满分作文05篇+科技网络-备战2023年高考英语作文热点话题押题预测（全国通用）

人工智能与5G时代已悄然来临，随着科技与人类生活的联系变得越来越紧密，随处可见的人工智能，让生活变得更加便利的同时也带来许多的困惑，按要求完成一篇作文。内容包括：

1. 描述或畅想未来人工智能的发展状况；
2. 分析这种现象产生的原因；
3. 陈述利弊以及表明个人态度。

As we all know, the time of 5G technology is coming, it is called the fourth industrial revolution, future of computer science lies in the artificial intelligence, it is the research and artificial simulation of human thought and eventually be able to make a human like to think the same machine, for human services and to help people solve problems.

After all, people thought it was unique, there are feelings, there are a variety of character, this will be very difficult to achieve in the machine. In fact, to do the same as the human thinking machine, the only one of the artificial intelligence, is by no means all. Through the study of artificial intelligence, it can resolve all kinds of scientific problems, promote the development of other science will have a great impact on all people’s lives.

I believe that the science of artificial intelligence is waiting for humanity to explore it step by step.

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假如你是王梓，刚刚收到好友龚瞩的邮件，邮件中提到因为疫情影响，学校的课全部改成线上授课，但她发现自己在上网课时难以集中注意力，效率低下。还有不到100天就要高考了，她感觉非常着急，想你寻求帮助。请你写封回信给她，提出一些建议并阐述理由。

【答案】Dear Gong,

Terribly sorry to hear that due to the epidemic, you have to stay at home to have online courses, which deprives you of your attention on the course. With less than 100 days to prepare for your big exam, I have some advice for you on concentrating on your study.

Firstly, engaging yourself in the class actively is beneficial for you to be immersed into the online course, for the reason that answering teachers’ questions and thinking positively leave little room to be absent-minded. Additionally, a quiet environment can ensure yourself to be fully absorbed in the course, which can guarantee that nothing can get you distracted easily or interrupt your thoughts. By the way, getting distractions away from your sight is also a must.

Hoping my suggestions are helpful to you.

 Yours,

Wang Zi

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求学生代替王梓给龚瞩写一封建议信，关于如果在上网课期间集中注意力。

【详解】

1.词汇积累：

十分、非常：terribly→extremely

因为：due to→because of→result from

集中注意力于：focus on→concentrate on

专注于：be immersed in→be absorbed in

2.句式拓展：

简单句改复合句

原句：With less than 100 days to prepare for your big exam, I have some advice for you on concentrating on your study.

拓展句：With less than 100 days to prepare for your big exam, I have some advice for you, which will help you concentrate on your study.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Terribly sorry to hear that due to the epidemic, you have to stay at home to have online courses, which deprives you of your attention on the course.（运用了形容词做状语，which引导非限制性定语从句。）

【高分句型2】Firstly, engaging yourself in the class actively is beneficial for you to be immersed into the online course, for the reason that answering teachers’ questions and thinking positively leave little room to be absent-minded.（运用了动名词做主语，that引导同位语从句。）

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack发来邮件，说他最近使用智能手机太多，导致健康和学习都受到了影响，为此，他询问你如何使用手机及能否提些摆脱困境的建议。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：

1.表示同情；

2.介绍你使用手机的情况；

3.给出建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to hear that your health and studies are affected by overusing your smartphone.

In fact, you are not alone. Many people have the same trouble. I used to be addicted to reading news and watching movies on my smartphone. It was not until my eyes became too painful to see things clearly that I was determined to quit this bad habit. Now I use the phone simply to call others or receive short messages. I suggest that you set a limit on the use of your phone and find new ways such as reading and walking to relax yourself.

I sincerely hope that you will get better.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Jack回复邮件，提供如何正确使用智能手机的建议并帮助他摆脱过度使用手机带来的困扰。

【详解】

词汇积累

影响：affect→influence

疼痛的：painful→aching

摆脱：quit→get rid of

决心做：be determined to do= make up one’s mind to do

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：In fact, you are not alone. Many people have the same trouble.

拓展句：In fact, you are not alone, as many people have the same trouble.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that your health and studies are affected by overusing your smartphone. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I suggest that you set a limit on the use of your phone and find new ways such as reading and walking to relax yourself. (运用了that引导的宾语从句及虚拟语气)

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Eric对你们学校如何上网课很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.你校上网课使用的软件；

2.介绍这款软件；

3.使用效果。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Eric,

I'm delighted to tell you something about how we have online class.

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Eric,

I'm delighted to tell you something about how we have online class.

We use Alibaba's communication app DingTalk for our e-classes. Every day, we check in and take classes based on our schedule. School notices, homework and videos can be sent to us by teachers on the platform. Our teachers often make eye-catching and creative videos and show them to us, which is really a fun way to learn.

Most of us love having classes through DingTalk, which helps us finish our learning task as well as enriching our learning resources. Hope you also enjoy your study.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Eric写一封邮件，告诉他你们学校上网课的软件和这款软件的效果。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

课程表：schedule→ timetable

吸引人的：eye-catching→ attractive

完成：finish→ complete

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Every day, we check in and take classes based on our schedule.

拓展句：Every day, we check in and take classes which are based on our schedule.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Every day, we check in and take classes based on our schedule. (运用了过去分词based作后置定语)

[高分句型2] Our teachers often make eye-catching and creative videos and show them to us, which is really a fun way to learn.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

假定你是李华, 你已经完成国外某大学的网络课程学习。请你给该课程负责人写一封关于课程学习反馈的邮件, 内容包括:

1. 你的评价;

2. 你的建议。

注意: 1. 词数 80 词左右;

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a student from University of Stanford. Finishing the provided online courses, I can’t wait to convey my feedback of them and offer some relevant suggestions.

In general, every course I took in Stanford was impressive and insightful. The instructive professors, the friendly classmates and in most special, the discussions, all of them gave me many "moments of epiphany". However, there also exist some problems. I'd be much obliged if you could perfect the campus network and diversify the curriculum to enhance my study efficiency.

Your consideration for my advice would be appreciated a great deal. Looking forward to your reply.

                                   Yours,

                                   Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇应用文，要求考生给国外某大学的网络课的课程负责人写一封关于课程学习反馈的邮件。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

表达：express → convey

提供：offer→ provide

有……：there be →there exist

感激的：grateful → obliged

提高：improve → enhance

2.句式拓展

原句：You could perfect the campus network and diversify the curriculum to enhance my study efficiency. I'd be much obliged.

拓展句：I'd be much obliged if you could perfect the campus network and diversify the curriculum to enhance my study efficiency.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]I'd be much obliged if you could perfect the campus network and diversify the curriculum to enhance my study efficiency.（if 引导的条件状语从句）

[高分句型2]Your consideration for my advice would be appreciated a great deal. （主动不如被动巧）

假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom写信告诉你由于他最近迷上电脑游戏而熬夜，忽视学业，并受父母责骂，和父母发生了争吵，心里很烦恼。你回信劝说他正确解决这个问题。

内容包括：

1.表示理解；

2.指出玩手机游戏的危害（至少两点）；

3.建议向父母道歉。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’ve heard that recently you are obsessed with computer games and your parents are not happy with that because you stay up at night to play computer games and pay less attention to study.

To be honest, what you did is not right thing. I understand you and also think computer games are interesting. However, we are students. Study is our main task. We have to study hard so that we can go to top university and find a decent job in the future. Please don't argue with your parents, since they are just concerned about your health and study. I think you should apologize to them sincerely. You are supposed to focus on your study instead of mobile phone games, which have negative effects on your health. I suggest that you finish your homework first and find a balance between study and entertainment.

I hope that my suggestion can help you. Expecting your good news.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你的美国笔友Tom写信告诉你由于他最近迷上电脑游戏而熬夜，忽视学业，并受父母责骂，和父母发生了争吵，心里很烦恼。你回信劝说他正确解决这个问题。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

沉迷于：be addicted to→be obsessed with

对……满意：be satisfied with→be happy with

关心：be worried about→be concerned about

建议：advise→suggest

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I understand you and also think computer games are interesting. However, we are students.

拓展句：Although I understand you and also think computer games are interesting, we are students.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I’ve heard that recently you are obsessed with computer games and your parents are not happy with that because you stay up at night to play computer games and pay less attention to study. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] To be honest, what you did is not right thing. (运用了what引导主语从句)

你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：

1. 分析优势与不足；

2. 提出学习建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 题目和首句已为你写好。

【答案】one possible version:

Be smart online learners

Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.

 First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.

 Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.

In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of

扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich

各种各样： all kinds of→ varieties of

不完美：imperfection→ defect

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ， finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Faced with all kinds of information on the internet ,We can't tell the difference between the true and   the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]On the other hand ,online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.（现在分词作状语）

随着网络的普及，网络诈骗，网络欺凌等青少年网络安全问题成为大家关注的一个焦点，李华所在的班级围绕“网络安全问题”召开主题班会，假定你是李华，以“How to stay safe online”为标题，写一篇发言稿。主要包括以下内容：

1. 强调网络安全的重要性；

2. 提出建议（如保护好个人隐私、文明上网等）；

注意：

1. 词数80词左右；

2. 可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】A possible version:

Good afternoon, my dear classmates/fellow students!

With the wide spread of the Internet, we have easy access to almost everything we want to know. Meanwhile, there are also hidden/potential dangers that we can’t see through. Then what should we do to stay safe online?

First of all, don’t click on any strange link so as to avoid property loss. Second, protect your privacy. Don’t give away your personal information like name or address, and never see strangers you meet online. Finally, always be polite in the virtual world. Try not to be a target for a cyberbully.

Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy and harmonious online world.

Thank you!

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于发言稿，要求考生以“How to stay safe online”为标题，写一篇发言稿。主要包括以下内容：1. 强调网络安全的重要性；2. 提出建议（如保护好个人隐私、文明上网等）。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

保持：stay→keep

私人的：personal→private

遵守：obey→observe

首先：first of all→first and foremost

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, don’t click on any strange link so as to avoid property loss.

拓展句：First of all, don’t click on any strange link, the purpose of which is to avoid property loss.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Meanwhile, there are also hidden/potential dangers that we can’t see through.(运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy and harmonious online world.(运用了only位于句首引起的部分倒装句)

假定你是李华，你最近发现一些同学经常在微信朋友圈分享详细的生活细节照片，你觉得这样的行为很危险，请你就如何安全地使用网络社交软件发一篇博客。写作要点如下：

1. 不在网络上透露个人信息；

2. 使用较安全的密码，不使用公共电脑登陆；

3. 不要添加陌生人。

注意：

1. 词数100词左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：微信朋友圈 WeChat Moments；密码：password。

                                 How to Stay Safe on Social Networking Apps

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                                                                                                                                          How to Stay Safe on Social Networking Apps

Recently, some people like to share details of their lives on their WeChat circle. I think it will cause some safety problems. Today I thought I’d blog about a question — how do you stay safe on social networking apps?

First of all, protect your privacy. Don’t give out too much private information, such as your address, phone numbers, the ID numbers, and so on. Besides, use strong passwords and don’t use public computers. By doing this, it will keep your account and personal information safe. Last but not least, don’t add strangers to the list of your friends, because they may bring some troubles to you.

Do you have some advice for staying safe on social networking apps? Post your comments below!

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生给就如何安全地使用网络社交软件发一篇博客。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

最近：recently→lately

导致，引起：cause→induce/lead to

私人信息：private information→personal information

建议：advice→suggestion

2.句式拓展

合并句子

原句：Recently, some people like to share details of their lives on their WeChat circle. I think it will cause some safety problems.

拓展句：Recently, some people like to share details of their lives on their WeChat circle, which, I think, will cause some safety problems.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I think it will cause some safety problems.(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Last but not least, don’t add strangers to the list of your friends, because they may bring some troubles to you. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)