江苏省南京市鼓楼区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

江苏省南京市鼓楼区

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年江苏省南京市鼓楼区中考一模英语试卷

七、 书面表达(满分15分)

红星中学王校长是一位英语老师, 在学校网站的英语栏目“HEAR YOUR VOICE” 发帖, 了解学生学习和学校食堂两方面的情况。假如你是学生李明, 请根据校长的帖子, 选择其中一个方面反映问题, 并提出建议。

注意：

1. 内容涵盖所有要点, 适当发挥, 全文连贯通顺。

2. 词数80左右(回帖开头和结尾不计入总词数)。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。

Dear Mr. Wang,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

2022年江苏省南京市鼓楼区中考一模英语试卷

七、书面表达（满分15 分）

76. 英语校刊TEENS 正在进行 “手机是否可以带入校园”的问卷调查。请根据下列调查表的内容做出自己的选择，并依据你的选择用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。

注意：

1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。

2. 词数80左右（已给出文章开头不计入总词数）。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Should we bring mobile phones to school?

A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年江苏省南京市鼓楼区中考一模英语试卷

九、电子邮件

76．假如你是王东，明天不能上外教老师的英语课。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邮件须包括以下要点：

注意：

1.    内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。

2.    词数 80 左右（已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数）。

3.    文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Mr. Brown,

Yours,

Wang Dong

答案：

2023年江苏省南京市鼓楼区中考一模英语试卷

76．Possible version 1:

Dear Mr. Wang,

I am Li Ming, from Grade Nine. I want to tell you something about our study.

First of all, proper exercises help us check what we have learned. Since we have seven subjects, we have to spend more than three hours finishing our homework. Would you make teachers reduce homework? Besides, most of us find lessons boring. Although exercises and exams help us understand the key points, they take up too much time. Dear headmaster, you can’t imagine how boring our school life is. I think teachers should improve their teaching methods.

I hope these problems can be dealt with soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

Possible version 2:

Dear Mr. Wang,

I am Li Ming, from Grade Nine. I want to say something about our Students’ Canteen.

First, I am unhappy with the lunch food. Sometimes it is not delicious. However, I have to eat it. More kinds of dishes should be provided. Moreover, the canteen is too small to hold so many students. Why not build a larger one? Finally, the environment at the canteen is not satisfying. The tables and chairs are sometimes dirty. I think the canteen workers should do the cleaning more carefully.

If the problems can be solved, students will have a happier time on campus.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕王校长帖子中的问题进行写作。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开门见山，交代写作目的；

第二步，阐述学生学习或学校食堂的问题并给出建议；

第三步，表达自己的期望，希望这些问题能够成功解决。

[亮点词汇]

①first of all首先

②key points重点

③take up占据

[高分句型]

①First of all, proper exercises help us check what we have learned.（what引导的宾语从句）

2022年江苏省南京市鼓楼区中考一模英语试卷

【答案】例文

Should we bring mobile phones to school?

A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. Are middle school students allowed to bring them to school?

Some students think we can bring mobile phones to school because it’s convenient for parents to contact us. When we have difficulty in study, mobile phones can be our teacher and help us with our problems.

Every coin has two sides. Some students use mobile phones in a wrong way. They spend a lot of time chatting online, as a result, they can’t focus on study. And too much time on screens does harm to our eyes. More and more students have poor eyesight.

In my opinion I agree to bring smart phones to school. Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think I won’t turn it on until class is over. Since there are lots of useful websites for English learning, I will go there to practice my English.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇议论文。根据表格介绍支持和反对人的原因和建议。客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法，并表达自己的观点。

2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时为主。分成四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍支持者的看法；第三段介绍反对者的看法；第四段介绍自己的观点。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观、注意行文的连贯性。

2021年江苏省南京市鼓楼区中考一模英语试卷

76．[例文]

Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to you about tomorrow’s class. I am sorry that I will be absent from your class tomorrow. Today on my way home after school, it rained heavily outside. Unluckily, I didn’t bring an umbrella. When I got home, I got all wet. Now I have got a fever. My parents will take me to see the doctor tomorrow so I have to ask for a leave. And I will ask my classmates to help me with the work I miss.

I hope you can approve my leave. Thank you very much.

Yours,

Wang Dong

【详解】1.题干解读：本题为电子邮件写作，要求根据题目所给要点提示写一封邮件给外教说明关于明天即将缺席英语课的事，本文为电子邮件，故应注意使用正确的电子邮件格式。

2.写作指导：写作时应用第一人称，时态应根据动作发生的时段正确使用过去时、现在时或将来时。这是一封电子邮件写作，且没有给出开头结尾，所以学生要注意使用正确的邮件开头及结尾。写作思路按照题目所给要点提示展开即可，即“为缺席明天的课向老师道歉——解释缺席课程的原因——缺课过后的课业补救措施”，写作时不要出现单词拼写及语法时态使用错误。