浙江高考英语写作分类训练：推荐信

这是一份浙江高考英语写作分类训练：推荐信，共16页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华，假定你是光明中学学生会主席李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
推荐信1．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Gary即将回国，他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐一个或两个礼物。内容包括:1. 推荐礼物；2. 推荐理由。注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李华，得知你校外籍学生George想加入学校某一社团（club).请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.推荐社团；2.推荐理由；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3．假定你是李华。你校新来的外教Mr. Smith周末想去博物馆游览，想找一名向导陪同。得知此事后，你写信向他推荐自己，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.推荐理由；3.表达期待。注意：1.词数80左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4．假如你是李华，你们学校的外教Mrs. Smith想找一个人教她9岁的女儿中文。请你写信推荐你的朋友王林，内容包括:1.写信目的； 2.推荐理由注意:1.词数 80 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Edward 正在学习汉语，希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮件。1. 推荐网站：www.edchinese.com；2. 网站内容：(1)中文情景对话、中国风俗、中文电影、中文歌曲、成语和唐诗等；(2)有在线教师答疑解惑。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Edward，I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Li Hua6．假设你是李华，你校将于7月举办100周年校庆，请你代表学校给外教Steven写一封信，希望他推荐一位学生在开幕式上英文致辞。信的内容包括：1.写信目的；2.推荐条件（至少2个）；3.表示感谢。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是李华，得知你校外籍教师Peter计划在暑假回国，他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化特色的礼物，请给他写一封邮件，向他推荐礼物。内容包括：1. 推荐礼物；2. 推荐原因；3. 表达祝愿。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________188．假定你是光明中学学生会主席李华。你校新来的外教Mr Black周末想去市中心观光游览，但担心有语言障碍。请根据以下要点写一封信，推荐你的同学王琳做他的向导。1.王琳是光明中学高三学生，本地出生；2.个性开朗活泼，容易相处；3.擅长英语。注意:1.词数80左右，已写部分，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr.Black,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope you will have a wonderful weekend.Sincerely yours,Li Hua9．假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Mike本月底要来你市旅游，想让你为他推荐一个值得一游的去处。请你给他回信，要点如下:1.收信时的感想；2.推荐并介绍一个值得一去的地方；注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是李华，打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询，内容如下:1.请其推荐合适的旅游路线；2.请其告知相关的旅游费用；注意；1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua 1．Dear Gary,Learning that you are planning to bring home some gifts representing Chinese culture, I’m pleased to offer my suggestions.Personally, I believe green tea is an ideal choice, through which your mum can get a good taste of the typical Chinese lifestyle. Besides, the Chinese knot, a decoration found almost everywhere in China, can be an appropriate alternative too. Your wishes of reunion and good luck can be perfectly conveyed through its red threads knitted together.Hopefully, the information above will be of some help to you.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向英国朋友推荐一个或两个送给朋友母亲的可以代表中国文化的礼物。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。要求：1. 推荐礼物；2. 推荐理由。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）plan to do; represent; Chinese culture; be pleased to do; offer suggestions; personally; ideal; a good taste of; the Chinese knot; decoration; alternative; reunion; perfectly; convey; red threads; hopefully  第三步：连词成句1.Learning that you are planning to bring home some gifts representing Chinese culture, I’m pleased to offer my suggestions.2.Personally, I believe green tea is an ideal choice, through which your mum can get a good taste of the typical Chinese lifestyle. 3.Besides, the Chinese knot, a decoration found almost everywhere in China, can be an appropriate alternative too. 4.Your wishes of reunion and good luck can be perfectly conveyed through its red threads knitted together.5.Hopefully, the information above will be of some help to you.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Personally, I believe green tea is an ideal choice, through which your mum can get a good taste of the typical Chinese lifestyle.这句话运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如plan to do; be pleased to do; offer suggestions等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．One possible version:Dear George,I'm Li Hua. Hearing that you plan to join a club in our school, I'm writing to recommend to you the choral club.Given your keen interest in singing, it is absolutely the most suitable club for you where students enthusiastic about singing will gather together to perform classic Chinese songs. Besides, by immersing yourself in it, not only will you establish friendship with more Chinese students, but also you will have a better command of Chinese and a deeper insight into Chinese culture.Wish you a rosy experience in the club you like!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，根据要求写一封电子邮件，是一封推荐信。【详解】第一步：假定你是李华，得知你校外籍学生George想加入学校某一社团（club).请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.推荐社团；2.推荐理由；3. 表达祝愿。第二步：应用文表达，开头结尾给出，注意格式规范，根据提示，整篇文章应使用一般时态。第三步：根据提纲依次写出推荐社团；推荐理由和表达祝愿。内容包含全面，关键词选用合理，如plan to，recommend to，have a better command of…not only…but also等等。第四步：连词成文，结构衔接得体。【点睛】第一段，开门见山，表达目的，清晰明确，简单明了。第二段，写出推荐社团,推荐的理由并且表达祝愿，Besides…连接结构的短语和词运用得体恰当。第三段，符合应用文结尾格式，结构严谨。文章内容完整，提纲要点全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用复合句，显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力，如where引导的定语从句Given your keen interest in singing, it is absolutely the most suitable club for you where students enthusiastic about singing will gather together to perform classic Chinese songs. 非谓语动词和并列句Besides, by immersing yourself in it, not only will you establish friendship with more Chinese students, but also you will have a better command of Chinese and a deeper insight into Chinese culture.彰显作者高水平的英语驾驭能力。3．one possible version:Dear Smith,I’m Li Hua, president of the Student Union of our school. Having learned you are looking for a guide for your visit to our local museum this weekend, I am writing to recommend myself.With a good command of English and outgoing personality, I think I will be a good guide for you. Besides, I have gained some relevant experience while working as a volunteer in the museum. Additionally, as a history lover, my insight into the local history and culture is bound to make your visit enjoyable and unforgettable.I hope you will consider my recommendation and have a good weekend!Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，要求写一封信毛遂自荐当外教游览博物馆的向导，属于书信体写作中的推荐信范畴。【详解】推荐信是书面表达的常见题型之一，也是高考的常客，故平时练习中对固定句式的掌握十分重要。完成本题时，应注意以下要点。要点1：审清题目，理清结构题目的设定是你（李华）得知你校新来的外教Mr. Smith周末想去博物馆游览，想找一名向导陪同，你写信向他推荐自己。审题之后可知，本文主体内容应使用第一人称、一般现在时进行写作，谈及过往的经历或经验时可视情况使用一般过去时或现在完成时。写作内容包括：写信目的，也就是推荐自己（简明扼要）；推荐理由，即说明自身优势，如性格、语言能力、知识面、过往经验等（重点内容，适当展开）：表达期待，期待能够有这个机会，希望得到回复（简明扼要，注意此为结尾，写作应得体、礼貌）。要点2：充实内容，注重表达进行写作时，应特别注意对推荐理由也就是个人优势进行适当内容拓展，此乃本篇书面表达的重中之重。个人优势既可以结合自己过往的经历来谈，如自己有过相关的博物馆讲解经历；自己有很广的知识面，有相应的历史文化知识储备和语言能力；自己性格开朗，乐于助人，善于与他人沟通。具体在进行英文写作时，应特别注意上下文的衔接自然，善用连接词和定语从句等，同时注意高级表达和句式多样性的运用。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了许多精彩的句式，如Having learned you are looking for a guide for your visit to our local museum this weekend, I am writing to recommend myself.以及With a good command of English and outgoing personality, I think I will be a good guide for you.等。语言表达十分地道，同时运用了besides和additionally等连接词，还有gain some relevant experience , as a history lover, my insight into the local history and culture, be bound to, make your visit enjoyable and unforgettable, consider my recommendation等。范文内容十分出彩，实现了句式的多样性和上下文的逻辑连接自然。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。4．Dear Mr. James,Learning that you are looking for someone to teach your 8-year-old daughter Chinese, I am writing to recommend my friend Wang Ming.Discipline and diligence makes Wang Ming one of the top students in the class. Being good at Chinese and English, he once won the first place in our school speech competition. Besides, he's easy-going and willing to help others. In short, I am convinced that he is an ideal candidate.I would be appreciative it if you could consider my recommendation favorably.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给外教Mrs. Smith写信，推荐朋友王林作为他9岁女儿的中文老师，并陈述理由。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主结构：总分总 要求：1.写信目的； 2.推荐理由（英语流利，可以进行顺畅的对话；有耐心）第二步：列提纲（重点词组）look for/ recommend/ be good at/ be patient with/ be willing to do sth./ be convinced that…/ consider第三步：连词成句1.    Knowing that you are looking for someone to teach your 8-year-old daughter Chinese, I am writing to recommend my friend Wang Ming.2.    Wang Ming one of the top students in the class, who is diligent and patient.3.    Being good at Chinese and English, he once won the first place in our school speech competition. 4.    Besides, he's easy-going and willing to help others. 5.    In a word, as far as I am concerned, he is an ideal candidate.6.    I would be appreciative it if you could consider my recommendation seriously.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Learning that you are looking for someone to teach your 8-year-old daughter Chinese, I am writing to recommend my friend Wang Ming.中that引导宾语从句。5．Dear Edward，I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I'd like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you. It's a good website for non­Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all these are free of charge. I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.Wish you a happy learning time!Yours，Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Edward 正在学习汉语，希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 推荐网站：www.edchinese.com；2. 网站内容：(1)中文情景对话、中国风俗、中文电影、中文歌曲、成语和唐诗等；(2)有在线教师答疑解惑。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； recommend（推荐），beginners（初学者），online course（在线课程），website （网站），attractive（有吸引力的），helpful（有帮助的）， dialogue（对话）及effective（有效的）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有provide sb with sth（向某人提供某物），a variety of（各种各样的），such as(例如)，more than adj to do（非常……去做某事），turn to sb for help（向某人求助）以及be free of charge（免费），而且还使用了宾语从句“I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese.”及“I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.”，定语从句“It's a good website for non­Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.”及“More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。6．Dear Steven,I am Li Hua. I'm glad to tell you that our school will celebrate its 100th birthday this July, when there will be a great opening ceremony. Could you please recommend a student to address at the opening ceremony in English?Above all, the student is supposed to have a good command of both written and spoken English, especially fluent oral English. Meanwhile, he or she must hold a positive attitude towards study and life. Most importantly, he or she should enjoy a good reputation and great popularity among classmates. Of course it would be even better if the student has abundant experience of making speeches.I would appreciate it very much if you could do me the favor.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封书信，推荐一位学生在开幕式上英文致辞。【详解】第一步：审题: 书信  人称：第三人称 时态： 一般现在时 结构： 总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明写信目的，第二部分说明具体的推荐条件，第三部分表示感谢。要点：1.写信目的：希望外教Steven推荐一位学生在100周年校庆开幕式上英文致辞2．具体的推荐条件①较好的书面英语和口头英语能力，尤其是流利的口语②对学习和生活有积极的态度③在同学中有较好的声誉，受同学欢迎④如果有丰富的演讲经验会更好3．表达感谢第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语  ）celebrate；100th birthday；opening ceremony；recommend；address；be supposed to ；have a good command of；written and spoken English；fluent；hold a positive attitude towards…；enjoy a good reputation；popularity；have abundant experience；make speeches 第三步：连词成句(1)    Our school will celebrate its 100th birthday this July.(2)    There will be a great opening ceremony. (3)    Could you please recommend a student to address at the opening ceremony in English?(4)    The student is supposed to have a good command of both written and spoken English.(5)    He or she must hold a positive attitude towards study and life. (6)    He or she should enjoy a good reputation and great popularity among classmates. (7)    He or she should have abundant experience of making speeches. 根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end 表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, whileon one hand…on the other hand ..., 表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus 连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、段与段之间结构清晰。【高分句型一】With our school’s 100th birthday celebration approaching , there will be a great opening ceremony.随着我校建校100周年庆典的临近， 届时将会有盛大的开幕式。“with+宾语+现在分词”构成with的复合结构，在句中作状语。【高分句型二】 Those who have abundant experience of making speeches will be the best choice.有丰富的演讲经验的学生将是最佳选择。who引导定语从句,abundant是高级词汇。7．Dear Peter,I'm glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. And I am writing to give you some advice.Personally, I think you should buy the following two gifts: Qipao and Chinese knot. Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman.  I am sure your mother will like it very much. What's more, it is also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot. It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.Wish you a good vacation. Please give my best wishes to your family.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，得知你校外籍教师Peter计划在暑假回国，他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化特色的礼物，请给他写一封邮件，向他推荐礼物。内容包括：1. 推荐礼物；2. 推荐原因；3. 表达祝愿。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：represent(代表)；Chinese knot (中国结)；a good choice (明智的选择)；the sitting room (客厅)；good luck(好运)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture.运用宾语从句；It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.运用非限定性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。8．Dear Mr. Black,I’ve learned that you are planning to tour around our city this weekend and that you might be having trouble in making yourself understood. I am writing to introduce my classmate Wang Lin as you guide.Wang Lin is a Senior Three student of our school, native to this city, so she has a good knowledge of its history and culture. She is active, outgoing and easy to get along with. Besides, she speaks English very well. You can surly rely on her.Hope you will have a wonderful weekend.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 假定你是光明中学学生会主席李华。你校新来的外教Mr Black周末想去市中心观光游览，但担心有语言障碍。请根据以下要点写一封信，推荐你的同学王琳做他的向导。1.王琳是光明中学高三学生，本地出生；2.个性开朗活泼，容易相处；3.擅长英语。第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）：plan to（计划）；tour around（游览）；have trouble in doing sth.（做某事有困难）；native to（土生土长的）；have a good knowledge of（通晓）；get along with（好相处）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】[高分句型1]I am writing to introduce my classmate Wang Lin as your guide in case you might be having trouble in making yourself understood. 我写这封信是为了介绍我的同学王林作为是你的导游，以防你在表达上有困难。运用in case引导的条件状语从句。[高分句型2]Wang Lin who is a Senior Three student of our school and native to this city has a good knowledge of its history and culture. 王琳是我们学校的高三学生，也是这个城市的本地人，她对这个城市的历史和文化有很好的了解。运用who引导的定语从句。9．Dear Mike,I’m more than delighted to learn that you are visiting my city at the end of this month. So I am writing to recommend a fabulous place to you.The most popular place is the theme park. Opened in 2008, it frequently gets the most visitors in and around the city. As you wander about the fantasy amusement park, you will be brought into a magic world. A wide variety of exciting/thrilling rides has been provided, from giant swinging ships to terrifying free-fall drops. There are plenty of fantastic shows for you to watch as well. With all these attractions, I am sure it will leave a deep impression on you.If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求给Mike写一封回信，向Mike推荐一个值得一游的去处。【详解】该文应该分为两部分。第一部分表达你收到信的时候的感想。主要要表达开心，期盼见到Mike之类的心情。可以使用pleased，look forward to之类的表达。第二部分要向Mike推荐一个值得一去的地方。需要介绍该处为何值得参观。可以从该处的景观，人文等方面介绍。该部分应用现在时态。【点睛】所给范文条理清楚，内容齐全，完整的表达了所要求的内容。适当地使用了一些较好的词汇或句式。例如：more than delighted；recommend；fabulous；A wide variety of；fantastic；非谓语动词（Opened in 2008）；被动语态（you will be brought into a magic world）等。10．Dear Sir/Madam,I’m planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, I’m writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency.I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes? In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.A reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询，内容如下:1.请其推荐合适的旅游路线；2.请其告知相关的旅游费用。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：in the coming July（在即将到来的七月）；inquire about travel routes of your agency（询问你的旅游路线）；have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs（看看一些独特的自然风光，领略一下当地的风土人情）；recommend some suitable travel routes（推荐一些合适的旅游路线）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.句中使用非限制性定语从句；I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.现在分词做伴随状语。