热点07 建议、观点篇-2022年高考英语作文热点押题预测冲刺
展开【预测题目】
(一)
近年来,有些专家建议高考取消英语或是把英语作为选考,甚至有人大代表提议高考取消英语。《21世纪学生英文报》就高考要不要取消英语进行征文,现请你写一篇100词左右的文章表述自己的观点。
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【答案】 As we all knw, English is an imprtant subject in schls f China. But recently, sme peple think that English shuld be ttally canceled in the Cllege Entrance Examinatin.
Persnally, I dn't agree with this pinin. There is n dubt that English is the mst ppular language in the wrld. With the Earth becming a village, peple all ver the wrld mix tgether and they need t cmmunicate with each ther in a universal language. Besides, if English exam is canceled, teachers will give little attentin t English teaching, and schl will arrange mre time fr students t learn ther subjects, leading t n students learning English.
S canceling English in exams just means learning English stps in ur schls, which wuld result in serius prblems. I insist that English shuld nt be canceled in exams.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于社会现象类议论文。要求考生就高考要不要取消英语表述自己的观点。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
最近:lately →recently
此外:what’s mre → besides
交流:talk with→ cmmunicate with
导致:lead t →result in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the Earth becming a village, peple all ver the wrld mix tgether and they need t cmmunicate with each ther in a universal language.
拓展句:As the Earth has becme a village, peple all ver the wrld mix tgether and they need t cmmunicate with each ther in a universal language.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]S canceling English in exams just means learning English stps in ur schls, which wuld result in serius prblems.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]But recently, sme peple think that English shuld be ttally canceled in the Cllege Entrance Examinatin.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(二)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter写邮件告知你他打算购买《朗读者》(The Reader)英文版,但不知道纸质版本和有声版本哪个更适合。请你给他提出建议,要点如下:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由(至少两条);
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:纸质版:paper cpy 有声读物audi bk
Dear Peter,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm Li Hua. Hearing that yu cannt make up yur mind abut what kind f bk t chse when yu buy the bk named The Reader, I'd like t ffer my suggestins t yu.
If I were yu, I wuld chse an audibk n accunt f its great advantages. Fr ne thing, yu can make the mst f yur time using an audibk when waiting arund r ging fr a walk. Fr anther, audibks are lw-priced and envirnmentally-friendly, making them becme the future f bks. Fr instance, in cmparisn with traditinal bk frms, audibk ppularized by the Internet are easier t carry, rich in cntent and real-time updated. Thus, e-bks can win mre ppularity frm yungsters and becme a first chice fr mst f the readers. Mre imprtantly, I'm cnvinced yu'll definitely benefit a lt frm the bk whatever yu'll chse.
Hpe my suggestins can be f great help t yu.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter写邮件告知你他打算购买《朗读者》(The Reader)英文版,但不知道纸质版本和有声版本哪个更适合。请你给他提出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
决定:decide→make up ne’s mind
建议:advice→suggestin
因为:because f→n accunt f
有帮助的:helpful→be f great help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Fr anther, audibks are lw-priced and envirnmentally-friendly, making them becme the future f bks.
拓展句:Fr anther, audibks are lw-priced and envirnmentally-friendly, which makes them becme the future f bks.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Hearing that yu cannt make up yur mind abut what kind f bk t chse when yu buy the bk named The Reader, I'd like t ffer my suggestins t yu. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If I were yu, I wuld chse an audibk n accunt f its great advantages. (运用了虚拟语气)
(三)
假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Peter最近产生了厌学情绪。请用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.希望他转变思想;
2.指出学习的重要性;
3.给出学习的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm srry t hear that yu have been tired f learning recently. I hpe yu will change yur thughts because it's very imprtant fr a teenager t study. Yu can imprve yur abilities and pen yur mind thrugh learning. Besides, yu can learn sme knwledge t make yurself strnger.
Hwever, t say is ne thing, but t d is anther. S there are sme suggestins I want t share with yu. Firstly, having a gd habit f reading bks is necessary fr a student. Secndly, yu shuld finish yur hmewrk befre ging t play utside. I really hpe they are beneficial t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考考生给外国朋友Peter写一封信,告诉他如何摆脱厌学情绪。
【详解】
1.词汇积累。
重要的: imprtant→ vital
建议:suggestin→ prpsal
完成:finish → cmplete
有益的:beneficial → cnstructive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, yu can learn sme knwledge t make yurself strnger.
拓展句:Besides, yu can learn sme knwledge s that yu can make yurself strnger.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I hpe yu will change yur thughts because it's very imprtant fr a teenager t study. (运用because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, having a gd habit f reading bks is necessary fr a student. (运用动名词作主语)
(四)
假定你是李华,正在新西兰读书。你的好友Fred将负责学校文化节期间中国传统文化的演出策划。他想听听你的建议,请给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示赞赏;
2. 关于演出内容的建议;
3. 约定时间进一步讨论。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Fred,
I’m glad t hear there'll be a perfrmance f Chinese traditinal culture during ur schl culture festival. Here is my advice.
Chinese shadw play shuld be included in the perfrmance because it is s magic. Besides, the shw f Hanfu is a gd chice because mre and mre peple have shwn interest in it. T ensure the perfrmance ges well, we'd better chse perfrmers in advance and have sme practice. If necessary, I'd like t have a detailed discussin with yu at yur cnvenience.
I'm lking frward t the perfrmance.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,正在新西兰读书。你的好友Fred将负责学校文化节期间中国传统文化的演出策划。他想听听你的建议,请给他回封邮件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议:suggestin→advice
选择:ptin→chice
选择:select→chse
此外:in additin→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:T ensure the perfrmance ges well, we'd better chse perfrmers in advance and have sme practice.
拓展句:We'd better chse perfrmers in advance and have sme practice, which can ensure the perfrmance ges well.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Besides, the shw f Hanfu is a gd chice because mre and mre peple have shwn interest in it. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] T ensure the perfrmance ges well, we'd better chse perfrmers in advance and have sme practice. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
(五)
假设你是李华,是一名高中生。最近,你的笔友艾米(Amy)给你寄来一封信,说她因发胖而感到非常苦恼。请你根据下列要点给她写一封建议信。内容包括:
①注意饮食合理,营养均衡;
②经常锻炼,保证睡眠充足;
③调整心态。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Amy,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Amy,
I’m srry t hear that yu are upset because yu have put n weight. The fllwing are sme tips n hw t keep fit.
First f all, t keep healthy, yu need t have a balanced diet. Dn’t eat the fds cntaining t much sugar and fat, which will make yu put n weight easily. Besides, it is imprtant t take regular exercise. Sprts like riding and walking are f great benefit t yur health, which can help keep yu in shape. Enugh sleep makes yur bdy relaxed. As a result, fr the benefit f yur health, it is necessary that yu shuld have enugh sleep and rest. Last but nt least, there is n need t wrry abut weight gain and weight lss. As far as I’m cncerned, nthing is mre imprtant than health.
I d hpe my tips will be helpful t yu.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Amy写一封建议信帮助她解决发胖带来的烦恼。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
关于:n→cncerning/regarding
首先:first f all→first and fremst
重要的:imprtant→vital/significant
因此:as a result→as a cncequence/cncequently
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, it is imprtant t take regular exercise. Sprts like riding and walking are f great benefit t yur health, which can help keep yu in shape.
拓展句:Besides, it is imprtant t take regular exercise, because sprts like riding and walking are f great benefit t yur health, which can help keep yu in shape.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Dn’t eat the fds cntaining t much sugar and fat, which will make yu put n weight easily.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】As a result, fr the benefit f yur health, it is necessary that yu shuld have enugh sleep and rest. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
(六)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班的交换生Jim对中国的诗歌、地理、历史、风俗习惯等感兴趣,准备下学期选修一门相关课程,向你征询建议。请给Jim写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐一门选修课;
2. 说明推荐的理由;
3. 提出学习这门课程的建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:选修的ptinal
Dear Jim,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am particularly glad t knw that yu are interested in Chinese petry, gegraphy, histry and custms and nw yu are eager t explre mre by attending an ptinal curse.
I think the Ancient Petry is yur best chice. By learning Chinese ancient pems, yu can have an extensive knwledge f histry and culture in ancient China. Als, yu can feel the charm f the language by reading pems, which helps t imprve yur Chinese. T fllw the curse well, yu’d better read and recite as many pems as pssible. Besides, it is a gd idea t search fr related backgrund knwledge s that yu will fully understand the cnceptin f petry.
I am sure yu will have a lt f fun frm the curse. If yu have any mre questins abut it, dn’t hesitate t let me knw.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生Jim写封信,给他推荐一门选修课,说明推荐的理由,提出学习这门课程的建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
选择:chice→ptin
另外:besides→mrever
完全地:fully→cmpletely
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:T fllw the curse well, yu’d better read and recite as many pems as pssible.
拓展句:Yu’d better read and recite as many pems as pssible, the purpse f which is t fllw the curse well.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I am particularly glad t knw that yu are interested in Chinese petry, gegraphy, histry and custms and nw yu are eager t explre mre by attending an ptinal curse.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Als, yu can feel the charm f the language by reading pems, which helps t imprve yur Chinese.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(七)
假如你是李华,你的朋友Mike一周前给你发电子邮件说他自进入高三以来一直觉得压力很大,请你根据以下要点给他回封邮件,帮助他振作起来。内容包括:
1. 安慰并分析他不开心的原因;
2. 给他一些建议;
3. 送上祝福。
注意:1.词数100 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:pressure 压力 relieve 缓解
Dear Mike,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Pressure is a serius tpic in tday’s wrld. After stepping int Senir Three, yu have t be faced with the cming Cllege Entrance Examinatin. Yu fix all yur attentin n studies, thus making yu feel stressed and find it difficult t get n well with yur classmates. Besides, yur parents hpe that yu can g t a famus university, which als adds t yur stress.
I have sme suggestins fr yu t relieve stress. First f all, try t build up yur cnfidence, and never give up r lse heart, n matter what happens. Secndly, yu shuld find ut yur wn learning methds and seek help frm bth teachers and classmates in the face f difficulties and stress. I think a cnversatin with yur parents is als necessary. Finally, I think yu shuld d mre physical exercise s as t keep fit.
Less pressure, better life! Best wishes t yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike回信,分析他感觉压力大的原因,并给他一些应对的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
面对:face→be faced with
把……注意在……上:→
著名的:well-knwn→famus
建议:advice→suggestin
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Secndly, yu shuld find ut yur wn learning methds and seek help frm bth teachers and classmates in the face f difficulties and stress.
拓展句:Secndly, yu shuld find ut yur wn learning methds and seek help frm bth teachers and classmates when yu are faced with difficulties and stress.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Besides, yur parents hpe that yu can g t a famus university, which als adds t yur stress.(运用which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]First f all, try t build up yur cnfidence, and never give up r lse heart, n matter what happens. (运用n matter what引导让步状语从句)
(八)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim初到中国读书,由于不适应语言和环境而感到焦虑,请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达安慰;
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m srry t learn that yu’re in lw md after cming t China fr study. It’s natural t feel inadaptable in a new envirnment. S dn’t wrry. I’m writing t give yu sme suggestins.
In this situatin, I suggest that yu shuld take part in varius after-class clubs fr cmmunicating with mre classmates. Therefre, yu can imprve yur language and make mre friends. Besides, it’s a gd ptin t make yurself immersed int lcal cultural activities, which can help yu understand the culture and learn mre abut the lcal custms deeply.
Hpe my suggestins will be f help fr yu. Whenever yu need my help, I'm available. Lking frward t yur early reply sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim初到中国读书,由于不适应语言和环境而感到焦虑,请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1. 表达安慰;2. 提出建议并给出理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
情绪低落:in lw md →in lw spirits
参加:take part in→ jin in
多样的:varius→ a variety f
选择:ptin→ chice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In this situatin, I suggest that yu shuld take part in varius after-class clubs fr cmmunicating with mre classmates. Therefre, yu can imprve yur language and make mre friends.
拓展句:In this situatin, I suggest that yu shuld take part in varius after-class clubs fr cmmunicating with mre classmates, which will help yu imprve yur language and make mre friends.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] It’s natural t feel inadaptable in a new (运用了It作形式主语)
[高分句型2] Besides, it’s a gd ptin t make yurself immersed int lcal cultural activities, which can help yu understand the culture and learn mre abut the lcal custms deeply.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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