四川省自贡市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05作文

四川省自贡市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

05作文

一、材料作文

1．（2021·四川自贡）假定你是李华，你校将为在自贡的英国交换生举办一次中国文化体验活动。请根据以下提示写封邮件给交换生负责人Peter，告知体验活动当天的相关安排，内容包括：

1. 统一集合，乘车前往；

2. 活动内容：参观恐龙博物馆；观看彩灯制作；欣赏二胡演奏等；

3. 注意事项。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

参考词汇：恐龙：dinosaur       化石：fossil       彩灯：colorful lantern

Dear Peter,

How’s everything going? I’m writing to tell you something about the Chinese cultural activity which our school will organize for your exchange students.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hope you enjoy your trip.

Yours,

Li Hua

2．（2020·四川自贡）暑假即将开始，而新冠疫情尚未结束。假定你是李华，将在暑假组织志愿者活动。为防疫抗疫做些贡献。请根据以下提示写封信邀请你的好友李明参加。内容包括：

1、活动目的

2、活动内容：分发防疫抗疫传单及原因。捡拾废弃的口罩和原因。

3、词数80左右

参考词汇：新冠病毒COVID-19 传单 leaflet             口罩mask

Dear Li Ming,

How's it going? I'm writing to_____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I'm looking forward to your joining.

Yours,

Li Hua

二、书信作文

3．（2022·四川自贡）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫，希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信，内容包括：

1. 表示理解和安慰；

2. 建议：正确认识自己的不足；处理好和父母的关系；处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

How’s everything going? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

参考答案：

1．例文

Dear Peter,

How’s everything going? I’m writing to tell you something about the Chinese cultural activity which our school will organize for your exchange students.

We are going to meet at the school gate. Then we’ll go to visit Museum of Dinosaur by coach. There you’ll see many different kinds of dinosaur fossil. After visiting the museum, we’re going to watch the colorful lantern production. You will learn how to make the colourful lanterns. If you want to have a try, you can make them by yourselves. In the afternoon, we will go to enjoy erhu playing. It’s very interesting. At five o’clock, we will come back to our school.

Hope you enjoy your trip.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍中国文化体验活动，包括活动安排和注意事项。注意要点齐全，层次清晰。

2.写作指导：文章开头结尾已给出，介绍活动用一段，第一人称和第二人称交替使用，时态是一般将来时。使用恰当的连词连接上下文。

2．例文

Dear Li Ming,

How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you to attend an activity. As you know, the summer holiday is coming, but COVID-19 is not over yet. So I want to organize some volunteer activities during the summer vacation.

The activity is aimed at giving people some knowledge about COVID-19 and protecting ourselves. We will distribute anti-epidemic leaflets. In this way we can make more people aware of how to behave themselves to overcome the virus. Besides, we will pick up used masks because these used masks may pollute our environment.

I’m looking forward to your joining.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们给自己的好友写一封邀请信。写作前，应先仔细审题，明确作文的体裁，确定应使用的时态、人称；明确文章的结构以及每一段的主旨。审题可知，这篇短文应分三段：第一段点明写作的目的；第二段介绍活动的目的、内容等细节信息；第三段表达自己的期望。题目中已给出了开头和结尾，学生们主要应将该活动的内容进行详细的介绍，虽然题目中有部分提示，但还需学生对此进行拓展，写出更多的细节，使文章内容更加丰富。短文应以一般现在时和一般将来时，第一人称为主来叙述。

例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、丰富，结构清晰，叙述条理。短文采取三段式结构，第一段除了题目中给出的开头，作者补充了写作的目的；第二段是主体段，主要介绍了这个活动的目的、内容等；最后一段是收尾，是题目中已给出的。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，长短句结合，使用了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等结构，表达流畅，意思连贯。

高分亮点：

短语：aim at；in this way；aware of；pick up。

句型：As you know, the summer holiday is coming, but COVID-19 is not over yet.；The activity is aimed at giving people some knowledge about COVID-19 and protecting ourselves.；Besides, we will pick up used masks because these used masks may pollute our environment.。

3．例文

Dear Mike,

How’s everything going? I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty getting along with others. It’s common to have the feeling. Take it easy. I’ll give you some advice.

       First, you should get a thorough understanding of yourself: aware of your strength and shortage. Second, you should communicate with your parents. Tell them your feelings so that they will understand you better. Third, you can take part in some activities with your classmates. It will help you find more about your classmates and they can learn more about you too. Then you can become friends.

       I hope these suggestions can help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Mike交友方面的问题提出合理的建议。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段表达安慰和理解；第二段根据提示材料提出合理的建议；最后一段表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。