12 过渡在写作中的应用-冲刺2020年高考英语书面表达写作导练课件PPT

这是一份12 过渡在写作中的应用-冲刺2020年高考英语书面表达写作导练课件PPT，共22页。PPT课件主要包含了魔法导航，学以致用，实战提能，CONTENTS，我会审题等内容，欢迎下载使用。

一、魔法导航(一)恰当地使用过渡语。过渡语可增强句子之间的连贯性,它主要包括 起连接作用的副词和起过渡作用的插入语等。如:(1)　Meanwhile    (同时), sme beautiful paper-cutting wrks, cllected frm all ver the cuntry, will be exhibited there. (2017课标全国卷Ⅱ)
(2)The increase in the bx-ffice incme can be attributed t several fac- trs. ①　Firstly/T begin with/T start with    (首先),the quality f life has imprved and watching films is regarded as a gd means f entertain- ment. ②　In additin/Besides/What's mre    (另外),filming technlgy has advanced and mre quality films are n ffer. ③　Mrever/Als     (此外),the Internet plays a vital rle.
同学们要熟记下表中在写作中常用的过渡语:
(二)正确使用段落主题句和总结句。段落主题句和总结句可以使文章首尾呼应,在意义上形成一个整体,从而在宏观层次上达到增强句子连 贯性的目的。如: April 12 is memrable because ur class had a meaningful experience n that day.In the mrning,we bicycled t the suburbs t plant trees,talking and laughing all the way.Upn arrival,we began t wrk immediately. Sme were digging hles.Sme were carrying and planting yung trees. Others were watering them.After getting the wrk dne,we put up a bard
reminding peple t prtect the trees.Befre leaving we tk sme phts t recrd ur green actin.Seeing the lines f trees,we all had a sense f achievement.We feel it's ur duty t prtect and beautify ur envirnment.
【评析】 　在段落的开头作者用一个句子点出了段落中心思想,在文章 的结尾再次用一个句子表达了自己参加“绿色行动”的感受,从而升华 了主题。另外,在中间部分作者通过合理运用in the mrning,upn ar- rival,after getting the wrk dne,befre leaving和seeing the lines f trees等 过渡语把活动的整个过程以时间顺序有机地融为一体,很好地体现了文章的连贯性,值得大家学习和模仿。
二、学以致用1.完美文章 在横线上填上合适的过渡语或过渡句使上下句连贯。(1)In rder t study well,we need t play sprts　s that/in rder that    we can keep fit.(2)Many peple suggest that the parents shuld listen mre t their chil- dren,　s　    they will understand them better.(3)I'm glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well.　Here are a few suggestins    .First,it is imprtant t take a
Chinese curse,　as　    yu will be able t learn frm the teacher and practice with yur fellw students.(4)　There are basically tw ways t get wrk dne    .One is t wrk indi- vidually.　In this way    ,peple can decide by themselves when t start wrk and hw t d it.　What's mre    ,they will be able t learn hw t slve prblems n their wn.Peple may　als    chse t wrk in a team, 　where    they can learn frm each ther and help each ther.　Besides/In additin    ,they may wrk ut better ways t get wrk dne by discussin.
2.话题写作【本期话题】　地点介绍【写作微练】　请根据下面的提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。1.我们的祖国位于亚洲的东部,面积约为960万平方千米,人口约为13亿;2.历史悠久,文化丰富;3.有很多闻名世界的旅游资源,如长城、九寨沟等;
4.在过去的三十年发生了巨大变化。注意文章的连贯性。                        
答案    One pssible versin: Lcated in the east f Asia,ur hmeland is a great cuntry with a lng his-try and rich culture.It cvers an area f abut 9,600,000 square kilmeters with a ppulatin f abut 1.3 billin.In additin,there are a lt f wrld- famus turist sites in China,such as the Great Wall,Jiuzhaigu and s n, which attract a gd many visitrs all ver the wrld every year.Much t ur pride,great changes have taken place in ur cuntry in the past 30 years.
三、实战提能 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharn在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提 示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;
2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意:1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
我会联想1.词汇铺路(1)乐意　willing    (2)胜任　be qualified fr    (3)获得二等奖　win prize    (4)建议　advice/suggestin/tip    (5)养成……的习惯　frm the habit f    (6)合理使用　make prper use f    
我会表达Hi,Sharn, This is Li Xia.I learned frm yur pst that yu want t imprve yur Mandarin.                 Li Xia
答案    One pssible versin:Hi,Sharn, This is Li Xia.I learned frm yur pst that yu want t imprve yur Mandarin.I am mre than willing t lend a helping hand t yu.I am cnvinced that I can perfectly live up t yur expectatins.I have such a gd cmmand f Mandarin that nt nly was I elected the bradcaster f the radi statin f ur schl,but I als wn secnd prize in the Man-
darin Cntest held in ur city last year.When it cmes t imprving Man- darin,my advice is that yu shuld listen t Mandarin every day and prac- tice speaking it whenever pssible.Just as the saying ges,practice makes perfect. By the way,I d hpe yu can help me imprve my English writing ability,especially the prper use f vcabulary and sme imprtant grammar.Lking frward t yur reply.Li Xia
美句必背1.Learning that yu want t imprve yur Mandarin,I am mre than happy t lend yu a gd was my Mandarin that I was elected the bradcaster f the radi statin f ur I wish that I culd imprve my writing ability with the help f yu.