中考英语二轮复习作文热点素材+精彩范文热点 06 校园欺凌 (含答案)

这是一份中考英语二轮复习作文热点素材+精彩范文热点 06 校园欺凌 (含答案)，共16页。
热点 06 校园欺凌 校园欺凌无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：校园欺凌。【预测题目】（一）以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。提示：1. 谨慎交友。2. 不参与打架斗殴。3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。参考词汇：1. self-protection (自我保护) 2. bully (n./v.欺凌)3. personal safety(人身安全)4. have violent behaviors (打架斗殴)How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can’t have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future ,do you think so?（二）近年全国发生数起严重的校园暴力事件，某中学初三8班围绕校园安全问题召开主题班会.假定你是班长李华，以How to protect ourselves in campus violence为标题写一篇发言稿.主要包括如下内容：1．校园暴力事件已引起广泛关注. 2．要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力. 3．遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处境和可能的危险；尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警.注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯. 参考词汇：增强—enhance____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to protect ourselves in campus violenceDear friends,This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results. The incidents of campus violence have drawn widespread attention in our country. Asa student, we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhancethe ability of self-protection. Of course, if we meet the violence, we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves. At first, we’d better keep calm, judge the situation and beaware of the possible dangers. Then, we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence.At last but not least, we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury. That’s all. Thank you. （一）目前，校园暴力时有发生，已经危害到中学生的身心健康。作为中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯，保护自身安全，远离学校暴力。请以“规范自我行为，做个合格中学生”为主题写一篇短文。要点：1）遵守学校纪律，听从老师和家长的教育，严格要求自己；2）远离网吧，按时上学和回家；3）待人礼貌友好，不与同学打架；4）遇到困难多与父母及老师沟通。2.要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2）词数 80 左右，开头已经给出，不计入词总数。Campus violence (校园暴力) happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful to students. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Campus violence happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful to students. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student, we should follow the school rules to behave well at school. It's good for us to obey the teachers and parents. Also, we must be strict with ourselves. To be safe, we should keep away from Internet bars, go to school and go back home on time. Besides, we should be polite and friendly to others, and don't fight with classmates. If we have any difficulties in life, it's best to communicate with our teachers and parents. In this way, our school can become safer and safer.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据“校园暴力”这一社会现象进行讨论，就“规范自我行为，做个合格中学生”为主题写作，写作时要包含题目要点提示，可适当发挥。2.例文点评：例文开篇提出校园暴力这一想象，并提出了校园暴力的危害。接下来紧扣题目要点提出了作为学生该如何做才能使得校园越来越安全。信件结构清晰，行文连贯，逻辑关系缜密，是一篇优秀的例文。3.高分亮点：单词和短语：obey；also；besides；follow the school rules；behave well；be strict with；keep away from；on time；fight with；communicate with；in this way。句型：It's + adj. + for sb. to do sth.；祈使句；if引导的条件状语从句。  （二）同学之间的友谊本该是纯真的，但是最近在少数校园里出现了一些不和谐的现象，有些学生欺凌(bully)自己的同学，对同学造成了伤害，请你写一篇80词左右文章，说说你对此事的看法， 要求如下：1.写写你身边曾经发生过的或你听说过的校园欺凌事件(school-bullies )，以及你对这件事的看法。2.请给那些被欺凌的同学三点建议，该如何面对同学的欺凌。3.呼吁大家都来阻止校园欺凌，共建平安美好校园。注意：词数不少于80。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, I heard that there was an incident of many people beating up a girl. Most of the people involved were between 12 and 16 years old. This is a terrible school-bullies. The incident not only damaged the physical and mental health of girls, but also challenged the moral bottom line of schools, the public and the law.First of all, if you've ever experienced school bullying or are experiencing it, we should be brave enough to say “no” to this kind of behavior. Besides, we can ask teachers and parents for help when we can't handle it ourselves. What’s more, take up the weapon of law and fight against this unhealthy phenomenon.It’s everyone’s duty to make school safe. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to school-bullies.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求就社会中的校园欺凌现象写一篇文章。根据题目要点可知，第一段讲述自己听说或身边发生过的校园欺凌事件，并谈谈自己对事件的看法；第二段阐述我们应该怎样应对校园欺凌行为，提出至少三点建议；最后一段升华主题，呼吁人们构建良好的校园环境。2.写作指导：本文主题为“校园欺凌”；文章需以第一人称为主，浅谈自己的建议和看法；以一般过去时叙述校园欺凌事件，用一般现在时阐述建议观点；文章要点要齐全，逻辑要清晰，可使用what’s more、besides等词汇厘清文章脉络，使读者一目了然。 （三）学校欺凌现象在各个国家都很常见。这种行为无论是对受害者还是加害者都造成了严重的心理影响，有些甚至导致悲剧性的结果。话题：1、你认为学校欺凌现象的原因是什么？2、你有没有好的方法来阻止类似现象的发生？3、你曾经有过类似的经历吗？（无论是加害者、受害者、旁观者或阻止者）说说你的故事。注意：以上话题选择一个回答即可。注意紧扣话题本身。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Bullying seems to be an issue we hear about in the media more often in recent times. Perhaps because of the popularity of social media on the internet, many people can express their feelings, experiences and opinions a lot easier. What defines bullying is also changing. It used to be the most basic form: physical violence. New students to the school getting pushed against lockers is a common depiction. Nowadays, posting mean messages on someone's internet page can also be considered bullying. Some people's feelings were hurt badly by these ill-intended messages, leading to dire consequences.（四）近年来,校园欺凌事件频发,备受社会关注。紧扣校园欺凌，自由发挥。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】There is a news that makes me shocked. It is said that there happened a violent event in campus which cause 4 students injured and 2 dead. Some reasons arouse in this event.First schools should try to avoid things like this if the students are injured or dead the schools have responsibility to them; second families especially parents should educate their children well give them a good guide and take care of them; third the society should control violent events. If the above three try their best and pay enough attention to them things like this should be avoided.【参考译文】　　有一个消息让我震惊。这是说，发生在校园，造成4名学生受伤，2人死亡的暴力事件。一些原因引起这个事件。首先，学校应该尽量避免这样的事情，如果学生受伤或死亡，学校有责任的人;其次，家庭，特别是家长要教育好自己的孩子，给他们一个很好的引导和照顾他们;第三，社会应该控制暴力事件。如果上述三个尽最大努力，并给予足够的重视，这样的事情应该避免。  Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes. I am sure everything will be better. There is something unpleasant happening at school. Let’s play a role in building a harmonious schoolI think students should always walk but not run in the hallways.I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my ownIf I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. I think we should respect each other.I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me.           （一）学校欺凌现象在各个国家都很常见。这种行为无论是对受害者还是加害者都造成了严重的心理影响，有些甚至导致悲剧性的结果。话题：1、你认为学校欺凌现象的原因是什么？2、你有没有好的方法来阻止类似现象的发生？3、你曾经有过类似的经历吗？（无论是加害者、受害者、旁观者或阻止者）说说你的故事。注意：以上话题选择一个回答即可。注意紧扣话题本身。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Bullying, as far as I know, is prevalent in secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide. I believe there are some factors that contribute to the prevalence of school's bullying.
    Naturally, ‘schooling' should be the most obvious and uninsurable reason that comes into our mind at the beginning, because our children spend most of their time in school and it's the school's responsibility to protect them and eradicate any forms of bullying. Second, ‘parenting' is another important factor that can't be neglected. As we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. Our offspring will imitate everything from wording to the way their parents treat others. Therefore, one can't expect a couple of dominating and violent parents will have a gentle and courteous child. And last, media influence has gradually become an influential force that projects negative impact to children's mind. Some juvenile delinquents who had committed serious crime by bullying their schoolmates confessed that the violence on TV had greatly changed their mind as well as behaviour. （二）请结合下面两幅图片所示内容,写ー篇短文。 要求：1.用约30词概括上文主要内容:2.用约120词发表你的观点，内容包括:(1)校园欺凌的危害(至少两点) :(2) 你对改变这一现象的建议(至少两点)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】School bullying, thanks to the film Better Days, is now coming under the spotlight. Despite some successful attempts to tackle it, it still takes joint efforts to prevent it happening. (30 words)School bullying can definitely threaten individuals’ growth and undermine social harmony. For one thing, it causes severe psychological trauma to the victims, subjecting them to long-term depression. Worse still, what a vicious cycle if victims follow in the bully’s footsteps! For another, school bullying can make the bully go further to believe in violence and commit crimes.Undoubtedly, only when nipped in the bud can school bullying stop snowballing. First, laws should be in place and give explicit guidelines on what will be done if it occurs. Second, it is urged that schools should maintain clear channels of communication for both victims and bullies so that they do not bottle up their feelings. It is never too late to face school bullying by taking preventive steps. (126 words) （三）请结合下面两幅图片所示内容, 以“How to behave(表现）at school?”为题写ー篇短文。 要求：1.简要描述两幅图片, 并针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少2点）；2.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和学校名称；3.80个词左右, 已给出的部分不计人总词数。参考词汇：beat, kick, laugh at, respect(尊重), harmonious(和谐的)How to Behave at School?There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】How to Behave at School?    There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture Two, two girls are beating their classmate. In Picture One, a group of students are laughing at a poor boy because he failed in the exam.     How rude they are! We should say no to such things. As a student, I think we should respect each other and be friendly to others. If we have different ideas, we’d better discuss instead of fighting. Besides, we should help our classmates when they are in trouble. Let’s play a role in building a harmonious school【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，简要描述两幅图片, 并针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和现在进行时，人称为第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There is……，two girls are beating ……，I think we should……，Let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了两幅画的内容，接下来介绍针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做，最后我们在营建和谐校园应起作用。此处a group of, laugh at, each other, be friendly to, be in trouble, play a role in doing sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 （四）假如你是李华,校园英文报的编辑,近日收到读者John的来信，谈论到他被一些同学欺负的经历，请根据以下提示，用英文给John写一封回信。写作要点: 1. 安慰他不要害怕和差愧；2. 学校也正在采取相关措施:1月16日(周四) 晚上8点在学校会议室有一个关于如何应对校园欺凌的讲座。3. 你的建议: (至少两点)写作要求: 1. 80词左右，第一句已给出，不计入总词数。2.必须包含以上写作要点，可适当发挥。3.文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名。4.语句通畅，语法正确，书写工整。参考词汇:欺凌 n. bullying   欺凌者 n. bullies   措施n. measuresDear John,I am sorry to learn what has happened to you.____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear John,I am sorry to learn what has happened to you. I think you should be brave to face it and don't be afraid or shamed because it is not your fault.Our school is taking action to solve school bullying. What's more, a lecture on how to deal with bullying will be held in the school conference room on Thursday, Jan.16th, at 8 p.m.In my opinion, you should tell your experience to your teachers and parents, they are adults and they will help you. Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes. Tell bullies nobody should be bullied and bullying itself is wrong. I am sure everything will be better. Yours,Li Hua【解析】题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求根据针对John的问题和提示的内容给John回信。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态选用一般现在时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，表达出自己的观点态度。高分亮点：短语：happen to；take action；In my opinion；Meanwhile等。句型：Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes.   使用了定语从句和宾语从句。I am sure everything will be better.  使用了宾语从句。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。