四川高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假设你是李华，为了减少城市空气污染，你打算向“市长信箱”投信发表你的看法。请根据以下要点，用英语给市长写一封信：

1.简述城市空气污染的危害；2.提出减少污染的建议：（至少3点）；3.希望建议被考虑。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear mayor,

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．目前很多青少年有不良饮食习惯，对此你校英语俱乐部决定开展一次题为“ We Are What We Eat”的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：

1.健康饮食的重要性；

2.你的建议（至少两条）。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：nutrition营养

We Are What We Eat

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3．假定你是李华，你班的交换生Mike因在“用英语讲中国故事”比赛中表现欠佳而心情低落。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.进行安慰；

2.分析原因；

3.提出建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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4．假定你是高三学生李华，你的好朋友Tom写信告诉你因为高中学业水平考试临近，他感到压力大，心情低落。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封邮件安慰他。

1. 表示理解并安慰；

2. 给出建议并说明理由；

3. 表达祝福。

注意：1. 词数100词左右；

2. 可适当增添细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

5．假定你是大一学生李华。你的母校校刊编辑邀请你给高三的同学写一封公开信，请根据以下要点回信：1.你高三时学习方面的变化；2.你高三时生活方面的变化；3.你对高三同学的建议。

6．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Peter发来邮件，提到他们班有个女生总是拿他开玩笑，他为此感到恼火。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示安慰；

2.提出建议；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假如你是李华，你的好朋友Peter来信告知你，他因考试发挥失常导致成绩不理想而情绪低落，请你给他写封回信。

要点如下：

1)表示理解；

2)给他提出至少两点建议；

3)表达美好祝愿；

注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

8．假设你是李华，你校来自美国的交换生Tom想邀请你周末一起去看电影。但由于上映的是你不喜欢的恐怖片，所以你不想去。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件。内容要点如下：

1.表示拒绝并说明理由；2.建议他邀请别的同学。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友John最近打算到你所在的城市旅游，写信向你询问该城市的交通情况，请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1.该城市交通情况简介；

2.出行建议及理由。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友Peter经常和同学因为个性和生活习惯发生冲突。他写信给你，希望你能给些意见帮助他解决这个问题。请根据以下要点回信：

1. 面对冲突，保持冷静;

2. 积极应对，以力求双赢的思维方式去解决问题;

3. 你的其他建议。

注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数100左右；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

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1．Dear mayor,

These days air pollution is becoming more and more serious in our city. Every day we have to take in very dirty air, which does great harm to our health. To reduce the pollution, we should take action immediately.

Firstly, we should call on people to take a bus or ride a bicycle instead of driving a car. We should try to use cleaner fuels when driving. Secondly, some factories which send out heavy smoke should be closed or moved out of the city. What's more, we need to plant more trees and grass to make the air fresher. Only in this way can we enjoy a better air quality.

I hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.

Yours,

        Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为了减少城市空气污染，要求考生向“市长信箱”投信发表自己的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

对……有害：be harmful to→ do harm to

减少：decrease → reduce  

发出，释放：give off→ send out

建议: proposal →suggestion

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, we should call on people to take a bus or ride a bicycle instead of driving a car.

拓展句：Firstly, we should call on people who often drive a car to take a bus or ride a bicycle.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Every day we have to take in very dirty air, which does great harm to our health.  (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] We should try to use cleaner fuels when driving.  (运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略)

[高分句型3] Only in this way can we enjoy a better air quality.(运用了倒装句)

2． Nowadays more and more people are paying attention to healthy eating habits. There are many good reasons for it. First, a good eating habit provides the nutritions that we need in our daily life. At the same time, studies have shown that a healthy diet is of great importance to prevent many diseases.

 In order to keep healthy, we should form a good eating habit. As we all know, breakfast is the most important meal, so everyone should have breakfast. Besides, we'd better remove extra sugar and salt from our diet, which can cause weight problem and heart disease. And also, it is important to eat fresh fruit and vegetables every day.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇题目为“ We Are What We Eat”的短文参赛。

【详解】1.词汇积累

提供offer-provide

重要 be important- be of importance

阻止 stop-prevent

拿走 take-remove

2.句式拓展

原句：In order to keep healthy, we should form a good eating habit.

拓展句：Only when we form a good eating habit can we keep healthy.

【点睛】[高分句型1] First, a good eating habit provides the nutritions that we need in our daily life. (定语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, we'd better remove extra sugar and salt from our diet, which can cause weight problem and heart disease. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)

3．One possible version:

Dear Mike,

I'm sorry to hear that you didn't perform well in the contest of "Telling Chinese Stories in English" and that you're feeling down. Actually, as a foreigner, you've tried your best.

Anyhow, you shouldn't lose heart. Instead, you should analyze the cause of your failure. As I can see, you weren't well prepared for it as you didn't understand the story well and lacked practice in storytelling.

I think you should spend more time reading more Chinese stories and practise telling Chinese stories with me or your other Chinese friends, I'm sure you will make great progress.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生Mike因在“用英语讲中国故事”比赛中表现欠佳而心情低落，要求给他写一封电子邮件表示安慰，帮助分析原因并提出建议。

【详解】词汇积累

感到沮丧：feel down →feel depressed         

尽力：try one’s best→ do one’s best

失去信心：lose confidence →lose heart

原因：reason → cause

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Instead, you should analyze the cause of your failure.

拓展句：Instead, you should analyze the cause which leads to your failure.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm sorry to hear that you didn't perform well in the contest of "Telling Chinese Stories in English" and that you're feeling down.  (运用了that引导的2个并列的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] As I can see, you weren't well prepared for it as you didn't understand the story well and lacked practice in storytelling.  (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)

4．Dear Tom,

    You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Academic Proficiency Test. What you should keep in mind is that most students feel nervous like you. Just take it easy. Here are some suggestions which I think may be helpful.

    First, you should be well prepared. The harder you study, the less nervous you will be. Besides, look on your nervousness as a positive thing which can give you the energy to take the Academic Proficiency Test in an unemotional way. Last but not least, as the old saying goes, confidence is the first secret of success. So do have faith in yourself.

    Hope these can benefit you. May you succeed in the test!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好朋友Tom写信，介绍一些减轻考试压力的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

记住：remember→keep in mind

相信：believe in→have faith in

冷静的：calm→unemotional

此外：in addition=besides

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：First, you should be well prepared. The harder you study, the less nervous you will be.

拓展句：First, you should be well prepared because the harder you study, the less nervous you will be.

【点睛】[高分句型1] You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Academic Proficiency Test. (运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语)

[高分句型2] What you should keep in mind is that most students feel nervous like you. (运用了what引导主语从句)

5．Dear fellows,

I'm really glad to share my thoughts with you. I will give a brief description about my previous experience and offer some suggestions as well.

It was true that great changes took place since entering senior three. On one hand, I studied much harder since I knew time was limited. What made me excited was that I did make great progress after a period of full devotion to study. On the other hand, my life also changed a lot. To ensure energy and efficiency during the day, I made a more practical schedule and strictly follow it every day, which led to a more regulated life and really benefited me a lot.

As for my suggestions, the following tips may help. First of all, remember to persist whatever difficulty you meet. Besides, communicate more with your classmates, teachers and parents, from whom you can definitely gain support in all aspects.

Best wishes to all of you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就自己高三时学习方面、生活方面的变化给下届高三的同学写一封公开信，分享自己的经历，给高三同学提建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

奉献：dedication→devotion

坚持：insist on→persist

困难：trouble/hardship→difficulty

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：As for my suggestions, the following tips may help.

拓展句：As for my suggestions, it is the following tips that may help a lot.

【点睛】[高分句型1] What made me excited was that I did make great progress after a period of full devotion to study. (运用了What引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句)

[高分句型2] To ensure energy and efficiency during the day, I made a more practical schedule and strictly follow it every day, which led to a more regulated life and really benefited me a lot. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

6．Dear Peter,

I feel so sorry to know that you’ve been going through a hard time when your classmate usually plays jokes on you. Many students have experienced and overcome it eventually, including me, so there is no need to worry. Maybe the following advice will be of help to you.

It’s essential to express our true feelings, especially to a real friend. Why not try to talk with the girl calmly, informing her that you don't like such jokes? If this doesn’t work, be yourself and make friends with those who truly like and respect you.

Keep it in mind that I always stand by you. I do hope that you're getting better, so feel free to write to me when you are faced with any problems.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Peter写封邮件，他们班有个女生总是拿他开玩笑，他为此感到恼火，对此提出建议并表达祝愿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

记住：remember→keep it in mind

经历：experience→go through

最终：finally→eventually

支持：support= stand by

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Many students have experienced and overcome it eventually, including me, so there is no need to worry.

拓展句：There is no need to worry because many students have experienced and overcome it eventually, including me.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I feel so sorry to know that you’ve been going through a hard time when your classmate usually plays jokes on you. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] If this doesn’t work, be yourself and make friends with those who truly like and respect you. (运用了who引导定语从句)

7．Dear Peter,

I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your exam. I am sure you are depressed and worried about your study now. I quite understand how you feel. As your friend, I have some tips for you. First of all, I want to say failure is the mother of success. So never give up though you failed this time. You should try to analyze the causes and draw a lesson from it. This can help you make up for the lack of knowledge and skills in those areas. The next is to build up confidence, for it is the key factor to ideal grade. I am sure by doing this, your test results will be improved next time and gradually your confidence will also come back. Hope you can get relieved and recover yourself soon!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你的好朋友Peter来信告知你，他因考试发挥失常导致成绩不理想而情绪低落，请你根据要求给他写封回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

理解：understand→comprehend

建议：tip→advice/suggestion

放弃：give up→quit

沮丧的：depressed→upset

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：You should try to analyze the causes and draw a lesson from it. This can help you make up for the lack of knowledge and skills in those areas.

拓展句：You should try to analyze the causes and draw a lesson from it, which can help you make up for the lack of knowledge and skills in those areas.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I quite understand how you feel. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your exam. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

8．Dear Tom,

Thanks for your invitation but I'm sorry to tell you that I can't watch the movie with you. I know you like thrillers very much but I don't like this kind of movie, because they usually make me scared. Every time I watch thrillers, I can't sleep well at night. By the way, my favorite movies are comedies which make me happy and relaxed. You can ask someone else who also likes thrillers to go with you. You know there are several classmates who like thrillers in our class.

Thanks again for your invitation and wish you a good time.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给想邀请你周末一起去看电影的美国交换生Tom写封电子邮件，告知他你不想去并说明原因。

【详解】1.词汇积累

看：see→watch

害怕的：frightened→scared

恐怖片：horror movie→thriller

几个：a few→several

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Every time I watch thrillers, I can't sleep well at night.

拓展句：Every time I watch thrillers, I feel so afraid that I can't sleep well at night.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I know you like thrillers very much but I don't like this kind of movie, because they usually make me scared. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] By the way, my favorite movies are comedies which make me happy and relaxed. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)

9．Dear John,

I’m more than excited to know that you're going to visit my city soon. As for the traffic here, now I'd like to share something about it with you.

With various means of public transport, the traffic here is really convenient. Apart from the traditional public transport such as buses, subways and taxis, which are always available, shared bikes and shared cars have become more and more popular recently. You can go almost everywhere you want just by using a smartphone. However, like most big cities, the rush hours can be extremely terrible.

When you arrive, you'd better take a subway to your hotel, because it's quite fast and cheap. But when you get around within the city, it all depends on your purpose and time. For example, shared bikes can be a perfect tool for you to explore the tourist attractions like Wide and Narrow Alley.

Tell me when you come. I'm looking forward to seeing you!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John回一封邮件，介绍你所在的城市的交通情况。

【详解】1.词汇积累

传统的：traditional→conventional

除了：apart from=in addition to

各种各样的：various=a variety of

关于：as for=with regard to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：For example, shared bikes can be a perfect tool for you to explore the tourist attractions like Wide and Narrow Alley.

拓展句：For example, it is shared bikes that can be a perfect tool for you to explore the tourist attractions like Wide and Narrow Alley.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Apart from the traditional public transport such as buses, subways and taxis, which are always available, shared bikes and shared cars have become more and more popular recently. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] I’m more than excited to know that you're going to visit my city soon. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

10．Dear Peter,

I’ve just received you letter saying that you have conflicts frequently with your classmates due to your personality and lifestyle. I feel so sorry about that, but you have to know that conflicts are a normal part of our life. Relax first and now I’d like to give you some suggestions for possible resolution.

First of all, you should keep cool in face of conflicts. Only with this state of mind can you prevent any conflict from getting worse. Secondly, take an active attitude and believe all conflicts can be solved when dealt with properly. The key point is to think win-win and make necessary compromise. Last but not the least, seek for a proper chance, gather all the parties related and bring forward your solutions . And I believe your sincerity and activeness will contribute to conflict resolution sooner or later.

Just have a try and see pleasant relations with your classmates again! I am sure you will make it.

Looking forward to your good news!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Peter写信，给他一些解决与同学冲突的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

经常地：frequently→always

生活方式：lifestyle→way of life

建议：suggestion→advice

尝试：have a try→make an attempt

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：First of all, you should keep cool in face of conflicts. Only with this state of mind can you prevent any conflict from getting worse.

拓展句：First of all, you should keep cool in face of conflicts, which can prevent any conflict from getting worse.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Secondly, take an active attitude and believe all conflicts can be solved when dealt with properly. (运用了状语从句的省略)

[高分句型2] Only with this state of mind can you prevent any conflict from getting worse.  (运用了倒装句)