北京高考英语作文模拟训练：书信写作

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书信写作一、假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris和你都喜欢观察和记录生活。他在邮件中询问你记录生活的方式，请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 你记录生活的方式（日记、vlog等）；2. 你的感受与收获。注意：1. 词数不少于100字；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。Dear Chris,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua范文：1.Dear Chris,How is everything going? Knowing that you’re curious about how I take a record of my life, I’m more than happy to share it with you. Since I was a little child, I’ve been friends with diary, with whom I can share my deepest feelings and thoughts. When I read my diary page by page, all my memories flash back clearly to me. It’s a really valuable record of my growth. Nowadays, many teenagers around me prefer to share their vlogs on the social media like bilibili or WeChat momets. But as for me, diary is like wine, the longer, the better. It will be my life-lasting friend.   What about you? I’m looking forward to your earliest reply. （129words）Yours,Li Hua2.Dear Chris,How are you doing? It’s a pleasure to receive your email asking me about the ways I record my daily life and I’d love to share them with you.I have developed a habit of keeping a diary since I was young. My diary is not only the place where I take down whatever happens to me but a best friend who I can tell my deepest feelings and thoughts to.Recently, I have been experimenting with vlog, which, as you know, is an increasingly popular way of recording life. Videoing the cherished moments and sharing them on social media is such an experience that I have gained great pleasure from it.In my opinion, whatever the way is, it is to prepare you to have a taste of the beauty of life. What do you think of it? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua解析：第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分总法要求：1. 你记录生活的方式（日记、vlog等）；2. 你的感受与收获。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be curious about；take a record of；share…with…；be friends with；page by page；as for；look forward to第三步：连词成句1.Knowing that you’re curious about how I take a record of my life, I’m more than happy to share it with you.2.Since I was a little child, I’ve been friends with diary, with whom I can share my deepest feelings and thoughts. 3. When I read my diary page by page, all my memories flash back clearly to me. 4. It’s a really valuable record of my growth.5. Nowadays, many teenagers around me prefer to share their vlogs on the social media like bilibili or WeChat moments. 6. But as for me, diary is like wine, the longer, the better. 7. It will be my life-lasting friend.   8. I’m looking forward to your earliest reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition(供参考)3.表转折对比关系： But4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)  二、假如你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim对中国的数字化生活很感兴趣，来信询问相关情况。请你给他回邮件，内容包括：1. 介绍你身边的数字化生活；2. 阐述你的看法；3. 询问对方情况。注意：1. 词数不少于80；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua范文：1.Dear Jim,Glad to know you’re interested in the digital life of Chinese, I’d like to tell you something about it around me.To tell you the truth, I can’t help feeling amazed at the great changes that digital life has brought to us. With a smart phone in hand, I can do almost anything. Just name a few on the list –learning online, getting medical service on the Internet and shopping with a click. I can even travel across China without taking cash!As a young student, I surely enjoy living in such a digital world. It gives me easy access to abundant resources, news and learning materials alike. If only I wish, it offers the chance to better myself, physically or mentally. However, the digital life also has its downsides. Many elderly Chinese feel left behind, including my grandparents. So I often try to help them keep up.How about the digital life in your country? Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua2.Dear Jim,Learning that you are interested in the digital life of Chinese, I’d like to tell you something about it around me.You know, the advanced digital technology has changed our lifestyle fundamentally. To me, I can almost pay everything via a mobile phone, such as transportation, food and entertainment. My city has upgraded services, and we can pay bills online, including electricity, gas, water and heating. We can also enjoy reading from e-libraries, visiting virtual museums and even get medical services online.I feel the digital life has brought great convenience to us and improved our life and work in a way beyond imagination. If only I wish, I can access abundant resources and better myself academically and physically. However, it does have its downside. The biggest one is the risk of privacy and data leak, which deserves better coping. Another is that many elderly get left behind. I feel the young have a duty to help them keep up.How about the digital life in your country? Looking forward to your reply and your coming to explore our digital world one day.Yours,Li Hua解析：第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 介绍你身边的数字化生活；2. 阐述你的看法；3. 询问对方情况。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）be interested in; would like to; To tell sb. the truth; can’t help doing; enjoy doing; access to; leave behind; try to; keep up; how about; look forward to第三步：连词成句1. Glad to know you’re interested in the digital life of Chinese, I’d like to tell you something about it around me.2. To tell you the truth, I can’t help feeling amazed at the great changes that digital life has brought to us.3. As a young student, I surely enjoy living in such a digital world.4. Many elderly Chinese feel left behind, including my grandparents. 5. So I often try to help them keep up.6. How about the digital life in your country? 7.Looking forward to your reply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+ n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result  三、假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。毕业在即，同学们想请曾在你班学习的英国学生Jim录制一段视频。作为班长，请你给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.视频内容；2.其它相关事项。注意：1．词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua范文：Dear Jim,How are you doing? It's been a while and we all miss you. I' m writing to invite you to join us in a special event.You know, we'll graduate in June. It's a pity that you can't be present at the graduation ceremony. But we do hope you can attend in a different way. Would you like to record a short video to express your wishes? And it'll be great if you also share with us your life in Britain. I bet the video will be a hit at the ceremony and it's bound to bring back fond memories of our time together.Sounds fun, right? Please email it to me by next Sunday, and if you need assistance of any kind, I'd be more than happy to help.Yours,Li Hua.解析：1.词汇积累出席：be present at→attend表达：express→convey一定：be bound to do→be sure to do帮助：assistance→support2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I bet the video will be a hit at the ceremony and it's bound to bring back fond memories of our time together.拓展句：I bet the video will be a hit at the ceremony which is bound to bring back fond memories of our time together. 四、假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下个月将要举办主题为“寻找春天，拥抱自然”的踏青骑行活动，请给你校的交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：1. 活动安排；2. 准备事项。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua范文：Dear Jim,How is everything going? Spring has come and our school is going to organize a cycling activity themed “Greet Spring, Embrace Nature” on April 10th. I am writing to invite you to join us.Here is some information about the activity. At 8:00 am, we will gather at the school gate and then go to the famous cycling park in the suburbs. After arriving there, we will rent road bikes and begin our cycling along the 10-kilometer-long route. After that, we will have a picnic. It’s a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the beautiful view in the countryside.Don’t forget to wear your helmet and protective gloves if you come. You’d better bring your lunch pack with you.I hope we can have fun together. If you are interested in it, just let me know.Yours,Li Hua解析：第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时，少量现在进行时和现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.介绍活动安排；2.介绍准备事项。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）invite you to join us; gather at the school gate; rent road bikes; begin our cycling; wear your helmet and protective gloves; bring your lunch pack第三步：连词成句1.Spring has come and our school is going to organize a cycling activity themed “Greet Spring, Embrace Nature” on April 10th. 2.I am writing to invite you to join us.3.Here is some information about the activity. 4.At 8:00 am, we will gather at the school gate and then go to the famous cycling park in the suburbs. 5.After arriving there, we will rent road bikes and begin our cycling along the 10-kilometer-long route. 6.After that, we will have a picnic. 7.It’s a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the beautiful view in the countryside.8.Don’t forget to wear your helmet and protective gloves if you come. 9.You’d better bring your lunch pack with you.10.I hope we can have fun together.11.If you are interested in it, just let me know.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result  五、假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在做关于“中学生运动情况”的调查，想了解你的运动情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.你喜欢的一项运动；2.这项运动给你带来的益处；3.关于运动的建议。注意:1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLi Hua范文：Dear Jim,How is everything going? Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.Actually, playing basketball is my favorite. I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.I have benefited much from playing basketball. It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days. In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges. It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.This is my experience and understanding of sports. What about yours? So looking forward to your sharing.Yours,Li Hua解析：第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 介绍你喜欢的一项运动；2. 介绍这项运动给你带来的益处；3. 提出关于运动的建议。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）play basketball; take part in competitions; benefit much from playing basketball; keep fit; refresh myself during the stressful school days; more courageous and persistent; the key to success; many friends with the same interest; do physical exercise                    regularly第三步：连词成句1.Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.2.Actually, playing basketball is my favorite. 3.I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.4.I have benefited much from playing basketball. 5.It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days. 6.In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges. 7.It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.8.Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.9.This is my experience and understanding of sports. 10.So looking forward to your sharing.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：In addition 2.表因果关系：Therefore连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 六、假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和学校英国交换生Chris一起报名参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演，但是你因故不能参加。请你给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表达歉意；2. 不能参加的原因；3. 解决办法建议。注意：1. 词数100字左右；2. 文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris，_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua范文：Dear Chris,I feel terribly sorry that I can't make my way to our show on the Festival of Traditional Culture.Unfortunately, I hurt myself accidentally when I was playing basketball last night. As a result, I'm suffering a badly fractured arm, which means it's impossible for me to practice Taijiquan for at least a month and my show will be blown up.Knowing that you have been waiting for this moment so long, I strongly recommend Jim replace me. As an enthusiast, he's an excellent Taiji player. Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.I do understand you need me badly but I still hope you could forgive me.Yours,Li Hua解析：1.词汇积累演出：show→performance建议：recommend→suggest原谅：forgive→pardon意外地：accidentally = by accident2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：As an enthusiast, he's an excellent Taiji player. Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.拓展句：As an enthusiast, he's not only an excellent Taiji player, but also very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of. 七、假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英语俱乐部的上一任外教Jim为你们推荐了一位新外教。作为俱乐部负责人，请你给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1．表示感谢；2．讲述新外教给予的帮助。注意：1．词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua范文：Dear Jim,Hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to thank you for recommending Ms Smith.She is such a wonderful teacher, a valuable addition to the club. She impresses us with her expertise and kindness. With her help, we have engaged in activities of all kinds and we are now our school’s most popular club.Also, Ms Smith came up with the idea to donate English books to students in a rural area. Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books? These reading materials will surely help enrich their experiences. Most importantly, we feel the joy of being able to make a difference.We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again. Well, so much about us. What’s new in your life? Do keep us updated.Yours,Li Hua解析：第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。结构：总分总法要求：1．表示感谢；2．讲述新外教给予的帮助。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）impress…with…；engage in；come up with；make a difference；第三步：连词成句1. She is such a wonderful teacher, a valuable addition to the club. 2. She impresses us with her expertise and kindness. 3. With her help, we have engaged in activities of all kinds and we are now our school’s most popular club.4. Also, Ms Smith came up with the idea to donate English books to students in a rural area.5. Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books? 6. These reading materials will surely help enrich their experiences.7. Most importantly, we feel the joy of being able to make a difference.8. We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)2.表并列补充关系：Also，Most importantly 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but(供参考)4.表因果关系：So