满分作文03篇+职业规划-备战2023年高考英语作文热点话题押题预测（全国通用）

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友George发来邮件，想了解你未来想从事什么职业。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：

1. 你未来想从事的职业
2. 你选择该职业的原因
3. ...

Dear George,

I’m more than delighted to hear from you. In your letter, you asked me about my career choice for the future, so I’m now writing to share my views about it.

In the future, I’m dying to be a doctor. For one thing, if I am a doctor, I can make use of what I have learned to relieve patients’ pains and even save their lives. For another, I have always shown great interest in Chinese medicine, which features magic effect. Should I be admitted by a medical college this year, I would make every effort to rediscover the value of Chinese medicine, making it more popular in the world.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

假设你是李华，还有三个月就要从高中毕业了。请给你的老师Mr. Smith写一封信，表达对他的感激之情。内容包括：

1.表达感谢；

2.感谢他的原因；

3.你的理想。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计人总词数。

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【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

With the graduation day approaching, I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you. Thank you for everything you've done for me.

Life has become busy and stressful since I came to senior high school. There was a time when the pressure of exams, too much homework and the high expectations from my parents made me so anxious that I almost lost heart. However, it was you who offered me patient guidance when I was in trouble. With your generous help and encouragement, I have made such great progress in my study.

With three months left, I will study hard so that I can enter my ideal university and begin a new life. I hope you'll keep fit and live as happy a life as possible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给老师Mr. Smith写一封信，表达对他的感激之情。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时、现在完成时和一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.表达感谢；

2.感谢他的原因；

3.你的理想。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

graduation; express heartfelt gratitude to; stressful; high expectation; lose heart; guidance; be in trouble; encouragement; make great progress; so that; ideal; keep fit; live a happy life

第三步：连词成句

1. With the graduation day approaching, I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you.

2. Thank you for everything you've done for me.

3. Life has become busy and stressful since I came to senior high school.

4. There was a time when the pressure of exams, too much homework and the high expectations from my parents made me so anxious that I almost lost heart.

5. However, it was you who offered me patient guidance when I was in trouble.

6. With your generous help and encouragement, I have made such great progress in my study.

7. With three months left, I will study hard so that I can enter my ideal university and begin a new life.

8. I hope you'll keep fit and live as happy a life as possible.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then（供参考）

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore（供参考）

3.表转折对比关系：However, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】

[高分句型1] There was a time when the pressure of exams, too much homework and the high expectations from my parents made me so anxious that I almost lost heart. (运用了so…that…引导结果状语从句)

[高分句型2] However, it was you who offered me patient guidance when I was in trouble. (运用了强调句和when引导时间状语从句)

临近毕业，你的英语老师布置了一篇作文，请以“My Career Plan”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括:

1.你的专业选择和职业规划；

2.陈述你的理由。

注意:

1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

My Career Plan

【答案】When it comes to my career in the future, I often imagine what I will be in the future.I hope l will work in a computer company as a program designer. Many reasons for being a program designer are as follows.

To begin with, I like designing the computer programs from an early age and I will make enough time. During the work, I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Meanwhile, I'will do a good job in whatever I do. Furthremore, I also hope that I won't be very busy so that I can spare time to company with my families. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. For my future ideal job, I am making every effort to make it. No matter how hard it is, I will go on trying hard and never never give it up.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“My Career Plan”为题，写一篇英语短文。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

职业：career/occupation/profession

相处：get on well with/ get along with

陪伴：accompany/keep sb. company

锻炼：work out

尽力：put one's shoulders to the wheel

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：To begin with, I like designing the computer programs from an early age and I will make enough time.

拓展句：To begin with, I like designing the computer programs which I was fond of from an early age and I will make enough time.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

When it comes to my career in the future, I often imagine what I will be in the future.（运用了When it comes to的固定句式和what引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

I'will do a good job in whatever I do.（运用了whatever引导的宾语从句）

假定你是李华，将参加一个英语论坛举办的“A Final Year and A Global Dream”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇稿件，内容包括：

1. 目前你的学习目标；

2. 描述未来的愿景(梦想大学等)。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

注：选拔赛-qualification trial

Ladies and gentlemen,

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【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,

What does a final high school year really feel like in China and what is the future I look forward to?   A rough picture is painted as follows.

Currently, studying tops my to do list and I, with the goal of being among the top 50 in the whole grade, have made a schedule specially tailored to make full use of my time to review all the required exam subjects. My dream one year later is to get the admission to Tsinghua University where I can major in electric engineering. Everything goes well, I'll go overseas to study   further.

Best wishes to all the dreams from fellows around the globe.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇稿件，参加一个英语论坛举办的“A Final Year and A Global Dream”为题的征文活动。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 目前你的学习目标；

2. 描述未来的愿景(梦想大学等)。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

feel like; as follows; look forward to; make full use of; get the admission to; major in

第三步：连词成句

1. What does a final high school year really feel like in China and what is the future I look forward to?

2. A rough picture is painted as follows.

3. Currently, studying tops my to do list and I, with the goal of being among the top 50 in the whole grade, have made a schedule specially tailored to make full use of my time to review all the required exam subjects.

4. My dream one year later is to get the admission to Tsinghua University where I can major in electric engineering.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Currently, studying tops my to do list and I, with the goal of being among the top 50 in the whole grade, have made a schedule specially tailored to make full use of my time to review all the required exam subjects.这句话运用了非谓语动词。

[高分句型2] My dream one year later is to get the admission to Tsinghua University where I can major in electric engineering. 这句话运用了关系副词where引导的定语从句。

[高分句型3] Best wishes to all the dreams from fellows around the globe. 这句话运用了表达了祝愿。

假定你是李华，你打算参加学校“职业规划演讲比赛”，请根据提示，以“My Career Planning"为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：

1.职业目标；2.理由；3,打算。 注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.

3.参考词汇：career planning职业规划

Career Planning

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【答案】(One possible version)

My Career Planning

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It’s my great honor to share with you my career plan today! I would like to be an engineer after my graduation because I am so interested in physics and chemistry that I sometimes forget to eat meals. Meanwhile, engineering is one of the most popular careers in China. Since I have planned my career, I would spare no efforts to study all the related courses well. I’m sure I will make it! Thank you!

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的职业规划。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时，偶用其他时态。

写作思路：1.点明主题，职业目标。

          2. 理由（reasons）

          1） 热爱（love）

          2） 重要（importance）

          3. 打算（plan）

第二步: 重点词组和句式

my career plan; an engineer; (be) interested in physics and chemistry; the most popular careers; study all the related courses; make it等

第三步：连词成句

1.It’s my great honor to share with you my career plan today!

2.I would like to be an engineer after my graduation.

3.I am so interested in physics and chemistry.

4.   Engineering is one of the most popular careers in China.

5.I would spare no efforts to study all the related courses well.

6.   I’m sure I will make it!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（文章纽带）

运用一些衔接词语，即文章纽带，将连句成文。常用衔接词如下：

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Meanwhile, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。如果没必要运用这类衔接与过渡词语，心中也要有文章纽带贯穿的逻辑。

第五步：润色修改

最后，书写一定要规范。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达方式，如：词组the most popular careers; study all the related courses; make it等。句子I would like to be an engineer after my graduation because I am so interested in physics and chemistry that I sometimes forget to eat meals.（原因状语从句及so…that句型）等。全文中没有中式英语的句式，也没有滥用一些作文套句，英语运用能力较高。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，通顺流畅。

假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Jack发邮件询问你未来的专业选择和职业规划。请根据以下内容回复邮件：

1. 你的专业选择；

2. 你的职业规划；

3. 你的理由。

注意：1. 写作词数80左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Jack:

I’m glad to receive your e-mail asking my future major and career. Here’s what I want to share with you.

Since middle school, I’ve been fond of Chinese literature, which I plan to choose as my major. Besides my passion, literature is meaningful. It opens before us the door to an entirely different territory and age, broadcasting our horizons. Accordingly, I hope to be a Chinese teacher, who can convey the beauty of Chinese literature to others.

So what do you think of my plan? Looking forward to hearing from you!

Yours,

Li hua

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Jack写封信，内容包括：1. 你的专业选择；2. 你的职业规划；3. 你的理由。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

有意义的：meaningful→significative

完全地：entirely→completely

传递：convey→pass

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m glad to receive your e-mail asking my future major and career.

拓展句：I’m glad to receive your e-mail which asks my future major and career.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Since middle school, I’ve been fond of Chinese literature, which I plan to choose as my major.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Accordingly, I hope to be a Chinese teacher, who can convey the beauty of Chinese literature to others.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）

假定你是李华，你班准备举行“My Future Career”的英语班会，请草拟你的英语发言稿，内容包括：

1. 职业选择理由；

2. 职业特点：

3. 如何准备。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear teacher and classmates,

I am glad to have the chance to talk about my future career

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Thank you for your listening.

【答案】Dear teacher and classmates,

I am glad to have the chance to talk about my future career. My poor health in my childhood offered me chances to approach a lot of doctors and their devotion to patients deeply impressed me. Besides, doctors’ great sacrifices in fighting COVID-19 further pushed me to decide to be a doctor in the future.

Surely I know being a doctor takes great patience and kindness as well as expert skills. This career means a long-time workday and long-life learning. Sometimes it also means misunderstanding and great risk. So I need to study hard to be professional and at the same time train myself to be warm-hearted and compassionate.

I hope I can be a good doctor.

Thank you for your listening.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。你班准备举行“My Future Career”的英语班会，请根据要求草拟你的英语发言稿。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

职业：career→ profession

机会：chance→ opportunity

贡献：devotion→ contribution

风险：risk→ venture

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：My poor health in my childhood offered me chances to approach a lot of doctors and their devotion to patients deeply impressed me.

拓展句：My poor health in my childhood offered me chances to approach a lot of doctors whose devotion to patients deeply impressed me.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Surely I know being a doctor takes great patience and kindness as well as expert skills. (运用了动名词作主语)

[高分句型2]I hope I can be a good doctor.. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)

近期你校将举办以“My Dream Career”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿。内容包括：

1、你的理想职业；2、选择的理由；3、实现的途径。

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

My Dream Career

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【答案】My Dream Career

Selecting the future job is of great importance. I hope to be a doctor in the future.

As for the reasons for this decision, first of all, being a doctor can save lives, and seeing my patients recover will definitely give me a huge sense of achievement. Secondly, with the accumulation of my experience, I hope I can become an expert of my field and share my knowledge with younger doctors, making contributions to the medical cause.

To be a successful doctor, studying hard is absolutely necessary. I will try my best to realize my dream and contribute to the development of our society.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。近期你校将举办以“My Dream Career”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请根据要求写一篇英语演讲稿。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

重要的：be of great importance→be important

成为：become→turn

努力做某事：try one’s best→do one’s best

实现梦想：realize one’s dream →one’s dream come true

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Secondly, with the accumulation of my experience, I hope I can become an expert of my field and share my knowledge with younger doctors, making contributions to the medical cause.

拓展句：Secondly, as my experience accumulates, I hope I can become an expert of my field and share my knowledge with younger doctors, making contributions to the medical cause.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】As for the reasons for this decision, first of all, being a doctor can save lives, and seeing my patients recover will definitely give me a huge sense of achievement.（运用了动名词作主语）

【高分句型2】Secondly, with the accumulation of my experience, I hope I can become an expert of my field and share my knowledge with younger doctors, making contributions to the medical cause.（运用了现在分词作状语）

你校英文报开设了新专栏“My Future Plan”。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1. 你未来想从事的工作；

2. 需要做的准备。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；

2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

【答案】          When talking about the rosy future, many people would think of a satisfactory job in the first place. To have a dream job is also the first thing that comes to my mind, and I’m determined to be a lawyer.

To achieve my dream, I must work diligently for the time being to have a good command of knowledge. Only through hard work can I be admitted to my ideal university where I will major in law. Of course, I should also build myself up, which is the basic condition for my progress in study.

In short, I hope my efforts today will pay off next year and I can have a bright future and a meaningful life!

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文报开设了新专栏“My Future Plan”。请你写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

有希望的：promising→rosy/bright

首先：at first→in the first place

基本的：fundamental→basic

总之：all in all→in short

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：To achieve my dream, I must work diligently for the time being to have a good command of knowledge.

拓展句：I must work diligently for the time being to have a good command of knowledge because I want to achieve my dream.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] When talking about the rosy future, many people would think of a satisfactory job in the first place. (运用了省略句)

[高分句型2] To achieve my dream, I must work diligently for the time being to have a good command of knowledge. (运用了不定式作目的状语)

你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“My dream job”为题写一篇发言稿参赛. 内容包括：       

1. 你的理想工作；

2. 你选择的理由。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

My dream job

Good morning, everyone.

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【答案】参考范文

My dream job

Good morning, everyone. I feel it an honor to address a speech titled "My dream job".

Of the wide range of jobs around us, I will choose to be a teacher. My mother accounts for my choice first. Her commitment to teaching and happiness of being a teacher motivate me. Additionally, it is the inquisitive faces from my future students that reinforce my idea. At last, I am eager to make a difference to those for whom education is their only ticket to success.

Not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons, but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher. Thank you!

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校即将举行的演讲比赛写一篇题目为“My dream”的发言稿参赛。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

发表演讲：address a speech→ deliver a speech

另外：additionally→ besides

不留余力做某事： spare no effort to do sth. →do one's level best to do sth.

激励：motivate → inspire

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： I feel it an honor to address a speech titled "My dream job".

拓展句： I feel it an honor to address a speech whose title is "My dream job".

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Additionally, it is the inquisitive faces from my future students that reinforce my idea. （运用了that引导的限定性定语从句）

[高分句型2]At last, I am eager to make a difference to those for whom education is their only ticket to success.（运用了介词for +which引导的限定性定语从句）