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    Part I
    1)人物动作的画面定格
    例文1:母女情深的画面
    They std there fr a mment, side by side, waiting fr the rushing hliday current and fr their place in it. Then the daughter glanced ver and mmentarily regarded her mther. And slwly, almst reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustmed affectin arund her mther’s shulders and gently guided her back int the deluge.
    她们并肩站在那里,等待着节日的浪潮,等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。然后女儿扫了一眼,立刻注视着她的母亲。慢慢地,几乎是不情愿地,带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲的肩膀上,轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。
    例文2:妈妈收到儿子的礼物后感动的场景
    His hard wrk paid ff! Hlding the sda tin firmly, Reuben rushed fr the shp t buy the brch. The mment he gt the beautiful brch, he burst thrugh the frnt dr and placed it in Dra’s hand. Never had Dra received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her sn tightly int her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
    他的努力得到了回报!鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐,冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针,就冲进前门,把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来,紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里,眼泪涌了出来。
    例文3. Butterfly 重新变回蝴蝶后和爱人朋友愉快享受生活的画面
    The butterfly cleaned her tears n the face,“N.” Gd felt a bit relieved and said,“Tmrrw yu can becme human again.” But she shk her head and said, “N, I want t be a butterfly fr the rest f my life...” Then the butterfly wuld stay tgether with her lver frever. On the tp f the muntain, she seemed t enjy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.
    蝴蝶擦干了脸上的眼泪,说,“不。”上帝松了一口气,说。“明天你就可以变回人类了。”但她摇了摇头说,“不,我想做一辈子蝴蝶... ”然后蝴蝶就会永远和她的爱人在一起。在山顶上,她似乎和他们一起快乐地享受着日出和日落。
    2)特殊寓意的写景画面定格
    例文1.黎明到来的画面
    The sky was a billin pure eyes f light and the grass green underft, it was as if night and day had becme ne beautiful mment. Dawn had cme.
    天空像是十亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起,脚下是青草,仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。
    例文2. 黎明到来的画面
    Dawn sent shimmering rays ver the placid cean, bestwing a glden path frm the shre t the hrizn.
    黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线,留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。
    例文3. 日落时的画面
    The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded thrugh it, the sunset like range paint n a blue canvas.
    当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时,日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。
    例文4. 日落时的画面
    The lingering sunlight was bliterated by the rapidly falling night,resembling a pitch-black curtain draped ver the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除,就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。
    例文5. 描写夜空的画面
    The mn under siege by stars seemed t lighten the night bringing frth stars that shne and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness cnsumed everything.
    被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜,带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。
    例文6. 特殊寓意
    Lking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew befre. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the sun's rays. My cnsciusness ebbed away with the heat. I tk a few blinks befre I landed with a thud.
    抬头一看,我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光,发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼,然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中,恢复了知觉。(特殊寓意)
    例文7. 神话般美丽的夜空画面
    Dtted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality.
    缀满星光的天空,午夜的蓝色,给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。
    例文8. 雨后清新的画面
    Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet grund is cld under ft. A dense earthly sweet smell rises frm the grund, envelping everything within its sft embrace.
    潮湿的地面走起来很冷,被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起,把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
    例文9. 雨水来临的画面
    The rain drummed n the windw, bidding farewell t the last beam f sunlight.
    雨水打着窗户,向最后一缕阳光告别。
    例文10. 描写落叶的画面
    The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strlled dwn the street. Occasinally, ne wuld fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it t the grund.
    我在街上漫步时,树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔,有叶子会从我身边掉下来,轻轻地摇晃,缓缓落到到地面。
    Part II:对话结尾
    01. 点明父子团聚后的喜悦心情
    Chester said his father tld him he had tried t search fr him and his brther, but bth brthers had changed their last names. “He des remember me and my lder brther and he tld me that he’s been lking fr us ever since we lst cntact,” he said. Chester said his brther has since flwn t Clmbia t be reunited with Urrea as well. When asked hw the reunin with his father will change his life, Chester said, “I gt family everywhere, s it might lead t many mre trips nw.”
    Chester 说他父亲告诉他,他曾试图寻找他和他哥哥,但两兄弟都改了姓。“他确实记得我和我哥哥,他告诉我,自从我们失去联系以来,他一直在找我们,”他说。Chester 说他哥哥也飞去哥伦比亚和 Urrea 团聚了。当被问及与父亲的团聚会如何改变他的生活时,Chester 说,“我的家人无处不在,所以现在可能会有更多的出行。”
    02. 进一步深主题:动物是最忠诚的,他们也需要关爱
    What was mst fascinating abut the reunin is that Shavi als mves thers. Nina’s family had mved t a bigger apartment. “I’ve heard amazing stries abut dgs’ lyalty, but I never imagined this srt f thing wuld ever happen t me. Even nw, I can hardly believe this dg traveled such a lng distance t find us,” said Nina,“I wuld never give this kind f friend away again. I never grw tired f repeating this—animals are the mst devted and lving creatures. They need ur lve and care.”
    这次重聚最吸引人的地方在于,沙维也打动了其他人。妮娜的家人搬到了一个更大的公寓。”我听说过狗狗忠心耿耿的故事,但我从没想过这种事会发生在我身上。即使是现在,我也很难相信这只狗走了这么远的路来找我们,”妮娜说,“我再也不会放弃这样的朋友了。我总是不厌其烦地重复这句话——动物是最忠诚和最可爱的生物。他们需要我们的爱和关心。”
    03. 凸显人物美德
    Her husband spke t the directr f Heightvale, Dlres Hawrth. Sn she ffered him a jb wrking fr the cmpany. She said,“He just had a brilliant wrking attitude and is definitely the type f emplyee we are lking fr. I was tld, ‘If he des this fr free, imagine his jbs if he was being paid. ’I met him and he was a lvely and plite yung man and he has already started wrking fr us.”
    她丈夫和 Heightvale 的主管 Dlres Hawrth 谈过了。很快她就给了他一份为公司工作的工作。她说,“他的工作态度很好,绝对是我们要找的那种员工。有人告诉我,‘如果他这么做是免费的,想象一下他的工作是有报酬的。’我见过他,他是个可爱又有礼貌的年轻人,他已经开始为我们工作了。”
    04. 表明生活态度
    They hung all the things back t the wall. Jack asked Paisley, “Are yu really willing t lead a tugh life with me?” She patted away the ashes n hands and lked at the walls with lads f stuff n them satisfactrily, saying,“Yes! Fr me,it is nt a suffering t live.”
    他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。杰克问佩斯利: “你真的愿意和我一起过艰难的生活吗? ”她拍拍手上的骨灰,满意地看着墙上挂满东西的墙,说: “是的!对我来说,活着不是一种痛苦。”
    Part III:主题升华
    01. (母爱的深远影响)
    Everyne has ne persn they lk up t as a rle mdel. T me there is nne ther than my mm. She has beauty, brains, and ne f the best hearts I knw. Withut her in my life, I wuld have n idea whether I can be a famus dancer. Smeday, when I am lder and have children f my wn, I hpe I can be just as great a parent as my mm. 每个人都有一个榜样。对我来说,不是别人,正是我妈妈。她很漂亮,很聪明,而且是我认识的最用心的人之一。如果没有她,我不知道我能不能成为一个著名的舞者。有一天,当我长大了,有了自己的孩子,我希望我能成为像我妈妈一样伟大的父(母)亲。
    02. (表达自己的价值观)
    I am extremely unhappy abut it. I think mney desn’t equal happiness. And free life style als desn’t equal happiness. The real happiness is that everyne lves each ther, and des everything useful fr ur sciety. Mst f my classmates supprt me. But sme f them think mney is everything. In my pinin, mney can’t take the place f everything, such as yur life, yur time and yur happiness.
    我对此非常不高兴。我觉得金钱不等于幸福。自由的生活方式也不等于幸福。真正的幸福是每个人都彼此相爱,为我们的社会做一切有益的事情。大多数同学都支持我。但有些人认为钱就是一切。在我看来,金钱不能代替一切,比如你的生活,你的时间和你的幸福。
    03. (借用名言警句来升华主题)
    “Tw reasns accunt fr that yu wn,” the teacher answered. “First, yu’ve almst mastered ne f the mst difficult thrws in all f jud. Secnd, the nly knwn defense fr that mve is fr yur ppnent t grab yur left arm. It is yur biggest weakness that makes yu win the match. As a prverb says, ‘Every cin has tw sides.’ Making full use f yur strength is yur achievement. Please remember that in n case will yu give up especially in truble. Gd is fair t everyne.”“有两个原因可以解释为什么你赢了,”老师回答。“首先,你几乎掌握了柔道中最难的一个动作。其次,这个动作唯一已知的防御方法,就是让你的对手抓住你的左臂。这是你最大的弱点,让你赢得比赛。正如谚语所说,‘每枚硬币都有两面。’充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。请记住,在任何情况下,你都不要放弃,尤其是遇到麻烦的时候。上帝对每个人都是公平的。”
    Part VI:结尾留白
    结尾留白,又叫做结尾留白,在写作中的作用就是留下让读者思考参与情景的空间,是一种加深主题的手法,给了想象空间又在前文中有所提示。
    例文1. 结尾句让读者想象主人公结束了伤心岁月之后的情境。
    While she wrapped them, I tk a deep breath and asked Jy, “D yu have dinner plans?” I explained that I’d like t wait a bit befre I went back t the hspital – t give Grace and her husband sme time alne with baby. “Wuld yu be interested in jining me in a bite t eat?” I asked. “I’d lve t,” she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamnds. And, this was the beginning f the end t my mnths f heartbreak fllwing Betsy’s death.当她把它们包起来的时候,我深吸了一口气,问 Jy:“你晚餐有安排吗? ”我解释说我想等一会儿再回医院——让Grace 和她丈夫有时间单独和孩子在一起。“你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗? ”我问。“我很乐意,”她回答,她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。而且,这是我在 Betsy 死后几个月心碎的结束的开始。
    例文2. 结尾句引领读者想象乞丐得到珍珠后的所想、所为。
    The beggar hesitated fr a mment, then he decided t pen it. He declared alud, “Wh cares? He wanted me t have it anyway. I might as well enjy it nw.” With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but t his surprise, there was n hard rck candy inside. Instead, int his fingers fell a shiny white pearl wrth thusands f dllars.
    乞丐犹豫了一会儿,然后决定打开它。他大声宣布: “谁在乎呢?不管怎样,他还是想让我拥有它。我还不如现在就享受呢。”说着,他打开了白色的纸巾,但令他惊讶的是,里面没有硬糖。相反,一颗价值数千美元的闪亮的白珍珠掉进了他的手指里。
    Part V:首尾呼应
    01. 开头:I had an interesting childhd. It was filled with suprises and amusements, all because f my mther--lving, sweet, yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange faimly trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.
    结尾:Despite mm's being absent-minded and frgetful, she was still a kind and nice mm. 尽管妈妈总是心不在焉,健忘,但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。(2017年浙江高考题)
    02. 开头:It was summer and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.
    结尾:Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerus vacatin befre. The special trip t the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind. 我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。那次去西部的特别旅行,深深地印在我的脑海里。(2018年浙江高考题 )
    03. 开头:A funny thing happened t Arthur when he was n the way t wrk ne day.
    结尾:What a funny day. Arthur culdn't stp laughing whenever he lked back n this hilarius experience. 多么有趣的一天啊,每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历,他就忍不住笑个不停。(2016年浙江高考题 )
    04. 原文结尾:
    A few minutes later, the helicpter arrived. As we were lifted int the air, we saw the stubbrn bear was already heading back t ur camp. When Elli and I gt hme and develped ur pictures, we nticed this bear had brken an imprtant tth. Like humans, plar bears feel pain, have emtins, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned ur lessn: beware f a bear with a tthache. (2020年浙江高考卷)
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    Part III
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    Part VI
    结尾留白
    Part V
    首尾呼应
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