2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专题专题14自然生态课件新人教版

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(2023·浙江卷1月)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1．活动的过程；2．收获与感想。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。
Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us①Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us” activity rganised by ur Students' Unin．
②The activity began with a lecture by a lcal btanist, wh taught us abut the different characteristics and uses f varius plant species．We then went n a natural walk t bserve and cllect samples f different plants．③Thrughut the event, I was struck by the incredible variety f plants that exist in ur wrld and learned abut plants that are used fr medical purpses, as well as thse that prvide fd and shelter fr animals．I als gained a greater appreciatin fr the rle that plants play in maintaining the balance f ur ecsystem．Overall, it was a valuable and great experience．
1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如participate in, bserve, strike, prvide ..., maintain等。2．句式美：①句rganised by ur Students' Unin为过去分词短语作后置定语。②句运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句。③句运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句。
假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了植树活动以迎接即将到来的植树节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，包括：1．参加人员；2．活动内容：徒步到西山植树；3．活动反响。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：徒步 vi．hike 植树节 Tree Planting Day____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Last Sunday ur schl rganised a tree-planting activity t greet the upcming Tree Planting Day．All the students and teachers tk part in the activity．We set ff fr Xishan n ft early in the mrning, talking and laughing happily all the way．Upn arriving there, we gt dwn t ur wrk, sme digging hles, sme planting trees while thers watering them．After that, we walked arund and did sme sightseeing, during which I tk many phts．
The activity was highly spken f, because nt nly did it raise ur awareness f the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment, but als it helped us t cperate better．
(2020·浙江卷7月改编)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears．We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada．
Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus．[悬念1] Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance．When I'm face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens．But smetimes, that is easier said than dne．[悬念2] This was ne f thse times．As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread．
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence．He pulled and bit the wire．He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts．Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew．We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard，and fired blank shtgun shells int the air．Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff．Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws (爪子)．
I radied the camp manager fr help．He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived．Making the best f this clse encunter (相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear．Elli and I feared the fence wuldn't last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear's punishment．The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray．The spray burns the bears' eyes, but desn't hurt them．S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face．With an angry rar (吼叫), the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes．[悬念3]
注意：续写词数应为150左右。A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp, _____________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________At that very mment, the helicpter arrived．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、理清文章大意关键：Wh: the authr and his wife Elli Where: at a research campWhen: ne fallWhat: t phtgraph plar bearsHw: They encuntered a yung male plar bear．大意：本文讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊时，如何对付一头饥饿的雄性幼熊的故事。
二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考：作者在拍摄过程中会遇到什么样的威胁？悬念2思考：这句话暗示着什么？悬念3思考：北极熊洗完眼睛之后会不会返回？
三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①被激怒的熊返回之后会不会更凶猛？ ②扔食物比如面包会不会有效果？③熊吃光了面包又会怎样呢？段首句2思考：①飞机到达之后他们感受如何？会迅速登机吗？ ②在飞机上他们会看到什么？会拍照吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：
Paragraph 1：熊返回营地→紧张害怕→用面包攻击Paragraph 2：直升机赶到→快速登上飞机→熊把篱笆撞倒→拍下熊“打劫”的画面
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp, then we realised the spray had nly angered him even mre, fr he seemed much fiercer this time and vilently pushed the fence like mad．My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d．At this critical mment, Elli grabbed several pieces f garlic bread and threw them ver the fence．It wrked! The bear stpped the attack and ran t the bread．But it wasn't lng befre he ate up all the bread and came back again．
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived．“Thank gdness we are saved！” Elli cried ut．Once the helicpter landed, we gt nt it in n time, excited and relieved．When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t the spt that the bear had finally tre dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind．I quickly tk ut the camera and phtgraphed the rare scene — we were rbbed by a plar bear．
1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①nly一词与两个修饰比较级的even和much凸显当时的紧张氛围。②like mad是madly的高级表达。③finally表示直升机来得及时，熊撞倒栅栏很费劲，其实也呼应了上文这是一只幼熊。④quickly和rare用得好，机不可失，快速抓拍，这也呼应了文章第一段中作者此行的目的。
2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①nt knwing what t d在此处用简短的动词-ing形式作状语，渲染了紧张的气氛。②it wasn't lng befre是sn的高级表达。③excited and relieved在此处作状语，用得恰到好处。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One never knws what ne is ging t find when ne steps ut int the wrld．Even smething as simple as a walk thrugh yur neighburhd can result in either mild excitement r unusual adventure if the cards are right．
On a sunny afternn, Mike jurneyed int the cnstructin site near his hme．Suddenly, he heard smething cming frm arund the side f a nearby building．It sunded like the whining (哀鸣) cries f an animal．He curiusly turned the crner, nly t see a small dg standing n its back legs and wagging its tail pitifully．He then nticed that the pr thing seemed t be stuck at the waist between a small cncrete wall and an even smaller brken wden fence．
The pr animal's difficult situatin was pretty bvius and Mike knew that if he did nthing and left the dg there, it might nt survive．He had n idea hw lng the animal had been there up until that pint．It might nt have eaten r drunk anything in days．Determined t help, he lked arund t find a stick, prceeded t climb up nt the cement slab and pinted his stick back at the dg．He was trying t pry (撬动) abve the animal by insert the stick between the cement wall and the smaller, brken wall, but the terrified animal bviusly didn't knw his intentin and attempted t bite at the tl and barked at him fearfully．The fright in its eyes said everything．
After at least a minute r s f trying t free the dg, Mike fund his plan much mre difficult in practice than it had stayed inside his wn head．The ht sun was beating dwn．Drps f sweat running dwn his face, Mike sat dwn n the grund and scratched his head with annyance, thinking abut what in the wrld his next mve was ging t be．Beside him, the dg curled up int a ball, whining miserably．
注意：续写词数应为150左右。Then Mike went arund t the ther side f the wall and grabbed hld f the stick．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Eventually, with the few well-psitined pieces f wd, Mike managed t insert his stick in the right way．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Then Mike went arund t the ther side f the wall and grabbed hld f the stick．He tried frm a different angle．Fr a brief mment, he made eye cntact with the dg in an attempt t assure the dg that he was there t save him．Seeming t sense his kindness, the dg became calmer and less scared．Hwever, after several unsuccessful attempts, he sank himself t the grund, frustrated．Just at the mment, he glanced at sme pieces f wd．An idea ccurred t him．He tried wedging the pieces int the gap, pried and pushed．At the same time, he stayed cautius nt t frighten the pr dg．