高中英语2025届高考求助信写作指导课件

这是一份高中英语2025届高考求助信写作指导课件，共14页。

【试题探究】　　假定你是李华, 你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教Miss Evans写一封邮件, 请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括: 　　1. 剧情简介; 　　2. 指导内容; 　　3. 商定时间、地点。注意: 写作词数应为80左右。
Step 1: 审题布局
Step 2: 巧饰亮点要点1: 我写邮件是想就我们改编自课本的一个剧本征求您的意见。①高级词汇: _____________________________________________adapted frm ur textbk. ②高级句式(利用定语从句升级): _________________________________________________________________________________
I’m writing t ask yu fr advice regarding a play
I’m writing t ask yu fr advice regarding a
play that we have adapted frm ur textbk.
要点2: 我们不确定情节是否完整, 我们也想知道如何使用适当的语气来完美地说台词。①高级词汇和句式(宾语从句): _________________________________________. We are als wndering _____________________________________________. ②高级句式(利用nt nly. . . but als合并两个句子): ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________③高级句式(利用倒装句升级): ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are uncertain whether the plt is cmplete
hw t use prper tnes t speak the lines perfectly
We are nt nly uncertain
whether the plt is cmplete, but als we are wndering hw t use prper tnes t
speak the lines perfectly.
Nt nly are we uncertain whether the plt is
cmplete, but als we are wndering hw t use prper tnes t speak the lines
perfectly.
Step 3: 衔接成篇Dear Miss Evans, 　　Hw is everything ging? I’m writing t ask yu fr advice regarding a play that we have adapted frm ur textbk. 　　The play is abut hw mney influences the attitude f peple treating thers. Hwever, nt nly are we uncertain whether the plt is cmplete, but als we are wndering hw t use prper tnes t speak the lines perfectly. Hpefully, yu wuld be s kind as t give us sme guidance.
　　If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let’s meet at 8: 30 a. m. tmrrw in the schl theater. We’d appreciate it if yu culd d us a favr. Yurs, Li Hua
【句式储备】1. 篇头——开篇表意, 请求帮助①I wnder if yu culd d me a favr t pick up my uncle at the airprt. 我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙, 到机场接我叔叔。②Wuld yu like t d me a favr t have my draft plished?你愿意帮我润色草稿吗?
2. 篇中——详细描述, 讲清困难①Faced with the abve prblems, I am anxius t get yur help. Wuld yu please ffer me sme advice n maths learning?面对上述问题, 我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给我一些数学学习建议吗?②Nw, I struggle a lt in my study. I’ve fund that hardly d I take sprts due t t much hmewrk. 现在, 我在学习上很痛苦。我发现由于作业太多, 我几乎没时间运动。
3. 结尾——盼回复, 希望得到帮助①I wnder if yu can help me with these difficulties. I wuld really appreciate it if yu culd help me. 我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我, 我真的很感激。②I wuld appreciate it very much if yu culd ffer me sme necessary/timely help(give/lend me sme practical/valuable advice). 如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助(给我一些实用的/有价值的建议)我会很感激。
【拓展训练】　　假定你是李华。最近你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛, 请给你的外教Cheslie 写一封电子邮件, 请她帮助润色你的演讲稿并给予你有关演讲技巧的指导。内容包括: 　　1. 写信原因; 　　2. 你的困惑; 　　3. 请求帮助。注意: 　　1. 写作词数应为80左右; 　　2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Cheslie, 　　I am writing t ask yu t d me a favr. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Cheslie, 　　I am writing t ask yu t d me a favr. I’ll participate in an English speech cntest with the title “Charming China”. I’ve finished my speech draft, but I find it far frm satisfactry.