中学生心理健康 热点 03 -备战中考英语高分作文（江苏专用版）

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备战中考英语高分作文热点03 中学生心理健康 一、材料作文1．许多初中生害怕错过社交媒体上发生的事情，每天都会忍不住浏览社交媒体，这种现象叫做FOMO (Fear of Missing Out错失恐惧症)。请你根据此现象，以“How to Deal With FOMO”为题写一篇报道。How to Deal With FOMO in Your Life现象许多初中生害怕错过社交媒体上发生的事情，每天都会忍不住浏览社交媒体。原因①学习压力大；②缺乏关爱；③对社交媒体的依赖建议①参加社团活动；②向老师或同学寻求帮助；③与家人多交流；④多读纸质书；⑤多进行户外运动 提示词：社交媒体 social media 要求：1. 文章必须包括以上所有内容并撰写合理的结尾。语句通顺，层次清晰，意思连贯；2. 不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息；3. 100词左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】How to Deal With FOMOMany junior high school students are afraid of missing out on what’s happening on social media and can’t help but browse social media every day.The reason why so many teenagers are so fond of surfing the social media is that they are suffering from the stress from the study. Another reason is that they need to be cared for. Besides, they rely too much on social media.How do the students deal with FOMO? First, we can join the clubs, such as football club and swimming club. Second, we should ask the teachers or classmates for help. Third, we can talk with family members when we are lonely. Fourth, do more outdoor exercise. Besides, reading more paper books is also a good idea.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中已给出的要点，用“How to Deal With FOMO”为题，介绍“错失恐惧症”这一现象，出现的原因及自己的建议。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍错失恐惧症这一现象；第二步，介绍出现这一现象的原因；第三步，具体介绍应对错失恐惧症的建议。[亮点词汇]①junior high school 初中②be afraid of 害怕③be fond of 喜欢④suffer from 承受⑤deal with 应对，处理[高分句型]①The reason why so many teenagers are so fond of surfing the social media is that they are suffering from the stress from the study.（why引导定语从句；that引导表语从句）②Third, we can talk with family members when we are lonely.（when引导时间状语从句）2．某中学上周对2000名学生进行了如何处理烦恼的问卷调查，下面是调查的结果。假如你是该校学生，请结合下图数据和自身处理烦恼的情况，写一篇英语短文。要求：1.80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.描述问卷调查结果(数量、方法)；2.介绍自身处理烦恼的情况(方法、经历……)；3.……Problems are very common for teenagers. According to the research, 1040 students talk with their friends when they have troubles.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】How Do Teenagers Deal with ProblemsProblems are very common for teenagers. According to the research, 1040 students talk with their friends when they have troubles. Besides, 19 percent of the students ask their parents for help and 21 percent of them get help from teachers. However, 8 percent of students choose other ways to deal with their problems. As a teenager, I also meet lots of problems. When I’m in trouble, I always ask my English teacher for help. I still remember the day when I failed the exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying in front of her. She said nothing but gave me a hug. That made me moved. My English teacher is a good friend to me. With the help of her, I become a better man. In a word, when we have problems in our study or life, we should find proper ways to do with them.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图表中的数量和方法，并讲述自己的是如何处理烦恼。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍图表中的调查结果；第二步，介绍自己处理烦恼的方法和经历。[亮点词汇]①deal with 处理②In a word 总而言之[高分句型]①When I’m in trouble, I always ask my English teacher for help.（when引导时间状语从句）②I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying in front of her. （so…that…“如此……以至于……”引导结果状语从句） 二、电子邮件3．为了中学生的心理健康，学校英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假如你是李华，你因为最近心情不好，影响到了你的学习和生活，决定给专栏的主编Jane写一封e-mail倾述你的烦恼，并且向她寻求建议。心情不好的原因：1．学习功课多，学习压力大；2．考试不及格，父母责怪你；3．好朋友因为你未能陪她看电影而生气。要求：1．语句通顺，书写工整。2．词数：80词左右。Dear Jane,    I have a hard time these days._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Jane,I have a hard time these days. As a student of Grade Nine, I must study many subjects at school and do a lot of homework every day. So I am under great pressure. Last week, I failed the exams though I studied very hard. However, my parents didn’t understand me but blamed me. What’s worse, my best friend is angry with me because I can’t go the see the movie with her this weekend for I have to stay at home to study. I feel so upset that I can’t focus myself on study and can’t control my temper. I really don’t know what I should do. I hope you can give me some advice.Thank you for reading my e-mail. I am looking forward to your reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己心情不好的原因；第二步，希望得到对方的建议并期待对方回复。[亮点词汇]① what’s worse 并且② be angry with sb. 对某人生气③ look forward to期待[高分句型]① I failed the exams though I studied very hard.（though引导让步状语从句）② I feel so upset that I can’t focus myself on study and can’t control my temper.（so…that…引导结果状语从句） 三、看图作文4．下面这幅漫画呈现出了现在家庭教育的现状。假如你是李华，根据图片信息，描述事情发生的经过再谈谈心理的想法。提示词：broom（扫帚），pay attention to要求：1. 短文必须包括每幅图片的主要信息。可适当发挥，提示词供参考；2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；3. 词数80个左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Now many parents make many rules for their children. For example, in addition to studying, they are not allowed to watch TV. When children want to do housework, they are not allowed to do housework, but let them study. Children live under pressure and tension every day. I think parents should communicate more with their children and understand their needs. At the same time, let children do some housework properly, and they can also learn some common sense of life.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据图片信息，描述事情发生的经过再谈谈心理的想法。注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步：先认真审图片信息，明确图片反映的内容；第二步：分别介绍图片一和图片二反映的内容禁止看电视和做家务；第三步：具体谈谈心理的想法。[亮点词汇]①in addition to除……之外（还）  ②be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事③want to do sth.想要做某事④communicate with与……沟通  [高分句型]①When children want to do housework they are not allowed to do housework, but let them study.（when引导的时间状语从句）②I think parents should communicate more with their children and understand their needs.（省略that的宾语从句） ③At the same time, let children do some housework properly, and they can also learn some common sense of life.（and连接的并列句） 四、书信作文5．小华是一名八年级的在校学生，父母常年在外务工，他们叫爷爷奶奶平时周六周日送他到校外的各种培训班上课，让他很是苦恼，假如你是小华的朋友，请你代他写一封信给父母，根据图示，说说心理的烦恼，以及对周末的活动设想。参考词汇：国学：sinology1）短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3）词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear parents,How is it going on with you? You asked me about my life at home in your last letter, so I am writing to tell you something about myself these days._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear parents,How is it going on with you? You asked me about my life at home in your last letter, so I am writing to tell you something about myself these days.Mummy and Daddy, I miss you so much. But you ask grandpa to send me to many after-school classes on weekends, which troubles me a lot. I am always tired and stressed out these days. Sometimes I even can’t get to sleep. My weekends are usually busy. On Saturday morning, I have to go to the English classes and math classes from 8 am to 12 am. In the afternoon, I also need to take piano lessons and dancing classes. And on Sunday, Chemistry, physics, sinology again.I know you are worrying about my study, but I am really tired of the after-school classes. The teachers there were not as good as my teachers at school. Most of the things they teach us are not new. I have already learned from my own teacher at school. I just keep doing exercises again and again, which stops me from thinking further. What’s worse, the room is small and crowded. I don’t think it is good for my safety.I really want to have relaxing weekends. Can I go to the library? I really like reading, and I think reading can make me feel happy and more relaxed. Can I go out to play basketball? I really want to make more friends. Can I go for a trip on weekends? I really want to enjoy the beauty of the nature.Yours,Xiaohua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己周末的安排，以及这种安排给自己带来的困扰；第二步，分享自己的建议。[亮点词汇]①be stressed out紧张②worry about担心③be tired of厌烦④what’s worse并且[高分句型]①But you ask grandpa to send me to many after-school classes on weekends, which troubles me a lot.（which引导的定语从句）②I don’t think it is good for my safety.（省略that的宾语从句）6．假设你是九年级学生王琳，现在面临着一些困难不知怎么解决。所以，你给“心语屋”的李老师写了一封信，向她请求帮助。请你根据以下内容提示写一封不少于70词的英文书信，可进行适当发挥。信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。学业上：1.每天花费很多时间在作业上，导致休息、锻炼时间减少；2.作业难度大，经常遇到不会做的题目；3. ……同学关系上：毕业临近，不舍分离。家庭关系上：与父母欠缺沟通，父母不理解。Dear Miss Li,Your advice is always helpful to us. I’ve met some problems these days._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Wang Lin【参考范文】Dear Miss Lin,Your advice is always helpful to us. I’ve met some problems these days. First of all, I have to spend so much time on homework that I can’t have enough time to sleep or rest. And the homework is quite difficult. I always come across exercises that I can’t work out. My parents are worried about my study and arranging extra-classes for me. I feel stressed. Second, we are going to graduate, so it’s hard for us to say goodbye to each other. What’s more, my parents and I lack communication, therefore they can’t understand me. When I want to relax myself by listening to music, they think it’s a waste of time.I am looking forward to your early reply to give me some advice on my problems.Yours,Wang Lin【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③ 提示：根据所给中文提示，写一篇作文介绍自己面临的困难。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己学业上的问题；第二步，具体阐述自己在同学关系和家庭关系上的问题；第三步，最后表达自己迫切需要建议的诉求。[亮点词汇]①first of all首先②come across碰上③work out解决④what’s more此外[高分句型]①I have to spend so much time on homework that I can’t have enough time to sleep or rest,（so...that引导的结果状语从句）②When I want to relax myself by listening to music, they think it’s a waste of time.（when引导的时间状语从句）7．作为初三的学生，面对即将开始的中考，你感到焦虑与担忧，导致无法集中精力学习。请你给学校的心理辅导老师Kellen写一封求助信，寻求帮助。要求：不少于5句话，40词左右，已给的语言不计入总字数。Dear Mrs Kellen,I am a student from Grade 9. The Entrance Examination of High School is coming. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear Mrs Kellen,I am a student from Grade 9. The Entrance Examination of High School is coming. But unfortunately, I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help.I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First of all, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. I would like to have a face-to-face counseling with you in the classroom after school next Wednesday. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems then?Looking forward to your early reply!Yours,Lucy【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己迫切需要对方帮助的心情；第二步，介绍自己的困扰和问题；第三步，希望能与对方面对面的交流。[亮点词汇]①spend time on sth在某事上花费时间②let sb down使某人失望③fall asleep入睡[高分句型]①I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study（动词不定式作宾语）②I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot（定语从句） 五、讲稿8．初三生活忙碌而充实，有汲取知识的欢乐，也有即将面临中考的压力。假设你叫John，是阳光中学的一名初三学生。你被学校选为学生代表，写一篇英语演讲稿(How to keep healthy)，谈谈初三学生在迎接中考的阶段如何保持身心健康。请从以下两个方 面，用英语写出你的具体做法。保持身体健康健康饮食；……(自由发挥)……(自由发挥)保持心理健康交流沟通；……(自由发挥) 注意：（1）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；（2）词数100左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数；（3）短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。 参考词汇：physical 生理的，    mental 心理的How to Keep HealthyDear classmates,Good morning. I am John from Class 1, Grade 9. As we all know, health is very important._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks for listening!【参考范文】How to Keep HealthyDear classmates,Good morning. I am John from Class 1, Grade 9. As we all know, health is very important. Today I will tell you what I do to keep healthy in my life.It is important to keep physical healthy. So I try to have a healthy diet. I have milk every day and always remind myself to eat more fruit and vegetables. Also, I keep doing exercise. Whenever I have time, I practice volleyball or go running. Having enough sleep is necessary as well. I manage my time properly and plan my day carefully. As a result, I seldom stay up late.At the same time, I do my best to keep mental healthy. Good communication is of great help. I share my worries with my parents and classmates. If I have problems, I will go to my teachers for help. Besides, I get relaxed by listening to music. I like folk music best as it has strong local colour.Thanks for listening!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，根据文章开头提示，直奔主题，告诉大家自己如何保持健康。第二步，介绍自己保持身体健康的方式。第三步，介绍自己保持心理健康的方式。[亮点词汇]①keep doing exercise 保持锻炼②as well 也③of great help 很有帮助[高分句型]I like folk music best as it has strong local colour. (as引导的原因状语从句)