专题14 应用文分类写作-演讲稿-2021高考英语写作复习大全
展开假定你是李华,你所在的班明天英语课前有一个简短的演讲。请你写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 演讲的主题;
2. 健康生活习惯的重要性;
3. 2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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1. 我很高兴站在这里和大家分享我对健康生活习惯的看法。
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2. 在我看来,健康的生活习惯可以让我们保持健康,保护我们不生病,帮助我们充满活力地开始新的一天。
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3. 所以我们可以吃新鲜的水果,肉和蔬菜,避免吃太多的零食。
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4. 定期进行适当的锻炼对身体健康也是必要的。
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5. 当你从公共场所回到家时,请洗手,尤其是在接触自己的眼睛、鼻子或嘴之前。
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6. 当你打喷嚏和咳嗽时,用纸或手帕捂住鼻子或嘴是一种良好的行为方式,也是对公众健康的一种保护。
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参考答案:
1. 我很高兴站在这里和大家分享我对健康生活习惯的看法。
I’m glad t stand here t share with yu my ideas abut healthy living habits.
2. 在我看来,健康的生活习惯可以让我们保持健康,保护我们不生病,帮助我们充满活力地开始新的一天。
In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, prtect us frm getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.
3. 所以我们可以吃新鲜的水果,肉和蔬菜,避免吃太多的零食。
S we may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avid eating t many snack fds.
4. 定期进行适当的锻炼对身体健康也是必要的。
Then taking apprpriate exercise regularly is als necessary fr gd health.
5. 当你从公共场所回到家时,请洗手,尤其是在接触自己的眼睛、鼻子或嘴之前。
When yu arrive hme frm public place, please wash the hands, especially befre tuching yur wn eyes, nse r muth.
6. 当你打喷嚏和咳嗽时,用纸或手帕捂住鼻子或嘴是一种良好的行为方式,也是对公众健康的一种保护。
And when yu sneeze and cugh, it’s a gd manner as well as a prtectin fr public health that yu use paper r handkerchief t cver the nse r muth.
【答案】Hell, everyne!
I’m glad t stand here t share with yu my ideas abut healthy living habits. In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, prtect us frm getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.
S we may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avid eating t many snack fds. Then taking apprpriate exercise regularly is als necessary fr gd health. When yu arrive hme frm public place, please wash the hands, especially befre tuching yur wn eyes, nse r muth. And when yu sneeze and cugh, it’s a gd manner as well as a prtectin fr public health that yu use paper r handkerchief t cver the nse r muth.
Wish yu all the best. Thank yu!
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 演讲的主题;
2. 健康生活习惯的重要性;
3. 2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
share with; healthy living habits; keep sb fit; prtect…frm; energy; fresh fruits; avid ding; take exercise; regularly; wash the hands; sneeze; cugh; gd manner; handkerchief; cver.
第三步:连词成句
I’m glad t stand here t share with yu my ideas abut healthy living habits.
In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, prtect us frm getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.
We may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avid eating t many snack fds.
Taking apprpriate exercise regularly is als necessary fr gd health.
When yu arrive hme frm public place, please wash the hands, especially befre tuching yur wn eyes, nse r muth.
When yu sneeze and cugh, it’s a gd manner as well as a prtectin fr public health that yu use paper r handkerchief t cver the nse r muth.
Wish yu all the best. Thank yu!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly/Secnd… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is mre, Besides, Mrever, Furthermre, In additin As well as, nt nly…but (als), including,
3.表转折对比关系:Hwever, On the cntrary, but, Althugh+clause(从句), In spite f+n/ding,On the ne hand…,On the ther hand… Sme…,while thers…,as fr, s…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, S, Thus, Therefre, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者使用了复合句,比如And when yu sneeze and cugh, it’s a gd manner as well as a prtectin fr public health that yu use paper r handkerchief t cver the nse r muth.这句话运用了it作形式主语, that引导真正的主语从句。此外Then taking apprpriate exercise regularly is als necessary fr gd health.使用了动名词做主语。范文里还使用了一些较好的词和词组,如keep sb fit, regularly; prtect…frm等。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
应用文写作|演讲稿-毕业感谢老师
假定你是李华,于毕业季,代表全体高三学生,感念师恩重似丘山,欲将离别意,写成感谢书。内容包括:
1.表示感谢;2.回顾老师们对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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请翻译:
1. 我叫李华。今天我很荣幸代表我们毕业生发表演讲。
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2. 首先,我要对三年来老师们的帮助和指导表示衷心的感谢。
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3. 没有你们的指导和鼓励,我们不可能取得如此大的进步。
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4. 现在我们不仅掌握了所有的科目,而且学会了如何相处,如何做一个负责任的人。
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5. 多好的时间啊!为了报答您,我们应该更加努力,在未来更好地为人民和社会服务。
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6. 接下来,我要向你致以我们永恒的感激之情。我希望每个老师都能有一个阳光灿烂的笑容,一个健康的身体。
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参考答案
1. 我叫李华。今天我很荣幸代表我们毕业生发表演讲。
I’m Li Hua.Tday I am hnred t represent us graduates t deliver a speech.
2. 首先,我要对三年来老师们的帮助和指导表示衷心的感谢。
Firstly, I’d like t extend ur heartfelt thanks t the teachers fr yur help and guidance in the past three years.
3. 没有你们的指导和鼓励,我们不可能取得如此大的进步。
Withut yur guidance and encuragement, we culdn’t have made such great prgress.
4. 现在我们不仅掌握了所有的科目,而且学会了如何相处,如何做一个负责任的人。
Nw we have nt nly had a gd cmmand f all the subjects, but als learned hw t get alng with each ther and hw t be a respnsible persn.
5. 多好的时间啊!为了报答您,我们应该更加努力,在未来更好地为人民和社会服务。
What a gd time! T repay yu, we shuld wrk harder t serve the peple and sciety better in the future.
6. 接下来,我要向你致以我们永恒的感激之情。我希望每个老师都能有一个阳光灿烂的笑容,一个健康的身体。
Next, I want t send yu ur everlasting feeling f gratefulness. I wish every teacher culd have a sunny smile, a healthy bdy.
【答案】Gd mrning,dear teachers,
I’m Li Hua.Tday I am hnred t represent us graduates t deliver a speech.
Firstly, I’d like t extend ur heartfelt thanks t the teachers fr yur help and guidance in the past three years. Withut yur guidance and encuragement, we culdn’t have made such great prgress. Nw we have nt nly had a gd cmmand f all the subjects, but als learned hw t get alng with each ther and hw t be a respnsible persn. What a gd time! T repay yu, we shuld wrk harder t serve the peple and sciety better in the future. Next, I want t send yu ur everlasting feeling f gratefulness. I wish every teacher culd have a sunny smile, a healthy bdy.
Thanks again. And all the best t everyne.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生代表全体高三学生,写一封感谢书感念师恩,表达临别祝愿。
第一步:审题体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
要求:
1.表达感谢
2.回顾老师们的帮助
3.临别祝愿
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be hnred t d sth; represent; deliver a speech; extend ur heartfelt thanks t; help and guidance; make such great prgress; nt als...; a gd cmmand f ; get alng with; respnsible; repay; serve the peple and sciety; send; everlasting; gratefulness; all the best t everyne; wish
第三步:连词成句
1.Tday I am hnred t represent us graduates t deliver a speech.
2.I’d like t extend ur heartfelt thanks t the teachers fr yur help and guidance in the past three years.
3.Withut yur guidance and encuragement, we culdn’t have made such great prgress.
4.Nw we have nt nly had a gd cmmand f all the subjects, but als learned hw t get alng with each ther and hw t be a respnsible persn.
5.T repay yu, we shuld wrk harder t serve the peple and sciety better in the future.
6.Next, I want t send yu ur everlasting feeling f gratefulness.
7.I wish every teacher culd have a sunny smile, a healthy bdy.
8.Thanks again. And all the best t everyne.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly/Secnd… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is mre, Besides, Mrever, Furthermre, In additin, As well as, Nt nly…but (als)…, Including
3.表转折对比关系:Hwever, On the cntrary, But, Althugh + clause(从句), In spite f + n/ding, On the ne hand…,n the ther hand…, Sme…,while thers…,As fr, S…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, S, Thus, Therefre, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些地道的表达,如 extend ur heartfelt thanks t...以及含蓄虚拟语气Withut yur guidance and encuragement,we culdn’t have made such great prgress. 动词不定式作目的状语T repay yu, we shuld wrk harder t serve the peple and sciety better in the future. 全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
应用文写作|演讲稿-给外教致欢送辞
加拿大及教师史密斯(Smith)教授在你校任教英语一年了。现在他即将离任回国。假如你是你校学生会主席,你代表全体同学致欢送辞,对史密斯教授的工作表示感谢,并预祝它旅途愉快。
Dear Prfessr Smith, bys and girls,
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请翻译:
1. 史密斯教授要离开我们去他的祖国。
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2. 现在我们聚集在这里向他道别,并向他表达我们的感激之情。
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3. 在过去的一年里,史密斯教授为我校英语教学质量的提高做出了巨大的贡献。
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4. 他不仅给我们带来了先进的教学方法,而且给我们带来了新的教学理念。
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5. 由于史密斯教授的努力,我们的英语有了很大的提高。
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6. 多亏了他的帮助,我们的书面英语和口语都有了很大的提高。
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7. 我们现在不得不说再见,对此我们感到遗憾,但我相信在未来的日子里我们会记得彼此的。
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8. 现在,请允许我代表学校全体师生再次向他表示衷心的感谢,祝他回家旅途愉快、平安。
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参考答案
1. 史密斯教授要离开我们去他的祖国。
Prfessr Smith is leaving us fr his hme cuntry.
2. 现在我们聚集在这里向他道别,并向他表达我们的感激之情。
Nw we gather here t say gdbye t him, and express ur gratitude t him as well.
3. 在过去的一年里,史密斯教授为我校英语教学质量的提高做出了巨大的贡献。
In the past year, Prfessr Smith has made great cntributins t the imprvement f English teaching quality f ur schl.
4. 他不仅给我们带来了先进的教学方法,而且给我们带来了新的教学理念。
He has brught t us nt nly advanced teaching methds, but als new ideas f teaching and learning.
5. 由于史密斯教授的努力,我们的英语有了很大的提高。
Our English has imprved a great deal as a result f Prfessr Smith’s effrts.
6. 多亏了他的帮助,我们的书面英语和口语都有了很大的提高。
Thanks t his help, bth ur written English and ral English have greatly imprved.
7. 我们现在不得不说再见,对此我们感到遗憾,但我相信在未来的日子里我们会记得彼此的。
We feel srry that we have t say gd-bye nw but I’m sure we will remember each ther in the days t cme.
8. 现在,请允许我代表学校全体师生再次向他表示衷心的感谢,祝他回家旅途愉快、平安。
Nw please allw me t express ur sincere thanks nce again t him n behalf f all the students and teachers f ur schl and wish him a pleasant safe jurney hme.
【答案】Dear Prfessr Smith, bys and girls,
Prfessr Smith is leaving us fr his hme cuntry. Nw we gather here t say gdbye t him, and express ur gratitude t him as well.
In the past year, Prfessr Smith has made great cntributins t the imprvement f English teaching quality f ur schl. He has brught t us nt nly advanced teaching methds, but als new ideas f teaching and learning. Our English has imprved a great deal as a result f Prfessr Smith’s effrts. Thanks t his help, bth ur written English and ral English have greatly imprved. We feel srry that we have t say gd-bye nw but I’m sure we will remember each ther in the days t cme.
Nw please allw me t express ur sincere thanks nce again t him n behalf f all the students and teachers f ur schl and wish him a pleasant safe jurney hme.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以学生会主席的身份写一篇欢送辞对即将离任回国的斯密史教授的工作表示感谢并预祝他旅途愉快。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文。
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法。
要求:
1.对史密斯教授的工作表示感谢。
2.预祝它旅途愉快。
第二步:列提纲(重点短语)
say gdbye t; made great cntributins; as a result f ;feel srry that
第三步:连词成句
1.Nw we gather here t say gdbye t him, and express ur gratitude t him as well.
2.In the past year, Prfessr Smith has made great cntributins t the imprvement f English teaching quality f ur schl.
3.Our English has imprved a great deal as a result f Prfessr Smith’s effrts.
4.We feel srry that we have t say gd-bye nw but I’m sure we will remember each ther in the days t cme.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序:对斯密史的工作表示感谢;预祝旅途愉快。
2. 表示并列补充关系:nt nly…but als; as a result f; Thanks t
第五步:润色修改
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式,如宾语从句:We feel srry that we have t say gd-bye nw but I’m sure we will remember each ther in the days t cme;同时使用了很多的高级词或短语如:express ur gratitude;made great cntributins;as a result f;allw me t;n behalf f;a pleasant safe jurney hme…等。文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
应用文写作|演讲稿-城市的变化
现在你校举办一次英文演讲比赛,主题是关于你所在城市的变化。
请根据以下要点,写一篇演讲稿。
内容要点:1、城市变化的简介;2、个人的感想。
注意:1、词数80-100左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
The changes f my city
Ladies and gentlemen,
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Thank yu fr yur attentin!
请翻译:
1. 我很荣幸能发表一篇关于城市变迁的演讲。
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2. 一开始,很明显存在着各种各样的交通工具,使人们出行更加方便。
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3. 更重要的是,人们提高了自己的素质,因为先进的技术为我们提供了更多受教育的机会。
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4. 此外,随着环保意识的提高和加强,我们的生活环境变得越来越美丽,这给人们的幸福增加了很多。
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5. 在我看来,是每个市民的共同努力给这个城市带来了如此美妙的变化。
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参考答案
1. 我很荣幸能发表一篇关于城市变迁的演讲。
I’m hnred t deliver a speech n the changes f my city.
2. 一开始,很明显存在着各种各样的交通工具,使人们出行更加方便。
Initially, it’s bvius that there exist a wide variety f transprtatin means, making it cnvenient t travel arund.
3. 更重要的是,人们提高了自己的素质,因为先进的技术为我们提供了更多受教育的机会。
Mre imprtantly, peple have prmted their wn qualities because the advanced technlgy prvides us with mre access t educatin.
4. 此外,随着环保意识的提高和加强,我们的生活环境变得越来越美丽,这给人们的幸福增加了很多。
Besides, with the awareness f envirnmental prtectin being raised/strengthened, ur living surrundings is becming mre and mre beautiful, which adds a great deal t peple’s happiness.
5. 在我看来,是每个市民的共同努力给这个城市带来了如此美妙的变化。
As far as I I’m cncerned, it’s the jint effrts f every citizen that have brught such wnderful changes t the city.
【答案】The changes f my city
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m hnred t deliver a speech n the changes f my city.
Initially, it’s bvius that there exist a wide variety f transprtatin means, making it cnvenient t travel arund. Mre imprtantly, peple have prmted their wn qualities because the advanced technlgy prvides us with mre access t educatin. Besides, with the awareness f envirnmental prtectin being raised/strengthened, ur living surrundings is becming mre and mre beautiful, which adds a great deal t peple’s happiness.
As far as I I’m cncerned, it’s the jint effrts f every citizen that have brught such wnderful changes t the city.
Thank yu fr yur attentin.
【解析】
这是一篇演讲稿。文章主要内容是关于自己所在城市的变化。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表示感到荣幸;
2.城市变化的简介;
3.个人的感想
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
Be hnred t d;deliver a speech;a wide variety f;travel arund;prvide sb. with sth.;with the awareness f;a great deal t;as far as I I’m cncerned
第三步:连词成句
1.I’m hnred t deliver a speech n the changes f my city.
2.Initially, it’s bvius that there exist a wide variety f transprtatin means, making it cnvenient t travel arund.
3.Mre imprtantly, peple have prmted their wn qualities because the advanced technlgy prvides us with mre access t educatin.
4.Besides, with the awareness f envirnmental prtectin being raised/strengthened, ur living surrundings is becming mre and mre beautiful, which adds a great deal t peple’s happiness.
5.As far as I I’m cncerned, it’s the jint effrts f every citizen that have brught such wnderful changes t the city.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表并列补充关系:Initially, Besides, Mre imprtantly
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Initially, it’s bvius that there exist a wide variety f transprtatin means, making it cnvenient t travel arund.(it为形式主语,that引导主语从句;making为现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
As far as I I’m cncerned, it’s the jint effrts f every citizen that have brught such wnderful changes t the city.(it’s…that…引导强调句)
应用文写作|演讲稿-帮助父母做家务的好处
假定你是李华,要准备一篇演讲稿参加年级的英语演讲比赛。作为高三的学生,虽然有很大的学习压力,也应常帮助父母做家务。请你以自己的亲身经历说明适当帮助父母做家务的好处。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入字数。)
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gd mrning, everyne!
The tpic f my speech tday is: the merits f wrk.
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Thanks fr yur attentin!
请翻译:
1. 众所周知,高三学生的学习压力很大。
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2. 然而,这不可能是我们不帮父母做家务的原因。
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3. 上星期天,我学习累了,下午情绪低落。
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4. 看到妈妈忙着做家务,我决定帮她打扫房子。
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5. 差不多两个小时后,房子变得明亮起来。虽然我浑身是汗,但我感到高兴和自豪。
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6. 做家务能使我们受益匪浅。
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7. 我们父母的负担可以减轻。同时,我们也可以放松自己,发展我们的生活技能。
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参考答案
1. 众所周知,高三学生的学习压力很大。
As we all knw, senir three students are under great study pressure.
2. 然而,这不可能是我们不帮父母做家务的原因。
Hwever, it can’t be the reasn why we dn’t help ur parents with sme husewrk.
3. 上星期天,我学习累了,下午情绪低落。
Last Sunday, I felt tired with my study and was in lw spirits in the afternn.
4. 看到妈妈忙着做家务,我决定帮她打扫房子。
Seeing my mther busy with the husewrk, I decided t help her clean the huse.
5. 差不多两个小时后,房子变得明亮起来。虽然我浑身是汗,但我感到高兴和自豪。
Almst tw hurs later, the huse tk n a bright lk. Althugh I was wet with sweats felt delighted and prud.
6. 做家务能使我们受益匪浅。
We can benefit a lt frm ding husewrk.
7. 我们父母的负担可以减轻。同时,我们也可以放松自己,发展我们的生活技能。
The burden f ur parents can be relieved. Als, we can relax urselves and develp ur life skills as well.
【答案】
Gd mrning, everyne!
The tpic f my speech tday is: the merits f wrk. As we all knw, senir three students are under great study pressure. Hwever, it can’t be the reasn why we dn’t help ur parents with sme husewrk.
Last Sunday, I felt tired with my study and was in lw spirits in the afternn. Seeing my mther busy with the husewrk, I decided t help her clean the huse. Almst tw hurs later, the huse tk n a bright lk. Althugh I was wet with sweats felt delighted and prud.
We can benefit a lt frm ding husewrk. The burden f ur parents can be relieved. Als, we can relax urselves and develp ur life skills as well.
Thanks fr yur attentin!
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义写一篇演讲稿。
第一步:明确要求。本篇书面表达要求假定你是李华,要准备一篇演讲稿参加年级的英语演讲比赛。作为高三的学生,虽然有很大的学习压力,也应常帮助父母做家务。请你以自己的亲身经历说明适当帮助父母做家务的好处。
第二步:列关键词。如:As we all knw,under pressure,help with,feel tired with ,in lw spirits ,benefit frm等。
第三步:连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句,注意主谓一致,时态语态等语法。
第四步:连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,如:Hwever、Althugh、Als等。书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
此范文表达流畅,语言优美,内容全面,符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有:定语从句的运用:As we all knw, senir three students are under great study pressure. 和Hwever, it can’t be the reasn why we dn’t help ur parents with sme husewrk.非谓语动词的运用:Seeing my mther busy with the husewrk, I decided t help her clean the huse.
应用文写作|演讲稿-回国致辞
假定你是李华,正在英国Hgwarts高中交流学习,下周学业结束即将回国。请你写一篇发言稿在班里做一个简短的演讲,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.你的收获;
3.你的期望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。发言稿的开头已经给出。
Gd mrning, everyne in Hgwarts high schl.
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请翻译:
1. 早上好,Hgwarts高中的同学们。我很遗憾地告诉你,我在这里的逗留将于下周结束。
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2. 在回中国之前,我想让你知道我是多么感谢你的慷慨帮助,我是多么珍视我们之间建立的友谊,这两件事都使我的逗留成为一次难忘的经历。
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3. 但我得到的不是友谊。我学到了很多关于英语文化的知识,也提高了我的英语口语。
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4.看!我的演讲真好!
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5. 最后,我希望你能有机会访问中国,更多地了解中国文化。
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参考答案
1. 早上好,Hgwarts高中的同学们。我很遗憾地告诉你,我在这里的逗留将于下周结束。
Gd mrning, everyne in Hgwarts high schl. I regret t tell yu that my stay here is cming t an end next week.
2. 在回中国之前,我想让你知道我是多么感谢你的慷慨帮助,我是多么珍视我们之间建立的友谊,这两件事都使我的逗留成为一次难忘的经历。
Befre ging back t China, I want yu t knw hw much I appreciate yur generus help and hw much I value the friendship frmed between us, bth f which have made my stay an experience t be remembered frever.
3. 但我得到的不是友谊。我学到了很多关于英语文化的知识,也提高了我的英语口语。
Yet friendship is nt the nly thing I’ve gained. I’ve learned s much abut English culture as well as imprved my spken English.
4.看!我的演讲真好!
Lk! What a nice speech I’m making!
5. 最后,我希望你能有机会访问中国,更多地了解中国文化。
Finally, I wish yu can visit China and learn mre abut Chinese culture smetime.
【答案】Gd mrning, everyne in Hgwarts high schl. I regret t tell yu that my stay here is cming t an end next week.
Befre ging back t China, I want yu t knw hw much I appreciate yur generus help and hw much I value the friendship frmed between us, bth f which have made my stay an experience t be remembered frever. Yet friendship is nt the nly thing I’ve gained. I’ve learned s much abut English culture as well as imprved my spken English. Lk! What a nice speech I’m making!
Finally, I wish yu can visit China and learn mre abut Chinese culture smetime.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇发言稿,就在英国Hgwarts高中交流学习的经历谈谈感想。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在进行时和现在完成时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 你的收获;
3. 你的期望。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
regret t d sth.; cme t an end; g back t; as well as; spken English
第三步:连词成句
1. I regret t tell yu that my stay here is cming t an end next week.
2. Befre ging back t China, I want yu t knw hw much I appreciate yur generus help and hw much I value the friendship frmed between us, bth f which have made my stay an experience t be remembered frever.
3. I’ve learned s much abut English culture as well as imprved my spken English.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:Finally
2.表并列补充关系:and, as well as
3.表转折对比关系:Yet
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Befre ging back t China, I want yu t knw hw much I appreciate yur generus help and hw much I value the friendship frmed between us, bth f which have made my stay an experience t be remembered frever. 用了“介词+关系代词”(f which)引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2] Finally, I wish yu can visit China and learn mre abut Chinese culture smetime. 用了省略that引导的宾语从句。
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