上海高考英语作文模拟专项训练（附范文）

上海中考英语模拟作文练习

一、Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

在成长过程中，人们常会被贴上各种标签，如“乖巧听话”（obedient）、“有个性”（cool）、“书呆子”（a nerd/geek）、“00后”（post-millennials）等。校报特辟专栏对此进行讨论，请以李华为名投稿，内容需包括：

1.描述自己或他人曾经被贴过的标签；

2.你对“贴标签”（labelling）的看法。

范文：

Growing up，Most of us may have been labeled various labels, such as “obedient “,”cool “”a nerd/ geek” and so on. Take myself as an example, throughout my primary school ,I was labelled as “a nerd”. I hated it. I knew that I was not a nerd .I was simply quiet and enjoyed reading. But now in high school, I am a member of our Reading Club,where I have found many friends sharing common interest with me.

Therefore, I am opposed to labeling a child, which makes damage to his confidence . Instead,we should encourage them to be themselves. And if you are labeled , just ignore it and then try to find yourself behind the label. Be brave to be yourself.

本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生给校报专栏投稿，讨论人们常会被贴上各种标签，如“乖巧听话”（obedient）、“有个性”（cool）、“书呆子”（a nerd/geek）、“00后”（post-millennials）等这个话题，表达自己观点。

1.词汇积累

讨厌：don’t like→hate

喜欢,着迷：like/enjoy→be fascinated with/be fond of

反对：disagree with →be opposed to/be strongly against

对…有害：be bad for→ do damage to

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：.But now in high school, I am a member of our Reading Club. I have found many friends sharing common interest with me.

拓展句：.But now in high school, I am a member of our Reading Club., where I have found many friends sharing common interest with me.

简单句变复合句

原句：I hated it.

拓展句：I hated it when I heard myself referred to as a nerd.

二、Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是李华，你们学校将为学生开设一系列微课程，每人可以选择其中的一项参加课程包括“文学欣赏”（Literature Appreciation）、“厨艺”（Cooking Skills）和“野外生存”（Wilderness Survival Skills）。你在英国留学的表哥Wilson很关心你这次课程的选择。请你写E-mail给他，说说你选择的结果，并简要谈谈你这样选择的理由。

范文：

Dear Wilson，

 I have learnt that our school will be open new train courses to satisfy our needs, including Literature Appreciation, Cooking Skills and Wilderness Survival Skills. As for me, I won't hesitate to choose Wilderness Survival Skills.

Most projects of Wilderness Survival Skills are designed to improve the quality of people's psychology, to improve self-control ability of students to continually overcome the psychological fear, to challenge themselves, overcome themselves and shape the good will quality of calm, resolute, indomitable. In addition, Outward Bound can cultivate students’ sense of team work.

Obviously, Wilderness Survival Skills can achieve educational goals of psychological and social adaptation, which, for the long run, pays off and benefits us for a life-long term.

Yours

                                                           Li Hua

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在英国留学的表哥Wilson写封信，介绍你对微课程的选择，说说结果，谈谈理由。

1.词汇积累

满足：satisfy→ meet

目的是：be designed to → be intended to

不断地：continually → constantly

有益：benefit → be beneficial to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Obviously, Wilderness Survival Skills can achieve educational goals of psychological and social adaptation, which, for the long run, pays off and benefits us for a life-long term.

拓展句：It is obvious that Wilderness Survival Skills can achieve educational goals of psychological and social adaptation, which, for the long run, pays off and benefits us for a life-long term.

三、Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

目前中国的移动支付(mobile payment)非常盛行，越来越多的年轻人选择使用移动支付，有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利，而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患。请你谈谈对这一现象的看法。内容包括:

1. 简要描述你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象。

2. 通过与传统方式的比较，谈谈移动支付给人们带来的利与弊。

(参考词汇:微信Wechat;支付宝: Alipay; 二维码QR code)

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范文：

With the development of China’s economy, Wechat and Aipay are very popular with everyone in the street. More and more people are choosing to pay the bill by using mobile payment, which is taking the place of paper currency. Some thinks that it actually makes life convenient, others believe that it's a security risk.

Compared with traditional payment, mobile payment has its advantages and disadvantages, I think the advantages are as follows. Firstly, it is convenient for everyone to buy what you want. Secondly, using mobile payment can avoid receiving fake money and being received fake money. Thirdly, If using the mobile payment, everyone can go shopping without any paper currency to prevent the money being stolen.

There is no denying that mobile payment has its disadvantages. It will take more risks protecting your private possessions. For example, you might be monitored while paying for what you have bought so that your account could be stolen.

The mobile payment is under construction now, people should treat it in an objective attitude.

1.关键词汇和短语: be popular with ,choose to do sth, by doing sth, taking the place of, paper currency, convenient, security risk, avoid doing sth, prevent sth from being done ,risk doing sth , private possessions, monitor, account, under construction. Compared with traditional payment, mobile payment has its advantages and disadvantages. it is convenient for everyone to buy what you want.

2.确定较为高级的句子：which引导的非限制性定语从句 More and more people are choosing to pay the bill by using mobile payment, which is taking the place of paper currency. If引导的条件状语从句If using the mobile payment, everyone can go shopping without any paper currency to prevent the money being stolen. that为连接词的同位语从句There is no denying that mobile payment has its disadvantages. while引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句和so that引导的结果状语从句you might be monitored while paying for what you have bought so that your account could be stolen.

四、Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

请简要描述图片，并结合生活实际谈谈你的看法。

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范文：

As is shown in the passage, different people have different opinions about success. Some people think success is simple and direct, while in fact, the way to success is twist and it needs hard work.

　　In my opinion, in order to become successful, you should first of all be both perseverant and hardworking. As you know, whatever you do, there are always two possible results: success and failure. When you fail, you should never lose heart. On the contrary, you must build up your confidence and work even harder. You should always keep in mind that perseverance is the mother of success and industry is the key to it. In addition, you should pay great attention to your work method. It is necessary for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve the efficiency of your work. Finally, it is important for you to get along well with your co-workers, care for each other and help each other. If you follow these principles, you will certainly achieve remarkable success in the future.

1. 确定关键词（组）, 如：the way to success（通往成功之路）；in order（为了）；first of all（首先）；perseverant（坚持不懈的）；lose heart（灰心）；on the contrary（相反）；build up（建立）等。
2. 高级句式：When you fail, you should never lose heart.运用了时间状语从句；If you follow these principles, you will certainly achieve remarkable success in the future.运用了条件状语从句。

五、Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

请简要描述图片内容,并结合生活或学习中的例子谈谈你对该图的理解。

范文：

As the picture shows, some small ants encountered a big pit on their way. Without panic, they quickly found a solution. They decided to let some small ants connect to build a bridge at a time. After the other ants passed the bridge, they would pull the remaining ants over. Their success demonstrates the importance of teamwork.

          In our daily life, some people like to work alone while others enjoy teamwork. In my opinion, everyone had better learn to work with others because teamwork is definitely necessary and important.For example, in a football match, every member plays different role which is important. All members must cooperate with each other to fight against the opponent team.They can only win when they do good teamwork,or they will be defeated.

        In sum, teamwork is very important. No one could live individually. Hence working together could make our life easier.

解析：

1.词汇积累

遇到：encounter→come across

在某人看来：in one’s opinion→in one’s view

重要的：important→vital

总之：in sum→in a word

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：   In sum, teamwork is very important.

拓展句：In sum, teamwork is very important, which can help us complete the task faster and better.