13 应用文-冲刺2020年高考英语书面表达写作导练课件PPT

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一、书信/邮件(一)魔法导航 高考书信/邮件写作的关键在于对书信/邮件主体的处理。 1.称呼语(salutatin) 收信人称呼语从信左边开始写,一般以 “Dear...”或 “My dear...”开 头,后面常用逗号。
2.正文(bdy) 正文是书信的主体,它的质量高低将直接决定作文得分的高低,因此在 书信的训练和写作中对其要精雕细琢,力求做到层次清晰、要点齐全、 过渡自然、行文流畅和文笔优美。若是回信则应根据实际需要告诉对 方自己何时收到信件、自己的感受或自己的近况,而后切入正文。正文 结束时,常会另起一行,写上一些表示祝福或期待的话语,如:Best wishes! Lking frward t yur early reply.Gd luck!等。
3.结尾敬语(cmplimentary clse) 表示写信人对收信人的谦称,常用表达有Yurs,Yurs sincerely,Yurs truly或Yurs faithfully。 电子邮件的写作与书信基本相同,在此处不再赘述。
(二)写作素材常用开头1.邀请信: It is a pleasure fr me t invite yu n behalf wuld like t in- are mre than glad t invite yu 申请信: My name wuld like t wrk fr...
3.祝贺信: We are very happy t knw that yu have me/us t give my/ur mst sincere cngratulatins was delighted t hear/re- ceive the news 投诉或抱怨信: I'm writing t tell yu smething abut...,which I think is nt satisfying.
5.慰问信:We are very srry t learn f/learn am very srry t hear f yur present situatin 建议信:I'm glad t receive yur letter asking fr advice are sme tips fr yu.7.询问信:I'm writing t ask whether yu are able t d me a favr.
8.欢迎信:Glad t hear frm yu and yu're welcme 回信:Thank yu fr yur letter s much fr yur letter,which ar- am writing t yu t tell yu 'm glad t receive yur let- ter.It's a pleasure fr me t tell yu my plan 其他:Nw I am s excited that I can't wait t yu./I wuld als like t knw if yu 'm very excited t learn is indeed a wnder- ful idea t...
常用结尾1.鼓励型:Hw delighted I am nw! Actually,whatever happens,we must stay calm first and then find a wise slutin.2.祝愿型:I hpe what's mentined abve might be helpful and wish yu a gd jur- ney.
3.请求询问型:By the way,culd I have a pht f Sulin taken n her third birthday? Thank yu very much in advance.4.展望型:I believe that the wide use f these shpping bags can greatly imprve ur envirnment.In this way,we can make ur cuntry a cleaner place.
5.目的型:I am writing the letter in the hpe that yu can cnsider these prblems and make mre imprvements.6.期待型:If yu happen t knw the news,please infrm yur classmates f it.I hpe all f yu can learn a lt in this activity.
(三)典题示例真题在线(2016课标全国Ⅰ) 假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历 (resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(frmat)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(四)沙场练兵1.邀请信【模板助力】Dear..., Hw is everything with yu? I am writing t tell yu that there will be a    　     (事件)at/in 　　     (地点)(n)　　     (时间). We wuld be delighted t invite yu t　　    .
The 　　    (事件) will start at 　　     (具体时间). This will be fllwed by 　　     (进一步的安排).At arund 　　     (时间), 　　     (另一个安排). Please let us knw as sn as pssible if yu can cme. Lking frward t 　　    . Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【好题热线】(2017课标全国卷Ⅱ) 假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                        
答案    One pssible versin:Dear Henry, I'm Li Hua, ne f yur students. I'm writing t invite yu t visit the paper-cutting exhibitin. Paper-cutting is ne f Chinese traditins and I'm sure yu will like it. The exhibitin will be held in the lcal museum next Saturday. Sme famus Chinese artists will perfrm n that day. Meanwhile, sme beautiful
paper-cutting wrks, cllected frm all ver the cuntry, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. If yu like, yu can als jin in paper-cutting. I'm sure it will be an unfrgettable experience fr yu.I'm lking frward t hearing frm yu.Yurs,Li Hua
2.告知信【模板助力】(1)Dear...,I 'm writing t infrm yu I think yu will... be held..., which will ,'m sure it will be an un- frgettable experience fr yu.I'm lking frward ,Li Hua
(2)Dear..., ging t theme/tpic f will start last wh is interested is welcme t participate. I knw is surely a gd chance yu want t jin, yu can... Hpe t hear frm yu sn.Yurs,Li Hua
【好题热线】(2016课标全国卷Ⅱ) 假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(phtgraphy club)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:1.主题:环境保护;2.展览时间;3.投稿邮箱:intlphtshw@gmschl.cm。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                    
答案    One pssible versin:Dear Peter,Our schl phtgraphy club is ging t hld an Internatinal High Schl Student Phtgraphy Shw. The theme f the shw is envirnmental prtectin. It will start frm June 15th and last fr three weeks. Any student wh is interest-ed is welcme t participate. I knw yu take gd pictures and yu've always wanted t d smething fr envirnmental prtectin. I remember yu shwed
me sme phts n that theme the last time yu visited ur schl. This is surely a gd chance fr mre peple t see them. If yu want t jin, yu can send yur phts t intlphtshw@gmschl. cm. Hpe t hear frm yu sn.Yurs,Li Hua
3.建议信【模板助力】Dear..., I am writing t draw yur attentin t the fact am writing t express my views/pinins cncerning... In rder t slve the prblem, varius things can be dne. T begin with, why If yu d this, additin, yu shuld/can/had That way, but nt least, it wuld be a gd idea ding this,...
I hpe yu will find these ideas useful.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【好题热线】 假设你是新华中学高三2班的学生李华,你的英国笔友Simn刚转学,感 到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你根 据以下信息回信。1.多跟同学交流沟通;2.积极参加学校活动;3.向老师寻求帮助。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                        
答案    One pssible versin:Dear Simn,I am srry t hear that yu are having truble fitting in at yur new schl. Such prblems are quite nrmal. The fllwing suggestins may be helpful. First, I think yu may need t cmmunicate with yur classmates as much as pssible. In this way, yu will get t knw each ther better. Secnd, it
might be a gd idea fr yu t take part in mre schl activities, which usually invlve teamwrk and interactins with ther students and are therefre gd fr develping friendly relatinships. Lastly, when faced with sme tugh prblems, yu can cnsider asking yur teachers fr help, wh can usually ffer yu sme sensible suggestins.I sincerely hpe my advice will be f sme help t yu. If there is anything mre I can d t help, please let me knw.Yurs,
4.申请信【模板助力】(1)Dear..., I am writing t apply is my persnal infrmatin fr yu. ... If my applicatin culd be taken int favrable cnsideratin, I wuld be mst grateful. And yur early reply will be highly appreciated.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
(2)Dear..., I am writing t express my great interest wuld like t apply as... ... I wuld appreciate it if yu grant me an interview.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【好题热线】(2018宁夏六盘山中学高三一模) 假定你是李华,请用英文写一封申请信,申请作为“接待家庭(hst fami-ly)”接待来你校交换学习的英国中学生Jhnsn。内容包括:1.自我介绍;2.家庭条件及个人优势;3.安排英国朋友参加的活动。
答案    One pssible versin:Dear Sir r Madam,I am Li Hua, a student in ur schl. Knwing that there will be an English exchange student cming t ur schl, I am writing t apply t be a hst family.My parents are caring and friendly. Our hme is next t the city center, which has easy access t shpping and transprtatin. In additin, we can
ffer ne separate rm t the student. What's mre, I have a gd cm- mand f English, which makes it easier fr me t cmmunicate with fr- eigners in daily life. Therefre, I d believe that my family will be a quali- fied hst family. If given the chance, I will invite ur guest t jin in my family get-tgether. Besides, we can shw him arund the city, getting him t knw mre abut the real life and culture in China. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnsider my applicatin. I am lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs,Li Hua
5.询问信【模板助力】Dear...,I am 　　    (自我介绍). I am writing t see if it is pssible fr yu t pr- vide me with infrmatin abut 　　    (要询问的内容).First f all, 　　    (第一个问题)? Secndly, 　　    (第二个问题)? Third- ly, 　　    (第三个问题)?I wuld als like t inquire 　　    (将最重要的问题单独成段). Culd
yu be s kind as t send me sme relevant bklets n the abve-men- tined aspects?Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【好题热线】 假定你是李华, 计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
答案    One pssible versin:Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan t g t Britain t attend a summer schl during the vacatin. I've seen yur ad, and I'd like t knw sme- thing mre abut yur six-week English curse. First, when will the curse start and hw many class hurs are there per week? Besides, I wish there wuld nt be t many students in a class. I'd als like t knw hw much
I have t pay fr the curse and whether accmmdatin is included. Wuld there be a hst family r a university drmitry? I am lking fr- ward t yur early reply.Yurs faithfully,Li Hua
6.请求信【模板助力】(1)Dear...,I am writing t ask a favr frm yu. I wnder if yu culd spare sme time t help wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnsider cnsideratin/accunt.Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
(2)Dear...,I am writing t yu in the hpe wuld be grateful if yu start with,,, yu fr yur time!Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【好题热线】(2018湖南邵阳高三二模) 假定你是李华,上周日在地铁站捡到了英国人Steven的护照。请你用英语给你市某英文报社编辑写一封信,内容包括:1.简述事件过程;2.交代护照相关信息;3.委托报社刊登招领启事。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;                    
答案    One pssible versin:Dear editr,I'm writing t tell yu a piece f urgent infrmatin. I picked up a passprt last Sunday in the subway statin when I was taking a ride hme. There was nbdy arund when I fund it n a waiting bench. The wner f it is Steven wh cmes frm England. I think he must be feeling anxius abut the passprt, but I have n idea hw t return it t him.
S I need yur help. I wish yu culd pst a ntice n yur newspaper t tell him abut the missing passprt, s that he can get it back. I wuld ap- preciate it if yu culd d me the favr.I'm lking frward t yur reply.Yurs,Li Hua
7.道歉信【模板助力】Dear...,I am writing t aplgize fr having caused yu s much truble./ Please accept my sincere aplgy am srry t tell yu that I wn't be able hpe yu will frgive me and please call me as sn as pssible s we
sincerely,Li Hua
【好题热线】(2016课标全国卷Ⅲ) 假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bb约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。
答案    One pssible versin:Dear Bb,I'm srry t say that I cannt g t the bkstre with yu n Friday after- nn. I have just fund that I have t attend an imprtant meeting that af- ternn. I hpe the change will nt cause yu t much truble.Shall we g n Saturday mrning? We can set ut early s that we'll have mre time t read and select bks. If it's cnvenient fr yu, let's meet at
8:30 utside the schl gate. If nt, let me knw what time suits yu best. I shuld be available any time after schl next week.Yurs,Li Hua
8.推荐信【模板助力】Dear...,I am writing t yu am cnfident/cnvinced/sure qualified just as yu expect.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【好题热线】(2018河南高三4月高考适应性考试) 假定你是李华,准备参加在你市举办的“一带一路”国际青少年文化节志愿者招聘活动。活动主办方要求志愿者能够熟练运用英语。请你用 英文写一封信,推荐自己。内容包括:1.你的自荐理由;2.你对活动的理解。
注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。生词提示:一带一路the Belt and RadDear Sir,Thank yu fr reading my letter.               Yurs,Li Hua
答案    One pssible versin:Dear Sir,Thank yu fr reading my letter. I'm writing t apply t be ne f the vl- unteers f the Belt and Rad Internatinal Yuth Culture Festival.Abve all, I'm gd at English and Chinese, which will play an imprtant rle in cmmunicating with freigners. Besides, I am fnd f Chinese cul- ture and have a rich knwledge abut Chinese histry, which enables me t
make a detailed intrductin f ur splendid culture. What's mre, this ac- tivity prvides us an pprtunity t make a better understanding amng students frm arund the wrld. I hpe I will expand my hrizns and im- prve my ability by participating in it. T sum up, I believe I can be a qualified vlunteer.Yurs,Li Hua
9.感谢信【模板助力】Dear...,I am writing t extend my sincere gratitude fr yur assistance yur help, I wuld/wuldn't yu again and I hpe that I will have the pprtunity t repay yur kindness.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【好题热线】 假定你是李华,暑假参加了澳大利亚游学活动,回国后给hst family写一封信表示感谢,要点如下:1.感谢他们一家的照顾;2.分享游学体会;3.询问你寄的礼物(汉语词典)是否收到;4.邀请他们一家来中国游览。
答案    One pssible versin:Dear Helen,I've arrived hme safe and sund. I miss yu s much, and I want t say “thank yu” t yur whle family. It was yur help and kindness that made my stay in yur cuntry s enjyable. The beautiful scenery and rich traditinal Australian culture impressed me a lt. And by cmmunicating with yu as well as ther lcals, I practiced
my ral English s ften that I can speak as fluently as a native speaker nw. What a meaningful and unfrgettable experience I've gt!Have yu received the Chinese dictinary? It's a gift fr yu. I hpe it will be f help t yu in Chinese learning. I'm keenly expecting yu t cme t China sn.Lking frward t yur reply.Yurs,Li Hua
10.祝贺信【模板助力】(1)Dear...,I am s happy t hear I am writing t ffer yu my heartiest cngratulatins n yur great success. ...
I sincerely hpe that yu will have a brighter and mre prmising future./I d hpe yu will achieve mre success. Yurs sincerely,Li Hua(2)Dear...,A very happy new year t yu! May the new year bring yu a bright and prmising
My family, wh are well and happy, jin me in my gd wishes.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【好题热线】假设你是李华,你的外籍好友Jane在你校举办的汉字拼写大赛中获得一 等奖。请你给她写一封信,内容包括:1.向她表示祝贺;2.请她介绍语言学习的经验。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:汉字拼写大赛:Chinese Character Spelling CntestDear Jane,I’m Li Hua.             Yurs,Li Hua
答案    One pssible versin:Dear Jane,I'm Li Hua. On hearing that yu have wn first prize in the Chinese Char- acter Spelling Cntest held by my schl, I felt exceedingly excited! Cn- gratulatins t yu! As yur gd friend, I am prud f yu! Yur prficiency in Chinese char- acters as well as yur deep dive int Chinese culture has left a lasting im-
pressin n me. It came as n surprise that yu wn the cntest. Yu de- serve it! I wnder hw yu are able t master a freign language. I really wish t imprve my English, s culd yu please share yur wn experi- ence and unique views n language learning with me? I will be grateful if yu write me back sn. I am lking frward t yur early reply. Thank yu in advance and wish yu all the best!Yurs,Li Hua
二、通知/便条(一)魔法导航 通知是比较常见的应用文,主要分为口头通知和书面通知。格式包括标题、正文、发通知者和通知日期等。语言侧重口语化,通俗易懂,简洁 明了。时态以一般将来时为主。通知对象用第二人称,通知活动用第三 人称。
(二)写作素材1.May I have yur attentin, please?/Attentin, is ging t be held...(时间、地点)4.All the members are expected sure that are required wh is interested welcme t...
(三)典题示例真题在线(2018课标全国卷Ⅱ) 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Grwing Tgether,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(四)沙场练兵【模板助力】1.口头通知Bys and girls/Friends(称呼),May I have yur attentin, please? I have an annuncement t mak.　　    (事件)is t be held 　　    (时间、地点). 　　    (内容). All the... (人员)are required t 　　    (要求).That's all. Thank yu.
2.书面通知称呼,NOTICE/Ntice(标题)In rder t 　　    (目的), 　　     (事件)will be held 　　    (具体时间、 地点). 　　    (事件大体内容).Thse wh 　　    are required t 　　    (要求).Anyne interested is welcme t cme.(通知发布日期,可省略)Students' Unin (发布通知者)
【好题热线】　　假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将面向留学生开设“中国古诗词咏 唱”选修课。请你写一则通知,内容包括:1.开课意图;2.报名条件和截止时间;3.报名时提交一份个人申请。参考词汇:选修课ptinal curse　中国古诗词咏唱Chinese classic p- ems singing
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Ntice            May 3rd, 2018The Students' Unin
答案    One pssible versin:NticeIn rder t help freign students prmte the understanding f traditinal Chinese culture, ur schl is ging t ffer the ptinal curse named Chinese classic pems singing. Any freign student wh is studying at ur schl and interested in Chi- nese pems is welcme t chse it. It will be a glden pprtunity t en-
jy the beauty f Chinese pems and shw the talent fr singing. If inter- ested, d sign up fr the curse befre next Saturday. Dn't miss it. When yu enter fr the curse, an individual applicatin is required t be handed in, which can be gt either frm the Students' Unin directly r be dwn- laded frm the schl website.May 3rd, 2018The Students' Unin
三、发言稿/演讲稿(一)魔法导航 发言稿在近几年的高考作文中一直占有一席之地,它是一种口语化的应用文。它要求内容完整,要点齐全,语言具有感染力、号召力。一篇完 整发言稿的写作步骤主要包括以下四步: 第一步:Intrducing Yurself/Starting the Meeting/Opening Remarks We haven't met befre,s I'd like want t intrduce myself.I'm frm... 第二步:Preparing the Audience I'll start then mve n ,I'm ging 'll begin by de-
scribing..., then g n I'll end with...第三步:Delivering the MessageI must emphasize/stress/make it 'd like t turn t/I'd like t stress...第四步:Winding UpFinally,I'd like t summarize the main pint...
(二)写作素材开头常用语:(1)The tpic f my speech is...(2)It's nice/wnderful/exciting/inspiring t speak/talk abut...(3)As we all 's knwn t us all that...(4)Everyne desires s d I.But what is the secret far as I' m cncerned,there (5) think that...
结尾常用语:(1)T sum up/T cnclude/All in all/In cnclusin/In a wrd...(2)What I want t stress/emphasize is...(3)Persnally,I think it necessary/imprtant/valuable/useful/beneficial/vital /a gd idea fr sb. t...(4)As fr myself,I will/must/shuld...(5)Dear...,let's try ur best/d ur best/spare n effrt/d what we can t...(6)As fr my suggestin,I think...(7)As...,we shuld be aware f the imprtance lng as...
(三)典题示例真题在线 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会 上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。1.回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);2.谈谈收获或感想;3.表达祝愿与期望。
注意:1.词数不少于100;2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear friends,Hw time flies!             Thank yu.
(四)沙场练兵【模板助力】Dear　　    (称呼),I feel very much hnred t have an pprtunity here t make a speech n 　　    (演讲主题).First f all, 　　    (叙述一). Secndly, 　　    (叙述二). When we 　　    (提出要求或条件), we shuld 　　    (提出计划).If everyne 　　    (条件), I am cnvinced that 　　    (结果).Thank yu.
【好题热线】(2018东北三省三校二模) 假定你是高三学生李华,还有一个月就要离开母校,请你写一份毕业典 礼发言稿,内容包括以下要点:1.列举高中生活的难忘片段(如学习、活动等);2.表达感激之情及美好祝愿。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当发挥,以使内容连贯。
Dear friends,                        　　 Thank yu.Frm Li Hua.
答案    One pssible versin:Dear friends, Hw time flies! It's abut a mnth befre we graduate frm this schl and we'll g t separate universities. It is my great hnr t stand here and de- liver a speech. Lking back n the ld days, I can still remember we were quite curius abut everything when we first met. And I like the spring uting best, as
we were s delighted expsed t nature. Additinally, what impressed me mst was the time when we were cmpletely absrbed in preparing fr the university entrance examinatin. Tired but determined, we fught fr ur dream withut any hesitatin. Wrds fail me when I want t express my gratitude fr the care and lve frm yu. I sincerely hpe that after graduatin ur friendship will last fr- ever. Thank yu.Frm Li Hua.