专题08 单元话题满分范文必背15篇(名校最新真题)--2022-2023学年高二英语上学期期中考点大串讲（人教版2019）

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人教版（2019）高二英语上学期期中考点大串讲
(名校最新真题)
专题08 单元话题满分范文必背15篇
1．假定你是李华，为纪念杂交水稻（hybrid rice）之父袁隆平院士（academician），你校英语俱乐部打算征集相关活动的建议，你建议观看纪录片《袁隆平》。请你给俱乐部负责人Mary写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动安排；
2.活动目的和意义。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
The activity is expected to be held in the school auditorium from 3 p.m to 5 p.m this Friday with all the students in our school invited. The movie describes Yuan Longping’s dedication to Chinese Agriculture in a touching and vivid way. By providing a platform for participants to have a better understanding of the whole life of Yuan Long ping, the father of hybrid rice in China, this activity aims to arouse the science research spirits and patriotic feelings of us students. I hold a firm belief that the activity will be so educational, impressive and meaningful that our students will develop a strong sense of national pride and self-confidence.
Thanks for reading my letter. I hope my proposal will be taken into account. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，为纪念杂交水稻（hybrid rice）之父袁隆平院士（academician），你校英语俱乐部打算征集相关活动的建议，你建议观看纪录片《袁隆平》。请你给俱乐部负责人Mary写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
纪念：in memory of→in honor of
举行：hold→host
相信：hold a belief→believe
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
拓展句：Since our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I hold a firm belief that the activity will be so educational, impressive and meaningful that our students will develop a strong sense of national pride and self-confidence. (运用了that引导同位语从句)
2．假定你是李华，你的朋友Amy来信说她考试前总会出现各种焦虑症状。请给她写封回信，提供一些建议，如：制定切实可行的学习目标，合理安排时间等。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Amy,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】Dear Amy,
I’m glad to hear from you. I am writing to tell you some of my views on solving various anxiety symptoms. In fact, most of us feel nervous when taking an important exam.
First of all, I think it’s important for us to have a positive attitude towards exams. We needn’t worry too much about them. Secondly, we should study hard every day, make practical study goals and arrange your time reasonably. Besides, enough sleep can make us perform well in exams. Therefore, during the examination period, we should not stay up too late. We can also listen to light music before going to bed, which may help us have a good sleep.
I wish you the best!
Yours,
                                                                                                         Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Amy写封回信，为解决她考试前的焦虑症状提供一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
看法：idea→view
紧张的：tense →nervous
此外：in addition→besides
帮助：assist→help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to tell you some of my views on solving various anxiety symptoms.
拓展句：I am writing to tell you some of my views on solving various anxiety symptoms, which I hope will help you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In fact, most of us feel nervous when taking an important exam. (运用了时间状语从句的省略)
【高分句型2】We can also listen to light music before going to bed, which may help us have a good sleep. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3．假定你是李华，由于疫情(epidemic)，你的美国朋友Tom正在上网课，他在邮件中向你询问如何提高上网课的效率。请你用英语给他写封回信，就如何提高网课效率提些建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One Possible Version
Dear Tom,
Knowing that you need to take online courses because of the pandemic, I’m writing to offer some useful suggestions on how to improve your study efficiency.
To begin with, when taking online courses, you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices, which may distract your attention all the time. Keeping a distance with them will help you focus on your lessons more easily. In addition, it is a good idea to make a study schedule, so that you can make better use of your time. Last but not least, why not keep a frequent communication with your teachers and classmates even though you can not meet them face to face. The more you communicate with them, the less problem you will have, which can save a lot of time.
Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great help to you. Take good care of yourself during the pandemic.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因疫情而在上网课的美国朋友Tom写信，就如何提高网课效率提些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因为：because of →owing to
应该：be supposed to →ought to
集中于：focus on→concentrate on
更好地利用：make better use of→take full advantage of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The more you communicate with them, the less problem you will have, which can save a lot of time.
拓展句：If you communicate more with them, you will have less problem, which can save a lot of time.
【点睛】[高分句型1]To begin with, when taking online courses, you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices, which may distract your attention all the time. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Keeping a distance with them will help you focus on your lessons more easily. （运用了动名词做主语）
4．假定你是李华，你的外教 Peter对中国饮食文化非常感兴趣，他想请你推荐一款中国传统餐饮，请你写封电子邮件给他。内容包括：
1.餐饮名称；2.简要描述；3.推荐理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, your student in Peking University. Knowing that you have a preference for Chinese food and drink, I’m writing to recommend a popular drink for breakfast—the soybean milk.
Just like tofu, soybean milk can also date back to the Han Dynasty. Its white colour makes it look like a cup of milk, but it is actually made from beans. When heated, it gives off a refreshing smell. Additionally, it is delicious as well as nutritious since it’s rich in plant protein. As the research shows, soybean milk can help control blood pressure and keep the skin young.
If you are interested, why not have a try? I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教peter写信向他推荐一款中国传统餐饮并说明推荐的理由。
【详解】词汇积累
喜欢：preference→be fond of
推荐：recommend→advise
追溯到：date back to→go back to
此外：additionally → what’s more
2.句式拓展
Since引导的状语从句改成名词短语
原句：Additionally, it is delicious as well as nutritious since it’s rich in plant protein.
拓展句：What’s more, it is delicious as well as nutritious due to its rich plant protein.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Knowing that you have a preference for Chinese food and drink, I’m writing to recommend a popular drink for breakfast—the soybean milk.（运用了现在分词做原因状语的表达）
【高分句型2】
When heated, it gives off a refreshing smell.（运用了省略句的表达，在When和heated之间省略了it is）
5．假定你是李华，你的家乡今年新建了一个中国民俗文化主题公园，请给你的留学生好友Mike写封邮件，邀请他一同来公园参观，内容包括:
1.时间、地点；2.参观内容:了解中国民俗文化，体验民间艺术等；3.注意事项。
参考词汇:中国民俗文化主题公园Chinese folk culture theme park
注意:
1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Mike,
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I can’t wait to share a piece of good news with you. A Chinese folk culture theme park has just been built in my hometown. I think this is a great chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture, so I’d like to invite you to visit the park with me.
We can meet at the bus station at 8 next Saturday morning and then set off for there. During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art, through which we can see Chinese history changes and great society development, especially Chinese countryside. When we visit it, we had better behave well and follow the related rules and order. Don’t smoke, make noises or throw rubbish anywhere. I am sure you can harvest and benefit from this visit.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请留学生好友Mike参观中国民俗文化主题公园，并介绍见面的时间和地点、参观内容和注意事项。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。个别表达需要用到现在完成时。
结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，引出主题；第二段写出具体内容，包括见面的时间和地点、参观内容和注意事项；第三段期待收到对方的回复。
要求：1. 表明写信的目的
2. 介绍见面的时间和地点、参观内容和注意事项
3. 表明期待收到对方的回复
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
can’t wait to sth. (迫不及待做某事); share sth. with sb (与某人分享某物); invite sb. to do sth. (邀请某人做某事); set off (动身，出发); learn about (了解); various forms of… (各种形式的……); development (发展); especially (尤其); behave (表现); follow the rules (遵守规则); make noises (制造噪音); throw rubbish (扔垃圾); harvest (收获); benefit from (从……收益); look forward to… (期待，盼望); reply (答复)
第三步：连词成句
1. I can’t wait to share a piece of good news with you.  
2. I think this is a great chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture.
3. I’d like to invite you to visit the park with me.
4. We can meet at the bus station at 8 next Saturday morning.
5. We will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art.
6. We had better behave well and follow the related rules and order.
7. Don’t smoke, make noises or throw rubbish anywhere.
8. I am sure you can harvest and benefit from this visit.
9. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then(本篇文章使用过); finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…;  some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so (本篇文章使用过); since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art. 本句用来介绍参观的具体内容。可以使用定语从句，进一步介绍通过参观，可以学习到什么。润色修改为：During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art, through which we can see Chinese history changes and great society development, especially Chinese countryside.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art, through which we can see Chinese history changes and great society development, especially Chinese countryside. 这句话为which引导的定语从句；其次，使用了一些固定句型，如：can’t wait to sth.; invite sb. to do sth.; share sth. with sb等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇及短语，如development; harvest; throw rubbish; behave等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．假如你是李华，一群美国大学生将要来中国进行为期半年的交流项目。要求你代表中国寄宿家庭给美国学生写封信，介绍如何在中国寄宿家庭生活，内容包括：日常起居、饮食、待人接物等方面。
注意：
1. 词数100左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
Welcome to China! I hope you will enjoy your new life with your Chinese Homestay.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear friends,
Welcome to China! I hope you will enjoy your new life with your Chinese Homestay. All of homestay families are of great hospitality and I believe you will love them at the first sight. During your stay, you will have an independent bedroom. Free Wi-Fi is available. Meals include breakfast, lunch and supper, of which breakfast is western style and the rest two are Chinese flavor. When it comes to table manners, we often let the seniors eat first to show respect for them. Besides, you should avoid tapping the bowls with chopsticks, which is impolite. In fact, the best policy is “When in Rome, do as the Romans do”.
We are eager to meet you and sincerely hope you will enjoy the time you spend in the homestay families..
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表中国寄宿家庭，给即将来中国的美国学生写信，从日常起居、饮食、待人接物等方面介绍如何在中国寄宿家庭生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确信：believe→ensure
此外：Besides → Moreover
事实上：In fact→As a matter of fact
盼望：be eager to do→ long to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During your stay, you will have an independent bedroom. Free Wi-Fi is available.
拓展句：During your stay, you will have an independent bedroom, where free Wi-Fi is available.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to table manners, we often let the seniors eat first to show respect for them.（运用了when引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, you should avoid tapping the bowls with chopsticks, which is impolite.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
7．假定你是苏华，你的英国朋友Sam对中医学很感兴趣，在邮件中向你询问中国首位获得诺贝尔奖的女科学家屠呦呦以及她的贡献，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.屠呦呦简介；2.她的贡献；3.你的希望。
写作要求：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
More than delighted to know that
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Yours,
Su Hua
【答案】Possible version:
Dear Sam,
More than delighted to know that you have a great interest in traditional Chinese medicine and Tu Youyou, I’m writing to share with you what I know about her.
Tu Youyou has become the first female scientist of China to receive a Nobel Prize, awarded for her contribution to the fight against malaria, one of the deadliest diseases in human history. Thanks to her discovery of qinghaosu, malaria patients all over the world have had a greatly increased chance of survival and now about 200 million malaria patients have benefited from it.
I sincerely hope the information above can help you have a better understanding of Tu Youyou and traditional Chinese medicine.
Yours,
Su Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Sam写信介绍中国首位获得诺贝尔奖的女科学家屠呦呦。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感兴趣：have a great interest in→be interested in
全世界：all over the world→around the world
高兴的：delighted→glad
因为：thanks to→because of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Tu Youyou has become the first female scientist of China to receive a Nobel Prize, awarded for her contribution to the fight against malaria, one of the deadliest diseases in human history.
拓展句：Tu Youyou has become the first female scientist of China to receive a Nobel Prize, who was awarded for her contribution to the fight against malaria, one of the deadliest diseases in human history.
【点睛】[高分句型1] More than delighted to know that you have a great interest in traditional Chinese medicine and Tu Youyou, I’m writing to share with you what I know about her. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Tu Youyou has become the first female scientist of China to receive a Nobel Prize, awarded for her contribution to the fight against malaria, one of the deadliest diseases in human history. (运用了过去分词作状语)
8．假设你是红星中学的高三学生李华。你在英国学医的朋友Jim想请你介绍中国科学家钟南山，请你根据以下要点给Jim回信介绍钟南山。
1. 钟南山于1941年出生在广州，毕业于北京医学院，并于1979年出国进修，是中国最著名的科学家和医生之一。
2. 2003年他奋战在抗击非典第一线；2020年初，84岁高龄的他再上新冠肺炎防疫最前线。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：the SARS epidemic非典；the novel coronavirus新型冠状病毒
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am very glad to introduce Zhong Nanshan to you.
Zhong Nanshan is one of the premier scientists and doctors in China. He was born in Guangzhou in 1941 and graduated from Beijing Medical College. Then, in 1979, he went abroad for further education. This ordinary but great man has been working in the medical field for over 50 years. In 2003 Zhong Nanshan fought in the battle against the SARS epidemic. And at the beginning of the year of 2020, Zhong Nanshan,although aged 84, fought again on the front line against the novel coronavirus which broke out in Wuhan, Hubei Province. Dangerous as it was, Zhong Nanshan with his medical team worked hard day and night doing research and treating patients.
Hope you can learn more about Chinese scientists.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在英国学医的朋友Jim写回信，介绍中国科学家钟南山的生平事迹。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad →delighted
最著名的：premier→most famous
多于，大于：over→more than
有威胁的：dangerous→threatening
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Dangerous as it was, Zhong Nanshan with his medical team worked hard day and night doing research and treating patients.
拓展句：Though it was dangerous, Zhong Nanshan with his medical team worked hard day and night doing research and treating patients.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Dangerous as it was, Zhong Nanshan with his medical team worked hard day and night doing research and treating patients. （运用倒装句，现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Zhong Nanshan,although aged 84, fought again on the front line against the novel coronavirus which broke out in Wuhan, Hubei Province. （运用了过去分词作定语，which引导限制性定语从句）
9．你校正在开展“向民族英雄学习”的活动。请你给学校英语报写一篇短文，谈谈你“心中的民族英雄”内容包括：
1. 英雄人物简介；
2. 成为你心中英雄的原因；
3. 向英雄学习。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 短文题目与首句已写好，不计入总词数。
The National Hero In My Heart
As we know, most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts.
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【答案】As we know, most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts. For me, Yuan Longping, a Chinese great agricultural scientist and academician of the Chinese Academy of Engineering, is actually my national hero.
He was born on September 7th, 1930. In the 1960s, China experienced famine and he came up with an idea for hybridizing rice. In 1973, he developed a new way of growing rice and hence new rice was developed. In 1979, his technique for hybrid rice was introduced into the United States, which was the first case of intellectual property rights transfer in the history of China. With the development of new rice, gone are the days when Chinese people suffer from terrible starvation, and more countries of the world are able to grow more rice to feed the growing world population.
We should learn from him the spirit of striving for the well-being of mankind. His perseverance, indifference to personal fame and fortune, his devotion to research work and profound insight are also great merits we should follow!
【分析】本篇书面表达是夹叙夹议的文章，要求给学校英语报写一篇短文，谈谈心中的民族英雄。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想到/提出：think of→come up with
经历/遭受：experience→suffer from
养活：support→feed
学习：study→learn from/follow
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：We should learn from him the spirit of striving for the well-being of mankind. His perseverance, indifference to personal fame and fortune, his devotion to research work and profound insight are also great merits we should follow!
拓展句：Not only should we learn from him the spirit of striving for the well-being of mankind, but also we should follow his perseverance, indifference to personal fame and fortune, his devotion to research work and profound insight.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
In 1979, his technique for hybrid rice was introduced into the United States, which was the first case of intellectual property rights transfer in the history of China.( 1979年，他的杂交水稻技术被引进美国，这是中国历史上第一个知识产权转让案例。) 运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句
[高分句型2]
With the development of new rice, gone are the days when Chinese people suffer from terrible starvation, and more countries of the world are able to grow more rice to feed the growing world population. (随着新型水稻的发展，中国人民遭受可怕的饥饿的日子一去不复返了，世界上更多的国家能够种植更多的水稻来养活不断增长的世界人口。) 运用了when引导的定语从句
10．随着社会的发展，各种发明以及高科技产品成为我们日常生活的必需品，如手机（mobile phone）、数码相机（digital camera）等。请以My Favourite Invention为主题，准备一篇发言稿，主要内容包括：
1.你喜欢的科技产品；
2.喜欢的理由。
注意: 1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone,
I’d like to make a speech with the title: My Favourite Invention.
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That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Hello, everyone,
I’d like to make a speech with the title: My Favourite Invention. Nowadays, various electronic products are springing up, making our life easy and efficient, among which my favourite invention is the mobile phone.
Compared with other electronic products, the mobile phone has become part of our life. As it combines the function of the telephone and the computer, we can keep in touch with our friends either by telephone or through WeChat. Additionally, we can almost do anything by means of a mobile phone, such as writing essays, distance learning, remote controlling over other electronic products, taking pictures, even seeing the doctor. What’s more, more uses will be integrated into the mobile phone, which hence will make it become the control center of our whole life.
That’s all. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以My Favourite Invention为主题，准备一篇发言稿，主要内容包括：1.你喜欢的科技产品；2.喜欢的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
如今：nowadays→at present
各种各样的：various→varied
另外：additionally→moreover
另外：what’s more→in addition
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Compared with other electronic products, the mobile phone has become part of our life.
拓展句：When we compare the mobile phone with other electronic products, we find the mobile phone has become part of our life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Nowadays, various electronic products are springing up, making our life easy and efficient, among which my favourite invention is the mobile phone. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] What’s more, more uses will be integrated into the mobile phone, which hence will make it become the control center of our whole life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
11．一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
要点：1.家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活。
注意：1.写作词数为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Me in 10 Years
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【答案】                                                                                                                 Me in 10 Years
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
I think my life will be extremely different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely baby. I hope I will work as a program designer in a company which produces the computer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my spare time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
In a word, my life will be richer and more colorful.
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类写作，要求写一篇短文。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。要点：1.家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：in the future(未来)；extremely different(极为不同)；by then(到那时候)；probably(大概)；lovely(可爱的)；work as(担任)；program designer(程序设计师)；get along well with(与……相处融洽)；continue to(继续……)；take regular exercise(定期运动)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.运用宾语从句；I hope I will work as a program designer in a company which produces the computer.运用定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
12．假定你是李华, 你的美国笔友Tom得知你校上月举办了首届校园科技节活动, 发邮件向你询问相关情况。请你回复邮件。内容包括：
1. 活动的目的；
2. 活动的形式, 如智能校园创客(maker)大赛, 科创成果展等；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数80左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I am excited to tell you that the first Science and Technology Festival was held in our school last month,
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【答案】Dear Tom，
I am excited to tell you that the first Science and Technology Festival was held in our school last month，which aimed at enriching us students’ school life and promoting the students’ awareness of innovation.
There were a variety of activities in the festival，which included Makers on Campus，where participants could show their designs and products，and an exhibition of the students’ original inventions，designs and literary works.With the enthusiastic participation and support of all the students，the activity turned out a great success.I was astonished at the schoolmates’ creativity and teamwork spirits.
I do hope more activities will be held in my school to provide us with chances to practice our critical thinking and problemsolving abilities.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华, 你的美国笔友Tom得知你校上月举办了首届校园科技节活动, 发邮件向你询问相关情况。请你回复邮件。内容包括：
1. 活动的目的；
2. 活动的形式, 如智能校园创客(maker)大赛, 科创成果展等；
3. 你的感受。
第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态以一般过去时为主。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，活动的目的。第二段，活动的形式, 如智能校园创客(maker)大赛, 科创成果展等； 你的感受。第三段，表达期望。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:  enriching us students’ school life ，promoting the students’ awareness of innovation， a variety of ，turned out ，be astonished at ，teamwork spirits，provide sb. with sth.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子：which和where 引导的定语从句There were a variety of activities in the festival，which included Makers on Campus，where participants could show their designs and products，and an exhibition of the students’ original inventions，designs and literary works. 省略that的宾语从句I do hope more activities will be held in my school to provide us with chances to practice our critical thinking and problem solving abilities.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接：besides，moreover, finally。
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:which和where 引导的定语从句There were a variety of activities in the festival，which included Makers on Campus，where participants could show their designs and products，and an exhibition of the students’ original inventions，designs and literary works. 省略that的宾语从句I do hope more activities will be held in my school to provide us with chances to practice our critical thinking and problem solving abilities.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
13．请根据以下要点，写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍香港海洋公园。
·香港海洋公园，位于香港的南部，是一个著名的主题公园。
·面积超过87万平方米，是世界上最大的海洋公园之一，有40多年的历史，是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一；是香港最受人们甚欢的公园。每年吸引了大量的世界游客。
·游客可以体验惊险之旅和观看各种表演。
·香港海洋公园还为它提供的教育项目而自豪。
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【答案】Hong Kong Ocean Park, a famous theme park, is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong. As one of the largest marine parks in the world, it covers more than 870,000 square meters.With a history of more than 40 years, Ocean Park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia. It is Hong Kong's favourite park, which attracts many visitors from all over the world. Visitors can not only experience adventurous trips but also enjoy a broad variety of shows. The park also takes pride in its educational programs as well.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求写一篇短文，介绍香港海洋公园。
【详解】第一步：
审题：短文，介绍香港海洋公园
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：全文为一部分，介绍香港海洋公园的地理位置、面积、历史、旅游特色等。
要点：介绍香港海洋公园的地理位置、面积、历史、旅游项目等。
地理位置：位于香港的南部
面积和历史：面积超过87万平方米，有40多年的历史
③旅游特色：是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一，游客可以体验惊险之旅、观看各种表演、提供教育项目
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
theme park；be situated in；marine park；cover more than 870,000 square meters；with a history of；tourist attraction；favourite；attract；experience adventurous trips；a broad variety of；take pride in；educational  program
第三步：连词成句
(1)Hong Kong Ocean Park is a famous theme park.
(2)Hong Kong Ocean Park is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
(3) Hong Kong Ocean Park is one of the largest marine parks in the world.
(4)It covers more than 870,000 square meters.
(5) Hong Kong Ocean Park has a history of more than 40 years.
(6)Ocean Park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia.
(7) The Ocean Park is Hong Kong's favourite park.
(8 ) The Ocean Park attracts many visitors from all over the world.
(9)Visitors can experience adventurous trips.
(10)Visitors can enjoy a broad variety of shows.
(11)The park also takes pride in its educational programs as well.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词、亮点词汇）
将第一个句子作同位语，连接下面两个句子
(1)Hong Kong Ocean Park is a famous theme park.
(2)Hong Kong Ocean Park is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
→Hong Kong Ocean Park, a famous theme park, is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
将第二个句子改写现在分词作状语，连接下面两个句子
(3) Hong Kong Ocean Park is one of the largest marine parks in the world.
(4)It covers more than 870,000 square meters.
→Hong Kong Ocean Park is one of the largest marine parks in the world, covering more than 870,000 square meters.
将第二个句子作定语从句，连接下面两个句子
(7) Hong Kong Ocean Park is Hong Kong's favourite park.
(8 ) Hong Kong Ocean Park attracts many visitors from all over the world.
→ Ocean Park is Hong Kong's favourite park, which attracts many visitors from all over the world.
用not only… but also…连接下面两个句子
(9)Visitors can experience adventurous trips.
(10)Visitors can enjoy a broad variety of shows.
→Visitors can not only experience adventurous trips but also enjoy a broad variety of shows.  
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 theme park；be situated in；cover；with a history of；tourist attraction；attract；experience；a broad variety of ；take pride in 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如现在分词作状语的运用covering more than 870,000 square meters；定语从句的运用It is Hong Kong's favourite park, which attracts many visitors from all over the world；not only… but also并列结构的运用Visitors can not only experience adventurous trips but also enjoy a broad variety of shows等。
14．你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“How to prevent online gaming addiction”为题写一篇发言稿参赛, 内容包括: 1. 分析造成的危害;
2. 提出预防的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
How to prevent online gaming addiction
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【答案】How to prevent online gaming addiction
With the popularity of mobile phones, more and more teenagers are addicted to the Internet games, which does great harm to their health and studies. Spending too much time in the virtual world, addicts will become cold and distant. What’s worse, if exposed to violent games, players tend to be more aggressive than usual.
To prevent the addiction, we should often remind ourselves of these bad effects. Besides, we can do more outdoor activities, which will keep our attention off the Internet games. If hooked on online games, gradually reduce the amount of time spent on the games until we finally get rid of the addiction. We can also ask for help from our relatives, teachers or friends.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生以“How to prevent online gaming addiction”为题写一篇发言稿参加学校即将举办的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……有害：do harm to=be bad for
应该：should→be supposed to
此外：besides→in addition
求助：ask for help=turn to sb. for help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To prevent the addiction, we should often remind ourselves of these bad effects.
拓展句：In order that we can prevent the addiction, we should often remind ourselves of these bad effects.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
With the popularity of mobile phones, more and more teenagers are addicted to the Internet games, which does great harm to their health and studies.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
What’s worse, if exposed to violent games, players tend to be more aggressive than usual.(if引导的条件状语从句使用了省略)
15．在学校生活中，我们难免会就某事和同学或老师持有不同观点，因此学会用恰当的方式去沟通显得尤为重要。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你的一次经历。内容包括：
1.引起分歧的原因；   2.你的解决办法。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.题目自拟。
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【答案】An Embarrassing Conflict
Last Friday found me totally in a mess! I had an embarrassing conflict with my friend Anna at school. We were making a poster together for the upcoming dubbing contest after class when some differences of opinion appeared. I wanted to add some cartoon elements to it while she insisted we use solid red to make it stand out. Annoyed, I raised my voice and let off steam. Then she rushed out of the classroom with tears in her eyes.
Feeling deeply regretful for my unreasonable and rude behavior, I wrote a letter to her in English, in which I extended a sincere apology. Guess what? She wrote back, enclosing my letter where grammar mistakes had been corrected! We were on friendly terms again!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于一篇夹叙夹议文。要求考生就自己的经历，讲述在与他人观点不一的情况下，我们应该如何处理才是最恰当的。
【详解】1.词汇积累
一团糟：in a mess → in chaos
即将到来的：upcoming → forthcoming/coming/approaching
愤怒的：annoyed → angry/mad
真诚的：sincere → genuine
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：Annoyed, I raised my voice and let off steam.
拓展句：I felt annoyed, so I raised my voice and let off steam.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I wanted to add some cartoon elements to it while she insisted we use solid red to make it stand out.（运用了while引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】Feeling deeply regretful for my unreasonable and rude behavior, I wrote a letter to her in English, in which I extended a sincere apology.（运用了现在分词作状语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】She wrote back, enclosing my letter where grammar mistakes had been corrected!
（运用了现在分词作状语以及where引导的定语从句）