四川省成都市新都区2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：书面表达

四川省成都市新都区

2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年四川省成都市新都区中考二模英语试题

六、书面表达（计15分）

劳动教育对青少年的发展起着重要的作用。请你参考以下思维导图并结合自身劳动经 历, 以“Let's Take Part in Labor Activities"为题, 写一篇短文号召同学们积极参加劳动。

要求：

1.内容需包含以上所有要点, 省略号处还需补充一条相对应的内容。

2. 不能出现自己的学校和姓名等相关信息；

3. 100词左右。

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2022年四川省成都市新都区中考二模英语试题

十一、材料作文

76．据悉，我国青少年70%的学生有视力方面的问题。为引起广大青少年的重视，某英语报刊正在开展以“Save Our Eyesight”为题的征文活动。请以“Save Our Eyesight”为题，根据下列提示写一篇短文投稿，分析青少年近视的原因、提出保护视力的合理建议，并号召大家养成科学的用眼习惯，更好地爱护眼睛。

主要原因：

√写字姿势 (posture) 不正确；

√在很暗或很强的光线下看书；

√躺在床上或在车上看书√……

合理建议：

√多吃对眼睛有好处的食物如胡萝卜、鸡蛋等；

√多做户外运动，长时间用眼后可看远方；

√保持充足的睡眠√……

要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

2.以上所有内容须全部用上，原因和建议各需要至少补充一点；

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。

4.100词左右。

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2021年四川省成都市新都区中考二模英语试题

十一、材料作文

81．子曰：“见贤思齐焉。”榜样的力量是无穷的。你校广播站正在开展以“榜样的力量”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你眼中的榜样，以及他/她对你的影响。

写作要点：

1. 谁对你的影响最深刻？

2. 他/她做了什么？

3. 你从他她的事迹中学到了什么？

注意：

1. 包含以上信息，可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺，句式多样；

3. 字数100词左右。

4. 不得出现真实的学校及姓名信息。

参考词汇：inspiration鼓舞，make progress取得进步

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2023年四川省成都市新都区中考二模英语试题

107．参考范文

Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities

Labor education plays an important role in the growth of teenagers. It helps to develop practical skills and form good habits.

I often share housework at home, like doing the dishes or cooking. At school, I often clean the classroom and water flowers. After school, I help to clean the city parks and go to the library to put books in order.

I hope we can have different forms of labor courses and hold competitions about labor skills in the future.

Enjoy labor and create more value through hard work !

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，谈一谈你对劳动教育的看法；

第二步，具体阐述你的劳动活动。分别介绍家里、学校和其他地方的劳动活动；

第三步，谈谈你对劳动课程的建议。

[亮点词汇]

①play an important role in在……方面扮演重要的作用

②form good habits形成好习惯

③competitions about labor skills关于劳动技能的比赛

[高分句型]

①I hope we can have different forms of labor courses and hold competitions about labor skills in the future.（宾语从句）

②Enjoy labor and create more value through hard work !（祈使句）

2022年四川省成都市新都区中考二模英语试题

76．例文

Save Our Eyesight

As the saying goes, “Eyes are the window to the soul.” However, 70% of us have poor eyesight. What has caused this problem? The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes. The main reason is incorrect writing posture. Some people read in very dark or strong light. Some people lie in bed or read in the car. What’s more, some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV.

We should eat more foods that are good for our eyes, such as carrots, eggs and so on. We also need to do more outdoor sports. We can see the distance after using our eyes for a long time. We should keep enough sleep. Finally, we must remember to do eye protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good eyesight.

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍近视的原因，并提出建议来保护视力以及养成科学的用眼习惯的号召等，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

2021年四川省成都市新都区中考二模英语试题

81．例文：

No one is an island, so there is no doubt that we are influenced by others. The person who has influenced me most is my father. As a doctor, he works hard day and night to save people’s lives. Whenever he is called to the hospital, he will head to the front lines to help patients in need. He is so hard-working that he is highly praised by other doctors and his patients.

I can not only see the kind heart of a great doctor in him, but also learn the true meaning of one’s life — to spare no effort to help others.

His inspiration made me study harder. And I have made greater progress in my study. I look forward to being like him one day. I dream of becoming an excellent doctor, just like him.

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己眼中的榜样以及对自己的影响，可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出提示问题融合起来，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。