考点41 读后续写06 助人型 (原卷版+解析版)
展开【命题解读】
主要分为:“我”帮助别人:别人帮助“我”。
主题主要是:帮助helpful;奉献devtin;友善kind;爱心lve。
【思维导图】
困难描写(消极情绪+困难处境)
【(1)消极情绪】
典型表达是:感到(这个可以有很多表达方式,并且可以结合在每一个环节中,可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语)
1. a flush f (表情绪的名词)=a wave feeling/sense f...一阵...
2.jy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terrr/srrw/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispintment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flded ver sb=swept ver sb
【因...颤抖】
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
【(2)进一步细节描写】
典型是:流泪;心里想……
流泪:
1. Tears blurred ne's eyes.
2. One's eyes gt misty.
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. clse t tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (rll dwn ne's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
【 困难处境】
As the ecnmy was in decline(经济衰退), sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs. Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet (使收支平衡). (2020.7高考山东卷)
There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. (2020.7高考山东卷)
But ne day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he lived, cmpletely destrying his hme (完全摧毁他的家) . (2021广州2月联考)
助人过程呈现(想到办法+动作链)
【(1)突然有了一个想法:一句话表示想法】
典型:某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
1. It suddenly ccurred t sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned n sb that 从句
2. (idea, thught...) ccurred/came t sb.= int ne's mind= in ne's mind
3. One's mind began t race
【(2)动作链】
Then he gt a saw (锯子) frm the truck and cut a sectin ut f a big lg n the side f the rad. We rlled it ver and put his jack n tp, and we were in business.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子(锯子),从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来,把他的杰克顶放在上面,我们开始做生意。【八省联考】
皆大欢喜结局(感激+感动+升华)
【(1)皆大欢喜:过了一段时间,事情有了最后的转折】
过了一段时间
1. nt lng after that, afterwards, lng, didn't take lng befre 从句=It tk sme time befre从句不久, ...
2. fr an instant/mment一瞬间
【(2)有了结果】
1. T ne's surprise(delight)/Strangely enugh, it turned ut that 从句
2. But n secnd thughts, ...但是转而一想,...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
【(3)感谢】
Nw, I was definitely grateful t her fr extending a helping hand(伸出援手).(2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三)
Mlly and Shawn met n Tuesday, and she says she culdn’t thank him enugh (非常感谢他)and everyne invlved in fr what they did fr her. (2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测(二模)英语试题)
【(4)感动】
1. Needless t say, they were deeply mved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard wh finally fund a way t make mney fr his family. (2020.7高考山东卷)
2. He was tuched that I, a cmplete stranger, cared s much abut him (如此关心他) and said he was willing t wrk.(2021广州2月联考)
3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was tuched beynd wrds (感动得说不出话来). I felt s warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. (2021年1月八省联考)
4. I ndded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀). (2021年1月八省联考)
5. Stunned and mved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the nte, feeling a pang f guilt abut my previus thught that all peple were indifferent.(2021年1月八省联考)
【(5)升华】
It is lve that makes the wrld g rund(是爱让世界运转)and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.(2020.7高考山东卷)
Everyne was happy and sweet, expsing their sets f white teeth(露出他们洁白的牙齿).(2020.7高考山东卷)
I made up my mind t pass n “lve” t thers(传递爱给其他人). Just as a saying ges : “ Rses given, fragrance in hand(赠人玫瑰,手有余香). ”(2021年1月八省联考)
Frm that day n, every time I meet smene wh needs help, I always reach ut t them, hping t pass n the kindness (希望传递善意)that Mexican family ffered me.(2021年1月八省联考)
5. Smetimes, a small act f kindness may be pwerful enugh t make a huge difference(会有很大不同).
【模拟题 1】(2022·广东天河·二模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Hw exciting! Tday is my basketball Grand-final! My team f six enthusiastic bys led by ur cach, Jack, has wrked extremely hard just t make the finals. My heart was punding a hundred kilmetres an hur as I walked int ur hme grund. As I hurried t ur team bench, ur ppnents caught my attentin. They seemed a lt taller and “meaner” lking.
Whistle blew. Five f us started n the curt. Our ppnent gt hld f the ball first. They were unbelievably fast. They kept breaking ur defences and kept scring gals. Excited parents were cheering s much that their faces were as red as beetrts. Even ur best, Bryce, culd nt stp ur ppnents frm scring, which annyed him a lt. By half time, bth teams were extremely exhausted and ur ppnents were ten gals ahead, which presented us with an enrmus but achievable challenge.
Jack was awfully anxius as we were nt playing anywhere near ur best. He tld us that we culd still win if we made ur transitins much quicker s that penalty shts came ur way.He als directed us t rebund (抢断篮板) and psitin urselves better t receive and scre gals. Mst imprtant, he reminded us t play as a team.
Our team was all fired up. The secnd half started in ur favur. We were as quick as lightning n the curt. We were dribbling (运球), passing, shting and rebunding withut any mistakes. We caught ur ppnents by surprise. The scres were almst level. We were trailing nly by ne pint. The crwd was grwing wild with excitement, fuelling ur cnfidence. At the same time, ur ppnents switched back t attentin and started playing like what they did in the first half, making it harder fr us t scre.
One minute left! Our ppnent threw in the ball but I managed t steal it! Our team was bursting with happiness! Mre ppnents were heading my way and I had t pass the ball t Bryce. Instead f passing n the ball, he did the mst unexpected thing. He tried t scre frm half curt! He missed by miles!
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then I nticed Jack signaled t the referee fr a pause.
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Whistle blew again and we came back t the curt.
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【模拟题 2】(2022·福建泉州·三模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
What It Means t Serve
I didn’t cntinue cllege after graduatin. I mved ut f my family. With little wrk experience, I served as a waitress. But during the five years’ labr, I fund myself burning calries running abut nly fr a tip.
I had had enugh s I mved t a smaller twn hping t pursue a cllege degree. I prmised I wuld never serve peple again - at least nt in such way. It was time t serve myself. Luckily, I received a psitin as an afterschl prgram tutr at a lcal middle schl, with the added benefit f cmpleting English educatin degree. I had the pprtunity t g big! The kid wuld need me - a rle mdel and a trustwrthy friend, I believed.
But my first day was welcmed by the students’ indifference (冷漠). The desks were messy and the whle rm smelled f dirty gym scks. My excitement began t die dwn. I dubted whether the new jb was a mistake. The playgrund activity was deafening while hmewrk time was nt much better. After my repeated persistence, they finally turned ff the playgrund mde. But just a few minutes passed when I nticed tw kids quarreling in the crner.
I suppsed it was anther little incident but ne kid named Jeremy bthered me. He shuted at me fr cming at him. And when I asked them t return t their seats, he slammed (用力摔) his backpack and grew mad as I tried t urge him t take the right attitude. “I dn’t like yu, hmewrk and this afterschl prgram! All yu guys d is yell at me. I’m never cming back.” he walked ut f the classrm, slamming the dr.
Naturally, I was s frustrated (挫败的). I wndered why I am here. Mst kids disrespected me! I paused t take a deep breath. Then suddenly I thught t myself, “Yu said yu wuld never serve peple again, but yu dn’t understand what these kids really need.” At that mment, I remembered my middle-schl life. I always had a pr attitude, never did my schlwrk, repeatedly gt int fights, and disrespected my elders.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Realizing I was nt different, I walked ut int the hall and caught up with Jeremy.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________At that mment, my heart brke fr this by and his family life.
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【模拟题 3】(2022·海南·模拟预测)
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短义。
My knees started shaking, yet my bdy frze. It felt as thugh my sul departed my bdy and I had n cntrl ver it. Anxiusly, I lked thrugh the rster (名单) psted n the wall f the lcker rm. My heart was beating harder and harder as I slwly saw all my friends’ names n that list but culd nt find mine. At that mment, I frze. I just culd nt accept that all my friends were n the basketball team while I was nt.
I was s cnvinced there was a mistake that I went and fund the cach. “Hey cach, are yu sure that the rster yu psted is crrect?” I asked anxiusly, dreading (担心) his answer.
“Yes, the names n the list are finalized. Srry if yu did nt make it this year, there is always next year,” the cach replied.
I culd feel the ht, bitter tears filling my eyes, and I ran ut f the rm as fast as I culd. Trying t frget abut the situatin, I headed ver t the cafeteria t buy sme fd. I felt dead inside, like nthing mattered. Walking was such a burden that it felt as if I had a 100-pund weight tied t my backpack. My mind was als blank fr the rest f the schl day. Everything my teachers said went in ne ear and ut the ther.
After schl, as I walked t the parking lt t get picked up, I saw all my friends gathered near the rear f the lt, celebrating and jking arund. I detured (绕道) arund the side f the schl t avid them, trying nt t think abut being the nly ne in ur friend grup failing t make the team.
I saw my father’s car pull up near the schl lt, and I walked up t the car and gt in. He smiled at me, played the radi, and started driving hme.
注意∶1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Nticing my bad md, he asked me what was wrng.
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Inspired by what my father said, I decided t wrk tward my gal.
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【模拟题 4】(2022·福建莆田·二模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A lng time ag, when I wrked in Ahmedabad, we wuld ften drive t Munt Abu fr shrt trips—it tk us anywhere between seven t eight hurs t drive up. That year, my clse relatives were visiting frm Lucknw during the hlidays, and we made a plan t visit Abu fr three days. Since there were seven f us, including my brther’s family wh als lived in Ahmedabad, we hired tw cabs. We picked urselves int the vehicles, stacked (堆放) ur luggage n the carriers n tp and started ut.
A gd time was bad by all, and sn it was time t return. During the jurney back, we stpped at a Dhaba fr tea and snacks near the Mehana district. That’s when I nticed suddenly that the rpe with which the luggage was tied n and f the carriers had cme lse and ne f the suitcases was missing. It must have fallen ff smewhere alng the way.
Althugh it didn’t cntain any valuables—just clthes and sme cash, we decided t retrace ur steps, drawing back fur kilmetres, lking fr the bag. But luck wasn’t ur friend: we culd nt lcate it and returned t Ahmedabad depressed.
After abut a mnth, ne day, while in my ffice, I gt a call frm my assistant that a certain Mr. Shah wanted t see me. I was in the middle f a meeting s he was asked t wait. After I gt dne, I called him int my ffice.
I was lking after the develpment f small industries in the state at the time, s my immediate query was. “Hw can we help yu? D yu want t set up an industry r are yu facing any issues in yur enterprise?”
T which he said, “N, sir. I have nt cme fr any fficial help. It is a persnal matter. Did yu lse smething recently?”
Of curse, it all came back t me and I tld him abut the lst suitcase frm the cab back frm Munt Abu a mnth ag.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then Shah tld his side f the stry.
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But the gentleman insisted n delivering the suitcase t me.
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【模拟题 5】(2022·福建福建·一模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A New Additin t the Family
Fr the initial ten years f his life, Victr was the prince f the husehld. As he was an nly child, his parents petted him and shwered all their lve and attentin n him. Whatever tys his parents bught, they were always meant fr him. Whatever fd was in the refrigeratr, there was n ne t cmpete with him t plish it ff first. Victr culd leave his tys r bks arund the huse with cmplete ease f mind, knwing that there was n ne wh wuld get their hands n his belngings and cause any damage.
Hwever, all that was t change vernight when Victr’s parents brught back his new baby sister, Lina, frm the hspital. With her rsy cheeks, wide pen eyes and angelic smile, Lina caught the hearts f her parents, grandparents and relatives. Everyne fcused their attentin n the cute bunch f jy. Whenever she cried, her mther r father wuld rush t her bed. She simply cried because she wanted t be carried. There was little time left fr Victr.
Nw that Victr’s mther had his baby sister t take care f, she expected Victr himself t d mst f the chres he can d. Victr was asked t clean his wn rm, irn his wn schl unifrm and clean his wn shes. Befre Lina’s arrival, he had never lifted a finger t help ut with these tasks. The whle family als went ut less because it was unhealthy t expse Lina t the bacteria(细菌) being in the utside wrld t ften.
Victr felt neglected by his parents. He felt that they lved Lina mre than him. As a result, he tried t attract his parents’ attentin by becming resistant. One evening, Victr’s parents were called up by his teacher because Victr had gt int a fight at schl. His teacher had nticed Victr’s behaviur and wrk attitude changing dwnwards in the past tw mnths. Befre that, he had been a mdel student.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Upn hearing the teacher’s feedback, Victr’s parents gt lst in thught.
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Victr realized that his parents still cared fr him.
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【模拟题 6】(2022·重庆·一模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My father is a practical man. He can’t explain calculus(微积分),but he can tell yu hw much pressure a biler needs. He can’t draw an architect’s plan, but he can tell yu if the pipes and wiring will sustain the structure. He put himself thrugh night schl t becme an engineer, but that was nly after he wrked a slumber, an electrician, and a mechanic.
One day we walked by a ty stre windw. Sitting in the cmer was the mst unusual dll-huse I’d ever seen. It was shaped liked an upturned lg(原木). Little val windws decrated with nice curtains and framed by tiny balcnies were cut int it.
“Oh, Daddy,” I said, “isn’t it beautiful? D yu think Santa Claus will bring it t me?”
Dad lked at the $100 price tag, silent — that’s a rather big figure in thse days. “I think even Santa culdn’t affrd this huse,” he jked, lifting up his belt as he ften des when he’s nervus. “Maybe ne day, sweetheart.”
On Christmas mrning, I awke early and raced dwnstairs. In the dim light, I made ut a lt f wrapped bxes under the tree — but nne large enugh t cntain my dllhuse. Dad culd see my disappintment He pulled me nt his lap and gently tld me hw, as a by, he had wanted a red wagn, but his father culdn’t affrd ne. He said he made his wn frm wd and ld wheels he fund. “I’ll make ne fr yu,” Dad assured me.
And right after Christmas, despite all the unfinished prjects at hme, he started it. I naively(幼稚地)thught it was an easy ty t make, but every step f the lng prcess was cnsiderably mre cmplex than I had anticipated. Night after night, Dad wuld cme hme frm his jb dead tired, yet he’d always find time t wrk n the lg huse. In the dark yellw electric light, Dad was always busy creating my dllhuse.
要求:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I hesitated, wndering if I shuld help my father.
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In all, it tk us ne mnth f hard wrk.
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