统考版2024届高考英语二轮专项分层特训卷35分写作规范练六（附解析）

这是一份统考版2024届高考英语二轮专项分层特训卷35分写作规范练六（附解析），共2页。试卷主要包含了每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；，只允许修改10处，多者不计分，学习方面等内容，欢迎下载使用。
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2023·内蒙古包头市高三上学期开学调研]
即将毕业的你应校刊英语园地栏目的邀请为高一学生写一封倡议书，主题是“如何更好地度过高中的学习生活”，请你用英语书写该稿件，内容包括：
1．身体方面；
2．心理方面；
3．学习方面。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．题目已写好，不计入总词数。
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35分写作规范练（六）
写作
第一节
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