牛津译林版 (2020)必修 第一册Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good备课课件ppt
展开本单元要求写一篇陈述观点的议论文。这是一种说理文体,需要通过摆事实、讲道理等说服读者。此类议论文一般采用“三段式”写法,即“总—分—总”结构。
就“青少年整容”问题陈述观点(议论文)
课时学案 写作(Writing)
(一)基本框架1.开头——明确主题,提出自己对于相关事件的观点和看法,即论点。 2.主体——论述部分是文章主体,要给出证明和支撑论点的理由和依据,其目的在于揭示出论点和论据之间的内在逻辑关系。 3.结尾——多以另一种方式重申主题和观点,呼应文章开头,将主题进一步提炼升华。
(二)常用表达1.开头段常用句式(1) becming mre and mre ppular these days.Hwever...……越来越流行了。然而……(2)With the imprvement f peple's life,mre and mre peple...随着生活水平的提高,越来越多的人……(3)Recently,we've had a discussin abut pinins vary n this tpic.近期,我们就是否……进行了讨论。我们的观点不一。
2.中间主体段常用句式(1)第一……第二……最后……(2)In the first 's additin...首先……而且……另外……(3)On the ne the ther hand...一方面……另一方面……
(4)It is a gd idea fr...这对于……是个好主意。(5)We shuld nt ignre...我们不应该忽视……(6)There are many advantages f...……有很多优点。
(7)(s) an imprtant part in...……在……发挥了重要作用。(8) f vital significance.……有极其重要的意义。(9)There are als sme disadvantages f...也有一些不利因素……
3.结尾段常用句式(1)In cnclusin,I believe that...总之,我认为……(2)In a wrd,I strngly hld the view that...总之,我坚持认为……(3)Only in this way can we ...只有这样,我们才能……(4)Taking everything int cnsideratin,we shuld make gd use f...总体考虑,我们应该充分利用……
假如你是李华,你的笔友Mary来信说周围有很多同学都在模仿明星整容,她感到很困惑,想了解你对此现象的观点。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.在中国学生中的整容现象;2.你的观点和理由。注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear Mary,Hw is everything ging? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
[审题构思]1.确定体裁:本文为邮件,属于应用文;2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第一人称和第二人称;3.确定时态:本文的主体时态为一般现在时。4.确定内容:①提出中国中学生整容问题的现状,并陈述自己的观点和看法;②给出支撑论点的理由和依据;③总结观点,照应首段。
[遣词造句]1.整形手术在中国中学生中不像在美国那么盛行。Plastic surgery has nt becme __________ in Chinese secndary schl students ___ in America.2.我坚持认为青少年不应该整容。________________________ teenagers shuldn't have plastic surgery.3.首先,青少年不应该过于在乎自己的外表。Firstly,teenagers shuld nt ________________ physical appearance.
I strngly hld the view that
care t much abut
4.他们应该集中精力学习。They ____________________ their studies.5.一些青少年做了整容手术,这使他们无法回到正常的生活。_______________________________ but it stpped them frm returning t a nrmal life.
shuld cncentrate n
Sme teenagers had plastic surgery
[句式升级]1.用合并要点3和要点4。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用定语从句升级要点5。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Firstly,teenagers shuld nt care t much abut their physical appearance but cncentrate n their studies.
Sme teenagers had plastic surgery,which stpped them frm returning t a nrmal life.
[连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)Dear Mary,Hw is everything ging? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
[参考范文]Dear Mary,Hw is everything ging? As is knwn t all,plastic surgery has nt becme s ppular in Chinese secndary schl students as in America.Hwever,mre and mre students here want t have a try.As fr me,I strngly hld the view that teenagers shuldn't have plastic surgery.
Firstly,teenagers shuld nt care t much abut their physical appearance but cncentrate n their studies.Secndly,such surgery is likely t harm their health.Sme teenagers had plastic surgery,which stpped them frm returning t a nrmal life.In a wrd,a teenager shuld keep away frm plastic surgery.Yurs,Li Hua
[词块积累]1.cry fr/ver...为……哭泣2.have a gd cry大哭一场3.chke with sbs 哽咽4.sb ut ne's stry哽咽着说出事情原委5.tears rlling dwn her cheeks她泪流满面
6.weeping with fist beating her chest她捶胸痛哭7.feel my thrat is chking with sbs感觉自己的嗓子哽住了8.lying n the bed,crying in pain躺在床上,痛得直哭9.can't help weeping when hearing f the sad stry听到这个悲伤的故事禁不住哭起来
[佳句积累]1.He std in a crner with tears rlling dwn his face.他站在一个角落里,泪流满面。2.Her lips shivered and big tears rlled dwn her cheeks.她双唇颤抖着,泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。3.Finally,my sister brke dwn,sbbing int her handkerchief.我姐姐终于再也控制不住自己的情绪,捂着手绢呜咽起来。
4.She sbbed uncntrllably,tears streaming dwn her face.她无法控制地抽泣着,眼泪顺着脸颊流淌。5.His eyes welled up with tears,unable t cntrl the sadness deep in his heart.他的眼睛充满了泪水,无法抑制住内心深处的悲伤。6.She fell nt the flr,tears rlling dwn her cheeks as her bdy shk with sbs.她倒在地板上,眼泪不住地淌,身体因呜咽而颤动。
7.My mther was clse t tears when she heard I was admitted t a key university.当得知我被重点大学录取时,我妈差点儿就哭了。8.The weight f her srrw was unbearable as she buried her face in her hands wet with tears.她的悲伤压得人无法忍受,她捂住脸,满是泪水。9.She tk my hand and sbbed,“Thank yu s much.Yu have n idea hw much this means t me.”她握着我的手,呜咽着说,“谢谢!你不知道这对我有多重要。”
10.In the midst f her sadness,he witnessed her weeping alne,her shulders shaking with each sb.在她的悲痛中,他看到她一个人在哭着,肩膀随着每一声啜泣而颤抖。
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一个80词左右的段落,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Passing Happiness n I was standing in the checkut line behind a wman wh lked t be in her 60s.When it was her turn t pay,the cashier greeted her by name and asked her hw she was ding.
The wman lked dwn,shk her head and said,“Nt s gd.My husband just lst his jb and my sn is up t his ld tricks again.The truth is,I dn't knw hw we're ging t get thrugh the hlidays.” Then she gave the cashier fd stamps(食品券).
Neither did I knw hw I culd get thrugh the days a year ag during my fresh year in the cmpany.I didn't knw the rules,I was nt familiar with the wrk,and I culdn't feel the value f myself.I was even wndering whether I culd get alng,as my father was gne,my mther had n wrk and my brther was nly 7.That feeling was exactly what the wman had said.Frtunately,things had changed since I received my clleague's card,frm which I felt the encuragement,and sensed happiness falling upn me again.
S I really wanted t help,but didn't knw hw.Shuld I ffer t pay fr her grceries(杂货),r ask fr her husband's resume(简历)? As I walked int the parking lt,I sptted the wman returning her shpping cart.Suddenly I remembered smething in my purse that I thught culd help her.It wasn't a handful f cash r an ffer f a jb fr her husband,but maybe it wuld make her life better.Then I apprached the wman.My heart punded as this was the first time that I had cme with the idea t help a stranger.
“Excuse me,” I said,my vice trembling a bit.“I culdn't help accidentally hearing what yu said t the cashier.It sunds like yu're ging thrugh a really hard time right nw.I'm s srry.I'd like t give yu smething.” I handed her the small card frm my purse.When the wman read the card,she began t cry. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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