的②________________ 诱人的③________________ 小心翼翼地④________________ 唯恐⑤________________ 无公害
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2．遣词造句——句式升级是亮点句式翻译：①当我们的篮子装满了果实的时候，我们就回去了，我们虽然很累了，但是很满意。When ur baskets was full, we went ut. Althugh we were tired, we felt satisfied.(非谓语结构)→______________________________________________________
With ur baskets full, we went ut, tired but satisfied.
②我感受到了农民们的痛苦和劳动带给我的快乐。I feel the pains the farmers take and the happiness that labr brings me.(nt als)→______________________________________________________
Nt nly d I feel the pains the farmers take but als the happiness that labr brings me.
Step 2　逻辑衔接　连句成文
My WeekendLast weekend, my classmates and I went t Xin hua Farm by bike t pick strawberries.Upn entering the farm, we were attracted by its cleanness and rich varieties f fruit. A guide led us t the strawberry field, where we saw fresh inviting red strawberries.We were tld we culd enjy sme newly－picked nes because they were pisn－free. As requested, we began t pick strawberries with cautin fr fear that sme plants were destryed. Abut tw hurs later, with ur baskets full, we went ut, tired but satisfied.This experience benefits me a lt. Nt nly d I feel the pains the farmers take but als the happiness that labr brings me.
读后续写专题之四　丰富环境　细腻内容
[2018·浙江卷]It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest rm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning, Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn n my farm，” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn't ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put_n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn't be late fr supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn't get lst！” “OK！” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. ________________________________________________________________________We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. ________________________________________________________________________
文本解读：本文是2018年6月份浙江省高考读后续写真题。文章主要记叙了父亲为了让大家过一个不同以往的暑假，带一家人去了Uncle Paul 的农场。在那里，“我”在父亲的陪伴下，体验了骑马。原文是故事的开始，主要介绍了整个事件发生的时间，地点以及农场生活的体验。在阅读文本时，我们要带着when, where, wh, what, why, hw去理清文本的内容和故事情节的发展脉络。在梳理故事情节发展的脉络时，我们要把握住三条线索：时间线，故事情节线和情感发展线。
时间线：①It was summer　②in the late afternn　③spent the night　④very early in the mrning　⑤after breakfast　 ⑥in the afternn　⑦after a while故事情节线：根据以上情节线，我们可以梳理出各个时间节点的故事情节。
背景：父亲带一家人去Uncle Paul 的农场过暑假。第一天：下午Uncle Paul 到机场接我们，晚上在农场听青蛙叫和潺潺水声。第二天：清晨吃过早饭后，体验了农场生活，和Aunt Tina一起喂鸡，看父亲和Uncle Paul 一起放羊，同时看到父亲骑马觉得很酷，也想试一试。在“我”的请求下，父亲答应陪“我”一起去骑马，出发前，Uncle Paul 叮嘱“我们”要沿着足迹走并在晚上前赶回来，否则将会迷路。于是，“我”和父亲出发了。情感发展线：因为是旅游，整篇文章基调应该是积极的，虽然没有直接的情感表达，但是从delicius dinner, peaceful, quiet, magic, beautiful 这些词可以看出“我”对于这次农场之旅非常满意，同时从“I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses”可以感受到“我”对于骑马的浓厚兴趣。
写作思路：第一段段首句“Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.”中的suddenly 表明情况发生了急剧变化。根据上下文的景色描写可知，“我” 和父亲正在欣赏沿途的美景，这时突然跳出一只兔子，肯定会打破原本平静的基调。马，“我”以及父亲的反应和心理变化应该在这一段体现出来。第二段段首句“We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.”揭示我们迷路了，说明在上文里我们因为兔子的出现而偏离了原来的track。 可能是追着兔子不知不觉跑远了，也可能是马受到惊吓带着我乱跑导致迷路，但可以肯定的是我们最终还是回到了农场，那么，在第二段，主要解决的问题是如何回农场。除此以外，语言层面的焦点要放在天黑迷路时的心理活动，环境描写以及父亲行为等的刻画上。
语言积累1．词的积累①描述天气的形容词strmy, warm, ht, rainy, cludy, snwy, windy, fggy, misty, freezing cld, clear, changeable, awful②描写天气的名词fg, drizzle, strm, snwstrm, thunder, typhn, hurricane, trnad, dwnpur
2．句式积累①At ne pint, the faint sund f water was tumbling thrugh the valley.②The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered n its lking glass­clear surface.③By 5 'clck, the rain had stpped and the sky was curdled gray burdened with lumps f cluds.④The sun was beginning t set, glittering red thrugh the cracks between the ramshackle building.⑤The mn watched frm the sky behind the cluds as the stars blink their eyes in fatigue.
⑥Like a dim lamp, the mn shne frm abve and the stars twinkled their eyes with curisity.⑦A cld breeze blew thrugh the quiet park.⑧A cld breeze wafted thrugh my hair.⑨There was a brk nt far frm here, rushing and sparkling between green banks.⑩Blue sky std tall and far, and the sun was like a branding irn searing the back f my neck.
范文赏析：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. My hrse was s frightened that it began running ferciusly. I culd feel the air hitting my face heavily and hear my dad's hysterical cry frm the distance. My heart was pumping wildly and my bld was pulsing thrugh my veins. I pulled back the reins, distracted the hrse and tried every means t stp the hrse but in vain. After what seemed an eternity, my dad caught up with me breathlessly and managed t stp my hrse. But we fund that we were in distress, with n track beside us.
We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. The river beside us was still and serene under the last ray f sunshine but we didn't have the md t enjy it. Suddenly, it ccurred t us that there was als a river nearby the farm huse. Realizing the river may be a guide back, ur spirits sared and we began t trt briskly alng the river. Just a few minutes later, catching sight f the silhuette d the huse, I felt a feeling f relief and relaxatin surged thrugh me. I culd picture Uncle Paul's smiling face and ur delicius supper and I thught t myself that ur being lst added a special taste t my adventurus vacatin which I wuld remember all my life.