2024届高三英语基础写作课件：道歉信-不能应邀去伦敦

这是一份2024届高三英语基础写作课件：道歉信-不能应邀去伦敦，共34页。PPT课件主要包含了谢绝的理由 ，to have，道歉信类似练习等内容，欢迎下载使用。

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作文中的问题：1. Para. 1 没有直接表明写信目的和表达歉意，而是停留在很 高兴收到邀请2. 表达愿意前往的意愿和歉意占比较大，而原因的解释模糊、 不得体或笔墨较少3. 原因应该是将来的安排，时态？4. 补救措施，暑假再约缺失或表达不得体
道歉信开头句 (优化P165)① I’m writing t aplgize fr... / I am writing t say srry fr... ② I am writing t express/ cnvey my heartfelt aplgy t yu. 诚挚的/ 深深的/ 真诚的歉意heartfelt/ prfund/ sincere/ genuine 给道歉issue/ ffer sb/ send sb a... aplgy
段中过渡句 （优化P165）
段末结尾句 (优化P165)I sincerely hpe yu can understand my situatin/ think in my psitin and accept my aplgies.
Para.1 表明写信目的，表达歉意 （一定要直截了当）
... fr my inevitable absence frm the trip t Lndn this winter hliday.
1. 时态 (未来的安排)2. 理由的阐释是否清晰且礼貌？Clearly and plitely explained? 3. 怎样的理由才合适？ 准备高考 机票太贵 家人生病 护照过期 参加比赛 做项目研究 做义工 春节团圆 农村支教 亲人来访 我腿摔伤
理由阐释是否清晰？得体？
Similar reasns: 1. I am srry that I can't g with yu because f sme imprtant things/ because f sme persnal things. (n further explanatin)2. The reasn why I can't g with yu is that my teacher asks me t take part in an imprtant cmpetitin. (n further explanatin)
3. I am feeling srry abut that I can't g there as appinted because f the vlunteer activities. (n further explanatin)
Para.2 谢绝的理由
I am enthusiastic abut enjying the hliday with yu, but I will be ccupied with sme extra-curricular activities t be munted by ur schl this winter hliday. As scheduled, we will... ---逸熙
... I will be engaged in making full preparatins fr it.
Shuld it nt be...
Para.2 补救措施
Will it be cnvenient fr yu if we put ff/ pstpne ur plan t this summer hliday? I believe that we will have a whale f time then. ---纯之Hw abut putting ff the trip t the summer vcatin? As mre time is accessible, nt nly can we bnd ur relatinship better, but we can als get a deeper insight int the charm and beauty f Lndn. ---信菲
Dear Jerry, I hpe this letter finds yu well. Firstly, I want t express my sincere gratitude fr yur kind invitatin t visit Lndn during the winter break, which truly means a lt t me. Unfrtunately, I feel s srry t infrm yu that I wn’t be able t make it n accunt f sme prir arrangement. This winter vcatin, ur schl is scheduled t launch a vluntary activity in a remte village, where we will serve as vlunteer teachers t ffer primary students guidance n hw t acquire English. Cnsidering it a marvellus pprtunity fr me t devte myself t vluntary wrk and enhance my scial skills, I have already sighed up fr it, leaving me n spare time t travel at this time. I sincerely aplgize fr any incnvenience this may cause. Hw abut planning a visit during the summer break instead? During that time, I anticipate having mre flexibility in my schedule and wuld be delighted t cme t Lndn t see yu. Once again, I aplgize fr being unable t accept yur invitatin fr the winter break. I truly value ur friendship and eagerly anticipate the pprtunity t visit yu in Lndn during the summer.
练习1： 假定你是李华, 因疏忽大意, 弄丢了向交换生 Leslie 借的《英英词典》。请你给他写一封邮件, 说明情况并表示歉意。
Dear Leslie, I’m terribly srry that I have lst yur English-English Dictinary, which was a birthday present sent by yur parents. As yu knw, I brrwed yur dictinary t finish my hmewrk in the classrm. After finishing my hmewrk, I went ut t play ftball with my classmates withut putting away my hmewrk and yur dictinary. Smehw, when I returned, it was missing. I lked fr it here and there, but unfrtunately nwhere culd I find it. Please frgive my carelessness. I will buy yu a new dictinary f the same kind this weekend. Once again, I am srry fr any incnvenience caused. Hpe sincerely yu can accept my aplgies. Yurs， Li Hua
练习2： 因为有事未能听讲座，写信致歉。
Dear Miss Mrgan, I am excessively srry that I can’t attend the lecture n Asian Culture Histry n Wednesday next week. I hereby write yu this letter t shw my deep regret. And I hpe yu will excuse me fr my failure t attend the lecture as planned/ scheduled. I will be grateful if yu are kind enugh t listen t my explanatin. The reasn why I have t give up the chance is that I was assigned t pick up Jane, my English teacher. I have n chice because it is the first time that she has cme t China and she may get lst. Cnditins permitted/ If pssible, I wuld like t ask fr the recrding f the lecture because I want t knw what is cvered in the talk. I’m srry fr bringing yu much incnvenience. Hpe yu can accept my aplgy and understand my situatin. Yurs, Li Hua
Dear Miss Mrgan, I am writing t infrm yu f my absence frm the lecture abut/ n English histry tmrrw afternn and make a sincere aplgy t yu. In terms f my wn will, I feel like seizing the pprtunity t knw mre abut the histry f UK and get familiar with the English custms by attending the lecture. Unfrtunately, my mther gets sick this mrning and is in hspital while my father is n a business trip t Beijing. I am endwed with the bligatin/ respnsibility t attend/ lk after/ take care f her. I sincerely hpe yu can understand my situatin and frgive me. Besides, I wnder if I have anther alternative t get invlved in the lecture. Fr example, I am keen t listen t the recrded tape. I am terribly srry fr my absence again. Please frgive me fr any incvenience caused. Yurs, Li Hua
假如你是李华。你与外教 Miss Perkins 原约定在周日上午和她一起去博物馆。你因故无法赴约，请写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 解释爽约的原因；2. 表示歉意。
Dear Miss Pekins, I am writing t express my aplgy t yu fr my failure t keep ur appintment. Knwing that yu have great interest in Chinese culture, I have fixed an appintment with yu t visit the lcal museum t braden ur hrizns n next Sunday mrning. But I am afraid that I will cast yu dwn. My little brther is ill and my parents have n time t attend him. S I have t stay at hme and take care f him. I feel s srry fr breaking my wrd. Why nt rearrange the appintment at yur cnvenience? What d yu think f it? I am lking frward t hearing frm yu. Yurs, Li Hua
Dear Miss Pekins, The aim f writing this letter is t delay ur appintment r cancel it n Sunday mrning because f sme emergency ccurring t me. Knwing that yu are interested in Chinese histry, I decided t make an appintment with yu t g t the museum t accumulate mre knwledge abut Chinese culture. But I heard f my grandpa being ill when I cntacted him yesterday, which struck fear and anxiety int my heart. I can't wait t visit him and lk after him. I knw yu have already made sme preparatins fr it, s I feel really srry t let yu cast dwn, which means all yur effrts will be in vain. I hpe I can receive yur frgiveness. Thanks fr yur understanding and kindness. Yurs, Li Hua