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高考英语概要写作专题训练（1）TOC \o "1-3" \h \u HYPERLINK \l "_Toc4056" 概要写作1：Guide their kids to use cell phones PAGEREF _Toc4056 \h 1 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc2361" 概要写作2：Ed-tech PAGEREF _Toc2361 \h 3 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc14067" 概要写作3：Distracted walking PAGEREF _Toc14067 \h 5 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc21215" 概要写作4：Car accidents PAGEREF _Toc21215 \h 7 HYPERLINK \l "_Toc30655" 概要写作5：Paper bags PAGEREF _Toc30655 \h 10概要写作1：Guide their kids to use cell phonesThere are some important regulations parents can take to make sure their kids use cell phones in a safe and responsible way. When kids know what the consequences are when rules aren’t followed, that makes life more predictable for them.Most kids are not paying for their cell phones or their cell phone plans, so if you pay for it, you own it, which means you have the right to take it away anytime if they disobey the rules you set up earlier.After a kid has a cell phone, suddenly parents discover data runs out half way through the month. This can get expensive and your kids need to know how to monitor their use. Also, teen cell phone addiction should be limited. Generally, it’s a good idea to have no cell phone policy while they are doing homework and at bedtime. Come to agreement in advance about what they are and aren’t allowed to download on their cell phone. There are some really bad apps for kids that you don’t want on their phones.Make sure your kids understand how to set up their privacy. Talk with them about why guarding their privacy is so important. Many teens truly have no concept about everything that a cell phone can share about them including personal information and their location.You want to cover what is and isn’t appropriate to share via a cell phone. This definitely means photos and language used in emails and on social media. But don’t forget simpler things like providing their address, their age or what school they go to online.Lastly, there are times and places when using one’s cell phone is not appropriate. In movie theaters or during class time at school the phone should be on silent and put away. Additionally, when someone is having a face to face conversation with them, they need to be looking at the person, not their phone.【答案】Parents can make rules to guide their kids to use cell phones safely and responsibly. (要点1) First, parents have the right to determine how to use cellphones because they own them. (要点2) Besides, parents should teach kids to use cell phones wisely. (要点3) Lastly, it is important to make sure they know how to protect their privacy. Meanwhile, when and where to use cell phones should also be told. (要点4)【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了父母可以采取一些重要的规定确保孩子安全、负责地使用手机。【详解】1 要点摘录①There are some important regulations parents can take to make sure their kids use cell phones in a safe and responsible way.② so if you pay for it, you own it, which means you have the right to take it away anytime if they disobey the rules you set up earlier.③ This can get expensive and your kids need to know how to monitor their use. Generally, it’s a good idea to have no cell phone policy while they are doing homework and at bedtime. Come to agreement in advance about what they are and aren’t allowed to download on their cell phone. ④ Make sure your kids understand how to set up their privacy.⑤You want to cover what is and isn’t appropriate to share via a cell phone.⑥ Lastly, there are times and places when using one’s cell phone is not appropriate. 2.缜密构思将第3点进行整理概括，将第4、5两个要点进行重组3.遣词造句①Parents can make rules to guide their kids to use cell phones safely and responsibly.②Parents have the right to determine how to use cellphones because they own them.③Parents should teach kids to use cell phones wisely.④It is important to make sure they know how to protect their privacy.⑤When and where to use cell phones should also be told.【点睛】[高分句型1] It is important to make sure they know how to protect their privacy.（使用了it作形式主语，概括第四段的内容，表达非常高级。）[高分句型2] When and where to use cell phones should also be told.（疑问词+不定式做主语，概括了最后一段的内容，用法比较高级）概要写作2：Ed-techThe UN's Millennium Development Goals included the ambition that by 2015 all the world's children would complete primary school. This has largely been achieved: nine out of ten children are now enrolled. Alas, the figure is not as impressive as it sounds. Even though most of the world's children go to school, an awful lot of them learn pretty much nothing there. According to a recent World Bank study of seven sub-Saharan African countries, half of nine-year-olds cannot read a simple word and three-quarters cannot read a simple sentence. The reason is terrible teaching: only 7% of teachers studied had the minimum knowledge needed to teach reading and writing effectively.Paying teachers more, in the hope of recruiting better ones, is not the answer. In poor countries, teachers are well paid by local standards—annual salaries are four times GDP per person in India. Nor does raising or reducing pay seem to make much difference: neither a sharp cut in Pakistan in the late 1990s nor a sharp increase in Indonesia after 2005 had any impact on learning outcomes.Several recent studies suggest ed-tech can help. It seems to bring about big improvements in poor countries. In a study of a range of interventions in poor countries—including smaller class sizes, incentives for teachers and pupils—tech had the biggest effect.Some of the scarce resources being spent on teachers could therefore be better spent on ed-tech. That does not mean dumping computers on schools in the hope that children will understand how to use them, a misconception on which plenty of money has been wasted. Instead, it means providing schools with software that children can use with minimal help from adults, that gets things right more often than the teachers do, that adjusts itself to the children’s ability, that sends teachers hints about what they are supposed to be teaching.Technology is no cure all. Good traditional teacher are not out of date, and are never likely to be. And authorities need to hold teachers to account. But ed-tech can help greatly—by assisting the best teachers and, most importantly, making up for the failings of the worst.【答案】For the ambition that by 2015 all the world's children would complete primary school, it has largely been accomplished. But several recent studies have shown that ed-tech can help the best teachers and make up for the failings of the worst. Because the technology is not everything, the authorities should make teachers bear the responsibility.【分析】这是一篇说明文。文章讲述了，在2015年前，联合国让全世界所有儿童都能完成小学学业的雄心壮志的千年发展在很大程度上已经实现了。但最近几项研究表明，ed-tech（教学技术）可以起到帮助作用，帮助最好的老师和弥补最坏情况下的失败。但技术不是万能的，当局需要让教师负起责任。【详解】1 要点摘录①The UN's Millennium Development Goals included the ambition that by 2015 all the world's children would complete primary school. This has largely been achieved: nine out of ten children are now enrolled. ②Several recent studies suggest ed-tech can help.③Technology is no cure all. Good traditional teacher are not out of date, and are never likely to be. And authorities need to hold teachers to account. ④But ed-tech can help greatly—by assisting the best teachers and, most importantly, making up for the failings of the worst.2.缜密构思将4个要点进行重组整合。3.遣词造句For the ambition that by 2015 all the world's children would complete primary school, it has largely been accomplished. But several recent studies have shown that ed-tech can help the best teachers and make up for the failings of the worst. But technology is not everything, the authorities should make teachers bear the responsibility.【点睛】[高分句型1] But several recent studies have shown that ed-tech can help the best teachers and make up for the failings of the worst.运用了that引导的宾语从句，对原文倒数第三段和最后一段进行了概括。[高分句型2]Because the technology is not everything, the authorities should make teachers bear the responsibility.运用了Because引导的原因状语从句，对原文最后一段进行了概括。概要写作3：Distracted walkingParents usually teach their children how to cross the street safely—by looking both ways for cars. But do they also teach them to put away their cellphones? According to statistics from years of studies, they almost never say so. In view of this, the city of Honolulu, Hawaii wants everyone to learn that lesson. Texting while crossing the street will soon be banned in the city. Beginning on October 24，you can be fined from$15 to$99 if you step into a Honolulu street while looking at your phone. Honolulu is the first major U.S. city to ban what is called “distracted walking”. It recently passed a law, which says no pedestrian shall cross a street or highway while viewing a mobile electronic device. The law includes all electronic devices with screens, from cellphones, tablets, gaming devices, digital cameras to laptop computers. However, the law does permit an exception: pedestrians may use such devices in the street to call emergency services and rescue workers, such as firefighters and police officers. Pedestrian deaths have been increasing as the use of cellphones rises in the past few years. The Governors Highway Safety Association, or GHSA, says pedestrian deaths in the United States increased 25 percent between 2010 and 2015. That trend continued in 2016 with the number of pedestrian deaths rising to almost 6, 000, 11％ higher than in 2015. Other U.S. cities may follow Honolulu. The state of Washington was the first to outlaw distracted driving back in 2007. Now, 46 other states as well as Washington D. C. ，Puerto Rico, Guam and the U.S. Virgin Islands, have laws against texting while driving.【答案】One possible version:Despite general guidance on road safety, seldom do parents ask their children to set aside their phones when they need to cross a street. Honolulu has issued a ban on distracted walking. Whoever violates it shall face fines of $15 to $99. However, the law does allow emergency calls. With cellphones causing increasing pedestrian deaths, more US cities may follow suit to improve road safety.【分析】这是一篇新闻报道。文章讲述了，檀香山已经颁布了禁止分心行走的禁令，违反者将面临15至99美元的罚款；但是，法律允许紧急呼叫。随着手机导致越来越多的行人死亡，更多的美国城市可能会效仿，以改善道路安全。【详解】1 要点摘录①Parents usually teach their children how to cross the street safely—by looking both ways for cars. But do they also teach them to put away their cellphones? ②Texting while crossing the street will soon be banned in the city. Beginning on October 24,you can be fined from $15 to $99 if you step into a Honolulu street while looking at your phone. ③However, the law does permit an exception: pedestrians may use such devices in the street to call emergency services and rescue workers, such as firefighters and police officers. ④Pedestrian deaths have been increasing as the use of cellphones rises in the past few years. ⑤Other U.S. cities may follow Honolulu.2.缜密构思将5个要点进行重组整合。3.遣词造句①Despite general guidance on road safety, seldom do parents ask their children to set aside their phones when they need to cross a street. ②Honolulu has issued a ban on distracted walking. ③Whoever violates it shall face fines of $15 to $99. ④However, the law does allow emergency calls. ⑤With cellphones causing increasing pedestrian deaths, more US cities may follow suit to improve road safety.【点睛】[高分句型1] Despite general guidance on road safety, seldom do parents ask their children to set aside their phones when they need to cross a street. 用了seldom放句首，主谓部分倒装结构，后面用了when引导的时间状语从句，对第一段前半部分你进行概括。[高分句型2] Whoever violates it shall face fines of $15 to $99. 用了Whoever引导的主语从句对第二段进行了概括，表达非常高级。[高分句型3] With cellphones causing increasing pedestrian deaths, more US cities may follow suit to improve road safety. 用了with复合结构概括了最后两段内容。概要写作4：Car accidentsFrom the health point of view, we are living in a wonderful age, immunized from birth against many of the most dangerous diseases and freed from the once deadly illnesses thanks to modern drugs and surgery. But though the possibility of living a long and happy life is greater, every day we witness the unbelievable killings of men, women and children on the roads. It is a never-ending battle which man is losing against the car. Thousands of people the world over are killed each year and we are quietly sitting back and letting it happen. It has been rightly said that when a man is sitting behind a steering wheel, his car becomes the extension of his personality. There is no doubt that the car often brings out a man’s very worst qualities. People who are normally quiet and pleasant may become unrecognizable when they are behind a wheel. All their hidden frustrations and disappointments seem to be brought to the surface by the act of driving.The surprising thing is that society smiles gently on the driver and seems to forgive his behavior. Everything is done for his convenience. Cities are allowed to become almost uninhabitable（不宜居住的）because of heavy traffic; towns are made ugly by huge car parks; the countryside is ruined by road networks; and the mass annual deaths becomes nothing but a number, to be conveniently forgotten.It is high time rules were created to reduce this senseless waste of human life. Here are a few examples of some of the things that might be done. The driving test should be standardized and made far more difficult than it is; all vehicles should be put through strict tests for safety; present drinking and driving laws should be made much stricter; maximum and minimum speed limits should be required on all roads. These measures may sound strict. But surely nothing should be considered as too severe if it results in reducing the annual loss of human life. After all, the world is for human beings, not cars.【答案】One possible version:Despite the fact that we are now living a healthy life, we should in no case ignore car accidents which kill a shockingly large number of people annually. The reasons for the tragedies are drivers' disrespect for human life and society’s tolerance for their selfish behavior. To try to avoid such a meaningless waste of human life, severe measures concerning drivers, vehicles and traffic laws and rules should be taken immediately.【分析】本文是一篇议论文。由机动车带来的事故给社会带来了巨大的伤亡和伤害，文章认为导致这一悲剧的原因是车辆驾驶员对生命的不尊重以及社会对司机的容忍。最后给出了一系列严格的建议措施。【详解】1.要点摘录①.From the health point of view, we are living in a wonderful age。②.Thousands of people the world over are killed each year and we are quietly sitting back and letting it happen.③.It has been rightly said that when a man is sitting behind a steering wheel, his car becomes the extension of his personality.④.The surprising thing is that society smiles gently on the driver and seems to forgive his behavior.⑤.It is high time rules were created to reduce this senseless waste of human life.⑥.The driving test should be standardized and made far more difficult than it is;⑦.All vehicles should be put through strict tests for safety;⑧.Present drinking and driving laws should be made much stricter;⑨.Maximum and minimum speed limits should be required on all roads.2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组；将第3、4两个要点进行整合重组；将第5、6、7、8、9五个要点进行整合重组。3.遣词造句① Despite the fact that we are now living a healthy life, we should in no case ignore car accidents which kill a shockingly large number of people annually.② The reasons for the tragedies are drivers' disrespect for human life and society’s tolerance for their selfish behavior.③ To try to avoid such a meaningless waste of human life, severe measures concerning drivers, vehicles and traffic laws and rules should be taken immediately.【点睛】[高分句型1]： Despite the fact that we are now living a healthy life, we should in no case ignore car accidents which kill a shockingly large number of people annually. 运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第一段进行了概括。that引导的同位语从句概括了第一句的内容，which引导的定语从句概括了第二、三句的内容。主句“we should in no case ignore car accidents”则对最后一句的观点进行合理转化。[高分句型2]：To try to avoid such a meaningless waste of human life, severe measures concerning drivers, vehicles and traffic laws and rules should be taken immediately.一个复杂的简单句概括了原文最后一段的所有内容。首先，用不定式作目的状语概括了第一句的内容；其次，用现在分词结构“concerning drivers, vehicles and traffic laws and rules”作后置定语修饰“severe measures”概括了本段剩余的全部内容。概要写作5：Paper bags Which is more environmentally friendly, paper or plastic? There was a time when a trip to the supermarket in the United States often ended with a simple question from the cashier:"Paper or plastic?"The customers knew it means "Which type of bag would you choose?"While all types of bags have some influence on the environment, it has long been supposed that paper bags are kinder. They are made from a renewable source, break down easily, burn without giving off thick smoke and can be recycled. However, the producing process behind paper bags uses more energy than that of plastic ones. Studies show that paper bag production requires four times as much energy as plastic bag production. And the amount of water used to make them is twenty times higher. Besides, the influence on forests is very serious. It takes about fourteen million trees to produce ten billion paper bags, which happens to be the number of bags used in the United States yearly. In terms of recycling, the idea that paper bags are more environmentally friendly than plastic ones can be quickly discarded. Research shows it requires about98%less energy to recycle plastic than it does paper.Even though paper bags might be more harmful than plastic ones, plastic still seems to be considered by governments as the more harmful of the two. In Ireland, for example, a tax has been introduced to discourage the use of plastic bags. People have to pay 22 cents for every plastic bag, and as a result, their use has dropped quickly. There’s no doubt that it makes more sense to reuse these bags. However, we don’t seem to be doing that at present. That may be because they fall apart quickly. If so, cloth bags are a better choice, but still, their production also has a bad influence on the environment. So what to do? How should we answer the question of "Paper or plastic?"It seems that we first need to ask ourselves one more general question: "What can I do to help the environment?"【答案】Paper bags have long been thought to be more environmentally friendly than plastic ones because of the renewable advantage. But researches argue/indicate that paper bags may consume more energy. Since more water is used to produce paper bags and huge numbers of trees are cut down to make paper bags, we are reminded to think of more ways to protect the environment.【分析】本文是一篇说明文。本文将纸袋和塑料袋进行了一系列的对比，发现纸袋并不环保。众所周知，塑料袋对环境的危害很大，而可循环利用的布袋子则是一个更好的方法，但布袋的生产制作也不免对环境造成影响，最后作者提出一个问题：我们该如何保护环境？【详解】1 要点摘录①While all types of bags have some influence on the environment, it has long been supposed that paper bags are kinder.②They are made from a renewable source, break down easily, burn without giving off thick smoke and can be recycled. ③Studies show that paper bag production requires four times as much energy as plastic bag production.④The amount of water used to make them is twenty times higher.⑤It takes about fourteen million trees to produce ten billion paper bags.⑥It seems that we first need to ask ourselves one more general question:"What can I do to help the environment?"2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第4、5两个要点进行整合。3.遣词造句Paper bags have long been thought to be more environmentally friendly than plastic ones because of the renewable advantage. Researches argue/indicate that paper bags may consume more energy.More water is used to produce paper bags and huge numbers of trees are cut down to make paper bags.We are reminded to think of more ways to protect the environment.【点睛】[高分句型1] Paper bags have long been thought to be more environmentally friendly than plastic ones because of the renewable advantage.运用比较级形式对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括。其中现在完成时的被动语态表达高级。[高分句型2]：But researches argue/indicate that paper bags may consume more energy. 用that引导宾语从句对第四段进行了概括，表达高级。