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(广州、深圳)沪教牛津版九上期末复习讲义——常考话题作文【话题二:问题与建议】(含答案)
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这是一份(广州、深圳)沪教牛津版九上期末复习讲义——常考话题作文【话题二:问题与建议】(含答案),共6页。
话题二:问题与建议
※案例演练※
假如你是学校的心理咨询老师Miss Wang,你收到一封学生来信,根据信件的内容和下面的提示给他回信。
要求:1. 内容完整;表达准确;语意连贯。
2. 字数80字左右,信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总字数。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
提示:1. 多和父母沟通,告知他们你的担忧;
2. 放松心情,不要有太大的压力;
3. 认真备考,尽量考好;
4. 课后多做运动,保持健康;
5. 睡前喝杯牛奶;
6. 补充一条你的其他建议。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student f Grade Three. Yu knw we’ll have mid-exams next mnth. And my parents hpe I can be ne f the tp students, but I dn’t think I can. I am wrried abut my curses s much that I can’t sleep well at night. What can I d? Please help me.
Best wishes,
Lve frm
Jacky
Dear Jacky,
I gt yur letter this week. And I knw yur truble nw. ________________________
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—————————————————————————————————————
Hpe it can help yu. Gd luck t yu.
Lve frm
Miss Wang
※写作思路※
Step1:确定时态、人称和分段
时态:_______________
人称:_______________
正文分为_______________段。每段内容安排分别是:
第一段:_______________
第二段:_______________
第三段:_______________
Step2:遣词造句
1. 词汇
2. 造句
1.多和父母沟通,告知他们你的担忧。
基础翻译:____________________________________________________________
升级翻译:____________________________________________________________
2.放松心情,不要有太大的压力
基础翻译:____________________________________________________________
升级翻译:____________________________________________________________
3.认真备考,尽量考好
基础翻译:____________________________________________________________
升级翻译:____________________________________________________________
4.课后多做运动,保持健康
基础翻译:____________________________________________________________
升级翻译:____________________________________________________________
Step3:成文
Dear Jacky,
I gt yur letter this week. And I knw yur truble nw.
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—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
Hpe it can help yu. Gd luck t yu.
Lve frm
Miss Wang
沟通
准备
担忧
获得好结果
放松心情
做运动
压力
保持健康
※实战训练※
假设你是李华,初三的第一学期即将结束,你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上帮助了你。在这个学期即将结束前,请你给Sam写一些感谢的话,要求包括以下内容要点:
你在学习英语上曾遇到的困难;
Sam对你的帮助及建议:
(1)多听多读;
(2)多看英语电影、多唱英文歌曲;
(3)把错误写在笔记本里并且改正它们;
(4)……(请补充1个以上的建议)
3. 你的收获。
注意:
1.词数80左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Hw time flies! It’s time fr us t say gdbye this term.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu fr yur help and best wishes fr yu.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
话题二:问题与建议
※案例演练※
Step1:确定时态、人称和分段
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称、第二人称
正文分为三段。每段内容安排分别是:
第一段:开头(介绍背景)
第二段:描述问题及提出建议
第三段:结尾(祝福)
Step2:遣词造句
1. 词汇
2. 造句
1.多和父母沟通,告知他们你的担忧。
基础翻译:Cmmunicate with yur parents mre ften and tell them yur wrries .
升级翻译:Yu can try t cmmunicate with yur parents mre ften and tell them what yu’re wrried abut.
2.放松心情,不要有太大的压力
基础翻译:Relax yurself, and dn’t get t stressed.
升级翻译:Be relaxed, and avid giving yurself t much pressure.
3.认真备考,尽量考好
基础翻译:Carefully prepare fr the exam, and try yur best t d well in the exam.
升级翻译:Wrk hard n the preparatin fr the exam, and try t get gd results in the exam as pssible as yu can.
4.课后多做运动,保持健康
基础翻译:D mre exercises after class and stay healthy.
升级翻译:In rder t keep healthy, yu’d better take mre exercises after class.
Step3:成文
Dear Jacky,
I gt yur letter this week. And I knw yur truble nw.
I suppse that yu can try t cmmunicate with yur parents mre ften and tell them what yu’re wrried abut. And they will surely give yu supprt. Besides, be relaxed, and avid giving yurself t much pressure. Meanwhile, wrk hard n the preparatin fr the exam, and try t get gd results in the exam as pssible as yu can. In rder t keep healthy, yu’d better take mre exercises after class. Als, I think it’s a gd chice t have a glass f milk befre sleeping, which can help yu sleep better. Smetimes, when yu are getting t stressed, yu can listen t sme light music.
Hpe it can help yu. Gd luck t yu.
Lve frm
Miss Wang
※实战训练※
Dear Sam,
Hw time flies! It’s time fr us t say gdbye this term. I still remember the beginning f this term, I had difficulties learning English. It was difficult fr me t memrize English wrds and understand what peple were saying. My spken English was pr t. Hwever, I was s lucky that I met yu, a kind-hearted and smart by.
Firstly, yu taught me t listen mre and read mre. Secndly, yu suggested that I shuld watch English mvies and sing English sngs. Als, yu shuld write dwn yur mistakes in yur ntebks and crrect them. In additin, yu tld me t frm the habit f reading alud in the mrning. And it really helped me a lt.
Day by day, I have made great prgress with yur help. Thank yu fr yur help and best wishes fr yu.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
沟通
cmmunicate with
准备
prepare fr
担忧
wrry
获得好结果
get gd results
放松心情
relax yurself
做运动
d mre exercises
压力
pressure
保持健康
keep healthy
话题二:问题与建议
※案例演练※
假如你是学校的心理咨询老师Miss Wang,你收到一封学生来信,根据信件的内容和下面的提示给他回信。
要求:1. 内容完整;表达准确;语意连贯。
2. 字数80字左右,信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总字数。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
提示:1. 多和父母沟通,告知他们你的担忧;
2. 放松心情,不要有太大的压力;
3. 认真备考,尽量考好;
4. 课后多做运动,保持健康;
5. 睡前喝杯牛奶;
6. 补充一条你的其他建议。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student f Grade Three. Yu knw we’ll have mid-exams next mnth. And my parents hpe I can be ne f the tp students, but I dn’t think I can. I am wrried abut my curses s much that I can’t sleep well at night. What can I d? Please help me.
Best wishes,
Lve frm
Jacky
Dear Jacky,
I gt yur letter this week. And I knw yur truble nw. ________________________
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
Hpe it can help yu. Gd luck t yu.
Lve frm
Miss Wang
※写作思路※
Step1:确定时态、人称和分段
时态:_______________
人称:_______________
正文分为_______________段。每段内容安排分别是:
第一段:_______________
第二段:_______________
第三段:_______________
Step2:遣词造句
1. 词汇
2. 造句
1.多和父母沟通,告知他们你的担忧。
基础翻译:____________________________________________________________
升级翻译:____________________________________________________________
2.放松心情,不要有太大的压力
基础翻译:____________________________________________________________
升级翻译:____________________________________________________________
3.认真备考,尽量考好
基础翻译:____________________________________________________________
升级翻译:____________________________________________________________
4.课后多做运动,保持健康
基础翻译:____________________________________________________________
升级翻译:____________________________________________________________
Step3:成文
Dear Jacky,
I gt yur letter this week. And I knw yur truble nw.
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
Hpe it can help yu. Gd luck t yu.
Lve frm
Miss Wang
沟通
准备
担忧
获得好结果
放松心情
做运动
压力
保持健康
※实战训练※
假设你是李华,初三的第一学期即将结束,你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上帮助了你。在这个学期即将结束前,请你给Sam写一些感谢的话,要求包括以下内容要点:
你在学习英语上曾遇到的困难;
Sam对你的帮助及建议:
(1)多听多读;
(2)多看英语电影、多唱英文歌曲;
(3)把错误写在笔记本里并且改正它们;
(4)……(请补充1个以上的建议)
3. 你的收获。
注意:
1.词数80左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Hw time flies! It’s time fr us t say gdbye this term.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu fr yur help and best wishes fr yu.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
话题二:问题与建议
※案例演练※
Step1:确定时态、人称和分段
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称、第二人称
正文分为三段。每段内容安排分别是:
第一段:开头(介绍背景)
第二段:描述问题及提出建议
第三段:结尾(祝福)
Step2:遣词造句
1. 词汇
2. 造句
1.多和父母沟通,告知他们你的担忧。
基础翻译:Cmmunicate with yur parents mre ften and tell them yur wrries .
升级翻译:Yu can try t cmmunicate with yur parents mre ften and tell them what yu’re wrried abut.
2.放松心情,不要有太大的压力
基础翻译:Relax yurself, and dn’t get t stressed.
升级翻译:Be relaxed, and avid giving yurself t much pressure.
3.认真备考,尽量考好
基础翻译:Carefully prepare fr the exam, and try yur best t d well in the exam.
升级翻译:Wrk hard n the preparatin fr the exam, and try t get gd results in the exam as pssible as yu can.
4.课后多做运动,保持健康
基础翻译:D mre exercises after class and stay healthy.
升级翻译:In rder t keep healthy, yu’d better take mre exercises after class.
Step3:成文
Dear Jacky,
I gt yur letter this week. And I knw yur truble nw.
I suppse that yu can try t cmmunicate with yur parents mre ften and tell them what yu’re wrried abut. And they will surely give yu supprt. Besides, be relaxed, and avid giving yurself t much pressure. Meanwhile, wrk hard n the preparatin fr the exam, and try t get gd results in the exam as pssible as yu can. In rder t keep healthy, yu’d better take mre exercises after class. Als, I think it’s a gd chice t have a glass f milk befre sleeping, which can help yu sleep better. Smetimes, when yu are getting t stressed, yu can listen t sme light music.
Hpe it can help yu. Gd luck t yu.
Lve frm
Miss Wang
※实战训练※
Dear Sam,
Hw time flies! It’s time fr us t say gdbye this term. I still remember the beginning f this term, I had difficulties learning English. It was difficult fr me t memrize English wrds and understand what peple were saying. My spken English was pr t. Hwever, I was s lucky that I met yu, a kind-hearted and smart by.
Firstly, yu taught me t listen mre and read mre. Secndly, yu suggested that I shuld watch English mvies and sing English sngs. Als, yu shuld write dwn yur mistakes in yur ntebks and crrect them. In additin, yu tld me t frm the habit f reading alud in the mrning. And it really helped me a lt.
Day by day, I have made great prgress with yur help. Thank yu fr yur help and best wishes fr yu.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
沟通
cmmunicate with
准备
prepare fr
担忧
wrry
获得好结果
get gd results
放松心情
relax yurself
做运动
d mre exercises
压力
pressure
保持健康
keep healthy
