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写作方法指导
叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式，以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体：
这一类的书面表达动词现率最高，且富于变化，用得最多的是动词的过去时态，各种时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时，如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格，那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意以下几点:
1.头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好书面表达，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个＂W＂和一个＂H＂来展开，分别是why, what, when, where, wh及hw。
2.突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写或粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。学.科.网
3.用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。
写作模板
①I can't ___________（事件）withut ___________（人物）。
②I remember clearly when I ___________（事件），I felt ___________（感想）。My parents ___________（做法）。They tld me that ___________ and what I shuld d was ___________. I was tuched and made up my mind t ___________（决心）.
③It is ___________（人物）that ___________.
常用表达
人物类：
(1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that wh ften ffers me much warmth in my life. Let me intrduce him t yu.（ 朋友：患难见真情。我有这样一个朋友，他常常给我温暖。让我把他介绍给你。）
(2) 父母：If yu ask me wh is the mst imprtant ne t me,withut dubt,the answer is my ... . Let me intrduce him t yu .（如果你问我谁对我来说最重要，毫无疑问，答案是我的……。让我把他介绍给你。）
(3) 老师：In bth my life and study,my ... teacher is special t me because he is nt nly my teacher but als my friend wh has made a great difference t my character.（在我的生活和学习中，我的……老师对我来说很特别，因为他不仅是我的老师，也是我的朋友，他对我的性格产生了很大的影响。）
描写类：
1.外貌：... is very beautiful but a little fat with lng hair and big eyes.（非常漂亮，但是有点胖，长头发，大眼睛。）
2.性格： an utging wman wh always gets alng well with peple arund her./ ... is very kind t thers and easy t get n with./is s ready t help thers that we all like t make friends with him.（是一个外向的女人，总是与周围的人相处融洽。/ ...对他人非常友善，容易相处。/乐于帮助别人，我们都喜欢做和他做朋友。）
3.爱好：She is especially gd at cking and ften cks different delicius fds fr me.（她特别会做饭，经常给我做各种好吃的。）
事例类：
（1）Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet truble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encurages me t face the fact bravely and then tries t help me t check the reasn why I fail. At the same time, she shares her gd ways f studying with me.（琳达就像一个天使。每当我遇到麻烦，她都会一直在。当我考试不及格时，她总是鼓励我勇敢地面对事实，然后帮助我检查失败的原因。同时，她也和我分享了她学习的好方法。）
（2）My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, nt nly teaches us hw t learn, but als teaches us hw t be a persn. I remember I made a serius mistakes in Grade seven, that was t cpy thers’ hmewrk. Ms Li knew that. Instead f being angry with me, she tld me the imprtance f study and encuraged me t study hard t becme a talented persn in the future.（我的语文老师李老师不仅教我们如何学习，还教我们如何做人。我记得我在七年级时犯了一个严重的错误，那就是抄别人的作业。李女士对此心知肚明。她没有生我的气，而是告诉我学习的重要性，并鼓励我努力学习，将来成为一个有才华的人。）
（3）Last term, I failed my exam. I was s that that I cried sadly in my rm. When my mther came frm wrk late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I wke up at night, my mther was still wrking. I was deeply mved. Then I made up my mind t study harder than befre.（上学期，我考试不及格，以至于我在我的房间里伤心地哭了。妈妈下班迟到了，她耐心地跟我说话，给我打气。那天晚上，当我半夜醒来时，妈妈还在工作。我深受感动。然后我下定决心比以前更努力地学习。）
闪亮篇首句
(1) One day / The ther day / A cuple f days ag while he 一天/前几天当他正
(2) it was snwing /raining heavily n Mnday /Sunday mrning when...星期一/星期天早上，正在下着大雪/雨，
(3) AII thrugh my junir high schl, I culdn't frget..在我整个的初中生涯中，我不能忘记
(4) Last week, when I was n my way hme, smething terrible happened.上个星期，当我在回家路上的时候，一些糟糕的事情发生了。
(5) The event tk place/happened /ccurred in the early mrning.那件事情发生在一大早。
出彩篇中句
(1) Withut hesitatin, I decided t give him a hand.毫不犹豫，我决定帮助
(2)It was my first time t Munt Tai.那是我第一次去泰山。
(3) We spent many hurs talking happily我们愉快地交谈了几个小时。
(4) The line f peple was endless.人们排成的队伍看不到尽头。
精彩篇尾句
(1) r never frget he day when we visited the farm.我将永远不会忘记我们参观农场的那一天。
(2) What a pleasant trip!多么愉快的一次旅行啊!
(3) This will be an unfrgettable experience. 这将会是一次难忘的经历。
(4) I have never seen a cmedy like that.我从未看过那样的喜剧。
(5) 1 had fun at the party tnight. 今晚我在聚会上玩得很愉快。
加分句子：
1. Sth. impressed me greatly...
2. What impressed me mst is that...
中考真题精讲
（2023·北京·统考中考真题）
同学们参加过各种各样的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。
假设你是李华。请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一个你参加过的社团，谈谈这个社团的活动内容以及你的收获。
提示词语：take part in, practice, skill, benefit, prgress
提示问题：What club did yu jin?
What did yu d in the club?
What have yu learned frm the experience?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：
I have been in the basketball club fr three years. We used t practice frm Mnday t Friday, and n the weekend, we played games with ther teams. During the three years, my skill f playing basketball imprved a lt. And I als made a lt f friends. Playing basketball nt nly helps me keep fit, but als helps me understand the imprtance f teamwrk. I will keep playing and try t be gd at it.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题涉及的关键信息，写短文谈谈自己参加过的社团、这个社团的活动内容及你考生的收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明参加了什么社团；
第二步，介绍社团中的活动；
第三步，谈谈从社团活动中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①used t d sth. 过去常常做某事
②n the weekend 在周末
③nt nly ... but als ... 不仅……而且……
④be gd at 擅长
[高分句型]
We used t practice frm Mnday t Friday, and n the weekend, we played games with ther teams.（and连接表等同关系的并列句）
（2023·山东济宁·中考真题）
某英文网站正在开展以The special gift fr mther/father为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你曾为父亲精心准备的一份礼物。
注意：
1.须包括以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息；
3.100 词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
A special gift fr my father
Peple usually give gifts t smene they lve r care abut. Here is a special gift I gave t my father—a ntebk.
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【答案】例文
A special gift fr my father
Peple usually give gifts t smene they lve r care abut. Here is a special gift I gave t my father—a ntebk.
I gave it t my father n his birthday last year. Thugh the ntebk was simple, it was very special fr my father and me. There were many phts abut ur past life and sme wrds abut things we did. Fr example, the pht that we tk when we visited Beijing was my favrite. This ntebk recrded the happy time and kept ur sweet memries.
When my father received my gift, he was very mved and happy. He thught his little girl had grwn up and he was prud f me. I felt happy, t.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示介绍给父亲准备的礼物，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍送礼物的时间、笔记本中的内容以及这份礼物为什么特别；
第三步，介绍自己父亲的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①fr example例如
②grw up长大
③be prud f为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
①Thugh the ntebk was simple, it was very special fr my father and me.(thugh引导的让步状语从句)
②the pht that we tk when we visited Beijing was my favrite. (that引导的定语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句)
（2023·湖南长沙·统考中考真题）
学校英文报正在以“Amazing Hunan”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：
(1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）；
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Wrd bank: transprt 交通；cnvenient 方便的
Amazing Hunan
Hunan is a lvable and livable place.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：
Amazing Hunan
Hunan is a lvable and livable place. Let me tell yu smething abut Hunan.
First, there are lts f places f interest, such as Zhangjiajie. Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where yu can appreciate the beauty f nature. Secnd, the high-speed train is cnvenient and user-friendly, s yu can g t Hunan by high-speed train. Third, Hunan cuisine cnsists f many kinds f delicius fd that yu can nt miss anyway. If yu like ndles, yu must try the tasty and muth-watering rice ndles in Hunan. What’s mre, the peple in Hunan are helpful and warm-hearted. Yu will feel at hme here.
Welcme t Hunan.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：要求以“Amazing Hunan”为题，结合所给要点进行写作，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，突出写作内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍湖南，引出下文重点；
第二步，介绍湖南的名胜古迹、交通工具、美食和人等；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① lts f 许多
② such as 比如
③ cnsist f 由……组成
④ what’s mre 此外
⑤ feel at hme 感到自在
[高分句型]
① Let me tell yu smething abut Hunan.（祈使句）
② Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where yu can appreciate the beauty f nature.（where引导非限制性定语从句）
③ Third, Hunan cuisine cnsists f many kinds f delicius fd that yu can nt miss anyway.（that引导定语从句）
④ If yu like ndles, yu must try the tasty and muth-watering rice ndles in Hunan.（if引导条件状语从句）
（2023·浙江丽水·统考中考真题）
初中三年即将过去，回顾这段时光，你是否有许多难忘的回忆，也有很多感慨？假定你是李华，你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件，题为“写给自己的一封信”，请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
注意： 1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点，可适当发挥（参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80~100；稿件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Letter t Myself
Dear myself,
Hw time flies! It’s time t say gdbye t yur junir high schl life.
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Wish yu all the best, my dear self.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
A Letter t Myself
Dear myself,
Hw time flies! It’s time t say gdbye t yur junir high schl life.
Memries are still fresh that yu were s shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Smetimes yu even lacked curage t ask the teachers prblems abut learning. But nw, with the help f teachers and warm-hearted classmates, yu becme mre cnfident and utging. D yu still remember the quarrel with yur best friend? Smetimes silence causes misunderstandings. Try t pen yurself up, and yu will understand what friendship means t everybdy.
May yu always keep these ups and dwns in mind. It is all f these unfrgettable mments that help yu grw int a better persn.
Wish yu all the best, my dear self.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆。
第二步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①lack curage缺乏勇气
②with the help f在……帮助下
③quarrel with和……争吵
[高分句型]
①Try t pen yurself up, and yu will understand what friendship means t everybdy. (祈使句+and/r+陈述句)
②It is all f these unfrgettable mments that help yu grw int a better persn. (that引导定语从句)
（2023·天津·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事。
（1）一个下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。
（2）他走过去，看到一位老妇人躺在地上。
（3）了解情况后，他蹲下为老人撑伞。
（4）救护车到达后，他悄悄地离开了。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：蹲下 cruch dwn
救护车 ambulance
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
Hw is everything ging? I’d like t tell yu a stry abut my classmate, Wang Liang.
On a rainy day,
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D yu have a stry t share? Lking frward t yur reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
Hw is everything ging? I’d like t tell yu a stry abut my classmate, Wang Liang.
On a rainy day, Wang Liang saw a grup f peple gathering n the rad. He went ver and saw an ld wman lying n the grund. Knwing the situatin, he cruched dwn t hld an umbrella fr the ld man. When the ambulance arrived, he left quietly.
I think Wang Liang is a gd student wh helps thers. We shuld learn frm him.
D yu have a stry t share? Lking frward t yur reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏给出的五个要点提示，写邮件向笔友Peter讲述同学王亮的感人故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍同学王亮的故事；
第二步，具体讲述这个感人故事；
第三步，发表自己的感想；
第四步，期望收到对方回复。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb. sth. 告诉某人某事
②g ver 走过去
③see sb ding sth. 看到某人正在做某事
④learn frm sb. 向某人学习
[高分句型]
①When the ambulance arrived, he left quietly.（when引导时间状语从句）
②I think Wang Liang is a gd student wh helps thers.（省略that的宾语从句；wh引导定语从句）
（2022·江苏泰州·中考真题）
我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。
要点如下：
1.变化是什么？
2.变化过程是什么？
3.你从中得到了什么启发？
要求：
1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
We grw up in change. Grwth makes ur life full f meaning. Lking back n the three years f junir high schl, I have experienced many changes in my study, thughts, persnality, life and s n. The biggest persnal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in lve with reading.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjy bks at all. Later, my mther always read stries fr me and bught me bks. Gradually, I began t lve reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is als a fantastic way t enjy my free time.
Bks are my friends. And they will benefit me a lt.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍变化是什么；第二段介绍变化过程是什么；第三段介绍从中得到了什么启发。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（2022·湖南湘西·中考真题）
随着义务教育阶段“双减”政策的全面实施，合理安排课外生活对我们初中生尤为重要。某报刊青少年专栏以“我们丰富的课外生活”为主题开展征文活动。请根据以下表格内容提示，以 “Our Clrful Life after Schl”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍丰富多彩的课外生活，并推荐你最喜欢的一项活动且说明原因。
要求:
1. 结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 表达通顺， 语言规范，书写清晰；
3. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息；
4. 词数80左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Our Clrful Life after Schl
Life after schl is an imprtant part in ur daily life. Hw can we make it mre clrful? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Our Clrful Life after Schl
Life after schl is an imprtant part in ur daily life. Hw can we make it mre clrful? We can take part in different vlunteering activities. We can develp ur hbbies and interests, like singing, dancing and s n. We ften get clse t nature, such as climbing muntains, camping. We can als learn sme useful skills in ur daily life, such as cking. I like singing because it is als a gd way t relax myself. Besides, in the music club, I can make many friends. All in all, after-schl activities make my life mre clrful and meaningful.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求以“Our Clrful Life after Schl”为题介绍课外活动；要求包含表格中的内容提示。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用1段落格式，阐述最喜欢的课外活动以及原因；注意无语法和拼写错误。
（2022·重庆A卷·中考真题）
科学研究发现，快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动，请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。
要求：
1. 80-120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1. 起因，经过；
2. 结果，感悟；
3. ……
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
A study shws that happiness can make peple healthier in mind and mental. Our psitive md has an influence n thers. I want t share my experience with yu.
I have a gd friend and her name is Lucy. She was s shrt that ther classmates always laughed at her. She was very upset. At that time I always tld her sme funny stries t cheer her up. And t becme tall and strng, I als taught her t keep a healthy diet and d sme exercise. Little by little, she became cnfident.
Frm this experience, I learn that happiness is imprtant and it can bring us a lt like a mre sunny mindset.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历；最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（2021·湖南张家界市·中考真题）
假如你是李华，你们班上打算举办关于“My Habits”的主题班会。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。
要求∶
1.内容必须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不少于50词（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hell, everyne. I’m Li Hua._________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank yu!
【答案】
Hell, everyne! I’m Li Hua. Tday I want t talk abut my habits. I have a lt f gd habits. I always exercise and read bks every day. Als, I ften drink juice. Hwever, I have sme bad habits, t. I usually watch TV fr mre than tw hurs a day, and I ften eat hamburgers fr dinner. My parents are nt happy because I never help with husewrk.
That’s all. Thank yu!
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，描述自己的习惯，包括好习惯和坏习惯等，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
（2021·北京中考真题）
现实中，大到自然环境和社会环境，小到个人生活和学习，变化无处不在，面对变化，唯有积极适应，才能有所进步和收获。
某英文网站正在开展以“适应变化”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的,以及有什么收获。
提示词语：help, enjy, new, challenge, take actin
提示问题：What is the change that happened in yur life?
Hw did yu deal with it?
What have yu learned frm the experience?
There are many changes in a persn’s life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
There are many changes in a persn’s life. When I entered middle schl, I felt lnely. I missed my ld friends, but I knew I had t fit in. I ffered help t my class, jined in the after-schl activities and invited my classmates t my birthday party. Gradually, I made sme friends and enjyed the cmpany f my new classmates.
Frm this experience, I get t knw change brings challenges as well as pprtunities. When change cmes, we shuld face it and take actin.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己在生活中的一个变化，以及如何应对这个变化，有什么收获等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
（2021·江苏盐城市·中考真题）
初中三年，我们都有一些难以忘怀的经历。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“An Unfrgettable Experience”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1. What was the experience?
2. What have yu learned frm it?
注意事项：
（1）词数：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
An Unfrgettable Experience
Lking back n the past three years, everyne had sme unfrgettable experiences._____________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
An Unfrgettable Experience
Lking back n the past three years, everyne had sme unfrgettable experiences. I will never frget the experience f being a vlunteer fr the Asian Games held in ur city.
Being ne f the three vlunteers selected frm ur schl, I felt excited and prud. T make sure that I culd prvide the best service, I practiced in my spare time, especially my spken English. When the day finally came, I felt a little bit nervus because I was afraid f making any mistakes. Frtunately, I perfrmed well and was spken highly f by the vlunteer rganizatin.
I learned that we shuld be cnfident and hard-wrking. It was the first time that I had been a vlunteer fr such an imprtant event, which made me prud ever since.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“An Unfrgettable Experience”为题，根据提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍令自己难忘的经历；第三段介绍自己的感受和学到了什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
名校模拟题提升练
（2023·北京昌平·期中）
进入初中以来，你的学校一定组织过很多有意义的外出研学活动，让你和同学们开阔了眼界，体验了快乐，增进了友谊。新学期你的学校现正举办 “My Study Tur ”征文活动，请你根据下面的提示问题，向大家介绍一次你所参加的外出研学活动， 说一说你去了哪，做了什么，以及你的收获。
提示词语：histrical sites, museums, experience, fantastic, exciting
提示问题：
1.Where did yu g n the study tur?
2.What did yu d n the tur?
3.What have yu learnt frm the study tur?
My Study Tur
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【答案】例文
My Study Tur
Last term, I tk part in a study tur with my classmates t Xi’an. We first went t visit Emperr Qinshihuang’s Mausleum Site Museum, where we saw the wisdm f ancient Chinese peple. In the afternn, we went t watch sme shadw plays, an ancient frm f Chinese strytelling. The fllwing day, we climbed the famus Great Wild Gse Pagda. Standing n the tp f it, we had a great view f the city. After that, we tasted sme delicius lcal fd. We als had lts f activities, such as climbing the muntains and sharing the study tur reprt. The trip was bth pleasant and educatinal.
I feel lucky t have such a lvely tur in Xian. It was an excellent pprtunity t experience the lcal culture and gain a deeper appreciatin f Chinese histry.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍一次你所参加的外出研学活动；
第二步，具体阐述要点提示内容。重点写你去了哪，做了什么；
第三步，书写结语，谈谈自己参加了此次外出研学活动的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加，加入
②had a great view f 对……看得很清楚
③such as例如
④lts f 许多
[高分句型]
①We first went t visit Emperr Qinshihuang’s Mausleum Site Museum, where we saw the wisdm f ancient Chinese peple. （where引导的时间状语从句）
② It was an excellent pprtunity t experience the lcal culture and gain a deeper appreciatin f Chinese histry.（it作形式主语的强调句）
（2023·江苏徐州·期中）
人的成长就是生活中的旅途，总会遇到这样或那样的问题。通过阅读、写个人日记、与他人交流等方法解决问题的过程也是我们学会学习、学会成长的过程。你在成长过程中曾经遇到了怎样的问题或困惑，又是如何解决的？请写一篇90词左右的短文进行分享，内容要包含以下要点。短文段落开头已给出，不计入总词数。
What was yur prblem and hw did yu feel?
What did yu d t slve yur prblem? （ At least 2 ways）
What did yu learn frm it?
Life is like a jurney. There are mments that help us learn and grw. Once I __________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
T wrk ut the prblem, I first ______________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Frm it, I have learnt that ___________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Life is like a jurney. There are mments that help us learn and grw. Once I used t be alne because I didn’t have friends, I felt lnely and upset.
T wrk ut the prblem, I first tried t cmmunicate with thers mre ften and make as many friends as pssible. When I was in truble, I tld my classmates abut my truble because we were the same age and we culd understand each ther easily. I als asked my teachers and parents fr help. Nw, I can get n well with peple arund me, s I dn’t feel lnely anymre.
Frm it, I have learnt that we shuld face ur prblem and try t find ways t slve it. Anything is pssible if we try ur best.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示问题进行写作，可适当添加细节，但要突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最大的问题是什么；
第二步，介绍你从谁那里得到了帮助，以及解决问题的过程；
第三步，介绍你的收获。
[亮点词汇]
① pssible 尽可能……
② get n well with 与……相处融洽
③ try ur best 尽我们最大的努力
[高分句型]
① When I was in truble, I tld my classmates abut my truble because we were the same age and we culd understand each ther easily. （when引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
② Anything is pssible if we try ur best. （if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·北京丰台·期中）
自立意味着独立地安排自己的生活、意味着自主地处理学习和生活中遇到的难题、意味着靠自己的双手去创造多彩的生活。
某英文网站正在开展以“T be independent”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次你独白居家的经历以及你的收获。
提示词语：get up，ck meals，prud
提示问题：
●What did yu d when yu were alne at hme?
●What did yu learn frm this experience?
It’s imprtant fr us t learn t be independent.__________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：
It’s imprtant fr us t learn t be independent. I still remember the days when I was alne at hme. My parents went n business last year and I was the nly ne at hme. I had t get up early and try t ck my wn meals, d the dishes and d the husewrk. I realized that I used t depend n my parents t much and lacked independence. I am prud f myself.
During the days withut my parents, I learned t take care f myself and realized that it’s imprtant fr us all t be independent. We shuld knw the fact that n parents can keep cmpany with their children fr the whle life. S parents shuld encurage their children t d whatever they can t develp their abilities f independence. I hpe mre and mre children can learn t be independent.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：提示短语和提示问题已给出，不要遗漏，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述文章主题；
第二步，具体介绍独自居家的经历；
第三步，具体介绍独自居家的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①depend n依靠
②be prud f以……为自豪
③encurage sb t d sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I realized that I used t depend n my parents t much and lacked independence.（宾语从句）
②We shuld knw the fact that n parents can keep cmpany with their children fr the whle life.（定语从句）
（2023·上海静安·期中）
Write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic “A persn wh ________ me befre”
（以“曾经________过我的人”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
很多人曾经出现在你的成长旅程中，他们或帮助你，或鼓励你，或爱护你，……
请你描述他（她）是怎样的人，以及发生在你和他（她）之间的故事，并谈谈他（她）对你的影响。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息、否则不予评分）
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【答案】例文
A persn wh helped me befre
A persn wh helped me befre is Mr. Jhnsn. He is my math teacher. He is a kind and thughtful persn. Once, when I failed my math test, he ffered t help me after class. With his help, I passed the exam. He taught me that it’s imprtant t persevere in the face f difficulties. His kindness and encuragement have inspired me t wrk harder.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全题目，指明需要感谢的人；
第二步，描述这个人是怎样的人；
第三步，讲述发生在你们之间的故事；
第四步，谈谈这个人对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①ffer t d sth.提出要做某事
②with his help在他的帮助下
③inspire sb. t d sth.鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Once, when I failed my math test, he ffered t help me after class.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②He taught me that it’s imprtant t persevere in the face f difficulties.（that引导的宾语从句；it作形式主语）
（2023·北京海淀·期中）
生命不是要超越别人，而是要超越自己。某英文网站正在举行以“超越自我” (G Beynd Ourselves) 为主题的征文活动，请分享你遇到的一次挑战，谈谈你是如何超越自己的，以及你的收获。
提示词语： stress, upset, decide, plan, cnfident
提示问题：
● What did yu d t g beynd yurself?
● What have yu learned frm this experience?
G Beynd Ourselves
It’s imprtant fr us t g beynd urselves when facing a challenge.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：
G Beynd Ourselves
It’s imprtant fr us t g beynd urselves when facing a challenge. I used t be pr at spken English. I tried many times but fund it hard fr me t speak in frnt f peple.
I decided t try my best t g ver the difficulty. At first, I fund a friend t be my language partner. We practiced spken English tgether whenever pssible. Later, I turned t my English teacher fr help. I listened t her advice and started t watch English mvies and learn t sing English sngs. It really wrked. Nw, my spken English has imprved a lt and I am able t give an English speech in frnt f my class with cnfidence.
I’ve learned a lt frm this experience. When we face a challenge, we shuld never limit urselves t reach beynd. Instead, we shuld keep trying. What’s mre, we can always ask fr help frm thse wh can bring us the best.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：内容重点讲述自己超越自我的经历，注意时态切换。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己曾经遇到的问题；
第二步，详细讲述“超越自我”的过程；
第三步，表达自己的收获和感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be pr at 不擅长
②g ver the difficulty 克服困难
③reach beynd 超越
[高分句型]
①I tried many times but fund it hard fr me t speak in frnt f peple.（it作形式宾语，动词不定式作真正宾语）
②When we face a challenge, we shuld never limit urselves t reach beynd.（时间状语从句）
③What’s mre, we can always ask fr help frm thse wh can bring us the best.（定语从句）
（2023·福建厦门·期中）
时光荏苒，转眼间你已经从一个懵懂的小孩变成了即将毕业的准初三毕业生。这些年，你的身上肯定发生了很多改变，这些改变也在渐渐影响着你。请你写一篇作文向学校广播站投稿，分享自己的改变，词数80词左右。
要求：
1. 介绍自己的改变（外貌、性格、兴趣等的改变……）；
2. 具体说说其中一个改变；
3. 这个变化带给你的思考。
My Changes
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【答案】例文
My Changes
I am in Grade 9 nw and I have changed a lt since I became a middle schl student.
First, I used t be thin, but nw I am a little fatter. Secnd, I have made much prgress in English. I used t be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, nw I ften get gd scres n my English exams, and I am interested in English. Third, I used t play basketball, but nw I am used t playing ftball with my friends. What’s mre, I’m mre utging than I used t be. I used t be afraid f speaking in frnt f peple, but nw I can give a speech in public. I’ve als made many friends. Als, I used t spend t much time playing cmputer games, but nw I help my mther d sme husewrk in my free time.
I like these changes because they make me becme better.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己发生了很多改变；
第二步，从外貌、性格、兴趣等方面介绍自己的变化；
第三步，总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①used t d sth.过去常常做某事
②make prgress取得进步
③be interested in对……感兴趣
④in frnt f在……前面
[高分句型]
①I am in Grade 9 nw and I have changed a lt since I became a middle schl student.（since导的时间状语从句）
②I like these changes because they make me becme better.（because引导的原因状语从句）年份
地区
话题
命题形式
2023年
北京
以“你参加过的社团”为主题，给学校英文网站投稿
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山东济宁
以The special gift fr mther/father为主题的征文活动
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湖南长沙
以“Amazing Hunan”为题的征文活动
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浙江丽水
“写给自己的一封信”为题的投稿
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天津
讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事
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2022年
江苏泰州
分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。
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湖南湘西
介绍丰富多彩的课外生活，并推荐你最喜欢的一项活动且说明原因。
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重庆
讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。
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2021年
湖南张家界
班上举办关于“My Habits”的主题班会
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北京
谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的，以及有什么收获
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江苏盐城
题为“An Unfrgettable Experience”的征文比赛
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A Letter t Myself
内容要点
参考词汇
Memries
Feelings
Our Clrful Life after Schl
take part in different vlunteering activities
develp hbbies and interests, like singing, dancing...
get clse t nature, such as climbing muntains, camping...
learn sme useful skills in ur daily life, such as...
Gd Habits
Bad habits
Activities
exercise
read bks
drink juice
Hw ften
always
every day
ften
Activities
watch TV
eat hamburgers
help with husewrk
Hw ften
always
ften
never