外研版高考英语一轮总复习写作专项突破1、第3讲亮点词汇课时学案

第3讲　亮点词汇

请用亮点词汇替换下列句子中的黑体部分

1. As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school. are supposed to

2. The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses. challenging

3. I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions. take my suggestions into account

4. Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials. came up with

5. We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future. take pains; get prepared

6. I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I'd like you to help me. do me a favour/lend me a hand

7. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is increasing. on the increase/rise

8. When you are bored with the people sometimes, you'd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music. fed up with

一份高考作文在阅卷时往往在1分钟内就被判定优劣，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！

一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法

1. “语”众不同，避免人云亦云

写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。

①(2020·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)The students chosen from every class took part in the competition.

→The students selected from every class took part in the competition.

②(2018·江苏卷)Obviously，blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment.

→Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment.

③(全国卷Ⅰ)I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.

→I am more than delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.

④(2019·全国卷Ⅱ)A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will take part.

→A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.

2. 更新换代，避免重复

写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。

①(2020·全国卷Ⅱ)There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as different kinds of animals.

→There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.

②The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.

→The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.

3. 单词与短语巧妙互用

一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。

①Quite a few things caused the traffic problem.

→Quite a few things gave rise to the traffic problem.

②We can look at this problem in many ways.

→We can view this problem in many ways. (view比look at更有内涵)

4. 用高年级学到的词汇替代低年级学到的词汇

①Second, I am trying my best to get the important knowledge and skills concerning my position.

→Second, I am sparing no efforts to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.

②In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative effects on people and society.

→In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.

二、高分必备的24个亮点词汇

①We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.

→We'll try our best to promote the traditional friendship between us.

②Finally your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent adult.

→Eventually your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent adult.

请用亮点词汇替换下面考生作文中加黑的部分

Dear Jason，

I'm very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.

Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been built, high­rise buildings standing in many parts of the city. More and more schools and hospitals are useful for the native people. It is developing into a modern and beautiful city. But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and serious air pollution, which have a bad effect on people's daily life. I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.

Yours，

Li Ming

【答案】

1. very→more than　2. fast→rapidly  3. built→set up  4. More and more→An increasing number of  5. useful→available　6. beautiful→charming  7. But→However　8. serious→severe  9. effect→influence/impact  10. I think→In my opinion/As far as I am concerned