专题23 应用文写作：道歉信 （教师版+学生版）-2024新高考英语满分作文读后续写

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【考情分析】
【写作指导】
把握感谢信的写作框架。道歉信是指因为失约、损坏或弄丢别人的东西等，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，给对方赔礼道歉时写的一种信件。其写作框架如下：
第一段：说明道歉的原因和写信的目的
第二段：具体阐述补救的措施
第三段：再次表达歉意并希望得到谅解
【素材宝库】
词汇积累之第一段
词汇积累之第二段
词汇积累之第三段
谚语积累
A faithful friend is hard t find.
益友难得。
A father is a treasure, a brther is a cmfrt, but a friend is bth.
父亲是财富，兄弟是安慰，朋友兼而有之。
A friend in curt is better than a penny in purse.
患难朋友才是真朋友。
Fire is the test f gld, adversity f friendship.
烈火试真金。
A candle lights thers and cnsumes itself.
蜡烛照亮别人，却毁灭了自己。
万能写作模板
Dear Jim,
I’m terribly srry fr my nt being able t attend the Chinese paper-cutting shw in the Flk Art Museum n Saturday mrning as I have prmised. _____________________________(我写信向你表示诚挚的道歉).
__________________________________(我不能参加的原因是因为我叔叔从美国来) n Saturday mrning.
_____________________________ （因此）, my family are ging t the airprt t meet him, and then we will have a family dinner tgether. _______________________(你介意吗) if I suggest we enjy the shw n Sunday mrning?
Hpefully, ___________________________________(这次变化不会给你带来态度麻烦).
Yurs sincerely
Li Hua
【 高考真题】
1．（2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m srry t infrm yu that I can’t g ut with yu this weekend. I’ve just been tld that I have t g and visit my sick grandfather in the cuntryside, wh was suddenly admitted t the hspital. I hpe the change wn’t cause yu t much truble.
Hw abut ging ut next Saturday mrning? If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let’s meet at the schl gate at 9: 00. Please let me knw what time suits yu best. I shuld be available anytime next weekend.
In additin, next Saturday, there will be a flwer shw in Beihai Park. Then we can g t see the flwers tgether.
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。
【详解】1.词汇积累
通知：tell→infrm
除此之外：in additin→besides
适合：fit→suit
有空的：available→free
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In additin, next Saturday, there will be a flwer shw in Beihai Park. Then we can g t see the flwers tgether.
拓展句：In additin, there will be a flwer shw in Beihai Park next Saturday, when we can g t see the flwers tgether.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m srry t infrm yu that I can’t g ut with yu this weekend.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve just been tld that I have t g and visit my sick grandfather in the cuntryside, wh was suddenly admitted t the hspital. (运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.（2016·全国·高考真题）
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bb约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Bb,
I’m srry t say that I cannt g t the bkstre with yu n Friday afternn. I have just fund that I have t attend an imprtant class meeting that afternn. I hpe the change will nt cause yu t much truble.
Shall we g n Saturday mrning? We can set ut early s that we’ll have mre time t read and select bks. If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let’s meet at 8:30 utside the schl gate. If nt, let me knw what time suits yu best. I shuld be available any time after schl next week.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Bb写封邮件，因不能如约去书店而道歉，说明原因，并另约时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累
导致：cause→result in
选择：select→chse/elect
大门：gate→prtal/main entrance
出发：set ut→start ff
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：We can set ut early s that we’ll have mre time t read and select bks.
拓展句：In rder t have mre time t read and select bks, we can set ut early .
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m srry t say that I cannt g t the bkstre with yu n Friday afternn. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let’s meet at 8:30 utside the schl gate. (运用了If 引导的条件句)
【 名校模拟题提升练】
1．（2023·天津·高三校考）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，你的泰国朋友Taralah于三周前给你发电子邮件，询问你寒假里的打算，但你因准备期中考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：
1.道歉并解释未及时回信原因;
2.你假期的打算(做兼职导游、旅行、做志愿者等)
3.邀请对方来津过年。
注意：1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Taralah,
I’m terribly srry I culdn’t reply t yur email which yu sent me a week ag immediately , because I was s ccupied with the final exams.
As fr the cming winter hliday, l will first d a part-time jb in a fast-fd restaurant. Nt nly will I earn sme mney but I will als gain sme scial experience thrugh it. During the Spring Festival, I will visit my relatives with my parents and travel with my friends in the nearby scenic spts. This way, I can relax myself and appreciate the scenery f my hme city.
Hw abut yur plan? I sincerely invite yu t cme t Tianjin fr the New Year.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给泰国朋友Taralah写一封邮件，说明未及时回信的原因并介绍自己寒假里的打算以及邀请他来津过年。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：terribly→extremely
因为：because→since
附近的：nearby→surrunding
欣赏：appreciate→admire
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:During the Spring Festival, I will visit my relatives with my parents and travel with my friends in the nearby scenic spts.
拓展句: During the Spring Festival l will visit my relatives with my parents, after which I will travel with my friends in the nearbyscenic spts.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Im terrbly srry I culdn’t reply t yur email which yu sent me a week ag immediately, because I was s ccupied with the final exams.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]Nt nly will earm sme mney but I will als gain sme scial experience thrugh it.(运用了nt nly als...的并列结构)
2．（四川成都·高三校联考开学考试）假如你是交流生Jim，收到李华邀请你去听二胡音乐会的来信，你非常高兴，但是你因故不能同去。请你用英文给他写封道歉信，信中要点包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Jim
【答案】
Dear Li Hua,
I'm pleased t receive yur invitatin t attend the Erhu cncert, fr I'm really fnd f Chinese traditinal music, especially played n the Erhu. T my regret, I can't g with yu. I have t express my aplgy t yu.
This Saturday evening,I have made an appintment with my Chinese teacher. As yu knw, I have sme difficulty with written Chinese. He prmised t cmmunicate with me, giving sme instructins n hw t learn it well. S I'm really srry fr that. Nevertheless, I hear there's anther similar Erhu perfrmance n Sunday. If it's cnvenient fr yu, can we make it n Sunday afternn?
I believe we' ll have anther chance. Have a nice day!
Yurs,
Jim
【分析】这是一篇应用文。假如考生是交流生Jim，收到李华邀请你去听二胡音乐会的来信，你非常高兴，但是你因故不能同去。请你用英文给他写封道歉信。
【详解】1.词汇积累（
高兴的：pleased→glad
说出席，参加：attend→take part in
在……上有困难：have sme difficulty with→have sme truble with
向某人道歉：express my aplgy t→aplgize t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：He prmised t cmmunicate with me, giving sme instructins n hw t learn it well.
拓展句：He prmised t cmmunicate with me, giving sme instructins n hw we culd learn it well.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As yu knw, I have sme difficulty with written Chinese. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] He prmised t cmmunicate with me, giving sme instructins n hw t learn it well. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
3．（·福建厦门·高二厦门一中校考期中）假定你是李华，在上一封信中你邀请Dr. Brwn担任你校即将举行的英语演讲比赛评委。但是，由于学校工作安排,调整了比赛时间和比赛地点。请再给Dr. Brwn写一封信，主要内容包括:
1.为临时变动道歉；
2.告知确定的时间和地点；
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Dr. Brwn,
I'm writing t aplgize fr the change f the schedule and place fr the English Speech Cntest. I’m srry fr the incnvenience it might have caused.
Due t sme unexpected tasks assigned t ur schl, ur president has t make a new arrangement and here is the latest infrmatin. The English Speech Cntest is finally scheduled t be held at 7:30 p.m. n June 30th in the schl lecture hall.
Yur presence will be greatly appreciated since yu are the mst ppular freign teacher in ur schl. Lking frward t yur reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给担任学校即将举行的英语演讲比赛评委Dr. Brwn写一封信，告诉他由于学校工作安排，调整了比赛时间和比赛地点。
【详解】词汇积累
由于：wing t=due t
意想不到的：uncntemplated=unexpected
演讲：speech=lecture
非常：very→greatly
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I'm writing t aplgize fr the change f the schedule and place fr the English Speech Cntest.
拓展句：I'm writing t aplgize fr changing f the schedule and place fr the English Speech Cntest.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m srry fr the incnvenience it might have caused. (运用了定语从句)
[高分句型2] Due t sme unexpected tasks assigned t ur schl, ur president has t make a new arrangement and here is the latest infrmatin. (运用了过去分词做定语)
4．（2023·重庆·高三重庆八中校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周末在回家的途中，把外教 Mr. Thmpsn 借给你的一本诗集弄丢了。现在请你给 Mr. Thmpsn 写一封道歉信，要点如下：
1. 解释并表达歉意；
2. 提出解决的办法；
3.再次道歉并请求原谅。
参考词汇：诗集 petry cllectin
注意：1.词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Thmpsn,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Thmpsn,
I am writing t extend my sincerest aplgies regarding the regrettable incident that ccurred last weekend, where I unintentinally lst the petry cllectin yu lent me.
Fully aware f the emtinal value and significance f the bk t yu, I deeply regret the incnvenience and disappintment my actins may have caused. In an earnest effrt t crrect the situatin, I have retraced my rute and cnducted a thrugh search, yet, unfrtunately, I have thus far been unable t recver it. Nevertheless, I am mre than willing t remedy this lss by persnally purchasing a brand-new cpy f the exact editin, r alternatively, by buying any bk f yur preference as cmpensatin.
Once again, I sincerely aplgize fr my versight and any truble caused, and I hpe yu can find it in yur heart t frgive me.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Thmpsn写一封道歉信，解释一下把诗集弄丢并表达歉意，同时提出解决的办法并请求原谅。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发生：ccur →happen
执行：cnduct →carry ut
不幸地：unfrtunately →unluckily
购买：purchase →buy
2.句式拓展
形容词作状语变状语从句
原句：Fully aware f the emtinal value and significance f the bk t yu, I deeply regret the incnvenience and disappintment my actins may have caused.
拓展句：BecauseI am fully aware f the emtinal value and significance f the bk t yu, I deeply regret the incnvenience and disappintment my actins may have caused.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing t extend my sincerest aplgies regarding the regrettable incident that ccurred last weekend, where I unintentinally lst the petry cllectin yu lent me.（运用了that引导的定语从句，where引导的非限制性定语从句，省略that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Once again, I sincerely aplgize fr my versight and any truble caused, and I hpe yu can find it in yur heart t frgive me.（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句，和过去分词作后置定语）
5．（2022·广东东莞·高三校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的朋友Sarah曾邀请你参加她下个星期四的生日晚会，可是弟弟生病了，需要人照看，不能去参加。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.提出弥补的办法。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sarah,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sarah,
I’m indeed very srry that I wn’t attend t yur birthday party as I was planned befre.
As fr the sudden change, I have t admit it has an unavidable reasn. My little brther are being sick fr days. S it is necessary fr him t be cared. I am respnsible fr lking after him while my parents are wrking. Therefre, I have t stay t accmpany him that day. I hpe yu can understand my situatin and frgive my absence.
Is it pssible fr yu and me t have a private meeing at this weekend? I d lng fr a pleasant chat with yu and give the present t yu.
It is much t my regret that I miss the chance f such a happy get-tghther. Once again, please accepte my secere aplgy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生向朋友Sarah写一封道歉信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
出席，参加：attend → take part in
承认：admit → cncede
原因：reasn → cause
必需的：necessary → essential
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I d lng fr a pleasant chat with yu and give the present t yu.
拓展句：I d lng fr a pleasant chat with yu and give the present t yu, which stands fr my best wish t yu.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
As fr the sudden change, I have t admit it has an unavidable reasn. （运用了省略that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】
It is much t my regret that I miss the chance f such a happy get-tghther.（运用了it作形式主语）
6．（2023上·湖南·高三湖南师大附中校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的外教老师 David 与你约定每周六晚上一次口语课，但是你身体有不适的症状，按照规定要居家隔离，因此，请你给 David写一封道歉信，
内容包括：
1.表达歉意；
2.说明理由；
3.提出补救方案。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Dear David,
I’m indeed srry t tell yu that I wn’t be able t attend the ral class this Saturday as scheduled.
Recently, I’m nt feeling well and required t stay at hme accrding t the rules. Hwever, I am very fnd f yur classes and wuld like t make up fr the lst lessns. S I’m wndering whether it’s pssible fr the lessn t be recrded and if s, I may have the chance t learn and review thrugh the vide.
Please allw me t say srry again. I sincerely hpe that yu will be able t understand my situatin and accept my aplgy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师David写一封道歉信，因自己身体不适需要居家隔离而不能按照原定计划上口语课进行道歉，并提出补救方案。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确实、非常：indeed→terribly
喜欢：be fnd f→be keen n
弥补：make up fr→cmpensate fr
机会：chance→pprtunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hwever, I am very fnd f yur classes and wuld like t make up fr the lst lessns. S I’m wndering whether it’s pssible fr the lessn t be recrded and if s, I may have the chance t learn and review thrugh the vide.
拓展句：Hwever, because I am very fnd f yur classes and wuld like t make up fr the lst lessns, I’m wndering whether it’s pssible fr the lessn t be recrded and if s, I may have the chance t learn and review thrugh the vide.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m indeed srry t tell yu that I wn’t be able t attend the ral class this Saturday as scheduled.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】S I’m wndering whether it’s pssible fr the lessn t be recrded and if s, I may have the chance t learn and review thrugh the vide.（运用了whether引导的宾语从句和if s结构的省略句）
7．（2023·全国·高三专题练习）假设你是高二学生陈伟，昨天，你和你的外籍同桌Bb关于用集体班费给灾区捐款这一问题发生了一些小争执，请你按照以下要求给他写一封道歉信。
1. 表达自己的歉意；
2. 阐述道歉的原因(至少2条)；
3. 表达自己的友好之情，提倡(advcate)相互理解、相互尊重。
注意：
1. 词数100左右。
2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
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【答案】
Dear Bb,
I am writing t express my regret at the unpleasant argument between us yesterday. I felt s srry fr what 1 did and said yesterday. I dnated all the mney t the students in the flded area withut discussing the plan with yu.
I culd have dealt with it differently. But when I handed in the mney, yu happened t be away frm schl and later I didn't explain it t yu in an apprpriate way. What was wrse, I said that yu didn't care abut the cllectin, which hurt yu s much.
Nw I want t take back what I said. Please accept my aplgy fr being s impulsive yesterday, and I'd like yu t try t understand my situatin. I hpe ur friendship will last lng.
Yurs,
Chen Wei
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，要求你给同桌Bb写一封道歉信，表达歉意，阐述道歉原因并表达友好之情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
歉意：aplgy→regret
合适的：suitable→apprpriate
撤回：withdraw→take back
冲动的：htheaded→impulsive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Please accept my aplgy fr being s impulsive yesterday.
拓展句：Please accept my aplgy, fr I was s impulsive yesterday.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I culd have dealt with it differently. (culd have dne，运用了虚拟语气)
[高分句型2] What was wrse, I said that yu didn't care abut the cllectin, which hurt yu s much. (综合运用状语从句、宾语从句和非限制性定语从句)
8.（2022年四川·成都外国语学校高三期中）
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bb 约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请他写封邮件，内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bb,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Bb,
I'm writing t express my sincere aplgies t yu fr nt ging t the bkstre with yu at ur appinted time. I’m srry fr the incnvenience it may cause yu.
The reasn why I wn’t be available at that time is that my grandfather felt ill suddenly yesterday and nw he is in hspital. My family are taking turns t take care f him in the hspital. S I have t stay with him that day. I sincerely hpe yu can accept my aplgies. Meanwhile,I wuld appreciate it if yu culd allw me t fix anther date. If it’s cnvenient fr yu, shall we meet at 8:00 am next Saturday? If nt, please keep me infrmed in advance f what time suits yu best.
Srry again fr the incnvenience caused.
Yurs,
Li Hua
（习作点评）
1. 格式正确，语言流畅，用词准确，使用了不少高级句型和短语。
结构完整，开篇点题。所用语言非常委婉，表达出了诚意。所用句型不单一，长短句相结合。
必背句式：
the incnvenience it may cause yu.
The reasn why I wn’t be available at that time is that my grandfather feit ilI'll
本句主语为the reasn为先行词，why引导定语从句，that引出名词性从句充当表语从句。
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd allw me t fix anther...
本句使用it充当形式宾语，if引导真正的宾语从句，表示委婉的经典句型。
Srry again fr the incnvenience caused.句中caused为过去分词充当后置定语。
9.（2022年江苏省高邮市教育局高三考试）
假如你是李华，与朋友Smith约好了本周末去高邮市博物馆，因故不能赴约，请给他写封道歉信，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Smith,
I’m writing t sincerely aplgize fr nt being able t accmpany yu t Gayu Museum this weekend.
My headmaster infrmed me that we wuld participate in a vluntary activity t help create a civilized city, which is s imprtant that I dn’t want t miss it. That is the reasn why I wn’t be available at that time. If it’s cnvenient fr yu, we can make it next weekend, r let me knw what time suits yu best.
Please allw me t say srry again.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，与朋友Smith约好了本周末去高邮市博物馆，因故不能赴约，请给他写封道歉信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
道歉：aplgize fr→make an aplgy fr
参加：participate in→take part in
重要的：imprtant→vital
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing t sincerely aplgize fr nt being able t accmpany yu t Gayu Museum this weekend.
拓展句：I’m writing t sincerely aplgize because I wn’t be able t accmpany yu t Gayu Museum this weekend.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing t sincerely aplgize fr nt being able t accmpany yu t Gayu Museum this weekend. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] My headmaster infrmed me that we wuld participate in a vluntary activity t help create a civilized city, which is s imprtant that I dn’t want t miss it. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
10.（2022年江苏·高三专题考试）
假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的英国朋友Dylan，然后一起去公园。但你却迟到了，他有些生气，没有等到你就离开了。请用英语给他写一封道歉信，内容如下：
1.认错，道歉，解释原因；
2.许诺以后一定守时；
3.请求原谅。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dylan,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Dylan,
I am writing t cnvey my sincere aplgy t yu fr nt being punctual yesterday.
I was suppsed t pick yu up at the bus statin at 10 a.m. But s careless was I that I frgt t take the busy traffic int cnsideratin. As a result, I unfrtunately gt caught up in a terrible traffic jam and failed t arrive there n time. Hwever, it shuldn’t be my excuse and yu have every right t be angry with me.
I prmise that anything like this wn’t happen nce again. Again, I am excessively srry abut what have happened. I wuld truly appreciate it if yu culd kindly frgive me and I will definitely turn ver a new leaf in the future.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生向自己的朋友道歉，因为自己没有遵守约定按时接他，并承诺以后一定守时。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：cnvey→ express
真诚：sincere → genuine
应该：be suppsed t → shuld
非常：excessively→ extremely/very
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing t cnvey my sincere aplgy t yu fr nt being punctual yesterday.
拓展句：I am writing t cnvey my sincere aplgy t yu because I was nt punctual yesterday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But s careless was I that I frgt t take the busy traffic int cnsideratin.（运用了that引导的结果状语从句和倒装句，即表语前置时，用倒装）
【高分句型2】Again, I am excessively srry abut what have happened.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）年份
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I am writing this letter t cnvey/express my sincere aplgy t yu fr…
我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……
I wuld like t give yu my aplgy fr…
……向你道歉。
I am very srry t say that…
我很抱歉……
I must aplgize abut (nt) ding sth…
对于做了/没做……，我必须道歉。
Please accept my sincere aplgy fr…
请接受我对于^的真诚道歉。
I am terribly/awfully/extremely srry, but…
我很抱歉，但是……
补
救
措
施
Much t my regret, I was unable t And I wish that yu will accept my aplgy.
令我非常遗憾的是，我不能……。我希望你能接受我的道歉。
1. I'm truly terribly srry t tell yu that.…., and I’m writing t express/cnvey my deepest aplgy t yu...
真的很抱歉告诉你……，我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。
2. I am writing t we yu an aplgy fr being unable t...
我没能……,我写信向你道歉。
3. I aplgize mst sincerely fr what I said that day. I didn't mean t hurt yu.
我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
4. Please frgive me fr nt being able t infrm yu.
请原谅我没能通知你。
5. I we yu an aplgy fr being unable t help yu.
我没能帮助你，应该向你道歉。
6. I am indeed srry fr what I said, but believe I had n intentin t...
对于我说的话，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要。
7. Please frgive me fr a stupid chice f wrds.
请原谅我说话欠妥。
8.I want yu t knw hw bad we feel abut it and t assure yu that it will happen again.
我想让你知道我们有多难过，我向你保证这不会再发生了。
9.I feel yu are displeased at my failing t keep my prmise, but I hpe yu will frgive me.
恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴，但是希望你能原谅我。
10.I hpe that this des nt cause yu t much incnvenience.
我希望这不会给你带来太多的不便。
11.If it is cnvenient fr yu, let's have anther appintment t d sth.
如果方便的话，我们再约去做某事。
12.Wuld yu mind if I change the appintment time?
你会介意我改变约会的时间吗?
13.By the way, can we have dinner tgether sme time next week?
顺便说一下，我们在下周的某个时间一起吃晚饭好吗?
14.ls it pssible that I make up fr the lss by ding sth.?
可能让我做某事来弥补损失吗?
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次
道
歉
1. Once again, I'm srry fr any incnvenience caused .
对于造成的不便，我再次表示歉意。
2. I sincerely hpe that yu will be able t understand my situatin and accept my aplgies.
我衷心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。
3. Please allw me t say srry again
请允许我再次表示歉意。
4. I'm srry fr all the incnvenience.
我为引起的所有不便表示歉意。
Please accept my sincere aplgy nce mre fr any incnvenience caused.
对于由此造成的任何不便，请再次接受我真诚的歉意。
6. Hpe yu can accept my aplgies and understand my situatin.
希望你们能够接受我的道歉，理解我的处境。
I want t let yu knw hw regretful I am feeling nw.
我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
I am srry that I can’t… but trust that yu will be able t understand.
很抱歉我不能……，但我相信，你会理解的。