北京高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信1．假设你是红星中学学生会“环保部”部长李华。你的英国好友Jim的学校正在征集主题为“Beat Plastic Pollution”的环境保护活动方案，他一时没有想法，写信请你给提供建议。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 简要介绍你的设计方案及理由；2. 询问意见并表达祝愿。注意：1．词数 100 左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假如你是红星中学学生李华，你收到一封学弟小明给你写来的邮件，邀请你分享一下你的学习英语的方法和技巧。请你给小明回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.感谢对方的提问；2.分享自己学习英语的几个方法与技巧。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Xiaoming,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今年暑假回英国，想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物，特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 建议的礼物；2. 说明选择该礼物的原因；3. 表达祝福。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua4．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到最近他的学习压力很大，他为此感到苦恼。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 表示理解和关心；2. 你的建议及理由；3. 你的祝愿。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim所在的学校即将迎来百年校庆。他参与准备活动，负责向来宾介绍学校的变化，问你有什么好的建议。请你用英文给他回邮件，内容包括：1.表示祝贺;2.你的建议。注意：1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：纪念日anniversaryDear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文，他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 委婉拒绝并说明理由；2. 你的建议及计划。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词语：项目学习—project-based learningDear Jim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近沉迷于使用电子设备，想做出改变但不知该怎么办，特来信向你寻求建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括： 1.表示理解; 2.提供合理使用电子设备的建议; 3.祝愿他生活重回正轨。 注意：1.词数 100 左右。 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：电子设备 digital devices Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信，内容包括：1.表示安慰；2.给出建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim给你写了一封信，提及因为误解，他和同学产生了不愉快。请用英文给Jim回复邮件，内容包括：1. 安慰Jim；2. 具体建议。注意：1．词数 100 左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英国交换生Jim对中国文化非常感兴趣，他希望你推荐一件他在寒假里可以做的事情，便于他更好地了解中国文化。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.你推荐他做的事情;2.你的理由。注意：1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua               1．Dear Jim,  Extremely thrilled to know that you are calling for activity plans themed “Beat Plastic Pollution”, I feel it my privilege to offer mine, hoping to give you a hand.  First, it is a wise choice to propagandize the using of cloth bags instead of plastic bags in school and call for students to spread the behavior to the people around them. Second, make a rule that students should be prevented from using plastic bags, encouraging the use of degradable plastic bags. Finally, collecting and recycling plastic bags are easy to be conducted in school.  I sincerely hope my plan is of benefit to you.【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。假设你是红星中学学生会“环保部”部长李华。你的英国好友Jim的学校正在征集主题为“Beat Plastic Pollution”的环境保护活动方案，他一时没有想法，写信请你给提供建议。【详解】1.词汇积累：激动的：thrilled→excited/full of excitement提供：offer→provide/supply规章制度：rule→regulation有益的：be of benefit→be beneficial2.句式拓展：原句：I sincerely hope my plan is of benefit to you拓展句：I sincerely hope my plan that I mentioned above is of benefit to you【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, make a rule that students should be prevented from using plastic bags, encouraging the use of degradable plastic bags.(运用了that引导同位语从句，现在分词作状语。)【高分句型2】Extremely thrilled to know that you are calling for activity plans themed “Beat Plastic Pollution”, I feel it my privilege to offer mine, hoping to give you a hand.(运用了形容词作状语，that引导宾语从句，过去分词作后置定语以及现在分词作状语。)2．Dear Xiaoming,I appreciate that you asked the questions about learning English as they are very important to high school students.I can share with you several tips that I think are very useful. First, we should take notes during the class. In each class, we learn a lot of words and expressions and we can’t remember them all at one time. Taking notes is therefore crucial to our revision. Second, it’s better that we read out our textbooks loudly. It helps us to remember the words and phrases more deeply. Finally, we should read more besides our textbook. It lets us come across more words so that we may recognize them next time we meet them.Hope these tips may help you.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是红星中学学生李华，你收到一封学弟小明给你写来的邮件，邀请你分享一下你的学习英语的方法和技巧。请你给小明回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.感谢对方的提问；2.分享自己学习英语的几个方法与技巧。【详解】1.词汇积累重要的：important→significant有用的：useful→helpful诀窍：tip→knack遇到：come across→encounter2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Second, it’s better that we read out our textbooks loudly. It helps us to remember the words and phrases more deeply.拓展句：Second, it’s better that we read out our textbooks loudly, which helps us to remember the words and phrases more deeply.【点睛】[高分句型1] I appreciate that you asked the questions about learning English as they are very important to high school students.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和as引导的原因状语从句)[高分句型2] I can share with you several tips that I think are very useful.(运用了that引导的限定性定语从句)3．Dear Jim,It’s great to hear from you! As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom, I would suggest a Chinese silk scarf.Chinese silk scarf is an excellent choice to showcase the beauty of Chinese culture. It is not only sophisticated in pattern and design, but also comfortable to wear. Besides, there are many patterns with rich cultural meanings to choose from. For instance, peony, lotus, and phoenix all represent happiness, prosperity, and good luck in Chinese culture.I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy. Please convey my best regards and best wishes to her. Looking forward to seeing you soon!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今年暑假回英国，想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物，特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggest→recommend表达：convey→express快乐：joy→happiness选择：choice→option2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：It is not only sophisticated in pattern and design, but also comfortable to wear.拓展句：Not only is it sophisticated in pattern and design, but also it is comfortable to wear.【点睛】[高分句型1] As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom, I would suggest a Chinese silk scarf. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)[高分句型2] I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)4．One possible version:Dear Jim,I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately. It is natural to feel pressured when you attend a new school. Here are some suggestions that can help you deal with stress.First, try to build up your confidence. Study is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it. So never give up no matter what happens. Second, you should find your own strengths and weaknesses, and seek help from both teachers and classmates when facing difficulties and stress. Last but not least, doing more physical exercise can keep you fit as well as relax yourself. I hope you will get out of your trouble soon.I believe it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help further.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到最近他的学习压力很大, 他为此感到苦恼。请你给Jim回信。【详解】1.词汇积累很大压力：under a lot of pressure→be stressed建议：suggestion→advice健康的：fit→healthy摆脱：get out of→get rid of2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：First, try to build up your confidence. Study is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it.拓展句：First, try to build up your confidence because study is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] Last but not least, doing more physical exercise can keep you fit as well as relax yourself. (运用了动名词作主语)5．Dear Jim,Congratulations on your school’s upcoming centennial anniversary! It’s a remarkable achievement and a testament to the school’s commitment to education.As for your request for suggestions on how to introduce the school’s changes to guests, I would recommend highlighting the school’s technological advancements. You could showcase the school’s state-of-the-art facilities, such as the computer labs and interactive whiteboards, and how they have enhanced the learning experience for students. Additionally, you could also mention the school’s efforts in promoting diversity and inclusivity, such as the establishment of cultural clubs and the implementation of anti-bullying policies.I hope these suggestions are helpful, and I wish you all the best for a successful anniversary celebration.YoursLi Hua【导语】本文是一篇应用文。文章要求考生作为高三学生李华，给英国好友Jim一些建议和祝贺，关于他们即将到来的百年校庆。【详解】1.词汇积累即将到来的：upcoming → imminent建议：suggestion → proposal提到：mention → refer to有帮助的：helpful → favourable2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Congratulations on your school’s upcoming centennial anniversary! It’s a remarkable achievement and a testament to the school’s commitment to education.拓展句：Congratulations on your school’s upcoming centennial anniversary which is a remarkable achievement and a testament to the school’s commitment to education.【点睛】【高分句型1】You could showcase the school’s state-of-the-art facilities, such as the computer labs and interactive whiteboards, and how they have enhanced the learning experience for students.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】I hope these suggestions are helpful, and I wish you all the best for a successful anniversary celebration.（运用省略that引导的宾语从句）6．Dear Jim,Thanks for your suggestion on using AI to finish the first draft of our paper. But after further consideration, I’m afraid it’s not a wise idea.Firstly, it goes against the purpose of project-based learning, which is to cultivate critical thinking and teamwork. Moreover, AI is unlikely to accurately present our ideas, because it hasn’t “got involved in” our project.So, I suggest we write the paper ourselves. We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas. Then we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper. I believe we can do a better job than AI.Hope you can understand. Expecting our distinctive draft.Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文，他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，委婉拒绝提议，并说明理由，以及自己的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累产生：generate→produce完成：finish→complete培养：cultivate→develop/nurture此外：moreover→besides2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas. Then we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper.拓展句：We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas, after which we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper.【点睛】[高分句型1] Thanks for your suggestion on using AI to finish the first draft of our paper. (运用了动名词作宾语)[高分句型2] Moreover, AI is unlikely to accurately present our ideas, because it hasn’t “got involved in” our project. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)7．Dear Jim,I’m sorry to learn that you have been obsessed with using your digital devices lately. It’s surely natural for you to find the virtual world appealing. And don’t worry! I will fully support you in dealing with it.First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc., which will take your mind off your digital devices. Secondly, make more friends. Friends will help you when you can’t resist the temptation of your digital devices. Thirdly, do more sports. Sports can not only keep you healthy, but also enrich your life and help you forget your digital devices. I hope it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help further. Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim最近沉迷于使用电子设备提出合理使用电子设备的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累痴迷于：be obsessed with→be addicted to有吸引力的：appealing→attractive其次：Secondly→What’s more抵制：resist→oppose2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：And don’t worry! I will fully support you in dealing with it.拓展句：I want you to know that I will provide my full support to you as you deal with it, so please don’t worry!【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to learn that you have been obsessed with using your digital devices lately.(that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc., which will take your mind off your digital devices. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)8．Dear Jim,I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t get your parents’ permission to go on a week-long bike trip with your friends. You’re upset and I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship. Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation.I hope you will get better in no time.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信，表示安慰，并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累失望的：disappointed/upset→discouraged建议：advice→suggestion有益的：beneficial→helpful此外：besides→in addition2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：You’re upset and I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.拓展句：Since you’re upset, I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.【点睛】[高分句型1] As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship.  (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)9．范文1Dear Jim,I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your classmates. It’s never easy when misunderstandings occur. But don’t worry, I’m here for you.I have some suggestions that might help. Try having an open and honest conversation with your classmates. Explain how you’re feeling and listen to their points as well. It’s possible that they just didn’t realize they were causing you harm. If that doesn’t work, don’t be afraid to ask teachers for help. They’re expert at dealing with conflicts and can give you advice on how to handle the situation.I hope this helps. Just remember that conflicts are totally normal, but with a little patience and understanding, you are sure to work through it. Take care.Yours,Li Hua范文2Dear Jim,I’m sorry to hear that you’re experiencing some difficulties with your classmates. It can be tough when misunderstandings occur, but please know that you’re not alone. We all go through similar situations in our lives.As for your situation, here are some suggestions that might help. Firstly, try to have an open and honest conversation with your classmates to understand their perspective and clarify any misunderstandings. Secondly, it’s important to approach the situation with kindness and empathy. Finally, don’t be afraid to seek help from a teacher or counselor if the situation continues.Remember, you’re a great person and don’t let this situation bring you down. Keep your head up and stay positive!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回复邮件，对于他和同学产生的不愉快表示安慰并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累发生：occur→happen观点：point→view向……求助：ask…for help→turn to…for help完全：totally→completely2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：They’re expert at dealing with conflicts and can give you advice on how to handle the situation.拓展句：They’re expert at dealing with conflicts, who can give you advice on how to handle the situation.【点睛】【高分句型1】I have some suggestions that might help.（运用了that引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】It’s possible that they just didn’t realize they were causing you harm.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以省略that的宾语从句）【高分句型3】If that doesn’t work, don’t be afraid to ask teachers for help.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）10．Dear Jim,Hearing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I recommend you to read Chinese classical literature which can help you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture. Here are my specific suggestions.First, you can read the four great classics. I know this is very difficult for you, but you can read them by consulting a dictionary or a book. In the process of reading, you will not only improve your Chinese level, but also gain more knowledge. In addition, you can also watch the ancient TV series to understand the specific plots, so that you can more fully feel the Chinese classical literature.These are my suggestions. I hope they will be helpful to you. If you don’t understand any details, you can always write to me. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写一封信，建议他在寒假里做一件事，以便于他更好的了解中国文化。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：recommend→suggest首先：first→first of all此外：in addition→what’s more希望：hope→expect2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Hearing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I recommend you to read Chinese classical literature which can help you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture. 拓展句：Because I hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I recommend you to read Chinese classical literature which can help you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture.【点睛】【高分句型1】 I know this is very difficult for you, but you can read them by consulting a dictionary or a book. In the process of reading, you will not only improve your Chinese level, but also gain more knowledge. （运用了not only…but also…固定句型）【高分句型2】In addition, you can also watch the ancient TV series to understand the specific plots, so that you can more fully feel the Chinese classical literature.（运用了so that引导状语从句）