专题11 水中救人-2024新高考英语读后续写话题分类汇编

这是一份专题11 水中救人-2024新高考英语读后续写话题分类汇编，共18页。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On July 8, 2017, eight members f a family in ttal, were enjying an evening tgether at the beach in Panhandle, Flrida. As the sun sank lwer n the hrizn, the tw bys Nah, 11, and Stephen, 8 swam int the waves withut the grwn-ups nticing. Sn they realized that the cean had pulled them int the sea. After trying and failing t swim back, they started waving and screaming fr help. But the lifeguards had been ff duty fr the evening.
The bys had been struggling fr several minutes when Jacky and Tabatha, a cuple frm Gergia, heard them. They dived int the water and sn reached the tw brthers. But after a few minutes, they were all trapped in a rip current (离岸流) — a pwerful ne that culd sweep even the strngest swimmer ut t sea! By then, sme teenagers had heard the cry. One f the teens rushed int the water, grabbed Jacky, and pulled him back t shre. Meanwhile, Tabatha culd feel herself being pulled farther ut. She was already exhausted and beginning t feel desperate as she was trying t save bth bys alne.
Onshre, Jacky was terrified. A man stpped. “What’s wrng?” asked Shaun, wh was heading back t his car. “My wife is drwning!” Brittany said. Shaun immediately strde (大步跨) int the water. But several minutes later, a gaping 15 feet still lay between him and Tabatha and the bys. He knew that if he cntinued, he’d becme anther victim. He turned arund t seek help.
It was abut that time that Rberta, the bys’ mther, returned frm the bathrm and lked arund fr her children. She was shcked t spt them flating much farther ut than they were allwed t g. She fught the waves t get t her screaming sns and the stranger wh was trying t save them, but she quickly discvered it was nearly impssible t make headway in any directin. Lking arund, Rberta sighed with relief t see sme mre peple cming t help.
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1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
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When they tried in vain t rescue the brthers and Tabatha, a risky idea came t them
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By then, mre swimmers had als nticed the grup in truble and rushed t jin the human chain.
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When they tried in vain t rescue the brthers and Tabatha，a risky idea came t them. T keep themselves frm lsing their fting in the rip current, they began hlding n t ne anther t frm a human chain extending frm the beach all the way ut t the struggling and Tabatha. They stayed linked tightly and managed t ensure they were safe by making their feet firmly planted in the sand. Hwever, that required mre links—prbably dzens f them. Shaun sptted ther swimmers n the beach and shuted, “Dn’t just stand there! Cme and help.”
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By then，mre swimmers had als nticed the grup in truble and rushed t jin the human chain．One by ne，link by link，ttal strangers walked int the waves and grasped ne anther by the wrists，determined that n ne wuld die n that beach．At last，they made it and Tabatha and the tw brthers were saved! “Thse peple n the beach are angels n earth，”said Rberta．“Whether it is the first persn r the last persn in the chain，they are all ur heres，wh helped get ur family ut f truble.”
Passage 2 水中救人
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
After study fr hurs, I went utside and up t the rf nearby fr a break and watched peple swimming in the sea. It was a sunny day—a blue, cludless sky ver a calm sea. But then, as I lked in the distance. I discvered a series f three r fur big waves heading twards the shre. I'd seen these mini-tsunamis (小型海啸)many times befre. They were heading at speed in the directin f the swimming area. Mst peple knew t lk ut fr them, but frm the screams that started cming frm the beach, I culd tell smene was in truble.
Withut thinking, I ran dwn int the street, hlding my bdybard (冲浪板)n the way and shuted at a stranger t call the castguard(海岸警卫). My neighbr Tm had heard the screaming as well and was als utside with his bdybard, s tgether we rushed t the steps that led dwn t the sea.
Once we gt clser, we discvered the waves had pulled a by and a girl int the pen sea. I knew that the nearest bat wuld take at least 30 minutes t reach us. I wasn't used t this srt f emergency—I'd never been trained as a lifeguard—but I didn't think twice abut trying t save them.
I suppse in a way I wanted t impress everyne; at 19, a deal like that can seem like a gd pprtunity t shw ff.
Tm and I dived int the water and it tk us 10 minutes t get t them. When we finally reached them, they were almst lifeless with nly their heads cming in and ut f the water. We culd tell they were still alive frm their small breaths but it was clear they wuldn't have been able t stay there much lnger. I held the by and pulled him ver my bard. Tm then mved the girl nt his bard.
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1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
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We discussed pushing them back t the shre, but we were t far ut.
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That night, wrd came frm the hspital that the tw kids were in gd cnditin.
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We discussed pushing them back t the shre, but we were t far ut. We had t wail, trying t keep them n the bdy bards. Patting their faces t wake them up, we cntinuusly tld them t be strng. After what seemed a century, I felt extremely exhausted while swimming hard t keep myself aflat. Casting a lk at Tm, I culd tell he was als apparently wrn- ut. Lking at the vast sea, I felt a sense f fear surging thrugh my whle bdy. Salt stinging my eyes, I culd hardly knw hw lng I culd hld n. But 1 still shuted in my head: fcus. In sheer desperatin, I finally caught sight f sme bats with lifeguards n them heading twards us in the distance. Thank yu, Lrd. Quite sn, I felt strng arms pull me ut f the sea nt the bard.
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That night, wrd came frm the hspital that the tw kids were in gd cnditin. Sighing with relief, I culdn’t stp thinking abut the whle event. I knew they wuld have died if they had been in the sea fr any lnger. Obviusly, I had dne a big deal which is surely a gd pprtunity t shw ff. I had expected t experience sme srt f sense f wellbeing r greatness, but nne f that came. Rather than feel like a her, I believe anyne wh culd swim wuld have dne the same thing.
Passage 3打球落海
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
We lived nt far frm the sea, but I had never been allwed by my parents t play in the sea water. It was said that there was weed(水草) at the bttm f the water alng the beach and f curse it was dangerus t swim in the water. But I didn’t believe it and that day, I agreed t play with my friends n the beach. I had t lie t my parents since I wuld never get a chance t g ut if I tld them I wuld g t play n the beach withut them in sight.
After breakfast, I read a bk in my rm fr sme time t wait frm my mum t leave the huse. But she kept wrking in the kitchen. I culdn’t waste time any mre. Otherwise, Bbby and Jimmy wuld be angry.
I went dwnstairs slwly and tried t walk casually twards the back dr. Mum asked me withut lking up frm her wrk f dishwashing, “Where are yu ging?’ I answered withut hesitatin, “I am ging t the utside n the grass t play with Jack and Tim.” After I gt ut f the rm, I breathed a sigh f relief. My plan had wrked ut fine s far. I climbed the fence and jumped nt the muddy field a few feet away frm my huse and started running twards the bus stp at tp speed. I was n the beach scanning the crwd fr my friends Jimmy and Bbby abut ten minutes later. After a while, I saw them near a ccnut (椰子) tree. I ran twards them and gt int my swimming trunks(游泳裤).Fr abut an hur, we played vlleyball happily. Suddenly, Bbby hit the ball t hard and the ball fell nt the sea. Just as Bbby was ging t pick up the ball, the tide(潮水) came in and carried the ball further and further away frm the shre. I wanted t shw ff my swimming skills, s I declared t help get the ball fr them.
注意：
1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
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I dived int the water and started swimming at a steady pace.
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I struggled t keep aflat (漂浮的) but it was n use.
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I dived int the water and started swimming at a steady pace. After swimming fr abut ten minutes, I became tired, but when I saw that the ball was nly a few feet away frm me, I put in an extra burst f effrt. Hwever, just as I was ging t get the ball, a very strng current swept the ball further away frm me. What made me terrified was that my feet were trapped by sme weed and I culd nt swim anymre.
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I struggled t keep aflat but it was n use. “If I had listened t my parents, this wuld never have happened,” I thught regretfully. Just at that mment, I fund a familiar figure running thrugh the crwd twards me. It was my father. When he fund that I was nt playing utside n the grass, he knew quickly what happened and came t the beach as fast as he culd. His quick actin saved my life.
Passage 4 冲浪遇险
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It was a Sunday mrning. Betty wke up earlier than usual. She culdn’t sleep any lnger because she was s excited that her uncle Mark was taking her t the beach. She had always lved ging surfing with her uncle. She put her swimming suit n and tk quickly that she had prepared the night gt befre and went utside t wait. She jumped up and dwn with jy when she saw her uncle’s red jeep turn the crner dwn her street.
Uncle Mark gt ut f the car and helped Betty get in. “Are yu ready?” he asked. “Yes!” replied Betty. Uncle Mark culd see the excitement in her face. Suddenly he said seriusly, “Well, befre we g, I have t let yu knw that a shark appeared recently where we're ging t surf tday.” Scared and shcked, Betty culdn’t say a wrd. “Haha! I'm kidding yu,” Uncle Mark burst ut laughing. Betty laughed t. She knew Uncle Mark liked teasing thers. “Let’s g and have sme breakfast, I knw just the place,” Uncle Mark said. They went t a breakfast shp and ate sme tacs (炸玉米饼).
After breakfast the tw f them went dwn t Pacific Beach and gt their surfbards ready. “First yu have t wax(打蜡)the bttm, explained Uncle Mark. “I knw. I’ve watched yu d it befre!" Betty said as she tk the wax frm Uncle Mark's hand. It tk abut 15 minutes t wax the bttm f their bards. When Betty finished, Uncle Mark lked it ver t make sure it was dne well. “Nice jb, Betty, yu wax yur bard like a true surfer.”
Finally, they were ready t get int the water. They carried their bards dwn t the beach and went ut int the water. Betty was verly excited and tried t rush t catch a wave. Predictably, she crashed and had t start ver. Next was her uncle's turn. He std up n his first try and smthly surfed the wave befre jumping int the water. Betty cheered fr her uncle's perfect run.
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1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
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All f a sudden, Betty felt smething tuching the bttm f her ft.
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“Help! Help!” Betty screamed in hrrr.
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All f a sudden, Betty felt smething tuching the bttm f her ft. She began t panic. She tried t climb n tp f her surfbard and lk t see what was swimming belw. She turned arund and saw a giant shark fin circling her. Befre Betty culd call ut t her uncle, the shark attacked her surfbard. Luckily the shark missed her but nw she was stuck in the water.
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“Help! Help!” Betty screamed in hrrr. Hearing Bettys scream and seeing the shark. Uncle Mark was quick t act. By the time he arrived, Betty was exhausted frm keeping herself aflat withut a surfbard. Uncle Mark tld Betty t grab nt his surfbard. He swam crazy and quickly brught them bth back nt the shre. Betty was crying but felt safe as she knew Uncle Mark wuld always be there prtecting her.
Passage 5 被水草缠住
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“If mum finds ut that I'm ging t the beach, I'll be in big truble.” I said t myself sftly in a lw vice.
I went dwnstairs slwly and tried t walk casually int the kitchen. As I was walking twards the back dr, mum asked withut lking up frm her “dish-washing”, “Where are yu ging?” I answered back withut hesitatin, “I am ging t the garden t play.” After I gt ut f the kitchen, I breathed a sigh f relief. My plan had wrked ut fine s far. I climbed the fence and jumped nt the muddy field next t my huse and started running twards the bus stp at tp speed.
After half an hur I was at the beach scanning the crwd fr my friends, Jimmy and Bbby. Tw yung men were racing in the canes (独木舟). After a while, I saw them near a ccnut tree. I ran twards them and gt int my swimming trunk (游泳裤). Fr abut an hur, we played vlleyball happily.
Suddenly, Bbby hit the ball t hard and the ball fell int the sea. Just as Bbby was ging t pick up the ball, the tide came in and carried the ball further and further away frm the shre. I wanted t shw ff my swimming skills s I declared t help get the ball fr them.
I dived int the water and started swimming at a steady pace. After swimming fr abut ten minutes, I became tired but when I saw that the ball was nly a few feet away frm me, I put in an extra burst f speed. Hwever, just as I was ging t get the ball, a very strng current swept the ball further away frm me. At that mment, a string f weed (海草)tangled (缠绕) up with my feet and I culd nt swim prperly. I struggled t keep aflat but it was n use. “ If I had listened t my parents, this wuld never have happened,” I thught silently.
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2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
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Finally, after struggling fr a minute r tw, I still gt pulled underwater.
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When I wke up, I was in an empty rm lying n a bed.
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Finally, after struggling fr a minute r tw, I still gt putted underwater. I tld myself I shuld never give up. Then I pulled the weed again with great effrts. The weed finally brke. I swam back t the surface t take a deep breath. I saw tw yung men in canes, racing each ther. I was exhausted and shuted fr help. The tw men saw me and raced twards me. By the time they reached me, I had been already uncnscius.
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When I wke up, I was in an empty rm lying n a bed. It was nt until a dctr came int the rm that I realized that I was in a hspital. Jimmy and Bbby tld me the tw yung men brught me t the shre and sent me t the hspital. After a few minutes, my parents with half angry and half wrried faces walked in. My parents sclded me fr running ut f the huse secretly but were als glad that I was nt seriusly injured. I will never frget that terrifying experience. Neither will I ever want t shw ff again.
Passage 6 胆小鬼
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Rbert and Henry were tw friends in the same class. They always played tgether and went hme tgether. One day，Rbert and Henry were ging hme frm schl, when, n turning a crner, Rbert cried ut, “A fight! Let’s g and see!”
“N,” said Henry. “Let us g quietly hme and nt meddle with(插手)this quarre1. We have nthing t d with it and may get int truble. Als ur parents are expecting t have dinner with us tgether at hme and I dn’t want them t wrry abut me.”
“Yu are a cward, and afraid t g,” said Rbert，and ff ha ran. Henry want straight hme, and in the afternn went t schl as usual.
But Rbert had tld all the bys that Henry was a cward, and they laughed at him a great deal. Frm then n, they lked dwn upn Henry and didn’t want t play with him tgether.
Henry was sad but he wasn’t angry with Rbert fr his rude behavir, because he learned that true curage is shwn mst in bearing misunderstanding when it was nt deserved, and that he ught t be afraid f nthing but ding wrng. Thus, he just ignred the ther bys’ laughter and cntinued t g t schl and study as well. Hwever, Rbert didn’t invite Henry t g hme with him anymre. Instead, he had sme ther bys wh als thught Henry was a cward. Every day after schl，they didn’t g hme directly but went t the river r smewhere t play games and had a lt f fun.
A few days later, Rbert was bathing with his new friends in a river, and gt ut f his depth. He struggled, and screamed fr help, but all in vain. The bys wh had called Henry a cward gt ut f the water as fast as they culd, but they did nt even try t help him.
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Rbert was fast sinking．
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Thus，Rbert's life was saved．
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Rbert was fast sinking. It seemed as if Rbert wuld be drwned. Just at the mment, Henry happened t be passing by. Hearing the screams, Henry ran t the riverside, threw ff his clthes and jumped int the water withut hesitatin. He reached Rbert just as he was sinking the last time. By great effrt, and with much danger t himself, he brught Rbert t the shre.
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Thus, Rbert’s life was saved. Rbert and his new friends were ashamed at having called Henry a cward. They realized that Henry had true curage. They said srry t Henry fr their rude behavir and asked fr his frgiveness. Henry frgave them happily. He and Rbert were friends again and they went hme tgether as usual. Frm this, Rbert learned what true curage was: never be afraid t d gd, but always fear t d evil.

Passage 7 海上遇风暴
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Sam Watts was a 37-year-ld fisherman living and Wrking in Canada. One day, Sam planned t head ut int the Pacific at 9 am and wrk straight thrugh until 5pm the next day. Jining Sam wuld be his crewman, 24-year-ld Tm Buck.
Althugh Sam had been warned that a strm was cming, there was little that wuld keep him frm ging. As he sailed thrugh the waves sme 120 kilmeters frm land, Sam let ut his three-kilmeter-lng fishing line. The strm was gaining strength n land but had yet t reach the men far ffshre. That changed arund 1 am. Waves rcked the small bat, which began t turn sideways like an amusement park ride. “Get us ut f here!” Tm screamed t Sam. “Let’s g back!”
With the winds and waves kicking up, the bat began t fill with water. Sam and Tm tried t pull in the fishing line tgether, but the high waves filled the bat with water, frcing Sam t make a hard decisin. He cut the line, lsing thusands f dllars’ wrth f equipment and fish in the sea. He then pinted the bat tward a prt five hurs away. Sam then called his bss, William Fx, t reprt his psitin.
With dawn cming, Sam sptted the rise f the muntains n the hrizn. He was figuring ut a rute thrugh the dangerus waters when suddenly the mtr stpped. “I culdn’t believe it,” Sam said. “We were 24 kilmeters ff the cast, and the mtr died.” High waves raised and drpped the bat, sending the men crashing int the sides. “William, William!” Sam yelled int the radi. “If yu’re cming t get me, cme nw!”
“We’re cming!” William shuted back.
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2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
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Shrtly after, the radi died and the wind cntinued t blw straight ffshre, driving the men farther ut t sea.
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The next mrning, Stun sptted a fishing bat in the distance.
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Shrtly after, the radi died and the wind cntinued t blw straight ffshre, driving the men farther ut t sea. It seemed like the gd f the sea was hwling, leaving them in the deepest place f the darkness. Frightening thugh the strm was, Sam and Tm managed t stay safe in the bat. All f a sudden, Sam shuted and pinted ut, "Lk! There is an island!" They made their best t land n the island. What they saw was a paradise! High up n the trees were varius fruits, dwn beside the trees ran a river, and in the distance were herds f sheep and cws. After a nice meal, they fell int sleep safe and sund.
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The next mrning, Stun sptted a fishing bat in the distance. Beside the bat was a diary. "Wh wuld have been here?" he wndered, skimming the diary. The hst f the bat was als a man kept n the island 10 years ag. Whereas he was alne and never gave up the hpe f survival. He recrded his prcess f striving t live in details until he was saved, and he decided t leave diary in case anyne has the same experience like him. In the meantime, up in the sky, there was the helicpter t save them.
Passage 8 水中救人
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Gary Messina, an investment banking analyst, nw 38, was n his mrning run alng New Yrk City's East River. Suddenly smething caught his eye-a large 60-year-ld man balancing n the fur-ft-high railing (栏杆)that guarded the path frm the water. As he gt clser t the scene, the man tk a step frward and jumped int the dark, rugh river belw. Messina rushed t the railing t find that the man was struggling in the water, clearly unable t swim. If he had intended t kill himself that mrning, he had nw changed his mind. The jumper screamed crazily fr help as the rapids pulled him away frm the seawall （防波堤）.Other jggers als heard the man's calling. Jhn Green, nw 31, immediately drpped his phne and keys n land, alng with his sneakers, and jumped in the cld river. "Peple had called the plice, but it was unclear when they'd get there," says Green, a cmmercial insurance brker. "I just reacted." Sn after that, Messina jined him in the river.
The flw was rapid while the temperature was freezing. Reaching t the jumper seemed t be a nearly impssible task fr the tw rescuers. Luckily, just as the jumper was lsing strength, Green grabbed hld f him. The pair were abut 30 yards frm the seawall when Messina caught up with them. They stabilized the man, with Messina supprting his back and Green hlding him up frm either side. He was unrespnsive but nt uncnscius.
As the men made their way tward the cncrete seawall that stretched fr blcks in each directin, Green had an awful realizatin: With the water flwing a gd eight feet belw the lip f the wail and n ladder r dck（码头）in sight, there was n way ut f the river. What's wrse, the jumper, wh was six ft tw and weighed arund 260 punds, was deadweight in his rescuers' arms, which meant they culd use nly their legs t supprt themselves in the water.
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1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
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"A rescue bat is n its way," smene shuted t them.
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Hwever, they encuntered a new threat: The flw created by the rapids was sucking them under the bat.
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“A rescue bat is n its way,” smene yelled t them. Treading water was getting tugher as time went by. After ten minutes, they managed t get t the river’s edge. Green tried wedging a hand and a ft int a tiny crack in the wall, resulting in cutting himself in the prcess. Fighting the current and hlding the man abve the water quickly became exhausting, s they gave in t drifting while staying as clse t the wall as they culd. Frtunately, the rescue bat finally came in sight.
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Hwever, they encuntered a new threat: The flw created by the rapids was sucking them under the bat. Messina remembers being pulled dwn just as the rescuers grabbed nt the man, allwing him t let g. “I was cmpletely ut f energy,” he says. Smehw, he grasped a ple attached t the bat deck, which undisputedly brught him t safety. Within ten minutes, the grup was back n land. The man they had saved was taken t the hspital fr evaluatin. As fr the rescuers, bth f them was at wrk by 10:30 a.m. “I was a bit late,” admits Green, smiling. “But I had a gd excuse.”
Passage 9 海上划船落水
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One f my sisters wh had wrked abrad fr the 10 years returned hme fr her vacatin. All the family members were happy. My parents gave her a simple celebratin and prepared fd fr us t share.
While I was staying with them, an idea came t me at the last mment. We culd have a family uting n the beach. I immediately apprached my siblings and tld them abut it. All f them agreed. It had been a lng time since we went uting and it was the chance t d it again. We set ff the next day.
I felt the sea breeze as I stepped n the sand. The weather was fair and many peple were enjying the seawater. I ran twards the water and felt the cldness f it. My siblings placed ut things in a big cttage. They brught many fds and planned t ck grilled fish and prk. Everyne in the cttage was busy preparing fd while the children went t swim. I was already a teenager but I culdn't swim. My brther had taught me s many times but I still sank. That was why I just played in the shallw part f the sea.
On the ther side f the beach, I saw a small fishing bat. I never tried t ride n it, but while I was lking at it, I was eager t take a ride n the bat. All f my siblings were busy and nbdy culd g with me. Withut a secnd thught, I went t the bat alne. I paid the fisherman the rent and started t push it twards the shre. In my mind, I wuld nt g t the deep part. At first, I made it flat and I really enjyed it! I made it mve frward and kept it aflat fr several minutes. Suddenly, the seawater became disturbing and large waves surrunded me. I culdn't cntrl the mvement f the bat anymre.
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My bat was gradually pulled twards the deeper part.
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When I came t life, I was lying in a bed.
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My bat was gradually pilled twards the deeper part. S dangerus was the situatin that it was impssible fr me t get rid f the dilemma withut thers’ help. Hence, I shuted ludly t attract my siblings’ attentin. Nevertheless, it was extremely evident that they didn’t hear me. T my hrrr, a big wave came and threw me frm the bat. I was seized by a strng sense f hpelessness, struggling in the water, waving my hands with all my strength. After a while, I began t sink and lst my thught.
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When I came t life, I was lying in a bed. I was accmpanied by my parents and siblings in the hspital. As a matter f fact, it was my brther that saw and saved me frm the sea. I was uncnscius when I was rescued. They immediately sent me t the hspital. Feeling frtunate, I made up my mind t cherish life and nt t try such adventure again. Mther said we wuld have a celebratin fr anther life given t me. I tld them the celebratin wuld never be held at the beach.