译林版高中英语选择性必修第二册UNIT3写作指导 介绍近视课件

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UNIT 3　Fit for life写作指导　介绍近视感知文体常识介绍近视常用说明文,帮助学生了解中国学生的近视情况及其成因,并探究有效护眼的措施,即提出问题、分析问题以及提出建议或解决方案。行文时,能正确理解并使用连接词,增强语义的逻辑性,能运用合理的结构和得体的语言。牢记写作素材(一)增色词汇1.phenomenon n.现象2.pressure n.压力3.affect v.影响4.appreciate v.感激;欣赏5.short-sighted adj.近视的6.uncomfortable adj.不舒服的(二)精彩句型1.It is a common phenomenon that...这是一个普遍的现象……2.I am writing to ask you for some advice on how to protect my eyes.我写信是想请您给我一些关于如何保护眼睛的建议。3.I find it hard to see things far away recently.最近我发现很难看清远处的事物。4.To solve the problem,the following suggestions might work.为了解决这个问题,下面的建议可能会奏效。5.I would appreciate it if you can give me some practical advice.如果你能给我一些实用的建议,我将不胜感激。6.I think my eyes may be short-sighted.I feel very uncomfortable,but the study pressure is so great that I have to use my eyes a lot.我想我可能是近视了。我感到很不舒服,但是学习压力太大了,我不得不经常用眼。7.Would you please tell me how to use my eyes scientifically,so that I can protect my eyes as well as not affect my studies?请问您可以告诉我如何科学用眼吗?这样我既能保护我的眼睛,又不会影响我的学习。示例写作步骤【写作要求】我国有很多青少年存在视力方面的问题,为引起广大青少年的重视,某英语报刊正在开展以“Saving Our Eyesight”为题的征文活动。请根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿:1.青少年近视的原因;2.提出保护视力的合理建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Saving Our Eyesight__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题谋篇】 【遣词造句】1.词汇①心灵 　　　　 ②位置 　　　　　 ③眼保健操 　　　　　　　　　 ④最后但并不是最不重要的 　　　　　　　　　　 ⑤总之 　　　　　　　　　 ⑥照顾 　　　　　　　　　　 soul　 position　eye exercises　last but not leastin a word　take care of2.句式(1)要点翻译①俗话说:“眼睛是心灵的窗户。”_________________________,“Eyes are the window to the soul.” ②我们许多人在错误的位置阅读,如躺在床上阅读或我们的眼睛离书太近。Many of us read _____________________such as lying in bed or keeping our eyes _________________the books. ③花太多时间在屏幕上和锻炼少也会导致视力差。Poor eyesight is because we _____________________________________ __________________. As the saying goes　in wrong positionstoo close tospend too much time on the screen and takeless exercise④看一些绿树或做眼保健操也有助于放松我们的眼睛。_______________________________________________ is also helpful to relax our eyes. ⑤吃一些对我们的眼睛有好处的食物,如胡萝卜或鱼。Eat some food _________________________like carrots or fish. ⑥让我们爱护我们的眼睛,这样我们才能看到我们的未来。Let’s ___________________________we can see our future. Seeing some green trees or doing eye exercises　that is good for our eyes　take care of our eyes so that(2)句式升级⑦用分词短语作主语改写句③⑧用形式主语改写句④Spending too much time on the screen and taking less exercise also cause poor eyesight.It’s also helpful to relax our eyes by seeing some green trees or doing eye exercises.【妙笔成篇】 Saving Our Eyesight As the saying goes,“Eyes are the window to the soul.” However,many of us have poor eyesight.What has caused this problem?The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes.For example,many of us read in wrong positions such as lying in bed or keeping our eyes too close to the books.Besides,spending too much time on the screen and taking less exercise also cause poor eyesight.Now something must be done to protect our eyes.First,sit straight while reading.Second,don’t forget to rest during the working time.It’s also helpful to relax our eyes by seeing some green trees or doing eye exercises.Last but not least,eat some food that is good for our eyes like carrots or fish.In a word,let’s take care of our eyes so that we can see our future.最近,某国际学校很多学生由于用眼过度或用眼不当,视力下降很快。假如你是该校学生李华,请你用英文向全校同学发起以“爱护眼睛”为主题的倡议书,内容包括:1.用眼存在的问题;2.爱护眼睛的意义;3.提出倡议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear fellow students,Currently,many students suffer from poor eyesight due to excessive or improper use of eyes.Thus,I’m advocating “Protect Our Eyes”.Eyes are the window to the soul.Having good eyesight means we can not only see things clearly but also appreciate beautiful scenes better.Anyway,only when we form a good habit of protecting our eyes,such as doing regular eye exercises and reading in right light,can we really enjoy our life.See well,live well.So don’t hesitate to act at once!Yours,Li Hua