河北高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

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邀请信
1．假定你是李华，学生会主席。你校学生会邀请美国外教 Nancy 参加即将举办的中秋节晚会。请给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 邀请出席
2. 时间：下周五晚上 6：00。
3. 地点：演讲大厅（lecture hall）。
3. 晚会内容。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右。
2.  可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假定你是国际班的班长李华，你打算邀请外教Bruce到你们班做一个西方文化知识讲座。现请你给他写一封邀请信。内容包括：
1.同学们对他的课以及西方文化非常感兴趣；
2.大家特别希望了解节日文化；
3.讲座时间：下周三下午4：00到5：00。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bruce,
I’m Li Hua, monitor of the International Class.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你校羽毛球俱乐部下周将举行校羽毛球比赛决赛，请写一封邮件，邀请你的外国朋友Sam与你一起观看，内容包括：
1. 比赛安排；
2. 见面时间、地点；
3. 表达期待。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。
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4．假定你是李华，你校将举办“诵经典；学汉语”（Read Classics and Learn Chinese）活动，你的英国朋友John对此很感兴趣，发邮件向你询问有关情况。请你用英语给他回复。要点如下：
1. 活动时间及地点；
2. 诵读内容及形式；
3. 邀请他参加。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假定你是李华，你班同学打算于本周日一起参观中国科学技术馆( China Science and Technology Museum)。请用英语给班里的新来的交换生Tom写一封邮件，邀请他到时一同前往，内容包括：
1. 参观时间、目的；
2. 主要活动；
3. 其他事项。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假设你是新华中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(English speech contest)，希望家住你校附近的外籍教师Lucy女士来当评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封电子邮件。
1. 主题：爱在疫情中
2. 时间和地点
3. 参赛选手：10名学生
4. 联系人：李华（电话 88776655）
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：疫情pandemic  评委judge
Dear Lucy,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua Middle School, which is close to your house
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华, 你校将在暑假举办主题为“感受中国传统文化”的夏令营。请你根据以下提示，给你校的英国交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加夏令营。
内容包括：1.活动时间（2020年7月16日-20日）和地点；
2.活动内容：传统文化讲座；品尝中国传统美食；
3.活动的意义。
注意: 词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：1. 夏令营  a summer camp     2. 交换生  an exchange student
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友来信说他的兄弟 Tom下学期将来中国留学，希望在中国留学期间找一个寄宿家庭。请你给Tom写一封信，邀请Tom到你家居住，并说明理由。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Tom,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教 Chris 写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：
1. 时间：8 am—5 pm；    2. 集合地点：校门口；
3. 交通工具：公交车；    4.  携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。
注意:⒈ 词数 80 左右,开头语已为你写好；⒉ 可以适当增加细节,以便行文连贯；
Dear Chris，
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，你们学校要举办传统中医讲座，你的留学生朋友Chris对中国传统文化有浓厚的兴趣，因此，你想邀请他参加该讲座。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．讲座的时间和地点；
2．讲座的内容。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：传统中医讲座 a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua















1．Dear Nancy，
On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing to invite you to attend the Mid-Autumn party.
As scheduled, it will be held in the lecture hall of our school at 6:00 pm. next Friday. We will have a good time enjoying performances as well as playing games. With the party approaching the end, we will share moon cakes and admire the full moon. In fact, it is not what we do but whether we can enjoy ourselves that matters.
I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请外教参加中秋晚会。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法   
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.邀请出席
2.告知晚会时间和地点
1）时间：下周五晚上 6：00
2）地点：演讲大厅
3.介绍晚会内容
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
on behalf of; as scheduled; lecture hall; have a good time; enjoy performances; as well as; approach; admire the full moon; look forward to; at your earliest convenience
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing to invite you to attend the Mid-Autumn party.
2. As scheduled, it will be held in the lecture hall of our school at 6:00 pm.
3. We will have a good time enjoying performances as well as playing games.
4. With the party approaching the end, we will share moon cakes and admire the full moon.
5.In fact, it is not what we do but whether we can enjoy ourselves that matters.
6. I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的语法结构，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整篇文章结构紧凑。如：With the party approaching the end, we will share moon cakes and admire the full moon.这句话运用了with复合结构作状语。再如：It is not what we do but whether we can enjoy ourselves            that matters. 此句使用了强调句型。文章还使用了一些固定词组，如on behalf of ; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Bruce,
I’m Li Hua, monitor of the International Class. I am writing to invite you to give our class a lecture on Western culture. We all show great interest in your lessons and are particularly curious about the customs and traditions in your country. They are so mysterious and fantastic. Therefore, we would appreciate it if you could deliver a lecture on them, especially something related to your traditional festivals. The time scheduled for the lecture is 4pm-5pm next Wednesday.
I am looking forward to receiving your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请外教Bruce到你们班做一个西方文化知识讲座。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
人称：第一人称
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：写作内容应包括所列举要点：1.同学们对他的课以及西方文化非常感兴趣；2.大家特别希望了解节日文化；3.讲座时间：下周三下午4：00到5：00。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
show great interest in; be curious about ; be related to; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I am writing to invite you to give our class a lecture on Western culture.
2.We all show great interest in your lessons and are particularly curious about the customs and traditions in your country.
3.They are so mysterious and fantastic.
4.Therefore, we would appreciate it if you could deliver a lecture on them, especially something related to your traditional festivals.
5.The time scheduled for the lecture is 4pm-5pm next Wednesday.
6.I am looking forward to receiving your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如： Therefore, we would appreciate it if you could deliver a lecture on them, especially something related to your traditional festivals. 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句；本文也使用了一些固定词组，如show great interest in; be curious about ; be related to; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．One possible version
Dear Sam,
I’m extremely excited to tell you that our school badminton club will hold the final competition next Friday at 3 o'clock in the afternoon. Knowing that you’re rather interested in it, I’m sure you will want to watch it.
As scheduled, the match will take place in the school gym beside the lecture building. Therefore, if it is convenient for you, how about we meet at the school gate at 2: 45 on Friday afternoon? There is no doubt that you will be extremely impressed by the excellent athletic skills of the participating contestants and have a better understanding of the fascination of this sport.
Sincerely hope you can come. If so, I will reserve a seat next to me for you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文属于邀请信。要求考生书写一篇电子邮件，邀请外国朋友一起观看学校举办的羽毛球决赛。
【详解】本文属于应用文之邀请信写作。写作时内容需要包括三点，首先是比赛安排，即比赛的时间及地点，可以增加对比赛精彩程度的预测以增加其吸引力等有关内容，然后是见面时间及地点，具体内容考生可以适当发挥，合理即可。最后是表达期待，表示真诚邀请他参加的意愿。写作时可合理运用一些句式及词汇，以提高作文的得分档次。
【点睛】本文从书写上涵盖了全部内容要点，用词精炼，句式多变，语句之间衔接自然，充分说明了作者的语言驾驭能力。可以作为很好的范文来使用。本文中的高分句式如下：①运用了宾语从句：I’m extremely excited to tell you that our school badminton club will hold the final competition next Friday at 3 o'clock in the afternoon.②运用了现在分词做状语：Knowing that you’re rather interested in it, I’m sure you will want to watch it.③运用了条件状语从句：if it is convenient for you, how about we meet at the school gate at 2: 45 on Friday afternoon?④运用了同位语从句：There is no doubt that you will be extremely impressed by the excellent athletic skills of the participating contestants and have a better understanding of the fascination of this sport.
4．Dear John,
Our school will organize an activity called "Read Classics and Learn Chinese". Learning that you are interested in it and want to know something about it, I'd like to tell you the details.
The activity will be held in our lecture hall from 4:00 to 6:00 on the afternoon of July 15. All the participants are required to read Chinese poems or essays within five minutes. Besides, the forms of the activity can be various. You can read or recite on your own, in pairs or groups. I'm sure it will be great fun and beneficial to your language learning. Hope you can join us.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你校将举办“诵经典；学汉语”（Read Classics and Learn Chinese）活动，你的英国朋友John对此很感兴趣，发邮件向你询问有关情况。请你用英语给他回复。要点如下：1. 活动时间及地点；2. 诵读内容及形式；3. 邀请他参加。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：organize an activity (组织一项活动)；be interested in(对……感兴趣)；details(细节)；lecture hall(演讲厅)；participants(参与者)；be required to do sth.(被要求做某事)；Chinese poems(中国古诗)；various (各种各样的)；recite(背诵)；beneficial(有益的)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Learning that you are interested in it and want to know something about it, I'd like to tell you the details.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Tom,
To enrich our life, broaden our horizons and arouse our interest in science and technology, our school will organize a visit to China Science and Technology Museum this Friday. So I’d like to invite you to join me.
At the museum, apart from watching the exhibits, we can attend lecture and watch movies with special effects. More importantly, we can conduct some experiments appealing to us. Every one of us will be welcome to take part in it.
If you accept my offer, I have confidence that we will have a great time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你班同学打算于本周日一起参观中国科学技术馆( China Science and Technology Museum)。请用英语给班里的新来的交换生Tom写一封邮件，邀请他到时一同前往，内容包括：1. 参观时间、目的；2. 主要活动；3. 其他事项。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：China Science and Technology Museum (中国科学技术馆)；organize a visit (组织参观)；apart from (除了)；attend lecture (参加讲座)；special effects (特效)；conduct some experiments(做实验)；appeal to (吸引)；take part in(参加)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如At the museum, apart from watching the exhibits, we can attend lecture and watch movies with special effects.非谓语动词的运用；If you accept my offer, I have confidence that we will have a great time.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Lucy,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua Middle School, which is close to your house. I hope you won't mind me writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in the first meeting room in the teaching building on August7.
Here are some details about the contest. To begin with, it will start at 3:00 pm and last for about 2 hours. Besides, the topic of the speech is Love in the Pandemic and ten students will take part in it.
Hopefully, you would accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. If you have any questions please call me at 88776655. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请外籍教师Lucy女士来当英语演讲比赛评委。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.写信的目的
       2.有关演讲比赛的情况
       1）主题：爱在疫情中
       2）时间和地点
       3) 参赛选手：10名学生
       4) 联系人：李华（电话 88776655）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be close to；mind doing；invite sb. to do；start at；last for；take part in；it is convenient for sb.；call sb. at +电话号码；look forward to.
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua Middle School, which is close to your house.
2. I hope you won't mind me writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest.
3. it will start at 3:00 pm and last for about 2 hours.
4. the topic of the speech is Love in the Pandemic and ten students will take part in it.
5. you would accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.
6. If you have any questions please call me at 88776655.
7. I'm looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择主从复合句让文章更有文采。如：I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua Middle School, which is close to your house./ I hope you won't mind me writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in the first meeting room in the teaching building on August7.这两句，第一句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，第二句运用了which引导的限制性定语从句；如you would accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. /If you have any questions please call me at 88776655.这2句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
7．Dear Tom,
I’m writing to invite you to take part in a summer camp, which will be held for exchange students to experience the charm of traditional Chinese culture.
The camp will begin in our school on July 16th 2020, lasting 5 days. A series of lectures on traditional Chinese culture will be given by famous professors, which helps you to learn more about Chinese culture. Meanwhile, students of various cultures can communicate with each other. Besides, you will have the opportunity to taste a variety of delicious traditional Chinese dishes.
Aimed at promoting the understanding of culture, the summer camp serves as a good platform where you can broaden your horizons and make new friends. I sincerely hope you can come and enjoy it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，根据要求写一封电子邮件，是一封邀请信。
【详解】第一步：假定你是李华, 你校将在暑假举办主题为“感受中国传统文化”的夏令营。请你根据以下提示，给你校的英国交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加夏令营。内容包括：1.活动时间（2020年7月16日-20日）和地点；2.活动内容：传统文化讲座；品尝中国传统美食；3.活动的意义。应用文表达，开头结尾给出，注意格式规范，根据提示，整篇文章应使用一般时态。
第二步：根据提纲依次写出活动时间和地点；活动内容；活动的意义；内容包含全面，关键词选用合理，如invite…to…, take part in, a variety of, serves as等等。
第三步：连词成文，结构衔接得体。
【点睛】第一段，开门见山，表达目的，清晰明确，简单明了。
第二段，说明提纲全部内容，结构清晰，Meanwhile…Besides…连接结构的短语和词运用得体恰当。
第三段，符合应用文结尾格式，结构严谨。
文章内容完整，提纲要点全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用复合句，显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力，如A series of lectures on traditional Chinese culture will be given by famous professors, which helps you to learn more about Chinese culture.which引导的定语从句。Aimed at promoting the understanding of culture, the summer camp serves as a good platform where you can broaden your horizons and make new friends.非谓语动词。
8．Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to learn it from my pen pal that you will come to China as an exchange student next term. Knowing that you are looking for a host family, I hope I can have this honor.
I have been learning English for about six years, so I can communicate with people in fluent English. Besides, I’m outgoing and warm-hearted. I like making friends and helping others. We have a large house, where you will live comfortably. What’s more, my parents are both Chinese teachers, Which can benefit you a lot in learning Chinese.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封信，邀请留学生Tom到你家居住，并说明理由。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，引出主题；第二段写出邀请Tom到你家居住的理由；第三段表达期待对方的回复。
要求：1. 表明写信的目的，邀请Tom到你家居住；
2. 写出邀请Tom到你家居住的理由；
3. 表达期待对方的回复
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
be delighted to do (很高兴做某事); look for (寻找); host family (寄宿家庭); honor (荣幸); communicate with sb. (和某人沟通); comfortably (舒服地); benefit (使受益); look forward to (期待，盼望)
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m delighted to learn it from my pen pal that you will come to China as an exchange student next term.
2. Knowing that you are looking for a host family, I hope I can have this honor.
3. I have been learning English for about six years.
4. I can communicate with people in fluent English.
5. I’m outgoing and warm-hearted.
6. I like making friends and helping others.
7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more(本篇文章使用过); besides(本篇文章使用过); moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…;  some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so(本篇文章使用过); since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
We have a large house.本句用来写出一个邀请Tom来居住的理由，我们有一所大房子。可以使用定语从句，进一步介绍大房子有什么好处。润色修改为：We have a large house, where you will live comfortably.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：We have a large house, where you will live comfortably.，这句话为where引导的定语从句；其次，使用了一些固定句型和短语，如：be delighted to do; communicate with sb.; look forward to等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如honor; comfortably; benefit等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Chris，
We are planning to climb the Xiangshan Hill this Saturday and sincerely invite you to go with us.We will get together at the school gate at 8 am and probably come back at 5 pm. To make it a green travel, we will take the bus there. You’d better take your camera to record the beautiful scenery. And don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill. Remember, take your umbrella or raincoat in case it rains.If you can join us, we will be very happy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求学生给外教 Chris 写一封英文信，邀请他周六去爬香山。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 时间：8 am—5 pm；    
2. 集合地点：校门口；
3. 交通工具：公交车；   
4.  携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
had better; plan to; on the top of; in case
第三步：连词成句
1.We are planning to climb the Xiangshan Hill this Saturday and sincerely invite you to go with us.
2.We will get together at the school gate at 8 am and probably come back at 5 pm.
3.To make it a green travel, we will take the bus there.
4.You’d better take your camera to record the beautiful scenery.
5.And don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill.
6.Remember, take your umbrella or raincoat in case it rains.
7.If you can join us, we will be very happy.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如：To make it a green travel, we will take the bus there. 这句话运用了动词不定式作目的状语，And don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill. 这句话运用了because引导原因状语从句；本文也使用了一些固定词组，如had better; plan to; on the top of; in case等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．One Possible Version：
Dear Chris,
Knowing you have a keen interest in traditional Chinese Culture, I can’t wait to invite you to a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine which will be host in my school.
The lecture will begin at 3 p.m. this Sunday in the school hall. An expert is going to narrate the development history of traditional Chinese medicine and share some significant worldwide achievements with us. As far as I can see, it can enrich your understanding of traditional Chinese medicine and make you realize how much difference traditional Chinese culture has made in the present world.
Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文属于提纲类作文
【详解】根据文章所给的信息提示写一封邀请信。写作要点包括向Chris发出邀请，介绍讲座的相关信息：时间、地点、内容以及活动安排等．写作时态为一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称和第三人称。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。重要短语如：a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine（一场关于中医的讲座）；have a keen interest in（对…感兴趣）；share … with…（分享）；look forward to（期待，盼望）；As far as I can see（依我来看）等等。高级句型结构如：Knowing you have a keen interest in traditional Chinese Culture, I can’t wait to invite you to a lecture on traditional Chinese medicine which will be host in my school.本句用现在分词短语Knowing…作状语，还有宾语从句…you have a keen interest in traditional Chinese Culture和一个以which引导的定语从句which will be host in my school，另外该定语从句中使用了被动语态。