17 状物作文素材储备与写作指导 中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

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17 状物作文素材储备2024年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 素材储备 在写状物文章的时候，我们可以从以下三部分入手:1. 总体描述事物的特点。第部分应就事物的总体特 点进行闸述，不宜过于具体，用词用句要简洁明了。在描述总体特点时，要做概据性描写，不能只描述某部分特点。2.详细具体地描述事物的各个特点。这是文章的第二部分，也是主体部分，在描述事物的各方面特点时，要抓住最吸人眼球的特点进行详细展开。在写作这部分时，要体现细节特点，不能一概而论。3.表达对事物的感受或评价。这是文章的最后一部分，也是总结部分，可以对事物的感受进行表述，也可以评价事物的好坏，等等。 必备词汇 事物类别animal动物plant植物color颜色building 建筑物clothes衣服tree 树木fruit水果everyday things日常事物 表示颜色red红色的orange橙色的blue蓝色的green绿色的black黑色的brown棕色的pink粉红色的purple紫色的white白色的gray灰色的yellow黄色的 表示形状round圆形的high/tall高的low低的long长的wide宽阔的deep深的huge巨大的small小的large 大的straight直的 表达情感like喜欢active活跃的love爱好cute可爱的.great好的worried担心的lovely可爱的proud自豪的beautiful漂亮的interesting有趣的useful有用的unforgettable难以忘记的comfortable舒适的 必备句型➊总体描述事物的特点(1)  It comes in a variety of colors/shapes.它有很多颜色/形状。(2)  It consists of several integrated  parts. 它包含几个组成部分。(3) It is shaped like a circle.它的形状像一个圆圈。❷详细具体地描述事物的各个特点(1)  It is round in shape and small in size. 它的形状是圆的，很小。(2) Attached to the bottom is... 接着底部的是....(3) It looks like a pearl.它就像一颗珍珠。(4) They are as beautiful as flowers.它们就像花儿一样漂亮。(5) My room is not large, but it is very comfortable.我的房间不大，但非常舒适。(6) The clock is not only beautiful and valuable, but also very helpful.这个时钟不仅漂亮珍贵，而且非常有用。(7)  The little cat is black all over except her four feet and a small nose.除了四只脚和一个小鼻子外，这只小猫全身都是黑色的。❸表达对事物的感受或评价(1) It is very helpful tome.这对我很有帮助。(2) How 1 want to have it for long! 我真想永远拥有它!(3) I am afraid I will lose it one day. 我担心有一天会失去它。(4) It makes me feel relaxed when 1 am tired. 累的时候它让我感到放松( 5) I love the book so much that I can' t part with it.我对这本书爱不释手 相关话题作文写作指导最目 大干世界，花草树木，皆有其特性与可人之处。你又对哪种植物最为钟情呢?请以一种植物为主题，写一篇小短文，词数不得少于80。思路导航 第1步:例文审题主体人称：题目要求描写- 种植物， 故主体人称应为第三人称"it”。主体时态：由于题目里描写的是植物的一般状态，故主体时态用一般现在时。写作贴士：题目只给出了主题，其他并无过多要求，因此在写作时，要大胆发挥想象力，从各个方面展开:题目有对词数要求作出限制，词数不得少于80词。 第2步:列提纲(1)概述植物的整体特点:(2)展开描述植物的特色和吸引人之处;(3)表达对植物的感受。 第3步:参考词句(1) flower; jasmine; culture...(2) stunning; elegance; fragrance; petal; show off: stand out..(3) different; special... 第4步:连句成篇 My Favorite Flower My favorite flower is jasmine, which is a symbol of Chinese culture.I like jasmine, not because it has stunning beauty, but because it gives off elegance and fragrance. It is white or yellow in color, and its petals are very small. Such plain beauty is exactly one of the characteristics of Chinese culture.It never shows off, but it stands out strikingly among other colorful flowers.Jasmine is also famous for a popular song named after it.Jasmine is very different and special, so I am very fond of it. How about you? 参考译文 我最喜欢的花 我最喜欢的花是茉莉花，它也是中国文化的象征之一。我喜欢茉莉花，不是因为它有惊人的美丽，而是因为它散发出来的香气和优雅。它的颜色是白色的或黄色的，它的花瓣非常小。这样质朴的美丽恰好是中国文化的特点之一。它从不炫耀，但它总能在其他五颜六色的花朵里脱颖而出。茉莉花出名的另-一个原因是，有一首流行的歌是以它来命名的。茉莉花非常与众不同，所以我非常喜欢它。你呢? 相关话题作文必背 （一）When I was in grade four in primary school, my father taught me how to use computer. After that, I was very interested in playing computer. I watched movies, played computer games, searched the Internet and listened to the music on computer. Because my father must work in his computer, so he bought another for me. I was very happy that I had my own computer. It was put in the study. I am always very careful to use my computer, because I am worried I would break. I often chat with my net friends. Because of my computer, I make many friends who have many in common. Of course, I use my computer in study. There are resources on the Internet. I can learn more after class. It does great help to me.参考译文：我小学四年级的时候我的父亲就教我如何使用电脑了。从那以后，我对玩电脑就很感兴趣。我用电脑看电影，玩游戏，上网和听音乐。因为我爸爸要用这台电脑工作他就给我买了另外一台。我很高兴我拥有属于自己的电脑了。电脑放在书房里，我总是很小心地使用它因为我担心它会坏掉。我经常和网友聊天。因为有了电脑，我结交了很多有共同爱好的朋友。当然，我也用电脑来学习。网上有很多的资源，课后我可以学到很多东西。电脑确实帮助了我很多。
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 It is My birthday yesterday .I received a lot of presents. All of them were covered with coloured paper and two of them were funny and interesting, which impressed me.My sister sent a bag of present to me. The bag was big and round. I though it was a football. But when I opened it, I saw a clock. The other one was given by my brother. He left me a message, which said "my present is lying in your bedroom". When I got to my bedroom, I found a laptop. Oh!Great!‘ I jumped with joy. I know, they Want me to study hard and not to waste time.I would never forget this birthday. 参考译文昨天是我的诞辰，我收到了良多生日礼物，并且这些礼物都用彩纸包着。其中两件礼物很好玩很有趣，给我留下了很深的印象。我姐姐送给我一个包，这包又大又圆。我认为是足球，免费学英语网站，可打开一看是个闹钟。另外一件礼物是我哥哥送给我的，他给我留了一张纸条，上面写着：“我的礼物放在你的卧室里。”当我进入卧室时，学英语的好网站，我看到了一台笔记本电脑。噢!真是太棒了!我高兴地跳了起来-。我明白他们想让我努力学习，不要浪费时间。我将永远不会忘记昨天。
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 The Value of Reading BooksPeople often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world.But I don’t think so.In my opinion,to read books is more valuable than anything else.The old saying "To open a book is always helpful" clearly tells us how good it is to read a book.Books are our friends.They introduce us different kinds of knowledge.They lead us down the road to success.Books are our teachers.They teach us troth,science,literature,and philosophy of life.Besides,they increase our knowledge,enlarge our experience,strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them.Books tell us what is good and what is evil.And only books can tell the good from the bad.Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students. 参考译文书的价值人们常说金子和银子是世界上最有价值的东西,但我不这样认为.在我看来,读书比任何其他事情更有价值.“开卷有益”清楚地告诉了我们读书有多好.书是我们的朋友.它们向我们介绍不同种类的知识,它指导我们沿着成功之路前行.书是我们的老师.它们教我们真理、科学、文学和生活的哲理,同时它们增加了我们的知识,扩大了我们的视野,增强了我们的个性,使我们还做了在没有书的情况下绝不可能完成的其他事情.书能让我们明辨是非,并且只有书才能让我们吸取反面教训.因此,读更多的书是我们青少年学生的明智之举。