应用文专题06 三年高考真题汇总 -2022年新高考英语新题型写作三合一解读+专项训练

三年（2019-2021）高考英语
作文真题汇总

2021年6月新高考卷 2
2021年1月八省联考 3
2020年7月山东卷、海南卷 4
2021年全国甲卷 5
2021年全国乙卷 8
2020年全国一卷 9
2020年全国二卷 9
2020年全国三卷 10
2019年全国卷I 12
2019年全国卷II 13
2019年全国卷III 14
2021年6月北京卷 15
2020年7月北京卷（1） 16
2020年7月北京卷（2） 18
2019年6月北京卷（1） 20
2019年6月北京卷（2） 20
2021年6月上海卷作文 21
2020年6月上海卷作文 22
2020年1月上海卷作文 24
2019年6月上海卷作文 25
2019年1月 上海卷作文 27
2021年6月浙江卷 28
2021年1月浙江卷 29
2020年7月浙江卷 32
2020年1月浙江卷 34
2019年6月浙江卷 35
2021年6月天津卷 35
2021年3月天津卷 36
2020年7月天津卷 38
2020年5月天津卷 42
2019年3月天津卷 44
2019年6月天津卷 45




2021年6月新高考卷
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年, 请你写一篇短文投稿, 内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me




【参考范文】

Youth and Me
Youth- a poplar campus newspaper-is celebrating its tenth anniversary, on which special day, as a devoted reader, I’d like to give it my sincere congratulations with great excitement.
Three years ago, when I came across Youth, I was impressed by its content and striking narration and recording events in and out campus, ranging from sports, science and new technology, self growth and study methods, among which, the philosophy column attracted me most. With its article’s influence, I have helped myself overcome loneliness and would like embrace all beauty of life.
Last, thanks Youth for giving me a new perspective of life and I really hope that Youth will step further and bring more brightness to the youth like me!


2021年1月八省联考
假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教George写封邮件求助，内容包括:
1. 说明比赛要求； 2. 请他推荐英文诗； 3. 请教朗诵技巧。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear George,
I'm writing to ask for your help.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mr. George,
I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school will hold an English Poetry Reading Contest next weekend. I am eager to have a try. It is required that the theme should be about nature. Each contestant is given up to five minutes to read the poem. So would you please be so kind to give me some recommendations on which poem to choose? Besides, what I need are the skills of recitation, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance.
I’d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

范文：
Dear George,
I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm preparing for the English Poem Recitation Competition of our school. The competition requires every participant to recite an English poem of our own choice within five minutes and the poem should be easy to understand. I wonder if you could recommend a few English poems to me. Besides, I wish you could teach me some techniques for reciting poems. I tried with some simple ones but found it hard to recite at an appropriate speed. The competition will be held in two weeks. I'd be grateful if you could help me.
I'm looking forward to your reply. 
Yours, 
Li Hua



2020年7月山东卷、海南卷

假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 参加人员；
2. 跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race

A Cross-Country Running Race
A 5, 000-metre cross-country running race took place in our school last Sunday. It was widely welcomed by all the classes from three grades. 100 students and teaching staff took part in the race. All the runners tried their best to win, with others cheering them on. The racing route started at the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill. The race turned out to be a great success. Not only does it build up our body but it also enriches our school life.
解析
（1）写作思路
本篇为提纲类的书面表达，以越野赛跑为话题进行描述。在写作时，应先介绍越野赛跑发生的时间和地点；接下来介绍参加人员，可以包括学生和教职工；然后，可以介绍参赛人员的精神面貌以及其他非参赛人员的加油助威；接下来，可以介绍越野赛跑的路线；最后，可以总结本次赛跑举办地很成功，大家的身心都得到了升华。由于是描述过去发生的事情，因此时态应当以一般过去时为主，人称应当以第一人称为主。
（2）重点词汇/句型
a. take place 举行；发生
b. take part in 参加
c. try one's best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
d. cheer on 为……加油；为……喝彩
e. turn out 结果是
f. build up 增强……的体质

2021年全国甲卷
假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：
1. 阐明写信事由；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
Chinese traditional culture includes calligraphy, Chinese knot, Beijing opera facial makeup, shadow play, martial arts, terracotta warriors and horses, jade carving, oracle bone inscriptions, four treasures of the study, flute, guzheng, pipa, dragon and phoenix patterns, painted pottery, traditional Chinese painting, etc. Chinese traditional culture is the fundamental creativity of the achievements of Chinese civilization, and is the overall combination of moral inheritance, various cultural thoughts and spiritual concepts in the national history. It is mainly composed of Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism. Traditional culture is not only profound in thought and profound in content.
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How is everything going with you lately? A class meeting will be held in my school about Chinese traditional cultural and it will be displayed on the English website. I am writing to ask some advice from you on what kind of Chinese conventional cultural attracts the foreigners like you most.
As we all know, Chinese traditional culture includes calligraphy, Chinese knots, martial arts, Chinese paintings, ancient painted pottery, paper cutting, terracotta warriors and horses and so on. Besides, Chinese cultural also includes various cultural thoughts and spiritual concepts in the national history, which is mainly composed of Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism. How much do you want to know about each part, and would you please tell me which part you are curious about. What type of introduction will help foreigners to have a much clearer knowledge of their interested section?
Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated and thank you for your help. You can also collect some tips from your friends there. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
关键词汇：
班会：a class meeting
书法calligraphy
中国结Chinese knot
京戏脸谱Beijing opera facial makeup
皮影 shadow play
武术martial arts
兵马俑terracotta warriors and horses
玉雕jade carving
甲骨文 oracle bone inscriptions
文房四宝four treasures of the study
笛子 flute
古筝guzheng
琵琶pipa
龙凤纹样 dragon and phoenix patterns,
彩陶painted pottery
国画 traditional Chinese painting
儒、佛、道 Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism


补充信息：
“中国传统文化有书法、中国结、京戏脸谱、皮影、武术、兵马俑、玉雕、甲骨文、文房四宝、笛子、古筝、琵琶、龙凤纹样、彩陶、国画等。中华传统文化，是中华文明成果根本创造力，是民族历史上道德传承、各种文化思想、精神观念形态的总体。主要由儒、佛、道三家文化为主流组成。传统文化不仅思想深邃圆融，内容广博。”

2021年全国乙卷
你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以 Be smart online learner 写一篇发言稿参赛,
内容包括：
1. 分析优势及不足；
2. 提出学习建议。

注意：
1. 词数100词左右；
2. 题目和首句以为你写好。
Be smart online learner
Nowadays, on line study has been widely adopted and spread in campus among teenagers, with its swiftness, efficiency, as well as low cost. However, with an increasing number of students becoming online learners, how to be a smart online learner to make full use of online study has aroused wide attention. Here I’d like to call on all of us to be smart online learner.
Compared with traditional schooling, learning online can happen anytime and anywhere. And we can review the lesson according our own schedule. However, online study can need more focus and self-discipline, and we don’t have classmates to discuss or have the teacher’s instruction in person like in physical class.
What I call on here is to set up a timetable and try to combine online study with offline study. In addition, try to write down the problems and consulted the teacher in time. Don’t forget to review the knowledge on books. And limit study time to 2 hours a time to protect eyes. Finally, let’s be smart online learner and make more progress in study. Thank you for your listening!



2020年全国一卷
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。

The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. 
When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.


2020年全国二卷
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1. 农场情况；
2. 采摘过程；
3. 个人感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
题目：My Weekend
参考范文：
My Weekend
Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.

解析
（1）写作思路
本文是一篇提纲式的书面表达，要求介绍自己和同学上周末参加的一次采摘活动。在介绍农场情况时，可以谈论该农场的位置、农场的采摘品种、是否属于生态农场等内容；在描述采摘过程时，可以描述采摘的物品、和同学之间的合作、农民的指导等内容，时态应当以一般过去时为主；在表达个人感受时，可以从人与自然的角度或者劳动能力的培养方面入手，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。在写作时，可以适当增加过渡词或句子，使文章更加的连贯流畅。
（2）重点词汇/句型
a. The ecological farm grows a wide variety of fruit and vegetables.（a wide variety of 各种各样的）
b. The guide showed us around the farm and explained to us how to pluck the fruit and vegetables.（show sb. around 带某人参观）
c. The fruit and vegetables were good for us because they were planted with organic fertilizers.（be good for 对……有好处）
d. The clean air and the fresh fruit made me feel so relaxed that I wanted to pay a second visit.（so…that… 如此……以至于……）


2020年全国三卷
假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。
邮件内容包括：
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 结束语已为你写好。
参考范文
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.
We'd like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight: on the raft down the river navigation, seeing a steamboat that wass going to sink, we saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don't want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I'd be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
解析
（1）写作思路：
1. 体裁：应用文
2. 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
3. 结构：总分总法
4. 第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
（2）必备词汇、短语：
1. in sincerity 真诚地；
2. according to 根据；
3. combine…with… 将……与……结合；
4. adapt 改编；
5. attach…to… 将……附在……上；
6. it is convenient for you 你时间方便的时候。
（3）必备句式：
1. 定语从句的使用：we see a steamboat that is going to sink；
2. 非谓语动词作状语的使用：Having written the English script, we don't want anything…；
3. 非谓语动词作定语的使用：…the draft script attached to this email；
4. 状语从句的使用：I'd be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice.


2019年全国卷I
假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习。得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事情。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。

[参考范文]
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Learning that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition, I'm writing to apply for the position.
I think I'm quite equal to the post. To begin with, being exposed to English since a young age enables me to communicate fluently with others. Besides, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. Additionally, I can make full use of my related knowledge to help the visitors learn more about the unique  Chinese art form.
I would be grateful if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua

2019年全国卷II
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1. 比赛信息；
2. 赛前准备；
3. 表达期待 。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Version 1
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th . We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.
You're an excellent player. With you on the team, we are hopeful to win the game. Let's try hard together!
Cheers,
Li Hua
Version 2
Dear Chris,
Are you excited about our coming volleyball game against Yucai Middle School next Friday? Here I'd like to inform you of some detailed information so that you can make full preparations for it.
First and foremost, the competition to be held in our school stadium will begin at 2 pm and last for roughly 3 hours. So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should present themselves punctually. Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you. To sum up, I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school. And I firmly believe hard work will pay off!
Looking forward to our victory!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
解析
本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。
本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。I'm witing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month。宾语从句；In order to win the match不定式作目的状语。文章语言流畅，上下文转换自然。



2019年全国卷III
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节，请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1. 时间；
2. 活动安排；
3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Allen,
You must have heard of the upcoming Music Festival to be held in our school. Since you take much interest in music, I am writing to invite you to participate in the festival with me.
As scheduled, it will be held on the playground from 5 p. m. to 8 p. m. next Sunday. Additionally, sitting on the grass and enjoying the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors, we will be fully absorbed in the attractive and fascinating performances. Furthermore, we also expect to see you on the stage then.
I'd be more than delighted if you could come and share this joyful moment with me. Looking forward to your early reply.
解析
It's a pleasure for me to invite you to attend…我很荣幸能邀请你参加……
I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could… 我认为……是个好主意/有利的。
Thank you for your attention. 感谢你对此事的关注。
If you…, you will… 如果你……，你将会…….。
I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply. 希望尽早得到答复。


2021年6月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意并说明原因；
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
How are you these days? We have planned to hang around together this weekend, and how much I am expecting that! To my pity, I was informed to attend the nursery house with the Student Union this morning. Since this weekend is the Double Ninth Day, a traditional day celebrated for the senior in China, our school has launched this activity to show our concern and responsibility for the old, which is a meaningful and instructive activity for us teenagers. I am really sorry and how about going out together next weekend, and as a compensation, I would like to teat you a big meal and invite you to visit local museum. If the time is not convenient for you, you can set anytime next week. Please accept my sincere apology for that.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua


2020年7月北京卷（1）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
                                
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I hope everything is OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practicing. Since you are away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us?
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
第一步：写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，根据提纲内容可知使用一般现在时。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：start doing sth（开始做某事），be away（离开），need a drama teacher（需要戏剧老师），be experienced in（在……有经验）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
高级句式：
1. 原因状语从句的使用，如Since you are away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.等；
2. 状语从句的省略，如Remember to wear a mask when necessary.等。
高级词汇：
1. recommend 推荐；
2. currently  当前。
2020年7月北京卷（2）
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以 "自律" 为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：自律self-discipline

参考范文
One possible version:
While studying at home, I surveyed my class on "self-discipline". The findings worried me a lot.
To solve the problem, I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice. Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves. After that, we all knew better what to do.
Three months later, I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline. I phoned my teacher about it, and we both felt very pleased.
解析
第一步：读图，审题，初步确定时态为一般过去时。
第二步：根据图片内容，确定表达需要的关键词或者词组，如study at home（在家学习），ask sb for help（向某人寻求帮助），offer practice advice（提供实际的建议），discipline ourselves（自律）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
高级句式：
1.状语从句的省略，如While studying at home, I surveyed my class on "self-discipline". 等；
2.非限制性定语从句的使用，如Three months later, I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-discipline.等。
高级词汇：
1.practical 实际的，切实可行的；
2.show great improvement 表现出巨大的进步。


2019年6月北京卷（1）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 交通出行；
2. 必备衣物。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
                                                                                                                           
Yours,
Li Hua

Dear Jim，
I'm pleased that you're coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I'll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.
Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
1. show you around  带你参观；2. take high-speed trains to both cities  坐高铁到这两个城市；3. take summer wear plus an umbrella with you 带上夏季服装和雨伞；4. Looking forward to your arrival 期待你的到来。

2019年6月北京卷（2）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以 "劳动最光荣" 为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：西瓜 watermelon


Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme "Working is most beautiful". And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.
When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.
On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.
解析
1. Working is most beautiful 劳动最光荣；2. stressed the importance of working with our own hands 强调了用自己双手工作的重要性；3. packed up my luggage 打包我的行李；4. I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun我意识到在烈日下在田野里工作是多么辛苦。


2021年6月上海卷作文
国外朋友Bill想学中文，有两种课程二选一，一个是听说，还有一个是读写。让你推荐一个，比较两个课程，写出推荐的原因。

【参考范文】
Dear Bill,
It’s so great to learn from your last letter that you want to learn Chinese language. You mentioned that you have two optional courses, one is listening and speaking in Chinese, the other is reading and writing in Chinese. But you have no idea about which one to choose.
From my perspective, I’d like to recommend listening and speaking course, the reasons are as follows. For one hand, only by speaking and listening can you keep practicing it and only by putting what you have learnt into use, can you master Chinese as quickly as possible. For another, good listening and speaking ability will be of great help for you to adapt yourself in class so that you can understand the teachers’ words and instructions. As for wiring and reading, I think after you master a Chinese character’s pronunciation, you can try to write a diary in Chinese to memorize its spelling.
In a word, be relaxed and if you have any problem in learning Chinese, I am willing to offer my help at any time. Hope you make more progress in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
2020年6月上海卷作文
明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫不决，写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括：
(1)提出解决问题的方法；
(2)阐释音乐会的重要性。
参考范文
Dear Wang Lei,
It's been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind.
Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I concerned, it's still worth our efforts.
This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers' autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert!
In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.
I am looking forward to hearing your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
要你写一篇文章，写作内容需要符合题干要求。根据所给提纲灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用。本文人称为第一人称和第三人称等，时态有一般过去时态和现在完成时态等。
高分词汇：
in one's mind在……的心目中；
a glimpse of瞥见；
ghastly可怕的；惨白的；
hinder from妨碍；阻止；
make up one's mind下决心，决定；
in terms of依据；按照；
in case of 万一；如果发生。
高分句型：
1.I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday … which引导的定语从句，will be done一般将来时态的被动语态的使用。
2.Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing… though引导的让步状语从句的使用。
3. … a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. what引导的宾语从句。
4.Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind.  It is…that 强调句的使用。
5. … a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. where引导的定语从句。
6. … chances are that we may have an album with performers' autographs on it.  that引导的表语从句。
7. … so that he can drive us to the scene.  so that引导的结果状语从句。
8.I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes. that引导的宾语从句。
2020年1月上海卷作文
如果你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你在某英语节目中看到一超市对于临近保质期的食物处理办法向公众征求意见，请给超市经理写一封信谈谈你的看法。
参考范文
To whom it may concern，
Having watched your recent report about a huge stock of food approaching expiry date. I'd like to offer some suggestions to help.
The Chinese New Year is round the corner. Meanwhile, there are housing and railway construction sites running round the clock where hundreds of migrant workers sacrifice their precious family reunion to meet the deadline. I suggest launching a New Year Purchasing Program for these builders of Shanghai. Allow them a special discount on the food in these supermarkets.
Shanghai couldn't have been such a commercial hub and financial center but for the sweat these migrant workers shed. Thus, they deserve some favorable treatment for their prime years devoted to the city. Meanwhile, milk, bread, coffee and snacks are consumed by many, but are considered expensive by those who save every penny for their faraway families. This program serves as a token of our locals' gratitude, respects their needs and maintains the dignity of them, for they can decide the amount and sort of food to buy by themselves. Last but not least, it serves the need of supermarket managers as well. By no means can they find a more meaningful and affordable way to address this problem.
I sincerely hope my advice can help both the supermarkets and the people in need. Thank you for taking it into account.
解析
写作思路：文章主要是对于合适的超市临近保质期的食物处理方法发表你自己的看法，说明方法和原因。文章的时态主要为一般现在时，其中可以恰当使用一些高分短语及句型。
高分短语及句型：
I'd like to offer some suggestions to help. 我想提供一些建议来帮助你。would like to do sth想要做某事；
there are housing and railway construction sites running round the clock where hundreds of migrant workers sacrifice their precious family reunion to meet the dealline. 住房和铁路建设工地夜以继日地运转，数百名农民工为了赶工牺牲掉了宝贵的家庭团聚。there be句型，表示某地有某物；hundreds of 数以百计；round the clock昼夜不停；
Last but not least, it serves the need of supermarket managers as well.最后但并非最不重要的是，它满足了超市经理的需要。Last but not least最后但并非最不重要的是；serves the need of … 满足……的需要。
其他高分短语及句型：
Nothing is more important than the fact that … 没有什么比这更重要的；
In view of the present station … 鉴于目前形势。


2019年6月上海卷作文
假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现了这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下：
1. 介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容；
2. 针对此事自己的态度以及理由。
参考范文
Dear Editor,
As an honest reader of your travel magazine, I'd express my opinion that the ticket prices of the ancient city for domestic tourists at 5 dollars while 15 dollars for overseas guests. I strongly advocate the equal fare and my reasons are as follows.
Firstly, it can attract more tourists and dominate the opening-up domestic traveling market. More and more overseas tourists are willing to visit the ancient city, which brings more consumption and jobs. In turn, the ancient city can be protected well. Another, more and more researchers will have more money deeply-exploring the history of the ancient city and display the old days with new technology. Therefore, we can appreciate the past beautiful scenery of the ancient city.
Based on what I state above, the fair price will benefit more tourists and tourism. Not only it attracts more tourists but also displays its beautiful scenery. What matters most is that it has a comprehensive influence on our present days and constructs new relationship between humans and the environment of ancient city.
I will highly appreciate it if you can reply to me as soon as possible!
Your faithfully,
Li Min
解析
在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现了这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，所写内容要包括题干要求。根据所给提纲灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用。时态主要为一般现在时态。
高分词汇：in turn 反过来；转而；deeply-exploring 深入探讨；a comprehensive influence on 对……的综合影响；reply to sb. 回复某人；as soon as possible 尽快；
高分句型：
1 I'd express my opinion that the ticket prices of… that 引导的同位语从句的使用。
2. …visit the ancient city, which brings more consumption and jobs. which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用。
3. …the ancient city can be protected well. be done被动语态的使用。
4. Based on what I state above… what引导的宾语从句的使用，从句充当on的宾语。
5. Not only it attracts more tourists but also displays its beautiful scenery. not only…but also…句型的使用。
6. What matters most is that it has a comprehensive influence on our present days… what引导的主语从句的使用；that引导的表语从句的使用。
7. I will highly appreciate it if you can reply to me as soon as possible! it形式宾语的使用，真正的宾语是后面if引导的宾语从句。



2019年1月 上海卷作文
假如你是明后中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由（信的格式已给）。
参考范文
Dear Li Nan,
Hearing that you have developed a new app of students sharing clothes, I feel truly proud of your novel idea. Personally speaking, I am willing to share my clothes on your app. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, it will be wonderful for me if I learn that someone that I barely know of can share my happiness of wearing my clothes. It feels like you are emotionally connecting someone in your clothes. Then I may naturally wish to know more about that particular "someone" and probably further deepen our relationship. In the end a good friendship between me and my clothes mate might be built based on our common clothes. What's more, if other students can try my clothes through the app. In turn, I also can try their new clothes. Therefore, students can wear different types of clothes without actually spending any money.
What's more important is that sharing my clothes will take full use of them. In today's material society, there are so many parents who prepare lots of clothes for their beloved children for different occasions, such as a dress for the party, gym suit for indoor sports. Moreover, the clothes can only realize their true value after they are put on a person's body.
To summarize, sharing my clothes on your app benefits others and me.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
develop a new app开发了一款软件
share clothes共享衣服
feel proud of感到自豪
emotionally connect someone情感上连接某人
realize their true value实现真正的价值
2021年6月浙江卷
  昨天你去学校参观了中国画的展览，请你为学校英语报写一篇宣传稿：
      1. 时间和地点；
      2. 你的感受；   
      3. 强烈推荐。
注意：
      1. 词数100左右；
      2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

【参考范文】
As is known to all, Chinese painting is a crucial part of our traditional cultural; therefore, with great honor and curiosity, I paid a visit to the Chinese painting display exhibited in our school lecture hall at 9 a.m. yesterday. During my one hour and a half’s visit, I was fully exposed to a world of art. The visit includes three parts, first of which is a brief introduction of the history of Chinese painting, traced back to 7000 years ago. In this part, many works painted on pottery, ground and rock wall in pictures are shown. The second part is tool display. The basic tools used are brush and ink and mineral pigments. At first, Chinese painting was painted on pottery, ground and rock wall, and gradually developed into painting on wall, silk and paper. In the third part of this exhibition, many paintings by famous arts are appreciated and discussed by students and teachers., Through this visit, I fall in love with Chinese painting and I would like to recommend my fellow students to have an amazing experience to this art show as well. And you won’t regret it.

2021年1月浙江卷
假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

题型解读

应用文写作主要考查学生英语语言的实际应用能力，该题型写作目的明确，测试学生在实际生活情景下运用英语传达信息，表达观点的能力，题目侧重英语语言的交际性和实用性。应用文写作文体以书信（邮件）类为主，这类应用文通常出现提纲式要点，话题常常与学生的校园实际生活相关。

此次浙江新高考英语写作部分第一题应用文写作考查的方向是发言稿。这是浙江省新高考以来第一次出现书信以外的应用文格式，对学生作文训练的全面性和灵活性是一个新挑战。

推荐词汇和句型

此次考试的发言稿主要考查的是欢迎致辞，一般分为三个部分，即表示欢迎、致辞主体、表达祝愿。其中“表示欢迎”和“表达祝愿”可以使用如下的一些常用句式进行展开，以使行文更加符合写作目的：

【表示欢迎】

1. First of all, please allow me to express a warm welcome to you on behalf of our school. 首先，请允许我代表我们学校对你们表示热烈的欢迎。
2. I’m honored to have this opportunity to welcome all of you to visit our school.我很荣幸有这个机会欢迎大家来我们学校参观。
3. We have been looking forward to seeing you for a long time. 我们一直期待着与你们相见。
4. I feel greatly privileged to have a chance to stand here, on behalf of all the students, to give a warm welcome to you. 我很荣幸有机会代表所有的学生站在这里，向你们表示热烈的欢迎。

【表达祝愿】

1. Wish you a pleasant journey. 祝您这次路途愉快。

2. I hope you can enjoy your stay in our school. 希望你在我们学校过得愉快。

优秀范文

Honorable guests, dear teachers and fellow students,First of all, please allow me to express a warm welcome to our distinguished guests on behalf of the school.As scheduled, during your stay at our school, we will first give you a tour of our school. Afterwards, you can visit the English corner to talk with our classmates and promote our friendship. Last but not least, our Chinese host families will provide the opportunity to experience a different culture and try some delicious, traditional Chinese food.
We wish you a pleasant time at our school.


优秀范文1
Hello to all of our precious guests from New Zealand. My name is Li Hua. On behalf of the school and the student body, I welcome you to our campus today.
For your visit, we have planned an itinerary of exciting events to introduce to you the culture that we as a school take pride in nurturing. Whether it be exploring the colourful history of our campus, or participating in some friendly competition, we hope you will have as wonderful a time learning about us as we certainly will about you.

优秀范文2
Welcome. 
I am the student representative of our school and please allow me the honour of welcoming you to our school.
To demonstrate our cordial greetings, we will begin the tour by participating in different icebreaker activities designed by our senior students. Then, we invite you to partake in a cultural dance performance that we are preparing for the upcoming spring festival celebration. Finally, a delicious meal of traditional Chinese food will be the perfect way to end the day.
I hope that you feel at home with our humble etiquette.

优秀范文3
Good morning, everyone:
My name is Li Hua. On behalf of all the students, I am thrilled to welcome you to our school!
For the next few days, we’ve arranged various fun activities, from sightseeing and visiting historic relics to shopping and tasting delicious treats on antique streets.
We hope that you not only will be enchanted by our beautiful city but also enjoy the learning experience and cultural exchanges.



2020年7月浙江卷
假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 询问近况；
2. 分享班级最新消息；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Peter,
Hearing that you have gone back to Ireland due to the illness, I' m really sorry about it. How's everything going now? I sincerely hope you will soon be restored to health. Now, I'd like to share some news about our class with you.
The first one that I can' t wait to tell you is that David, who participated in the English speech contest last month, won the first prize. Next is that we plan to have a three-day trip to Shanghai this summer holiday. How much we hope you could go with us! Last, we have made Hannah our new monitor next term.
In the end, again I wish you a speedy recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【写作思路】
1. 作文类型：写邮件询问近况，分享消息，表达祝福
2. 时态确定：一般过去时、现在完成时用于询问近况和分享消息；一般将来时用于表达祝福
3. 人称确定：第一人称、第二人称用于询问对方和表达自己的情况；第三人称用于陈述客观的事物
【高分亮点】
关键短语：
1. restore to 使……恢复
2. can't wait to do 迫不及待做某事
3. participate in 参加
高级句型：
1. 现在分词作原因状语：Hearing that you have gone back to Ireland due to the illness, I'm really sorry about it. 听说你因病回国，我感到很难过。
2. 定语从句、宾语从句：The first one that I can't wait to tell you is that David, who participated in the English speech contest last month, won the first prize. 第一个我迫不及待想要告诉你的消息是，大卫上个月参加了英语演讲比赛获得了第一名。
3. 表达祝福： ①I sincerely hope you will soon be restored to health. ②I wish you a speedy recovery. 祝你早日康复！

One possible version
Dear Linda
We're very sorry to hear that you're ill in hospital
We're all worried about you. Have you been getting much better now?
Please don't worry about your illness. What you have to do is to have a good rest and follow the doctor's advice. You needn' t worry about your lessons because the new lessons given these days are not so difficult. When you get back, we are all willing to help you make up the missing lessons at the weekend. Our head teacher along with our class is going to the hospital to see you next Monday
I hope you will recover soon. Best wishes for you!
Yours
Li Hua


2020年1月浙江卷
假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
1.比赛时间；
2.演讲话题；
3.报名方式。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear George,
    Knowing that you have a great passion for Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to participate in the Chinese Speaking Competition organized by our school.
    Scheduled to be held on January 20 in the school’s lecture hall, the competition focuses on the theme of “first impression of China”. Undoubtedly, your fluent Chinese, excellent speaking skills, and especially profound knowledge of China will never fail to impress the audience. So, if you’re interested, please sign up on the school’s website before January 15.
    Looking forward to your wonderful presentation.
Yours,
Li Hua


2019年6月浙江卷
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Alex,
Learning that you're leaving for the United States soon, I'm eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking,it's so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills.Under your professional guidance,I have made such unbelievable progress in English.It's indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. WheneverI encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.No words are strong enough to convey how grateful l am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,



2021年6月天津卷

在英国留学完毕时寄居在同学家里，学成归来后同学的母亲Nancy发来祝贺的邮件，并询问假期计划和大学要选的专业。
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【解题】
主题思想：英国留学回国也就是高中毕业，收到同学母亲Nancy 发来祝贺的邮件，询问假期计划和大学要选的专业。

【参考范文】
Congratulations on your graduation! I am your best friend’s mum, Nancy. I feel so glad that you both are on a new start to university soon. After years of study abroad in our country here in Britain, I think you must have had a good knowledge of English and good adaptation here. All of these are result of your constant efforts I! All your pains pay off!
I just wonder what major you will choose in your university. If you could tell me your choice and your reason behind it, I would really appreciate since I want to take it as a reference to help my kid to choose a proper major. As China is developing very fast, I am planning to send my kid to China to further education maybe. Another request is that I would like to know your vacation plan. For instance, what will you do, where will you go and who will you go with?
Finally, you are welcomed at anytime to my house and be my guest. Congratulations again!

2021年3月天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
（1）该地方的基本情况（如名称、地理位置等）；
（2）该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）；
（3）你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
参考范文
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan lrrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What's more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujangyan lrrigation Project. It dates from over 2, 000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan lrigation Project.
解析
(1)写作思路
考查应用文写作。本次书面表达要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。写作时要包含题中已给内容，可适当发挥增加其他内容。注意在进行文章内容描写时一定要贴合实际，不能胡编乱造。根据题干可知，写作时主要采用一般现在时和第三人称，要求语言表达准确，描述内容贴合实际，不要出现语法和拼写错误。
(2)重点词汇/句型
a. places of interest名胜古迹；
b. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.what引导的主语从句 ；
c. What's more此外；
d. have a chance to do sth.有机会做某事；
e. There be句型；
f. It dates from追溯到；
g. play an important part in在……中扮演重要角色；
h. as well as以及；
(3)其他高级句型
a. It is adj. + for/of sb. to do sth. 某人做某事怎么样。


2020年7月天津卷
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：
①成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等）；
②对活动的感受；
③对自己未来的展望。
注意：
①词数不少于100；
②可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
③开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony
新冠肺炎COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I'm so glad to hear from you.                                                              


‘’成人礼“特定表达：
 1、成人礼：coming-of-age ceremony
2、Our ceremony fell on May 16.      fall on 在某一天举行
3、 In China the age of 18 means we have grown up.    不能用18 years old 做主语
4、During the ceremony, dressed in Hanfu, a traditional dress (costume)of Han Chinese people, we performed/observed a series of rituals.  注意“穿着汉服”“行礼”的表达。
5、We got down on our knees/knelt down on the ground to our parents to express our thanks to them for raising us and bringing us up. 注意“下跪 ”的表达。
6、We owe so many thanks to our parents.  owe sth. to sb. “欠，欠恩、欠情” 
7、The ceremony is intended to make us understand the meaning ofmaturity and responsibility.   be intended to do 旨在

素材
成人礼coming-of-age ceremony是在少男少女年龄满18岁时举行的象征迈向成人阶段的仪式，它标志着告别孩童时代(childhood)，进入成年期(adulthood)。在成人礼上，通常都要进行成年宣誓(take an oath to adulthood)。在中国一些地方，成人礼上还流行穿汉服(traditional Han costumes)，祭拜孔子(consecrate Confucius)等习俗。
coming-of-age ceremony就是成人礼，是在少男少女年纪满18岁时举办的象征迈向成人阶段的典礼。男孩要进行capping ceremony(冠礼)，女孩要进行hair-pinning ceremony(加笄礼)。举办成人礼示意一个人已经come of age(成年)，在阅历了puberty(青春期)之后，实现了从adolescent(青少年)向youth(青年)的改变。

解析
第一步：写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，根据提纲提示可知使用一般过去时和一般将来时。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：the little bits of growth（成长的点滴），fight against COVID-19（抗疫新冠病毒），the spirit of fearlessness（无畏的精神）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
高级句式：
1. 过去分词短语用作状语的使用，如Inspired by the spirit of fearlessness, we'll take on the responsibility and continue to move forward. 等
2. 定语从句的使用，如We showed our thanks to our parents who have brought us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. 等
3. 强调句型的使用，如It was then that I realized the importance of the responsibility. 等
高级词汇：
1. look back 回顾
2. sacrifice oneself 自我牺牲
3. determined and confident 坚定和自
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.
Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.；
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.
第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.
第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

2020年5月天津卷

假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议，探讨如何利用网络学习英语，请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿：
（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点）；
（2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法；
（3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, dear friends. My name is LiJin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.                                                                        
Thank you.
参考范文
Good morning, dear friends.My name is Li Jin.I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.
First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film.Besides, the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.
Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. ButI have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information.In the end, I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.
解析
本文是要你根据如何利用网络学习英语，写一篇文章，内容要包括题干要点，根据所给提纲、要点为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。
1. 本文人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时态。
2. 写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。
3. 根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
高分词汇：
be accessible to 容易接近的，容易进入的
the development of ……的发展
share with 和……分享
as far as I am concerned 就我个人而言
高分句型：
1. With the development of Internet and education mode, online teaching has become increasingly common.with复合结构的使用和has done现在完成时态的使用。
2. It is widely acknowledged that online teaching has its apparent merits.it是形式主义，真正的主语是that引导的从句。
3. Shared resources online are accessible to all people, which costs a little at the same time.非谓语动词shared的使用和which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用。

2019年3月天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的 "读书月" 活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以 "Let's Read" 为题的征文活动。要求同学根据个人的阅读体会，从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：
（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；
（2）推荐的理由。
参考词汇：
科幻小说 science fiction   侦探小说 detective novel   魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography   科普读物 popular science
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围；
（3）内容充实，行文连贯；
（4）题目已给出，不计入总词数。
Let's Read
March 22, 2019
By Li Jin

Let’s Read
Knowing that during “Reading Month” in our school English Society will hold an activity named “Let’s Read” on Wechat, I’d like to share something about my own experience and feeling with all the students.
I have been crazy about reading since I was a child. My favorite type of book is always science fictions. Science fiction is based on the latest technology and discovery and telling us a fantasy story that will possibly happen in the future. In the past decades, science fiction has been more and more popular with teenagers. Therefore, it has come into a new style and even a culture. While reading science fictions, I not only feel shocked and amazed about the unknown future made up by the author but also know more knowledge and information about the development of science.
I’m sure every teenager will like science fiction and benefit from it! Looking forward to getting you to take part in “Let’s Read”!

2019年6月天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件：
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School.                                
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin

Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High school. Hearing that you will be sent to our school to participate in a one-week communication activity on behalf of our partner-school, I feel excited to give some advice on the speech about western art, which will be given by you. Here are some of my suggestions.
From my perspective, among all the themes on western culture like music, drawing and dancing, I would like to have a better understanding of music, for a great number of my classmates are fond of music. To enhance our knowledge, I would appreciate it if you add some information about the history and development of western music. In addition, some excellent works of music and the introduction of several distinguished musicians would be a good way to broaden our horizon.
Anyway, I can't wait to meet you from the bottom of my heart!
Thank you for your time!
Yours,
Li Jin

本篇写作为应用文体，书信类的建议信。
第一步：审题。
（1）判断时态与写作主语：时态为一般现在时为主，人称第一人称。
（2）根据细节判断文章段落：三段式：开头寒喧说明理由（需要补充），中间发展说明具体事项，结束表达感谢或祝福（已给出）。
第二步：细节补充：
第一段：说明写信目的：根据题目提示，说明写信背景（友好校活动以及老师讲座），点名主题（关于讲座给出建议）。
第二段：针对写作细节详细介绍：从三个话题中做出选择，并说明选择的理由。补充想要了解的内容（建议1-2点）。
第三段：表达见面的期望并感谢阅信。（由于最后一段文章已给提示为感谢，可考虑将期望放到第二段结尾）。
最后，整洁的卷面是写作获得良好印象分的关键，记得用心誊抄哦。