2022届优质校一模试卷专题汇编18 读后续写之外貌性格环境描写 解析版

     题型考查年份考查话题读后续写2018年6月浙江卷父亲带儿子去“西部荒野”，体验农场生活2020年7月浙江卷人与熊对抗，之后成功脱险的故事2017年11月浙江卷叙述和母亲的一次度假经历 第一部分  外貌性格描写一、外貌性格描写的3个原则①进行外貌描写时，可写对一个人的总体印象，也可以抓住人物重要的外貌特征或性格特点进行描述。如攻略3例题原文中第一段对妈妈性格的描写，采用了loving, sweet, absent­minded和forgetful等形容词，使一个可爱又健忘的妈妈的形象跃然纸上。②可以具体描述人物的五官、着装，甚至可以配上动作描述。③在描写人物片段时，可写你对人物印象最深的一两点，再加上一两句人物评价。二、外貌与性格描写的高分素材（一）外貌描写(1)她圆圆的脸上有一双蓝色的眼睛，还有两个可爱的酒窝。①On her round face are a pair of blue eyes and lovely dimples. (倒装句型)②She is a girl with a pair of blue eyes and lovely dimples on her round face. (with引导的介宾结构作后置定语，补充说明人物信息)(2)李老师三十多岁，身材适中，常梳着马尾辫。①Miss Li is in her thirties with a medium build and has her hair in a ponytail. (由and连接的并列句；with短语用作状语，表示伴随状态)②Miss Li is a medium­sized woman in her thirties who often wears/ties her hair in a ponytail. (定语从句补充介绍人物特征)③Miss Li, in her thirties, is of medium size, and often has her hair tied in a ponytail. (“be of＋adj.＋n.”结构表示人或物具有某种特征。常用的名词有：size, height, weight, build, age, shape等)（二）性格描写①Such is Ms. Han, an easygoing, kind and warm­hearted woman.韩老师是一个随和善良又热心肠的女人。②Though he comes from a poor family, he is a person of great determination and courage.他虽出身贫寒，但拥有坚强的意志和勇气。第二部分  环境描写一、环境描写的4个原则①选择与主题和情节设置一致的环境要素，以营造故事发生的特定环境。②细致深入。所选的景物一定要运用所学的词汇和句法进行细致深入的描写。③添加附加信息，如天气变化和周边的景物等，如昏暗的路灯、摇曳的树影等。④环境细节描写一定要与动作和心理活动等相结合，才能更好地完成续写任务。例如：攻略3第一段续写中可适当描写一下在帐篷中过夜时周围的环境，突出作者内心的祥和、快乐。二、环境描写的高分素材①It was beginning to snow, and snowflakes were blinding my eyes.天开始下雪了，雪花让我看不清了。②The sun was breaking through the blanket of mist.太阳穿过薄雾。③Summer sees the mountains turn bright green with growing rice. During autumn, these same mountains are flash gold, and in winter they are covered in sheets of white frost.夏天，水稻生长群山绿意盎然。秋天漫山铺金，冬天银装素裹。④A little way off was a little brook, rushing and sparkling along between green banks.不远处有一条小溪，在绿色的两岸之间奔流不息，波光粼粼。【典例示例】(2017·浙江高考11月卷改编)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother—, , and yet  and . One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all  along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight­year­old brother, and I unwillingly said good­bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we'd ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we'd returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept. “You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I'll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh ... I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren't about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn't we find a house with a likely­looking backyard and ask if we could set up the tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.Paragraph 1The next day we remembered the brand­new tent we had brought with us.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【描写刻画】1. 细读原文，明确叙述意图原文基调轻松、温暖。通过介绍一次出游经历，描述妈妈健忘、心不在焉、善良、爱孩子的性格特征。第一段概括妈妈的性格特征；第二段以妈妈遗落钱包的事情来说明妈妈健忘；由第三段担心妈妈遗忘孩子的事，说明妈妈心不在焉，同时侧面反映孩子的靠谱、沉稳；由最后一段倒数第二和第三句可看出妈妈很善良。根据人物性格特征，结合续写第二段首句可推测，续写时应设计一件有趣的事来体现“快乐、母爱、温情、亲情”。2．根据段落开头语，确定续写方向※根据续写第一段首句中的关键词“we remembered the brand­new tent”可知，该段应着重描写围绕帐篷发生的有趣的。※根据续写第二段首句中的关键词“along the way”可推断第二段可描述一路上妈妈对孩子的关爱。结合首句中关键词“great sights”，可简单进行环境描写与原文呼应。3．围绕原文主旨，进行人物性格和环境描写①在描写母亲时，以原文对母亲性格的描写为依据，描述一件小事突出母亲的健忘和心不在焉；也利用一些描述性的词语，如read、sing、warmth、comfortable、safe、laughter等描写旅途中母亲所表现出的母爱。这些描写能使母亲的形象更加丰满、高大，“母爱”溢于言表。②根据原文标题中的关键词vacation，和原文第二段中的“all her sights along the way”，可推断出续写部分可适当进行环境描写，体现和母亲共度假期的快乐，一家人的亲情。【参考范文】Paragraph 1The next day we remembered the brand­new tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we should make full use of it since we had brought it. David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could refuse her crazy idea again, but to our great disappointment, he agreed with Mom's idea. So we set up the tent at the foot of the mountain by a river. “Oh, I forgot the pillows!” Mom screamed out before we slept. Finally, we had to collect some grass as our pillows. Despite the ache of my neck, I enjoyed the nice night with fresh air and millions of stars.Paragraph 2We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The tent became a close friend then. Every time we camped, Mom read a book or sang a soft song. The warmth of her arms let us feel comfortable and safe. Though she was forgetful and absent­minded, laughter accompanied us along the way. Finally we met our two sets of grandparents and enjoyed family happiness. This trip made me experience my mother's and family's love. 2020·浙江卷One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph 1A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Mounting anger mingled with hunger overwhelming him, he smashed his paws frantically against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp claws at us. Panicked as we were, Elli and I squealed at the top of our lungs, waved our fists at him and stamped heavily on the ground in an attempt to intimidate and scare him away. To our dismay, all these efforts were in vain. This sturdy bear relentlessly banged and shoved the wooden posts which were evidently on the verge of collapsing! This bulky and furious beast within a stone’s throw, I flinched back and huddled with Elli tightly. Chilly winds whipping our faces, I could hear nothing but the sound of our hearts throbbing violently in our chests.Paragraph 2At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The gusting wind from the hovering vehicle swept away our choking fear immediately. Out of the helicopter descended a rope to haul us up. Thrilled yet relieved, we clutched the rope and eventually landed on the helicopter safe and sound. While overlooking the chunky bear from high above, I was amazed to spot this stubborn guy had crushed the fence and headed toward our camp for the inviting garlic bread. At this once-in-a-lifetime moment, I reached into my backpack and pulled out the camera, photographing that impressive scene. Gazing at his broad back in the melting ice field, I wondered if it was the warmer planet that had forced the bear to hunt for food from the human regions. 湖南省永州市2021届高三第一次模拟阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.I was walking down the muddy road one day when my cell phone rang. A child’s voice on the other end spoke to me softly, “Dad, please come hack soon. I miss you so much!” Unconsciously, I knew it was a wrong number once again. I don’t have a single daughter. I just have a six-year-old son. It is not unusual to receive this kind of calls nowadays, so I replied rudely, “You’ve dialed the wrong number!” and then hung up in anger.During the following days, I got the same call now and then. It disturbed me, so I either rejected her or hung up right away rudely. I couldn’t help complaining about this, “What an impolite girl! How can she call me up over and over again?” How 1 wished the little girl would stop causing any trouble to me some day! Suddenly, the phone rang up again. It was from the same girl—It seemed that she would not give up until she got an answer.She constantly called me up. Even if I did not give her an answer, she still dialed my number from time to time. Eventually I unwillingly answered the phone. 1 heard the weak voice of that little girl, “Dad, please come back now. I miss you so much! Mom told me this was not a wrong number. It is your cell phone number, right? Dad, I am in so much pain! Mom said you were too busy to take care of me. She is tired out from looking after me. Dad, I know you are busy. If you cannot come home, please kiss me again in the phone, OK?” The innocent request was difficult to reject. I made a loud kiss into the phone and heard a weak voice saying, “Thank you.... Dad, I am so... happy, so …happy!”注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右：2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone ___________.I couldn't wait to ask the woman how her daughter was __________________________________. 2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟卷11Mr. Plumbean lived on a street where all the houses were the same. He liked it that way. So did everybody else on Mr. Plumbean’s street. Then one day a seagull flew over Mr. Plumbean’s house and made a big orange splot (斑块) on Mr. Plumbean’s house.“Oh! Too bad!” everybody said. “Mr. Plumbean will have to paint his house again.”So Mr. Plumbean got some blue paint and some white paint, and that night he got busy. He painted at night because it was cooler. When the paint was gone, the roof was blue. The walls were white. And the big orange splot was still there. Then he got some more paint. He got red paint, yellow paint, green paint, and purple paint.In the morning the other people on the street came out of their houses. Their houses were all the same. But Mr. Plumbean’s house was like a rainbow. It was like a jungle. It was like an explosion. There was the big orange splot. And there were little orange splots. There were stripes. There were pictures of elephants and lions and pretty girls and steam-shovels. That day Mr. Plumbean bought carpenter's tools. That night he built a tower on top of his roof, and he painted a clock on the tower.At night the next day Mr. Plumbean got a truck full of green things. He planted palm trees, baobabs , bushes, and onions. When the other people came out of their houses, they saw Mr. Plumbean swinging between two palm trees and Mr. Plumbean was drinking lemonade.Plumbean has gone too far! “Plumbean, what have you done to your house?” the people shouted.“My house is me and I am it. My house is where I like to be and it looks like all my dreams,” Mr. Plumbean said.The people went away. They asked the man who lived next door to Mr. Plumbean to go and have a talk with him. “Tell him that we all liked it here before he changed his house. Tell him that his house has to be the same as ours so we can have a neat street.”注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1The man went to see Mr. Plumbean that evening.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2Then, one by one, they went to see Mr. Plumbean, late at night.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟卷12阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。I lay on my bed, legs leaning against the wall, desperately wishing my mother would call. But I remembered the last time I’d seen her, right before the train for Providence pulled out of the station, “You know how expensive it is to call,” she said, then hugged me tight and said good-bye.This was my first birthday away from home. I missed my mom, missed my sister, and most certainly missed the special pound cake my mother always made for my birthday. Since getting to college that year, I would watch jealously as the other freshmen received care packages from their parents on their birthdays--and even on ordinary days. Big boxes containing summer slacks and blouses, packages of M&M’s and Snickers, things they needed and things they didn’t. Instead of feeling thrilled about my upcoming eighteenth birthday, I felt empty. I wished my mom would send me something, too, but I knew that she couldn’t afford presents or the postage. She had done her best with my sister and me--raising us by herself. The simple truth was there just was never enough money.But that didn’t stop her from filling us with dreams. “You can be anything you want to be,” she would tell us. “Politicians, dancers, writers--you just have to work for it; you have to get an education.”Thanks to my mom’s sacrifices and big dreams, I’d made it to the Ivy League: Brown University in Providence, Rhode Island.As I was recalling these things, my roommate joined me on the bed. “Hey. After we study, let’s buy ice cream and cake.” I nodded, closed my eyes, and imagined the cake Mom would have made. Mmm. I could see the golden yellow of each of the twelve eggs, and I could almost smell the vanilla (香草) filling the house while the cake baked.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1As I daydreamed, there was a knock on the door.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2How had she managed to afford it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2021届山东省潍坊市高三英语三轮冲刺拉练八阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。Rescue in a BottleCurtis Whitson had rafted (v.乘筏) down the Arroyo Seco, a river in central California, several times before.This year, Curtis Whitson knew the water-fall was coming. He figured he would get out of his raft into the shallow water, get down the rocks along ropes on either side of the falls, and continue on his way, as he had on a previous trip.But this year was different. Heavy snow and spring rains had turned the usually manageable falls into something fierce. And this year, instead of his friends, Whitson’s companions were his girlfriend, Krystal Ramirez, and his 13-year-old son, Hunter. As the three of them approached the falls late in the afternoon of the third day of their camping trip, Whitson could tell from the increasing roar of water in the narrowing canyon (峡谷) that they were in serious trouble. There was no way they’d be able to get down the rocks as planned.“The water was just roaring through there with tremendous force,” recalls Whitson, 45.They had no smart phone service, and they hadn’t seen a single person in the past three days. And Whitson knew that they’d be sharing the ground there with rattlesnakes and mountain lions.As he was thinking what to do, Whitson hit on a bit of luck---he heard voices coming from the other side of the falls. He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out.“We have to get these people a message,” Whitson thought.He grabbed a stick and pulled out his pocketknife to carve “Help” in it. Then he tied a rope to it so the people would know it wasn’t just any stick. He tried throwing it over the falls, but it floated away in the wrong direction.“We’ve got to do something!” Whitson yelled to his son. “Have we got anything else?”Then he spotted his water bottle. Whitson grabbed it and carved “Help!”on it. Ramirez also reminded him that he had a pen and paper in his backpack.Whitson knew it was a slim hope. But he wrote “6-15 19:00 We are stuck here@ the waterfall. Get help please” and pushed the note into the bottle. This time, his throw over the waterfall was perfect.“All right, that’s all we can do,” Whitson told Hunter.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where they’d had lunch.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2The next morning, the helicopter returned._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
湖南省永州市2021届高三第一次模拟【答案】Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone. When I called the number back, a woman answered, “Sorry, sir. I am really sorry to bother you. I did want to call to apologize.” From the woman, I learnt that the girl had bone cancer when she was born, and unfortunately her father died in an accident weeks ago. The little girl suffered from unbearable treatment every day. Feeling painful, she would cry for her dad who had always encouraged her, so her mother gave her a random number. (80 words)I couldn’t wait to ask the woman how her daughter was. The woman thought for a while, saying sadly, “She has gone. You must have kissed her on the phone, and she went with a smile as she tightly held the cell phone with which she could hear her voice...” On hearing this, I couldn’t keep back my sad feeling, tears streaming down my cheeks. I didn’t know what to say, so I slowly hang up my phone, praying for her happiness and health in heaven. (75 words) 2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟卷11【答案】Paragraph 1The man went to see Mr. Plumbean that evening. They sat under the palm trees drinking lemonade and talking all night long. Early the next morning the man went out to get rope and nails and paint. When the people came out of their houses they saw a red and yellow ship next door to the house of Mr. Plumbean. “What have you done to your house?” they shouted at the man. “My house is where I like to be and it looks like all my dreams,” said the man, who had always loved ships.Paragraph 2Then, one by one, they went to see Mr. Plumbean, late at night. They would talk about their dreams. Whenever anybody visited Mr. Plumbean’s house, the very next day that person would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams. Whenever a stranger came to the street, the stranger would say, “This is not a neat street.” Then all the people would say, “Our street is us and we are it. Our street is where we like to be, and it looks like all our dreams.”【解析】这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，这篇文章主要讲了Plumbean先生按照自己的想法设计和改造房子，使得街道看起来很不整洁，人们让Plumbean先生的邻居去劝说他。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那天晚上，这个人去见了Plumbean先生，所以后文应该是讲述这个人见到了Plumbean先生后，发生的事情，并且第二天这个人对自己的房子进行了改变。第二段开头是：然后，他们一个接一个地在深夜去见Plumbean先生。本段应该写同样的故事继续上演着，所有人都对自己的房子进行了改变。当有陌生人问起时，所有的人都会异口同声地回答Plumbean先生经常说的话。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：“My house is where I like to be and it looks like all my dreams,” said the man, who had always loved ships.表语从句和非限制性定语从句的运用；Whenever anybody visited Mr. Plumbean’s house, the very next day that person would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams.时间状语从句的运用。 2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟卷12【答案】Paragraph 1As I daydreamed, there was a knock on the door. My roommate opened it to find a deliveryman asking for me. He handed her a large box, which she carefully placed on the desk near my bed. “Open it”. I did, and inside was a vanilla cake with chocolate frosting. In icing were the words: “Happy Birthday, Sande! Love, Mom.” I was filled with excitement, as if Mom were right there hugging me close.Paragraph 2:How had she managed to afford it? I felt as if I were back at home with her, safe and secure while she sang and told me how much she loved having me in her life. I ran out to the hall and knocked on my dormmates’ doors. “Birthday cake,” I called. I cut cake for the students gathering in my room and watched their faces as they ate, because I didn’t need to eat to feel both full and rich inside.【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求续写两段内容。第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求续写两段内容（我收到妈妈送我的生日蛋糕和我的感受以及我和室友们一起分享的情节）；注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好时态应为一般过去时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；deliveryman（送货员），carefully（小心翼翼地），excitement（兴奋），secure（安全），hug（拥抱）及gather（聚集）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be filled with（充满），run out（跑出去），as if（仿佛、好像），ask for sb（找某人）以及knock on（敲门），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“He handed her a large box, which she carefully placed on the desk near my bed.”状语从句“I was filled with excitement, as if Mom were right there hugging me close.”以及“I cut cake for the students gathering in my room and watched their faces as they ate, because I didn't need to eat to feel both full and rich inside.”非谓语动词“My roommate opened it to find a deliveryman asking for me.”全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 2021届山东省潍坊市高三英语三轮冲刺拉练八【答案】Paragraph IIt took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where they’d had lunch. With no expectation that their message in the bottle would find its way to anyone, they prepared to spend a safe night there. As the evening wore on, they decided they probably weren’t going to get rescued that night, so they pulled out their sleeping bags. Before turning in, Ramirez added wood to the fire to keep the mountain lions away. However, just after midnight, they heard a helicopter hovering above them. Wild with joy, they waved and yelled like crazy. Unfortunately, the darkness drowned everything. The helicopter circled and got back. The first rescue was in vain.Paragraph 2The next morning, the helicopter returned. After the three were spotted, the helicopter lowered a crew member on a cable. The rescuers lifted them out of the mountain. It was not long before they were taken to safety. That was a moment of pure happiness as the three chatted with the rescue workers. Just at that time Whitson learned that a hiker spotted the bottle with the message asking for help. And it was exactly that bottle that saved them all! Together, they were amazed at the unlikelihood of it all.【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，Curtis Whitson以前顺着Arroyo Seco河流乘筏漂流过几次，但是今年有些不一样，他带着儿子和女朋友在露营旅行中被困在水流湍急的瀑布中，他写了求救信息放入饮料瓶子里，扔过瀑布。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他们花了30分钟才回到上游吃午饭的岸边……，所以本段应该写他们不知道求救信息是否有用，到达上游的岸边后如何度过夜晚，结合下一段首句“第二天早上，直升机返回”可知，本段应该还有直升机来营救他们等内容；第二段开头是：第二天早上，直升机返回……本段应该写直升机返回后发现他们并成功营救出他们，还应交代直升机如何知道他们被困在这里等内容。续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：add…to，be in vain，ask for等高级词汇；It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where they’d had lunch.中where引导的限制性定语从句；As the evening wore on, they decided they probably weren’t going to get rescued that night, so they pulled out their sleeping bags.中As引导的状语从句；And it was exactly that bottle that saved them all!使用it was…that…强调句型等高级句式。