中考英语二轮复习书面表达高分作文攻略62 中考作文题型之提纲类 (含答案)

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62 中考作文题型之提纲类    相关话题题型解读及写作指导提钢式作文和一般的文章不同， 提纲式作文在题目中就已经为我们列出了提纲，确定了作文思路。提纲式作文考查作者的拓展能力、知识面、组织能力和作文能力。相关话题作文在写作时需分三步走。1.认真审题，找准思路认真阅读题目所列出的提纲，分析、揣摩出题者的用意，确立文章的要点，找准写作的思路，即找到作文的突破点，围绕提纲内容尽量发散思维补充更多的内容。2.初步构思，拟定提纲整理、归纳能想到的信息，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并确定使用哪种体裁来进行写作，确定人称、时态等细节。3.连词成句，连句成文根据题目所列提纲，用恰当的词语表达信息，再把词语组成句子，最后使用适当的词语把句子串联成文章。要注意连接顺畅，适度使用过渡词和过渡句。 相关话题写作素材储备写作模板1.总起全文，概述题目给出的观点，表明态度。Some people argue that                                  (观点1). But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that                                   (观点2).As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.2.证明自己的论点或观点是正确的。There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all,                                     (论据1).More importantly,______                (论据 2) . Most important of all,                    (论据3).3.总结，提出建议或憧憬。In summary,__                              ( 总结观点) . 必备词汇agree同意disagree反对in favor of支持advantage优点reason原因phenomenon现象be concerned about担心solve the problem解决问题be aware of意识到with the development of..随着....的发展 必备句型表达观点(1) .. has become 2 hot topic recently. Opinions towards it vary from person to person....近来已经成为热门话题，人们的看法不一。(2) There is an argument among people concerning..人们....上各执已见。(3) Different people hold different ideas on...不同的人对....有不同的见解。(4) When talking about... different people will have different answers.当谈到...时，不同的人有不同的答案。(5) Nowadays, the majority of people think that.. Nevertheless, there are sill some people who think that... 如今绝大多数人认为...然而，也有些人认.....(6) Now it is commonly accepted tat... But I doubt whether..现在大家普遍认为...我却对此持怀疑态度。(7) As far as I am concerned, I'd like to agree to the former.就我而言，我赞同前一种观点。(8) I agree to the latter opinion to some extent.在某种程度上，我同意后一一种观点。表示解释或引出理由(1 ) A number of factors could account for the phenomenon, but the followings are the most critical ones.有很多因素导致了这种现象，但是下文讲的因素是最重要的。(2 ) There are many reasons responsible for this instance, and the followings are the typical ones.导致这种现象的原因有很多，以下所展示的原因是其中比较有代表性的。(3) The causes for the problem go much deeper.这一问题(现象、趋势)背后有着更深层次的原因。(4)  There are many reasons that can explain this case.有很多原因可以解释该问题。(5) 1 think there are two main reasons.我认为有两个主要原因。(6) A number of factors could account for / lead to the change of..解释引起......变化的原因有很多。(7) Perhaps the main / primary reason...也许，主要/根本的原......对事件、观点的总结(1) In spite of these disadvantages, I think... does more good than harm to people,尽管有种种不好，但我认...对人们产生的作用利大于弊。(2) Comparing the two sides, there is no denying that ...has produced great effects on society. 对比两方面，不得不....对社会产生了很大的影响。(3) To conclude, I would say that..总之，我认为.....(4) In my opinion, we should...就我看来，我们应......(5) Only in this way can we...只有这样我们才能....(6) In my opinion, if it is in proper use, it may bring us..在我看来，要是运用恰当，它会带给我们....(7)  To sum up, we should deal with it effectively总之，我们要有效率地处理它。(8) Although there are many arguments against it, we must realize that the value of. depends on how it is used.尽管有很多反对的意见，但们必须意识..的价值在于我们如何使用它。(9) In a word, if everyone works together, we can make a difference to the world.总之，如果我们大家一-起努力，我们就可以对世界产生影响。 相关话题作文示例解析（一）题目根据下列内容提示，合理展开想象，写-篇不少于80词的文章。1.你的朋友生病了;2.同学和我都向他表示关心;3.你从这件事中得到的启发。 范文Last week, my friend Li Han was badly ill so he couldn't go to school. My classmates and I were very worried about him.①So, we went to visit Li Han the other day. 0 We sent Li Han our good wishes and beautiful flowers. ②Since the final exam is to come, we offered to help Li Han with his lessons after his recovery so that he wouldn't fail the final exam. Li Han was grateful for what we had done.③And what I learned from this is that the world is full of love, warmth and peace. 译文上周，我的朋友李汉病得很重，所以不能来上学。同学们和我都很担心他。所以前几天我们去看了李汉。我们给李汉带去了我们的祝福和美丽的鲜花。因为期末考试将近，所以我们决定等李汉康复之后帮他补习功课，这样他就不会在期末考试时考砸。对于我们所做的李汉很感动。我也从这件事中学到，世界是充满爱、温暖和和睦的。 满分点评本文主要按照事情发生的顺序来写，各部分衔接得很自然，环环紧扣。①用so承接上文，同时引出下文，使段落之间过渡自然。②since引导原因状语从句，so that引导目的状语从句。③本句用了what引导介词宾语从句，表示感激的内容。  （二）初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；      2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；      3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。要求：1. 80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；      2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】这是一篇提纲类0，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。【参考范文】The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.【名师点评】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I've also made some good friends.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 （三）每年的 6 月 6 日是我国的“爱眼日”，可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要，为此，学校将在英语文化节期间举行一场“爱眼日”英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。内容如下：1. 保护视力的重要性（请写 1 点）；2. 对保护视力的建议：（1）阅读时注意用眼卫生；（2）少用电子产品；（3）常看绿色植物；（4）做眼保健操；（5）多做户外运动。要求如下：1. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；3. 词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：Sight Day 爱眼日；electronic products 电子产品；eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操Dear friends,June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you!【写作思路】本文属于话题作文，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【参考范文】Dear friends,June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. As we all know, eyes are windows of the soul. Everyone understands the importance of the eyes. But now more and more students are getting near sighted. So how to protect eyes still remains a question. Here is some advice on how to protect your eyesight.You should not keep your eyes working for two long when reading, you should keep the book about a foot away from you. After reading for an hour or two, you’d better have a rest by working in the distance or looking at the green plants to make your eye relax. You ought to remember not to read in dim light or in the sun. Don’t read in a moving bus or in bed. Besides, try to use less electric products. What’s more, doing eye-protecting exercises will help you keep good eye sight. Last but not least, we can also try to do more exercise in our spare time.Only by doing these simple things can we keep good eyesight.【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关 写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。