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专题 09
读后续写之高分句型--
新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破
目录
非谓语动词...， 主语+谓语...
主语+谓语， 非谓语动词独立主格结构
主语+谓语...， 谓语...， and谓语...
形容词/副词， 主语+谓语...
倒装句
强调句
状语从句
定语从句
随堂练习
句型 一 非谓语...， 主+谓...
（2023届江苏省南京市第一中学高三一模试题）Having finished reading this article, I was praised by Ms.
读完文章后，MS表扬了我。
（湖北省高中名校联盟2022-2023学年高三试题） Taking a deep breath, I pressed their drbell and the frnt dr pened.
（2022年全国新高考I卷） Hearing my wrds, David turned t me tremblingly with tears spilling ut f his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determinatin t finish the crss-cuntry run.
口气，我按响了门铃然后前门打开了。
（河北省衡水市部分学校2022-2023学年高三上学期测试） Wanting t d smething fr her in return, I went t the stre with a small gift several days later and tld her hw grateful I was.
句型 二 主+谓...， 非谓语/独立主格
1.（2020年浙江卷1月读后续写）My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d.
我的心疯狂的跳动，不知道该怎么办。
2.The girl began kicking and swinging, trying t get free f the man’s hld.
女孩开始又踢又晃，试图摆脱这个人的控制。
3.Her brther was lying n his back, trapped under the truck.
她哥哥仰面躺着，被困在卡车下面。
“Shut up!”James yelled ut , his vice quivering with rage.
“闭嘴！” 詹姆斯喊道，他的声音因为愤怒而颤抖。
(湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2022-2023学年高三读后续写) “Ding what is right is nt always easy,” he said, handing me the phne, “I am prud f yu.”
句型 三 主+谓...， 谓语...， and谓语...
They put n perfrmances, chatted, and then said gdbye.
他们表演，聊天，然后道别。
She stpped the truck safely utside the garage and then rushed back t the basement.
她把卡车安全地停在车库外面，然后冲回地下室。
(2022年新高考全国I卷读后续写) “Gd jb, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a tthy grin and said, “That was easy!”
他吸引了我的目光，对我咧嘴一笑，说：“这很容易！”
句型 四 形容词/副词， 主+谓...
(河北省衡水市部分学校2022-2023学年高三上学期测试) Thankfully, this time my husband answered my phne and came t my assistance as sn as pssible.
谢天谢地，这一次我丈夫接了我的电话并且尽快的来帮我了。
2.Eager and excited, she waved her hands, trying t attract thers’attentin.
她即热切又兴奋，挥动双手，想引起别人的注意。
Exhausted and scared, Jane lay dwn near a stne, missing her family.
Jane又累又害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念着她的家人。
Immediately, abslute darkness ruled the frest.
刹那间，森林里一片漆黑。
Afraid that I might hurt the lvely small creature, I autmatically let ut a cry t stp my hrse.
我害怕会伤害到这个可爱的小家伙，于是不由自主地叫了一声，让我的马停下来。
6. Speechless and happy, she held her sn tightly int her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.她高兴地说不出话来，紧紧地抱着儿子，眼里泪水涌动。
句型 五 倒装句
Nt until then did he knw what had happened.
Only then did he knw what had happened.
到那时他才知道发生了什么事。
(2022年浙江卷1月读后续写) I started t wait t leave immediately we arrived at the place, and s did he.
我们一到达便开始着急离开，他也是一样。
句型 六 强调句
（2021年新高考I卷读后续写） It was nt nly the gift, but the lve f the children fr her that mved her very much.
并不是礼物本身，而是孩子们对她的爱让她十分感动。
2.( 湖北省高中名校联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期11月期中试题） It was n that night that I finally realized why my Mm always helped peple with her kind heart.
在那个夜晚我终于意识到我妈妈一直善良的在帮助人们。
3.It was at the crucial mment that an excellent idea ccurred t me.
在这个关键时刻，我急中生智想到了一个好主意。
句型 七 状语从句
1.（2022年浙江卷6月）As they came in my directin, I put n my brightest and happiest smile.
当他们向我这个方向时，我露出了灿烂幸福的笑容。
(江苏省南京市第一中学2022-2023学年高三上学期质量检测) When the by wke up hungry, he was amazed at the wnderful fd made by Jeff, wh was really gd at cking.
当男孩饿着醒来时，他惊讶于杰夫做的美味实物，杰夫真的很擅长做饭。
(2022年浙江卷1月读后续写) He was a little surprised t see me when I stepped int his ward with sme flwers and fruits.
当看到我拿着鲜花和水果走进病房，他有一点点吃惊。
(2022年新高考全国I卷读后续写) As I started t shut encuragement, ther vices arund me tk up the call.
当我开始大声鼓励时，我周围的其他人也跟着喊了起来。
(2022年浙江卷1月读后续写) Thugh I wanted t share my ideas with him fully, I failed t d s fr fear that I wuld hld him back.
虽然我想跟他充分地分享我的想法，但是我没有这样做，因为我害怕会阻碍他。
句型 八 定语从句
（江苏省南京市第一中学2022-2023学年高三上学期质量检测） He held David all the time, trying t give the little by sme warmth, which cnsiderably relieved David’s sadness.
他一直抱着大卫，试图给这个小男孩一些温暖，这大大缓解了大卫的悲伤。
2.（安徽省十校2022-2023学年高三上学期英语试题） Smene surprised David with his very wn Xbx, which f curse made the by verjyed. “I was abut t cry upn seeing the gift,” said David.
有人用自己的Xbx游戏机给了大卫一个惊喜，这当然让男孩欣喜若狂。“看到礼物我都快哭出来了，”大卫说道。
（2021年新高考I卷读后续写） Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key t success.
父亲帮他们调解火，这是成功的关键。
随堂练习
(2023届粤湘鄂名校联盟高三上学期第一次联考英语试题)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Cdy always knew his family was different. While ther kids went t the beach fr summer vacatin, he and his mm visited the wrld’s largest basket, r the wrld’s largest baseball bat, r the wrld’s largest frk. These are real things. And Cdy’s mm had phts f them during thse trips hanging n the wall.
As a little kid, Cdy thught these vacatins were the best ever. But with time ging by, he started t feel embarrassed. When his classmates wuld ask where he’d gne fr vacatin, he’d say, “N place special.”
On a Sunday mrning, his mm said, “I was reading this article abut the wrld’s largest gathering f peple dressed as turkeys. It was in Texas, and it was nly 661 peple! Five times as many peple live in ur twn. I want t hld a similar event here arund Thanksgiving Day, which is a few weeks away.”
“Mm,” Cdy said. “N.”
“Yes!” Mm said. “I just called the newspaper. The annuncement runs tmrrw. The day after Thanksgiving, everyne will meet in the twn square — dressed as turkeys!”
A few days befre Thanksgiving, Cdy and his mm sat dwn fr dinner. Cdy set dwn his frk. “D yu have any idea what the kids at schl think abut the turkey dress-up?”
“N,” Mm said.
“Well, they have a lt t say.”
Mm lked dwn at her fingernails, then lked at Cdy. “I’m afraid it’s t late t call it ff, sweetie.”
At last, it was the day f the great turkey dress-up. But instead f buncing arund the huse as she’d been all week, Mm was sitting n the living-rm flr, shulders slumped (耷拉着). “I can’t believe the DJ is sick,” she said. “What am I ging t d? Music is what makes a festivity festive! I dn’t knw hw t wrk all this stuff.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mm sighed and leaned back against the cuch.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With the happy memries brught back by the phts n the wall, Cdy said, “I’ll d it.”
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】【参考范文】
Mm sighed and leaned back against the cuch. With n music, the turkey dress-up might actually have t be canceled, which meant there wuld be n mre embarrassment. Cdy realized this was his chance. Befre his blurting ut what was in his mind, his eyes fell n the framed phts frm their vacatins ver the years which hung n the wall abve the cuch. Cdy lked at the first ne. He was abut five when they went t Kentucky t see the wrld’s largest baseball bat. His smile was almst as big as the bat while his mm’s smile was even bigger. Suddenly, Cdy changed his mind.
With the happy memries brught back by the phts n the wall, Cdy said, “I’ll d it.” “D what?” asked Mm, sitting up. “I’ll be the DJ. I can figure ut the equipment.” She gave him a big hug. “Cdy, yu’re a lifesaver!” Cdy had the music set up, and the twn square was full f peple dressed as turkeys. Cdy’s mm was decked ut in extra-lng feathers. They all appeared t be having fun. Best f all, his mm was having a blast. He realized he and his mm had always been there fr each ther, trying t make each ther smile.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了科迪和其妈妈的故事。科迪一直都知道他的家庭与众不同，一开始他还觉得这是好事，但是他逐渐觉得很尴尬。他妈妈决定举办一次活动，遇到了困难。后来他在旅游照片的启发下，帮助妈妈解决了困难，举办了活动。与其同时，他也意识到他和他妈妈一直都在身边，努力让彼此微笑，是最重要的事情。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“妈妈叹了口气，靠在沙发上。”可知，第一段可描写科迪妈妈面对此次困难做出的行动以及科迪的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“带着墙上的照片勾起的美好回忆，科迪说“我会做的。””可知，第二段可描写科迪和其妈妈采取的措施以及活动的举办情况。
2.续写线索：科迪态度变化——妈妈计划举办活动——DJ生病——科迪受启发——帮助妈妈
3.词汇激活
行为类
①意识到：realize/aware f/recgnize
②改变：change /cnvert/alter
③使……回忆起：bring back /recall/recllect
情绪类
①尴尬：embarrassment /awkwardness
②积极：have fun /enjy neself/have a gd time
【点睛】[高分句型1] With n music, the turkey dress-up might actually have t be canceled, which meant there wuld be n mre embarrassment.（由连接词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] He was abut five when they went t Kentucky t see the wrld’s largest baseball bat.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3] He realized he and his mm had always been there fr each ther, trying t make each ther smile.（由省略that引导的宾语从句及现在分词作状语）。
专题 09
读后续写之高分句型--
新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破
目录
非谓语动词...， 主语+谓语...
主语+谓语， 非谓语动词独立主格结构
主语+谓语...， 谓语...， and谓语...
形容词/副词， 主语+谓语...
倒装句
强调句
状语从句
定语从句
随堂练习
句型 一 非谓语...， 主+谓...
（2023届江苏省南京市第一中学高三一模试题）Having finished reading this article, I was praised by Ms.
读完文章后，MS表扬了我。
（湖北省高中名校联盟2022-2023学年高三试题） Taking a deep breath, I pressed their drbell and the frnt dr pened.
（2022年全国新高考I卷） Hearing my wrds, David turned t me tremblingly with tears spilling ut f his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determinatin t finish the crss-cuntry run.
口气，我按响了门铃然后前门打开了。
（河北省衡水市部分学校2022-2023学年高三上学期测试） Wanting t d smething fr her in return, I went t the stre with a small gift several days later and tld her hw grateful I was.
句型 二 主+谓...， 非谓语/独立主格
1.（2020年浙江卷1月读后续写）My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d.
我的心疯狂的跳动，不知道该怎么办。
2.The girl began kicking and swinging, trying t get free f the man’s hld.
女孩开始又踢又晃，试图摆脱这个人的控制。
3.Her brther was lying n his back, trapped under the truck.
她哥哥仰面躺着，被困在卡车下面。
“Shut up!”James yelled ut , his vice quivering with rage.
“闭嘴！” 詹姆斯喊道，他的声音因为愤怒而颤抖。
(湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2022-2023学年高三读后续写) “Ding what is right is nt always easy,” he said, handing me the phne, “I am prud f yu.”
句型 三 主+谓...， 谓语...， and谓语...
They put n perfrmances, chatted, and then said gdbye.
他们表演，聊天，然后道别。
She stpped the truck safely utside the garage and then rushed back t the basement.
她把卡车安全地停在车库外面，然后冲回地下室。
(2022年新高考全国I卷读后续写) “Gd jb, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a tthy grin and said, “That was easy!”
他吸引了我的目光，对我咧嘴一笑，说：“这很容易！”
句型 四 形容词/副词， 主+谓...
(河北省衡水市部分学校2022-2023学年高三上学期测试) Thankfully, this time my husband answered my phne and came t my assistance as sn as pssible.
谢天谢地，这一次我丈夫接了我的电话并且尽快的来帮我了。
2.Eager and excited, she waved her hands, trying t attract thers’attentin.
她即热切又兴奋，挥动双手，想引起别人的注意。
Exhausted and scared, Jane lay dwn near a stne, missing her family.
Jane又累又害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念着她的家人。
Immediately, abslute darkness ruled the frest.
刹那间，森林里一片漆黑。
Afraid that I might hurt the lvely small creature, I autmatically let ut a cry t stp my hrse.
我害怕会伤害到这个可爱的小家伙，于是不由自主地叫了一声，让我的马停下来。
6. Speechless and happy, she held her sn tightly int her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.她高兴地说不出话来，紧紧地抱着儿子，眼里泪水涌动。
句型 五 倒装句
Nt until then did he knw what had happened.
Only then did he knw what had happened.
到那时他才知道发生了什么事。
(2022年浙江卷1月读后续写) I started t wait t leave immediately we arrived at the place, and s did he.
我们一到达便开始着急离开，他也是一样。
句型 六 强调句
（2021年新高考I卷读后续写） It was nt nly the gift, but the lve f the children fr her that mved her very much.
并不是礼物本身，而是孩子们对她的爱让她十分感动。
2.( 湖北省高中名校联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期11月期中试题） It was n that night that I finally realized why my Mm always helped peple with her kind heart.
在那个夜晚我终于意识到我妈妈一直善良的在帮助人们。
3.It was at the crucial mment that an excellent idea ccurred t me.
在这个关键时刻，我急中生智想到了一个好主意。
句型 七 状语从句
1.（2022年浙江卷6月）As they came in my directin, I put n my brightest and happiest smile.
当他们向我这个方向时，我露出了灿烂幸福的笑容。
(江苏省南京市第一中学2022-2023学年高三上学期质量检测) When the by wke up hungry, he was amazed at the wnderful fd made by Jeff, wh was really gd at cking.
当男孩饿着醒来时，他惊讶于杰夫做的美味实物，杰夫真的很擅长做饭。
(2022年浙江卷1月读后续写) He was a little surprised t see me when I stepped int his ward with sme flwers and fruits.
当看到我拿着鲜花和水果走进病房，他有一点点吃惊。
(2022年新高考全国I卷读后续写) As I started t shut encuragement, ther vices arund me tk up the call.
当我开始大声鼓励时，我周围的其他人也跟着喊了起来。
(2022年浙江卷1月读后续写) Thugh I wanted t share my ideas with him fully, I failed t d s fr fear that I wuld hld him back.
虽然我想跟他充分地分享我的想法，但是我没有这样做，因为我害怕会阻碍他。
句型 八 定语从句
（江苏省南京市第一中学2022-2023学年高三上学期质量检测） He held David all the time, trying t give the little by sme warmth, which cnsiderably relieved David’s sadness.
他一直抱着大卫，试图给这个小男孩一些温暖，这大大缓解了大卫的悲伤。
2.（安徽省十校2022-2023学年高三上学期英语试题） Smene surprised David with his very wn Xbx, which f curse made the by verjyed. “I was abut t cry upn seeing the gift,” said David.
有人用自己的Xbx游戏机给了大卫一个惊喜，这当然让男孩欣喜若狂。“看到礼物我都快哭出来了，”大卫说道。
（2021年新高考I卷读后续写） Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key t success.
父亲帮他们调解火，这是成功的关键。
随堂练习
(2023届粤湘鄂名校联盟高三上学期第一次联考英语试题)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Cdy always knew his family was different. While ther kids went t the beach fr summer vacatin, he and his mm visited the wrld’s largest basket, r the wrld’s largest baseball bat, r the wrld’s largest frk. These are real things. And Cdy’s mm had phts f them during thse trips hanging n the wall.
As a little kid, Cdy thught these vacatins were the best ever. But with time ging by, he started t feel embarrassed. When his classmates wuld ask where he’d gne fr vacatin, he’d say, “N place special.”
On a Sunday mrning, his mm said, “I was reading this article abut the wrld’s largest gathering f peple dressed as turkeys. It was in Texas, and it was nly 661 peple! Five times as many peple live in ur twn. I want t hld a similar event here arund Thanksgiving Day, which is a few weeks away.”
“Mm,” Cdy said. “N.”
“Yes!” Mm said. “I just called the newspaper. The annuncement runs tmrrw. The day after Thanksgiving, everyne will meet in the twn square — dressed as turkeys!”
A few days befre Thanksgiving, Cdy and his mm sat dwn fr dinner. Cdy set dwn his frk. “D yu have any idea what the kids at schl think abut the turkey dress-up?”
“N,” Mm said.
“Well, they have a lt t say.”
Mm lked dwn at her fingernails, then lked at Cdy. “I’m afraid it’s t late t call it ff, sweetie.”
At last, it was the day f the great turkey dress-up. But instead f buncing arund the huse as she’d been all week, Mm was sitting n the living-rm flr, shulders slumped (耷拉着). “I can’t believe the DJ is sick,” she said. “What am I ging t d? Music is what makes a festivity festive! I dn’t knw hw t wrk all this stuff.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mm sighed and leaned back against the cuch.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With the happy memries brught back by the phts n the wall, Cdy said, “I’ll d it.”
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】【参考范文】
Mm sighed and leaned back against the cuch. With n music, the turkey dress-up might actually have t be canceled, which meant there wuld be n mre embarrassment. Cdy realized this was his chance. Befre his blurting ut what was in his mind, his eyes fell n the framed phts frm their vacatins ver the years which hung n the wall abve the cuch. Cdy lked at the first ne. He was abut five when they went t Kentucky t see the wrld’s largest baseball bat. His smile was almst as big as the bat while his mm’s smile was even bigger. Suddenly, Cdy changed his mind.
With the happy memries brught back by the phts n the wall, Cdy said, “I’ll d it.” “D what?” asked Mm, sitting up. “I’ll be the DJ. I can figure ut the equipment.” She gave him a big hug. “Cdy, yu’re a lifesaver!” Cdy had the music set up, and the twn square was full f peple dressed as turkeys. Cdy’s mm was decked ut in extra-lng feathers. They all appeared t be having fun. Best f all, his mm was having a blast. He realized he and his mm had always been there fr each ther, trying t make each ther smile.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了科迪和其妈妈的故事。科迪一直都知道他的家庭与众不同，一开始他还觉得这是好事，但是他逐渐觉得很尴尬。他妈妈决定举办一次活动，遇到了困难。后来他在旅游照片的启发下，帮助妈妈解决了困难，举办了活动。与其同时，他也意识到他和他妈妈一直都在身边，努力让彼此微笑，是最重要的事情。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“妈妈叹了口气，靠在沙发上。”可知，第一段可描写科迪妈妈面对此次困难做出的行动以及科迪的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“带着墙上的照片勾起的美好回忆，科迪说“我会做的。””可知，第二段可描写科迪和其妈妈采取的措施以及活动的举办情况。
2.续写线索：科迪态度变化——妈妈计划举办活动——DJ生病——科迪受启发——帮助妈妈
3.词汇激活
行为类
①意识到：realize/aware f/recgnize
②改变：change /cnvert/alter
③使……回忆起：bring back /recall/recllect
情绪类
①尴尬：embarrassment /awkwardness
②积极：have fun /enjy neself/have a gd time
【点睛】[高分句型1] With n music, the turkey dress-up might actually have t be canceled, which meant there wuld be n mre embarrassment.（由连接词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] He was abut five when they went t Kentucky t see the wrld’s largest baseball bat.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3] He realized he and his mm had always been there fr each ther, trying t make each ther smile.（由省略that引导的宾语从句及现在分词作状语）。
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