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【2024年中考英语真题满分作文精选】热点话题01 个人情况类（练习，原卷版+解析版）
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（一）
（2024·江苏苏州·中考真题）你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Stry（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。
选择一：以Smetimes peple surprise us为题，内容包括：
1．你对这句话的理解；
2．结合实际生活举例说明；
3．你得到的启发。
选择二：以Truble is a friend为题，内容包括：
1．你对这句话的理解；
2．结合实际生活举例说明；
3．你得到的启发。
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；
3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；
4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title: ____________
After reading Auggie’s stry, I’m really tuched. _________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Title: Truble is a friend
After reading Auggie’s stry, I’m really tuched. And I think truble is a friend.
The meaning f this sentence is that althugh truble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is als a reminder t be mre careful and avid bigger prblems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big truble fr me, because it lwered my English scre. But thanks t the help f my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hur studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar imprved greatly.
In my pinin, truble is bad, but it smetimes makes us better. It reminds us nt t give up when facing difficulties and t face them bravely.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解；
第二步，结合实际生活举例说明；
第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。
[亮点词汇]
① thanks t多亏
② help sb d sth帮助某人做某事
③ in my pinin在我看来
[高分句型]
①The meaning f this sentence is that althugh truble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is als a reminder t be mre careful and avid bigger prblems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句）
②That was a big truble fr me, because it lwered my English scre.（原因状语从句）
（二）
（2024·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。
（1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。
（2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。
（3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。
（4）王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：盲人 blind man
徘徊 wander
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
It is tw weeks since yu wrte t me. I’m writing t tell yu a stry abut my classmate Wang Hng.
Last Thursday,_____________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What d yu think f the stry? Waiting fr yur reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
It is tw weeks since yu wrte t me. I’m writing t tell yu a stry abut my classmate Wang Hng.
Last Thursday, Wang Hng saw an elderly blind man wandering arund the street crner n her way hme. Wang Hng ffered t help him crss the rad after cmmunicating with the ld man. When they crssed the rad, the drivers n the rad stpped their cars and waited patiently. Wang Hng tk the ld man acrss the rad and said gdbye t him. I think Wang Hng is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl. I shuld learn frm her and try my best t help thers.
What d yu think f the stry? Waiting fr yur reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍王红所做的好事；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①n her way hme 在她回家的路上
②ffer t d sth 主动提出做某事
③cmmunicate with 沟通
④learn frm 向某人学习
[高分句型]
①When they crssed the rad, the drivers n the rad stpped their cars and waited patiently.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② I think Wang Hng is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl.（省略that的宾语从句）
（三）
（2024·四川达州·中考真题）赠人玫瑰手有余香。帮助别人自己会感到快乐，得到别人的帮助更是一种幸运。假设你校正举办以“我身边的好人好事”为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下内容提示，以“An Unfrgettable Day”为题用英语写一篇记叙文。
内容提示：1. 时间 2. 地点 3. 人物 4. 事件 5. 感受
写作要求：1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥一至两点。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
3. 不少于90词（题目不计入总词数）。
An Unfrgettable Day
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
An Unfrgettable Day
As the saying ges, “Rses given, fragrance in hand.” In ur daily life, we will meet with a lt f truble. S it is necessary fr us t help thse wh are in truble. Here’s my unfrgettable day f helping thers.
My classmate Jasn was ill last week. He had t be in hspital, s I tried my best t help him. Yesterday was Saturday, and my classmates and I went t see him tgether. We gave him sme flwers, because fresh and beautiful flwers culd make him feel gd and happy. What’s mre, Jasn asked me sme questins abut study and I brught him my ntebks. I was patient t answer his questins all the time. I hpe he can be better sn.
I like helping thers. Firstly, helping thers makes me happy. Secndly, helping thers is als helping myself. All in all, a helpful persn is welcmed everywhere. I will try my best t help thers in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要求以“An Unfrgettable Day”为题，根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍那天的经历；
第三步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
① in truble 处困难中
② What’s mre 此外
③ all the time 一直
[高分句型]
① S it is necessary fr us t help thse wh are in truble.（wh引导的定语从句）
②We gave him sme flwers, because fresh and beautiful flwers culd make him feel gd and happy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
（四）
（2024·四川自贡·中考真题）学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Persn Wh Changes Me a Lt”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括：
1. 人物简介(外貌，性格等)；
2. 他/她改变你的事件。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 短文标题已写好。
A Persn Wh Changes Me a Lt
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A Persn Wh Changes Me a Lt
In the past three years, my English teacher Mrs Xu have played an imprtant rle in my life. She changes me a lt.
She is f medium height. She always has a smile n her face. She is kind t us. When I was a seventh-grade student, I was weak in English. I was afraid f speaking English in frnt f the classmates. Our schl held an English speech cmpetitin. She encuraged me t take part in it and gave me sme advice n hw t learn English well. She gave me the strength t vercme the difficulty. With her help, I finished the speech successfully and wn the third place. Frm then n, I became interested in English and made great prgress.
Thank t her, I realize that I shuld face the difficulties bravely. As lng as I wrk hard, I will succeed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍改变自己的人是谁；
第二步，介绍她对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①play a rle in在……中扮演角色
②be f medium height中等身材
③be weak in不擅长
④be afraid f ding sth害怕做某事
⑤take part in参加
[高分句型]
①She encuraged me t take part in it and gave me sme advice n hw t learn English well.（疑问词+动词不定式结构）
②As lng as I wrk hard, I will succeed.（条件状语从句）
（五）
（2024·吉林长春·中考真题）每个人都有自己的闪光点，请以“My Shining Pint”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求：
（1）讲述一个自己的故事；
（2）你的感悟；
（3）适当增加细节，行文连贯；
（4）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Shining Pint
I meet many excellent peple every day and at the same time I als find myself really gd. I can see the wrld with kind eyes. I think I dn’t like t cmplain. I find it imprtant t have a psitive attitude.
Last mnth, I was chsen t play a rle in an English shw. It was difficult fr me t memrize the lines in a shrt time. Hwever, I regarded it as a challenge, which was als a gd chance t imprve my English. S I made an effrt t practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise.
In fact, it is my psitive attitude that brings ut the best in me all the time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：以“My Shining Pint”为题并结合提示进行写作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，简要说明自己有哪些闪光点；
第二步，讲述一个自己的故事；
第三步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②play a rle in在……中扮演角色
③regard…as把……当作
[高分句型]
①Hwever, I regarded it as a challenge, which was als a gd chance t imprve my English. (which引导的定语从句)
②In fact, it is my psitive attitude that brings ut the best in me all the time. (强调句)
（六）
（2024·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）假设你是李华，今年端午节期间，你学习了包粽子（zngzi）。请结合以下表格内容提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件，分享你学习包粽子的经历。
要求：
1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；
2. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
Hw are yu? I’d like t share an interesting experience with yu. During the Dragn Bat Festival this year, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Hw are yu? I’d like t share an interesting experience with yu. During the Dragn Bat Festival this year, I learned hw t make zngzi.
T make zngzi, we needed t have rice, beans, dates, sme leaves, sme strings and a pt. Hw did we make zngzi? First, we washed the rice. Then, we kept it in the water fr hurs. Next, we made a cne shape with the leaves. After that, we put the rice, beans and dates int the cne. And then, we tied zngzi with strings. Finally, we biled zngzi ver lw heat in a pt. Very sn, we enjyed the delicius zngzi.
It was really easy and interesting t make zngzi, s yu can try t make zngzi by yurself. And dn’t frget t share yur experience with me.
Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接信件开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点逐步介绍包粽子的过程，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发学习包粽子的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①put sth int把某物放进
②tie sth with sth用某物绑某物
[高分句型]
It was really easy and interesting t make zngzi, s yu can try t make zngzi by yurself.（s连接两个并列分句）
（七）
（2024·吉林·中考真题）当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking fr Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性；
（2）寻求帮助的益处；
（3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例；
（4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
（2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Asking fr Help
There might be sme prblems r wrries in life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Asking fr Help
There might be sme prblems r wrries in life. When we encunter prblems r trubles that we cannt slve urselves, we shuld learn t actively seek help frm thers. It’s imprtant t ask fr help, and it will help yu relax.
Last year, my English grammar was weak. Because f this prblem, my English was nt gd. S I went t ask my English teacher fr help. With the help f my teacher and my wn effrts, my English scre has gradually imprved. Nw I’ve really learned hw t learn lessns myself.
In a wrd, it is nrmal t have prblems. When we meet prblems, we can ask peple arund us fr help, such as teachers, classmates r parents. In additin, we can als search the Internet fr slutins.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性以及寻求帮助的益处；
第二步，结合生活经历，简述自己寻求帮助的一个事例；
第三步，最后给出提供寻求帮助的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① ask fr help寻求帮助
② because f因为
③ in a wrd总之
[高分句型]
When we encunter prblems r trubles that we cannt slve urselves, we shuld learn t actively seek help frm thers.（when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的定语从句）
（八）
（2024·河南·中考真题）在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying alne r studying with a grup?”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。
写作要求：
1．文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3．词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Studying alne r studying with a grup?
Sme students like t study alne. Others enjy studying with a grup.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Pssible versin 1:
Studying alne r studying with a grup?
Sme students like t study alne. Others enjy studying with a grup. As fr me, I like studying alne better.
Firstly, studying alne helps me learn t slve prblems n my wn. Mst f the time, I need t think hard abut them all by myself. S my thinking ability is imprved at the same time. Secndly, when I study alne, I can keep my mind n what I’m ding. With a clear head, I am able t finish my hmewrk quickly. In this way, I will gradually develp a gd learning habit.
I think studying alne is really a gd way and it will benefit me a lt in my life.
Pssible versin 2:
Studying alne r studying with a grup?
Sme students like t study alne. Others enjy studying with a grup. As fr me, I prefer t study with a grup.
As the saying ges, “Tw heads are better than ne.” With a grup, I can learn a lt frm thers. Whenever I have sme questins, they are always ready t help. With their help, I becme mre and mre cnfident in my study. Als, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face t face. Thrugh discussin, we can share different ideas and get t knw mre abut each ther.
All in all, I think studying with a grup prvides many chances t imprve myself and helps me t be a better persn.
【详解】以Pssible versin 1为例
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Studying alne r studying with a grup?”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种学习方式；
第二步，具体介绍为什么喜欢这种方式；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①slve prblems n my wn 自己解决问题
②at the same time 同时
③keep my mind n... 集中注意力在……
④develp a gd learning habit 养成良好的学习习惯
[高分句型]
Secndly, when I study alne, I can keep my mind n what I’m ding.（when引导的时间状语从句和宾语从句）
I think studying alne is really a gd way and it will benefit me a lt in my life.（省略that的宾语从句和并列句）
（九）
（2024·云南·中考真题）你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Clse t Nature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟（如郊游、研学、劳动实践等），或谈谈接近自然的好处。
要求：
1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Getting Clse t Nature
Nature is the greatest gift f Gd t human beings. It is the surce f ur life and the mst beautiful scenery in the wrld. It is very imprtant fr us t get clse t nature.
First f all, getting clse t nature can help us t relax. Secnd, getting clse t nature can help us t build a healthy lifestyle. Finally, getting clse t nature can help us t appreciate the beauty f nature.
In cnclusin, getting clse t nature is very imprtant fr us. We shuld take sme time t enjy the beauty f nature and prtect the envirnment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Getting Clse t Nature”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明亲近自然的重要性；
第二步，具体介绍亲近自然的好处；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get clse t nature 亲近自然
②First f all 首先
③In cnclusin 总之
④prtect the envirnment 保护环境
[高分句型]
①It is very imprtant fr us t get clse t nature.（It固定句型）
We shuld take sme time t enjy the beauty f nature and prtect the envirnment.（并列结构）
（十）
（2024·山东滨州·中考真题）生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西，如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1.你珍惜什么；
2.描述你的一次经历；
3.谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。
要求：
1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are many imprtant things that are wrth valuing in ur daily lives. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
There are many imprtant things that are wrth valuing in ur daily lives. Let me tell a stry abut me.
Last summer, I wanted a new bike. But my family was t pr t affrd it. I was very sad and upset. After three weeks, I saw an ld bike standing in frnt f my huse. “I dn’t like the bike. It is t ld.” My mther didn’t say anything after hearing my wrds. At that night, my father tld me my mther cked sme dishes in the restaurant t buy this bike. Althugh it was nt the ne that I wanted, it was my mther’s lve. I regretted what I did and aplgized t my mther.
Frm this experience, we shuld value what we have and the persns wh lve us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出故事；
第二步，分享自己的经历和收获；
第三步，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①t…t太……而不能
②in frnt f在……前面
③aplgize t向……道歉
[高分句型]
①Let me tell a stry abut me.（祈使句）
②Althugh it was nt the ne that I wanted, it was my mther’s lve.（让步状语从句）
（十一）
（2024·吉林长春·中考真题）新西兰某中学现招募志愿者，为其参加“汉语桥”(Chinese Bridge)中文演讲比赛的选手进行线上辅导。假如你是李华，请根据下面要点和要求，用英语写一封不少于40词的自荐信。
要点：
（1）表达意愿；
（2）说明优势。
要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。
Dear Sir r Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m Li Hua and I’d like t be a vlunteer t prvide nline tutring fr the cntestants in the Chinese speech cntest.
I am gd at Chinese and speech, and I can talk freely with freigners. Als, I’m quite utging and warm-hearted. I believe that I’ll be qualified fr this jb.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封自荐信；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍个人信息和来信目的；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，表达“希望得到回复”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① talk freely with 和……自由交谈
② utging and warm-hearted 外向且热心
③ be qualified fr 胜任……
④ Lking frward t 期待……
[高分句型]
I believe that I’ll be qualified fr this jb.（that引导宾语从句）
（十二）
（2024·山东临沂·中考真题）假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。
要求：
1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
Thanks fr yur e-mail. I’m very glad t tell yu smething abut my dream jb. I have dreamed f being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred prfessin and I enjy staying with children. Besides, I want t be a teacher because f the pwer f an example—Miss Li, my English teacher. She ften helps me with my English, and influences me a lt. I still remember that nce I failed in an imprtant English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and tld me sme gd ways t imprve my English. With her help, I made great prgress in English. I have made up my mind t be a gd teacher like her when I grw up. Althugh I knw it is nt easy t be a teacher, I will reduble my effrts t realize my dream.
Best wishes!
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容进行回复，从中提炼写作要点，注意不要有遗漏，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。告知对方为什么选择成为老师；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍选择成为老师的原因及对自己影响最深的人或事；
第三步，书写结语。表明成为老师的决心，并表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad t乐于……
②the pwer f an example榜样的力量
③fail in在……方面失败
④cheer sb. up使某人振作起来
⑤make up ne’s mind t d sth.下定决心做某事
[高分句型]
①I have dreamed f being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred prfessin and I enjy staying with children.（since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
②I have made up my mind t be a gd teacher like her when I grw up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③Althugh I knw it is nt easy t be a teacher, I will reduble my effrts t realize my dream.（althugh引导的让步状语从句）
（十三）
（2024·黑龙江·中考真题）假设你是李雷，请写一篇邀请函。邀请你的好朋友Jhn本周日晚六点来参加你的生日派对，你家住在新华路25号，在派对上你们将会唱歌、做游戏、吃美食。
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分。
Dear Jhn,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Jhn,
I will have a birthday party at 6:00 p.m. this Sunday. Wuld yu like t cme? My hme is at N. 25 n Xinhua Rad. We can sing sngs, play games and enjy sme delicius fd at the party. I believe we’ll have a gd time.
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邀请函；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍这封邀请函的主题，即邀请对方参加生日派对；
第二步，介绍生日派对的时间、地点及活动内容；
第三步，表达个人期望或感想等；
最后，结尾落款，点明写邀请函的人。注意写作格式。
[亮点词汇]
①birthday party生日派对
②enjy sme delicius fd享用美食
③have a gd time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①Wuld yu like t cme?（wuld like t d sth.）
②I believe we’ll have a gd time.（省略that的宾语从句）
（十四）
（2024·贵州·中考真题）成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“The Change Made Me...”（改变让我……）的征文活动。请参考图文信息，积极投稿。
要求：
1. 补全标题；
2. 内容积极向上，不少于80词；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The Change Made Me Better
There are many things in ur life that can help us t be better. In my pinin, I think my changes have made me better.
I used t be weak because f my bad habits. After cmmunicating with my teacher, I ate regularly every day and tk exercise ften, s I am strng nw. What’s mre, I was s careless that I made many mistakes in my exams. My teacher advised me t check my answers carefully and develp gd learning habits.
These gd changes made me feel better and brave enugh t face new challenges.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍自己的经历；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①In my pinin 在我看来
②because f 因为
③What’s mre 此外
[高分句型]
①What’s mre, I was s careless that I made many mistakes in my exams.（引导的结果状语从句）
②These gd changes made me feel better and brave enugh t face new challenges.（并列结构）
（十五）
（2024·安徽·中考真题）假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。
要点:
1. 活动目的；
2. 灭火器的使用方法；
3. 你的体会。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）
Last week, ur schl carried ut Fire Safety Day activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Last week, ur schl carried ut Fire Safety Day activities. The purpse was t draw ur attentin t fire safety. Amng the activities, hw t use a fire extinguisher interested me mst.
When we use a fire extinguisher, we shuld first shake it after picking it up, and then pull ff the safety pin quickly. As sn as we pint the tube at the rt f the fire, we are expected t press dwn n the handle until we put ut the fire. During the perid, we shuld be careful enugh nt t get hurt.
Frm the activities I’ve learned a lt and realized the imprtance f fire safety.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是看图作文；
②时态：一般过去时，一般现在时
③提示：结合图示信息，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍上周学校举行的 “消防安全日”，点明活动的目的；
第二步，具体介绍灭火器的使用方法；
最后，表达个人从这次活动中得到的感悟体会。
[亮点词汇]
①draw ne’s attentin 吸引某人的注意
②pick up 捡起
③pull ff 拔出
④as sn as 一……就……
⑤put ut 扑灭
[高分句型]
①When we use a fire extinguisher, we shuld first shake it after picking it up, and then pull ff the safety pin quickly.（when引导时间状语从句）
②As sn as we pint the tube at the rt f the fire, we are expected t press dwn n the handle until we put ut the fire.（as sn as引导时间状语从句）
Hw I learned
…
Hw I made
Ingredients & Tls
●rice, beans, dates (枣)…
●leaf (leaves), string (细绳), pt
Steps
wash...
keep…in the water fr hurs
make a cne shape (圆锥体) with…
put…int the cne
tie…
bil…ver lw heat…
Hw I felt
…
Studying alne
Studying with a grup
slve prblems n my wn
get help frm thers
keep my mind n schlwrk
share ideas with grup members
Hi Li Ping,
Yu mentined yur dream jb in yur last letter. I’m really interested in it. Why did yu chse it? What/Wh influenced yu t make the decisin? Tell me yur experience, please. I lk frward t hearing frm yu sn!
Eric
Dear Eric,
Thanks fr yur e-mail. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ping
（一）
（2024·江苏苏州·中考真题）你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Stry（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。
选择一：以Smetimes peple surprise us为题，内容包括：
1．你对这句话的理解；
2．结合实际生活举例说明；
3．你得到的启发。
选择二：以Truble is a friend为题，内容包括：
1．你对这句话的理解；
2．结合实际生活举例说明；
3．你得到的启发。
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；
3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；
4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title: ____________
After reading Auggie’s stry, I’m really tuched. _________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Title: Truble is a friend
After reading Auggie’s stry, I’m really tuched. And I think truble is a friend.
The meaning f this sentence is that althugh truble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is als a reminder t be mre careful and avid bigger prblems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big truble fr me, because it lwered my English scre. But thanks t the help f my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hur studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar imprved greatly.
In my pinin, truble is bad, but it smetimes makes us better. It reminds us nt t give up when facing difficulties and t face them bravely.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解；
第二步，结合实际生活举例说明；
第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。
[亮点词汇]
① thanks t多亏
② help sb d sth帮助某人做某事
③ in my pinin在我看来
[高分句型]
①The meaning f this sentence is that althugh truble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is als a reminder t be mre careful and avid bigger prblems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句）
②That was a big truble fr me, because it lwered my English scre.（原因状语从句）
（二）
（2024·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。
（1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。
（2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。
（3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。
（4）王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：盲人 blind man
徘徊 wander
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
It is tw weeks since yu wrte t me. I’m writing t tell yu a stry abut my classmate Wang Hng.
Last Thursday,_____________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What d yu think f the stry? Waiting fr yur reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
It is tw weeks since yu wrte t me. I’m writing t tell yu a stry abut my classmate Wang Hng.
Last Thursday, Wang Hng saw an elderly blind man wandering arund the street crner n her way hme. Wang Hng ffered t help him crss the rad after cmmunicating with the ld man. When they crssed the rad, the drivers n the rad stpped their cars and waited patiently. Wang Hng tk the ld man acrss the rad and said gdbye t him. I think Wang Hng is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl. I shuld learn frm her and try my best t help thers.
What d yu think f the stry? Waiting fr yur reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍王红所做的好事；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①n her way hme 在她回家的路上
②ffer t d sth 主动提出做某事
③cmmunicate with 沟通
④learn frm 向某人学习
[高分句型]
①When they crssed the rad, the drivers n the rad stpped their cars and waited patiently.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② I think Wang Hng is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl.（省略that的宾语从句）
（三）
（2024·四川达州·中考真题）赠人玫瑰手有余香。帮助别人自己会感到快乐，得到别人的帮助更是一种幸运。假设你校正举办以“我身边的好人好事”为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下内容提示，以“An Unfrgettable Day”为题用英语写一篇记叙文。
内容提示：1. 时间 2. 地点 3. 人物 4. 事件 5. 感受
写作要求：1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥一至两点。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
3. 不少于90词（题目不计入总词数）。
An Unfrgettable Day
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
An Unfrgettable Day
As the saying ges, “Rses given, fragrance in hand.” In ur daily life, we will meet with a lt f truble. S it is necessary fr us t help thse wh are in truble. Here’s my unfrgettable day f helping thers.
My classmate Jasn was ill last week. He had t be in hspital, s I tried my best t help him. Yesterday was Saturday, and my classmates and I went t see him tgether. We gave him sme flwers, because fresh and beautiful flwers culd make him feel gd and happy. What’s mre, Jasn asked me sme questins abut study and I brught him my ntebks. I was patient t answer his questins all the time. I hpe he can be better sn.
I like helping thers. Firstly, helping thers makes me happy. Secndly, helping thers is als helping myself. All in all, a helpful persn is welcmed everywhere. I will try my best t help thers in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要求以“An Unfrgettable Day”为题，根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍那天的经历；
第三步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
① in truble 处困难中
② What’s mre 此外
③ all the time 一直
[高分句型]
① S it is necessary fr us t help thse wh are in truble.（wh引导的定语从句）
②We gave him sme flwers, because fresh and beautiful flwers culd make him feel gd and happy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
（四）
（2024·四川自贡·中考真题）学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Persn Wh Changes Me a Lt”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括：
1. 人物简介(外貌，性格等)；
2. 他/她改变你的事件。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 短文标题已写好。
A Persn Wh Changes Me a Lt
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A Persn Wh Changes Me a Lt
In the past three years, my English teacher Mrs Xu have played an imprtant rle in my life. She changes me a lt.
She is f medium height. She always has a smile n her face. She is kind t us. When I was a seventh-grade student, I was weak in English. I was afraid f speaking English in frnt f the classmates. Our schl held an English speech cmpetitin. She encuraged me t take part in it and gave me sme advice n hw t learn English well. She gave me the strength t vercme the difficulty. With her help, I finished the speech successfully and wn the third place. Frm then n, I became interested in English and made great prgress.
Thank t her, I realize that I shuld face the difficulties bravely. As lng as I wrk hard, I will succeed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍改变自己的人是谁；
第二步，介绍她对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①play a rle in在……中扮演角色
②be f medium height中等身材
③be weak in不擅长
④be afraid f ding sth害怕做某事
⑤take part in参加
[高分句型]
①She encuraged me t take part in it and gave me sme advice n hw t learn English well.（疑问词+动词不定式结构）
②As lng as I wrk hard, I will succeed.（条件状语从句）
（五）
（2024·吉林长春·中考真题）每个人都有自己的闪光点，请以“My Shining Pint”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求：
（1）讲述一个自己的故事；
（2）你的感悟；
（3）适当增加细节，行文连贯；
（4）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Shining Pint
I meet many excellent peple every day and at the same time I als find myself really gd. I can see the wrld with kind eyes. I think I dn’t like t cmplain. I find it imprtant t have a psitive attitude.
Last mnth, I was chsen t play a rle in an English shw. It was difficult fr me t memrize the lines in a shrt time. Hwever, I regarded it as a challenge, which was als a gd chance t imprve my English. S I made an effrt t practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise.
In fact, it is my psitive attitude that brings ut the best in me all the time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：以“My Shining Pint”为题并结合提示进行写作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，简要说明自己有哪些闪光点；
第二步，讲述一个自己的故事；
第三步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②play a rle in在……中扮演角色
③regard…as把……当作
[高分句型]
①Hwever, I regarded it as a challenge, which was als a gd chance t imprve my English. (which引导的定语从句)
②In fact, it is my psitive attitude that brings ut the best in me all the time. (强调句)
（六）
（2024·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）假设你是李华，今年端午节期间，你学习了包粽子（zngzi）。请结合以下表格内容提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件，分享你学习包粽子的经历。
要求：
1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；
2. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
Hw are yu? I’d like t share an interesting experience with yu. During the Dragn Bat Festival this year, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Hw are yu? I’d like t share an interesting experience with yu. During the Dragn Bat Festival this year, I learned hw t make zngzi.
T make zngzi, we needed t have rice, beans, dates, sme leaves, sme strings and a pt. Hw did we make zngzi? First, we washed the rice. Then, we kept it in the water fr hurs. Next, we made a cne shape with the leaves. After that, we put the rice, beans and dates int the cne. And then, we tied zngzi with strings. Finally, we biled zngzi ver lw heat in a pt. Very sn, we enjyed the delicius zngzi.
It was really easy and interesting t make zngzi, s yu can try t make zngzi by yurself. And dn’t frget t share yur experience with me.
Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接信件开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点逐步介绍包粽子的过程，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发学习包粽子的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①put sth int把某物放进
②tie sth with sth用某物绑某物
[高分句型]
It was really easy and interesting t make zngzi, s yu can try t make zngzi by yurself.（s连接两个并列分句）
（七）
（2024·吉林·中考真题）当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking fr Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性；
（2）寻求帮助的益处；
（3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例；
（4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
（2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Asking fr Help
There might be sme prblems r wrries in life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Asking fr Help
There might be sme prblems r wrries in life. When we encunter prblems r trubles that we cannt slve urselves, we shuld learn t actively seek help frm thers. It’s imprtant t ask fr help, and it will help yu relax.
Last year, my English grammar was weak. Because f this prblem, my English was nt gd. S I went t ask my English teacher fr help. With the help f my teacher and my wn effrts, my English scre has gradually imprved. Nw I’ve really learned hw t learn lessns myself.
In a wrd, it is nrmal t have prblems. When we meet prblems, we can ask peple arund us fr help, such as teachers, classmates r parents. In additin, we can als search the Internet fr slutins.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性以及寻求帮助的益处；
第二步，结合生活经历，简述自己寻求帮助的一个事例；
第三步，最后给出提供寻求帮助的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① ask fr help寻求帮助
② because f因为
③ in a wrd总之
[高分句型]
When we encunter prblems r trubles that we cannt slve urselves, we shuld learn t actively seek help frm thers.（when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的定语从句）
（八）
（2024·河南·中考真题）在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying alne r studying with a grup?”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。
写作要求：
1．文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3．词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Studying alne r studying with a grup?
Sme students like t study alne. Others enjy studying with a grup.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Pssible versin 1:
Studying alne r studying with a grup?
Sme students like t study alne. Others enjy studying with a grup. As fr me, I like studying alne better.
Firstly, studying alne helps me learn t slve prblems n my wn. Mst f the time, I need t think hard abut them all by myself. S my thinking ability is imprved at the same time. Secndly, when I study alne, I can keep my mind n what I’m ding. With a clear head, I am able t finish my hmewrk quickly. In this way, I will gradually develp a gd learning habit.
I think studying alne is really a gd way and it will benefit me a lt in my life.
Pssible versin 2:
Studying alne r studying with a grup?
Sme students like t study alne. Others enjy studying with a grup. As fr me, I prefer t study with a grup.
As the saying ges, “Tw heads are better than ne.” With a grup, I can learn a lt frm thers. Whenever I have sme questins, they are always ready t help. With their help, I becme mre and mre cnfident in my study. Als, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face t face. Thrugh discussin, we can share different ideas and get t knw mre abut each ther.
All in all, I think studying with a grup prvides many chances t imprve myself and helps me t be a better persn.
【详解】以Pssible versin 1为例
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Studying alne r studying with a grup?”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种学习方式；
第二步，具体介绍为什么喜欢这种方式；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①slve prblems n my wn 自己解决问题
②at the same time 同时
③keep my mind n... 集中注意力在……
④develp a gd learning habit 养成良好的学习习惯
[高分句型]
Secndly, when I study alne, I can keep my mind n what I’m ding.（when引导的时间状语从句和宾语从句）
I think studying alne is really a gd way and it will benefit me a lt in my life.（省略that的宾语从句和并列句）
（九）
（2024·云南·中考真题）你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Clse t Nature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟（如郊游、研学、劳动实践等），或谈谈接近自然的好处。
要求：
1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Getting Clse t Nature
Nature is the greatest gift f Gd t human beings. It is the surce f ur life and the mst beautiful scenery in the wrld. It is very imprtant fr us t get clse t nature.
First f all, getting clse t nature can help us t relax. Secnd, getting clse t nature can help us t build a healthy lifestyle. Finally, getting clse t nature can help us t appreciate the beauty f nature.
In cnclusin, getting clse t nature is very imprtant fr us. We shuld take sme time t enjy the beauty f nature and prtect the envirnment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Getting Clse t Nature”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明亲近自然的重要性；
第二步，具体介绍亲近自然的好处；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get clse t nature 亲近自然
②First f all 首先
③In cnclusin 总之
④prtect the envirnment 保护环境
[高分句型]
①It is very imprtant fr us t get clse t nature.（It固定句型）
We shuld take sme time t enjy the beauty f nature and prtect the envirnment.（并列结构）
（十）
（2024·山东滨州·中考真题）生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西，如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1.你珍惜什么；
2.描述你的一次经历；
3.谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。
要求：
1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are many imprtant things that are wrth valuing in ur daily lives. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
There are many imprtant things that are wrth valuing in ur daily lives. Let me tell a stry abut me.
Last summer, I wanted a new bike. But my family was t pr t affrd it. I was very sad and upset. After three weeks, I saw an ld bike standing in frnt f my huse. “I dn’t like the bike. It is t ld.” My mther didn’t say anything after hearing my wrds. At that night, my father tld me my mther cked sme dishes in the restaurant t buy this bike. Althugh it was nt the ne that I wanted, it was my mther’s lve. I regretted what I did and aplgized t my mther.
Frm this experience, we shuld value what we have and the persns wh lve us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出故事；
第二步，分享自己的经历和收获；
第三步，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①t…t太……而不能
②in frnt f在……前面
③aplgize t向……道歉
[高分句型]
①Let me tell a stry abut me.（祈使句）
②Althugh it was nt the ne that I wanted, it was my mther’s lve.（让步状语从句）
（十一）
（2024·吉林长春·中考真题）新西兰某中学现招募志愿者，为其参加“汉语桥”(Chinese Bridge)中文演讲比赛的选手进行线上辅导。假如你是李华，请根据下面要点和要求，用英语写一封不少于40词的自荐信。
要点：
（1）表达意愿；
（2）说明优势。
要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。
Dear Sir r Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m Li Hua and I’d like t be a vlunteer t prvide nline tutring fr the cntestants in the Chinese speech cntest.
I am gd at Chinese and speech, and I can talk freely with freigners. Als, I’m quite utging and warm-hearted. I believe that I’ll be qualified fr this jb.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封自荐信；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍个人信息和来信目的；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，表达“希望得到回复”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① talk freely with 和……自由交谈
② utging and warm-hearted 外向且热心
③ be qualified fr 胜任……
④ Lking frward t 期待……
[高分句型]
I believe that I’ll be qualified fr this jb.（that引导宾语从句）
（十二）
（2024·山东临沂·中考真题）假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。
要求：
1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
Thanks fr yur e-mail. I’m very glad t tell yu smething abut my dream jb. I have dreamed f being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred prfessin and I enjy staying with children. Besides, I want t be a teacher because f the pwer f an example—Miss Li, my English teacher. She ften helps me with my English, and influences me a lt. I still remember that nce I failed in an imprtant English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and tld me sme gd ways t imprve my English. With her help, I made great prgress in English. I have made up my mind t be a gd teacher like her when I grw up. Althugh I knw it is nt easy t be a teacher, I will reduble my effrts t realize my dream.
Best wishes!
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容进行回复，从中提炼写作要点，注意不要有遗漏，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。告知对方为什么选择成为老师；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍选择成为老师的原因及对自己影响最深的人或事；
第三步，书写结语。表明成为老师的决心，并表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad t乐于……
②the pwer f an example榜样的力量
③fail in在……方面失败
④cheer sb. up使某人振作起来
⑤make up ne’s mind t d sth.下定决心做某事
[高分句型]
①I have dreamed f being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred prfessin and I enjy staying with children.（since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
②I have made up my mind t be a gd teacher like her when I grw up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③Althugh I knw it is nt easy t be a teacher, I will reduble my effrts t realize my dream.（althugh引导的让步状语从句）
（十三）
（2024·黑龙江·中考真题）假设你是李雷，请写一篇邀请函。邀请你的好朋友Jhn本周日晚六点来参加你的生日派对，你家住在新华路25号，在派对上你们将会唱歌、做游戏、吃美食。
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分。
Dear Jhn,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Jhn,
I will have a birthday party at 6:00 p.m. this Sunday. Wuld yu like t cme? My hme is at N. 25 n Xinhua Rad. We can sing sngs, play games and enjy sme delicius fd at the party. I believe we’ll have a gd time.
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邀请函；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍这封邀请函的主题，即邀请对方参加生日派对；
第二步，介绍生日派对的时间、地点及活动内容；
第三步，表达个人期望或感想等；
最后，结尾落款，点明写邀请函的人。注意写作格式。
[亮点词汇]
①birthday party生日派对
②enjy sme delicius fd享用美食
③have a gd time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①Wuld yu like t cme?（wuld like t d sth.）
②I believe we’ll have a gd time.（省略that的宾语从句）
（十四）
（2024·贵州·中考真题）成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“The Change Made Me...”（改变让我……）的征文活动。请参考图文信息，积极投稿。
要求：
1. 补全标题；
2. 内容积极向上，不少于80词；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
The Change Made Me Better
There are many things in ur life that can help us t be better. In my pinin, I think my changes have made me better.
I used t be weak because f my bad habits. After cmmunicating with my teacher, I ate regularly every day and tk exercise ften, s I am strng nw. What’s mre, I was s careless that I made many mistakes in my exams. My teacher advised me t check my answers carefully and develp gd learning habits.
These gd changes made me feel better and brave enugh t face new challenges.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍自己的经历；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①In my pinin 在我看来
②because f 因为
③What’s mre 此外
[高分句型]
①What’s mre, I was s careless that I made many mistakes in my exams.（引导的结果状语从句）
②These gd changes made me feel better and brave enugh t face new challenges.（并列结构）
（十五）
（2024·安徽·中考真题）假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。
要点:
1. 活动目的；
2. 灭火器的使用方法；
3. 你的体会。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）
Last week, ur schl carried ut Fire Safety Day activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Last week, ur schl carried ut Fire Safety Day activities. The purpse was t draw ur attentin t fire safety. Amng the activities, hw t use a fire extinguisher interested me mst.
When we use a fire extinguisher, we shuld first shake it after picking it up, and then pull ff the safety pin quickly. As sn as we pint the tube at the rt f the fire, we are expected t press dwn n the handle until we put ut the fire. During the perid, we shuld be careful enugh nt t get hurt.
Frm the activities I’ve learned a lt and realized the imprtance f fire safety.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是看图作文；
②时态：一般过去时，一般现在时
③提示：结合图示信息，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍上周学校举行的 “消防安全日”，点明活动的目的；
第二步，具体介绍灭火器的使用方法；
最后，表达个人从这次活动中得到的感悟体会。
[亮点词汇]
①draw ne’s attentin 吸引某人的注意
②pick up 捡起
③pull ff 拔出
④as sn as 一……就……
⑤put ut 扑灭
[高分句型]
①When we use a fire extinguisher, we shuld first shake it after picking it up, and then pull ff the safety pin quickly.（when引导时间状语从句）
②As sn as we pint the tube at the rt f the fire, we are expected t press dwn n the handle until we put ut the fire.（as sn as引导时间状语从句）
Hw I learned
…
Hw I made
Ingredients & Tls
●rice, beans, dates (枣)…
●leaf (leaves), string (细绳), pt
Steps
wash...
keep…in the water fr hurs
make a cne shape (圆锥体) with…
put…int the cne
tie…
bil…ver lw heat…
Hw I felt
…
Studying alne
Studying with a grup
slve prblems n my wn
get help frm thers
keep my mind n schlwrk
share ideas with grup members
Hi Li Ping,
Yu mentined yur dream jb in yur last letter. I’m really interested in it. Why did yu chse it? What/Wh influenced yu t make the decisin? Tell me yur experience, please. I lk frward t hearing frm yu sn!
Eric
Dear Eric,
Thanks fr yur e-mail. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ping
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