满分作文07篇+旅游交通-备战2023年高考英语作文热点话题押题预测(全国通用)
展开假如你叫李华,你的加拿大网友Mike圣诞期间打算来中国,他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣,希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个或两个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。
要点:
- 简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
- 叙述你推荐的理由;
- 表达你的祝愿。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend.
The Great Wall of China is one of the great wonders in the world, which is visible from outer space. Because of its rich history and magnificent appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourist, scientist, and historians.
The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
I’m looking forward to your arrival. There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 文明旅游
每年都有许多人外出旅游,一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华,请你给报社写一封信,呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下:
1. 尊重习俗;
2. 不高声喧哗;
3. 其他。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling. Every year, a great many holiday makers go out for sightseeing and relaxation. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.
In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries.
More importantly, if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.
Yours truly
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的留学生Jim近期想和舍友出去旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;2,你的理由;3. 你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数。
Dear Jim,
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【答案】Dear Jim,
I'm happy to receive your letter.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai,both are strongly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and the Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.
That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice.
Hope you'll have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。Jim近期想和舍友出去旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”,要求学生根据要求写一封回信给Jim相关建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
建议:recommend→ suggest
此外:Moreover→ Besides
风景:scenery→ landscape
旅程:trip→ journey
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.
拓展句:Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, which is the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. (运用了副词Moreover)
[高分句型2] That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice. (运用了why引导的表语从句)
假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Tom所在的学校要组织一次中国旅行,有两条路线可以选择:“北京之行”和“新疆之旅”。Tom来信希望你能给些建议,请给他回信,替他选择一条路线,内容包括:
1. 你建议的路线;
2. 推荐2-3个景点及理由;
3. 简要的行前准备,你的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. Welcome to China. Of the two routes given by your school, I strongly recommend that the trip to Beijing deserve the effort.
For one thing, you can experience rich traditional Chinese culture in Beijing, which used to be the capital of Ming and Qing dynasties in ancient China. You can go to the Great Wall. You certainly know a saying that one who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero. For another, Beijing is also a modern metropolis, hosting the 2008 Olympic Games. I suggest you go to the water cube and the bird’s nest to have a look at the modern stadiums. In addition to being familiar with these attractions on the Internet, you need to wear comfortable shoes before traveling. I believe that the trip, both interesting and rewarding, is bound to be a memorable experience for you.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Tom回信,对于Tom所在的学校要组织的中国旅行给出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→happy
到达:reach→arrive at
看一看:have a look at →take a look at
建议:suggest→advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For another, Beijing is also a modern metropolis, hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.
拓展句:For another, Beijing is also a modern metropolis, which hosted the 2008 Olympic Games.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Of the two routes given by your school, I strongly recommend that the trip to Beijing deserve the effort.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】For one thing, you can experience rich traditional Chinese culture in Beijing, which used to be the capital of Ming and Qing Dynasties in ancient China.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】You certainly know a saying that one who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Mary发来邮件说她计划春节期间来你所在的城市旅游。请你给 Mary回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.推荐一个景点并陈述理由;
3.预祝旅途愉快。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
Knowing that you’ll come to my city during the Spring Festival, I’m more than delighted to offer to be your guide during your stay here.
Since you are so fascinated by flowers, I strongly recommend you to pay a visit to the Chengdong Park. The Spring Festival is the best time to go there because the park is covered with 100,000 wintersweet trees, which makes it like a wintersweet sea, attracting a flood of visitors from all around the world. Believe me, it is sure to be an unforgettable experience.
I’m looking forward to meeting you and hope you will have a wonderful time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生给笔友Mary回一封邮件,欢迎她来自己所在的城市旅行,并推荐一个景点。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:pleased→delighted
建议:advise→recommend
难忘的:memorable→unforgettable
愉快的:pleasant→wonderful
2.句型拓展
同义句
原句:Since you are so fascinated by flowers, I strongly recommend you to pay a visit to the Chengdong Park.
拓展句:It is strongly recommended that you should pay a visit to the Chengdong Park, since you are so fascinated by flowers.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Knowing that you’ll come to my city during the Spring Festival, I’m more than delighted to offer to be your guide during your stay here.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Since you are so fascinated by flowers, I strongly recommend you to pay a visit to the Chengdong Park.(运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型3]The Spring Festival is the best time to go there because the park is covered with 100,000 wintersweet trees, which makes it like a wintersweet sea, attracting a flood of visitors from all around the world. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Sarah打算暑期来北京旅游,来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信,简单介绍以下内容:
1. 简况:长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺;2. 位置:天安门广场南面;
3. 交通:公共汽车17、69、59等路,地铁2号线;4. 特色:步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
参考词汇:步行街pedestrian street 当当车trolley car 地铁subway
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语已为你写好,请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.
Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-metre street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theaters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I’m sure you’ll like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Sarah写封回信,向她介绍改建后前门大街的情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
著名的:famous→well-known
到达:get→arrive
确定的:sure→certain
喜欢:like→ enjoy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old.
拓展句:Qianmen Street is a famous street that has a history of over 600 years old.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theaters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter打算来中国旅游,希望你给他推荐一个去处。恰好你的家乡最近几年在大力发展乡村旅游,请你给他回一封电子邮件,向他推荐你的家乡。主要内容包括:
1.推荐理由;
2.特色简介;
3.交通情况。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm so glad that you will come to China for a visit.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm so glad that you will come to China for a visit. As you know, China is a large country abundant in tourism resources, many of which exist in the countryside. Here I’d like to advise you to pay a visit to my hometown.
My hometown is a beautiful village, where you can feast your eyes on its fascinating scenery. You can also go fishing, harvest fruits and learn to make our traditional dishes. Moreover, you can experience some folk activities here. As for the transportation, far away from the city as our hometown is, it is situated close to the expressway. Therefore, the transportation is quite convenient.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter打算来中国旅游,希望你给他推荐一个去处。恰好你的家乡最近几年在大力发展乡村旅游,请你给他回一封电子邮件,向他推荐你的家乡。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
富有:rich in→abundant in
建议:suggest→advise
美丽的:pretty→beautiful
景色:landscape→scenery
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:You can also go fishing, harvest fruits and learn to make our traditional dishes. Moreover, you can experience some folk activities here.
拓展句:Not only can you go fishing, harvest fruits and learn to make our traditional dishes, but also you can experience some folk activities here.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As you know, China is a large country abundant in tourism resources, many of which exist in the countryside. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] As for the transportation, far away from the city as our hometown is, it is situated close to the expressway. (运用了as引导的部分倒装)
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Henry来信说他寒假期间将来中国旅游,并借此了解中国文化.请你给他写封回信,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;2.推荐景点;3.简述理由及注意事项。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信的格式已为你写好.
Dear Henry,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
I'm happy to receive your letter and know that you're coming to China. I’m writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome.
I'd like to tell you something about some places of interest in China. Personally, one of the best is the Great Wall of China. It came into being during the Warring States period and reached its best in Ming Dynasty as defense working against enemies. With a history of over 2,000 years, it runs like a huge dragon across North China. And now it’s a world-famous tourist attraction. As an old Chinese saying goes, “A man who hasn't been to the Great Wall is not a true man”, and it’s almost a must for foreigners to visit in China.”
If you come to visit the Great Wall, you'd better come a day before climbing the Wall and avoid weekends or holidays, when it is too crowded with tourists, so as to enjoy its beauty more peacefully. Moreover, I can be your guide if you like.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国朋友Henry写信推荐景点,并简述理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
在个人看来:personally→in my view
举世闻名的:world-famous→of world renown
挤满:be too crowded with→be full of
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Personally,one of the best is the Great Wall of China. It came into being during the Warring States period and reached its best in Ming Dynasty as defense working against enemies.
拓展句:Personally, one of the best is the Great Wall of China, which came into being during the Warring States period and reached its best in Ming Dynasty as defense working against enemies.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As an old Chinese saying goes, “A man who hasn't been to the Great Wall is not a true man”, and it’s almost a must for foreigners to visit in China.” (运用了as引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] If you come to visit the Great Wall, you'd better come a day before climbing the Wall and avoid weekends or holidays, when it is too crowded with tourists, so as to enjoy its beauty more peacefully. (运用了if引导状语从句,when引导的非限制性定语从句,不定式作目的状语)
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