专题09 书面表达-2023中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（上海专用）

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2023上海中考英语逆袭冲刺 名校模拟真题特快专递第四期专题09 书面表达一、话题作文1．（2022·上海浦东新·统考一模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My choice”. (写一篇关于“我的选择”的短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格)。亲爱的同学，在你成长的过程中，会遇到各种各样的选择，选择读一本喜欢的书；选择与志趣相投的同学交朋友；选择做感兴趣的事情；选择做自己从未尝试过的事情……在选择面前，如何做到客观、理性，并且遵从自己内心的感受，这是我们应有的处事态度。请你结合自己曾经历过的一件事，谈谈你做了什么选择？为什么做了这个选择？以及这个选择带给你的思考。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文My choiceLife is full of choices. Last term, my choice was to join a great soccer team or go on my schoolwork. It’s my dream to play soccer. If I join the team, I will become a great soccer player. And I will become famous and rich. But my caring parents advised me to get an education first. In their opinion, if I join the team right now, I will never go to college. Thinking about my strengths and weaknesses, I will keep studying at school. In my free time, I will practice soccer as hard as possible.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“My choice”为题，谈谈做了什么选择？为什么做了这个选择？以及这个选择带给你的思考。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时主要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段分析两个选择的利弊；第三段介绍自己做了什么选择以及原因。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。2．（2022·上海嘉定·统考一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)实践类作业 (Project-based homework) 形式多样，可以个人完成，也可以小组合作完成；可以是写书评 (book review)、影评 (film review)；也可以是完成调查报告 (survey report) 或海报制作 (posters) 等。学校正在为“最喜欢的寒假实践类作业”征询建议。假设你是李华，请你在学校网站给张老师留言，分享你的最喜欢的寒假实践类作业，既可以是你完成过的，也可以是你新的创意，请简单描述实践过程并陈述分享理由。(注意：1.不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I think project-based homework is a helpful friend that can guide me to study efficiently. It can not only help us review what we have learned, but also give us a chance to think about the knowledge.My favorite project-based homework in winter holiday is a survey about lucky money. I interviewed my friends online about how they spent their lucky money. I found half of them used it to buy books or gave away to the poor children while some of them bought snacks or played online games. From then on, I learned to make good use of my lucky money.I love that homework because it can help us find out the problems and solutions by ourselves instead of copying or repeating something boring.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，题干要求分享最喜欢的寒假实践类作业，可以是做过的或者自己的创意，描述实践过程，并说明喜爱的理由。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，用一般过去时描述做过的实践类作业。写作时可分为三段：第一段叙述实践类作业的优点，引入主题；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的寒假实践类作业；第三段说明喜爱的理由。注意语言连贯，条理清晰，力求无语法和标点错误。 二、材料作文3．（2022·上海奉贤·统考一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “I can be better”【以“我可以更好”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】提示：校园吉尼斯纪录创造者的经历告诉我们：每个人都能够通过努力改变自己，让自己变得更好。请结合自己的具体经历谈谈你对这一观点的认识。注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：I can be betterThe “Guinness Campus” record holder’s experience tells us that everyone can change themselves and become better through hard work.At the beginning of learning English, I felt it was very difficult. I dared not speak English because my pronunciation was not standard. I also thought my classmates would laugh at me. It wasn’t until I learned about “Guinness Campus” that I realized I could work to change that. I began to get up early every day to read English. I tried my best to imitate the pronunciation by listening to English songs and watching English movies. Finally, I got an A in the final speaking test.I believe that as long as I persist, my spoken English will be better and better. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，本文要求以“我可以更好”为题写一篇记叙文。根据提示可知写作内容包括结合自己的经历和经验谈谈关于“每个人都能够通过努力改变自己，让自己变得更好”。写作要思路清晰，层次分明，逻辑清楚，语言的表达符合语法结构。2.写作指导：例文采取三段式的写作手法，时态为一般过去时，写作时以第一人称为主，第一段写根据校园吉尼斯纪录创造者的经历告诉我们：每个人都能够通过努力改变自己，让自己变得更好；第二段联系身边小事和经验来说明；第三段写个人观点和感受。4．（2022·上海·模拟预测）国家实行双减政策以来，强调“五育并举”，提倡在中小学培养德智体美劳全面发展的好少年。劳动（labor）是日常生活不可或缺的部分。今天班会课上，班级进行了题为“我爱劳动”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们组四人的分享内容，需包括以下要点。FromLucyMikeAliceYouLaborActivityclean the floortake care of pet dogdo voluntary work(请补充)Whenweekendevery daysummer vacation(请补充)Whereat homeat homecommunity(请补充)Advantagesexerciseresponsibilitylove(请补充) 写作要求：1.语言流畅，层次分明，可适当发挥。2.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；书写规范，卷面整洁。3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。We often hear the sentence “Labor is a glorious (光荣的) thing”.  At our class meeting, we shared our labor experience with our group members._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文We often hear the sentence “Labor is a glorious (光荣的) thing”. At our class meeting, we shared our labor experience with our group members. For middle school students, it’s not enough to just get good grades at school. In fact, doing some housework or other labor practice is really important for us. In Lucy’s spare time, she cleans the floors at home every weekend. Cleaning the floor is like doing exercise. She thinks it can help her build a stronger body and make her healthier. Mike likes his pet dog very much. So he is responsible for taking care of his pet dog at home. He not only feeds the dog every day but also walks it after dinner. In this way, he builds up his responsibility. In Alice’s opinion, she would like to do voluntary work during summer vacation in her community. She always helps those people in need in her neighborhood. She regards it as a good way to show love to others. As for me, I cook meals for my parents when I am free because I am interested in cooking. When my parents come home from work, they always feel tired. At this moment, it is a good time for them to enjoy a delicious meal. When I see them eating happily, I had a strong feeling of satisfaction and achievement. I learned real life skills too. In addition, I helped my parents with housework. I also have the ability to take care of them. What’s more, I will also be independent through labor practice. I can benefit a lot from it. Labor is a good way for teenagers to develop independence. During the day when parents are not around, we must take care of ourselves. Let’s take action to take part in labor.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“我爱劳动”为主题，根据表格内容，写一篇英文短文，介绍你们组四人的劳动活动。2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主。按照表格内容提示的五个方面进行写作，内容要写全，注意保证语言通顺，行文连贯；语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。5．（2022·上海普陀·校考模拟预测）科技的发展正不断地改变我们的学习方式，有人喜欢传统的教学方式(traditional learning in the classroom)，有人喜欢现代化的在线教学(modern learning on the Internet)。请将题目“I prefer ___________”。补充完整，谈谈你喜欢这种学习方式的理由。The following is for reference only. (以下表达/内容仅供参考 ）Traditional learning in a classroom:            • well planned teaching arrangement         • face-to-face communication          • colourful classroom activitiesModern learning on the Internet:       • flexible timetable       • a plan made by oneself       • rich online learning resources(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：I prefer traditional learning in a classroomWith the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. But I still prefer traditional learning in a classroom. First, there is a fixed time table. A study plan is often made by my school, so I don’t need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have face-to-face communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colourful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What’s more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others. That is why I prefer to choose the traditional way of learning in the classroom.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所示的参考信息以“I prefer ___________”为题谈谈自己更喜欢传统的教学方式还是现代化的在线教学，并给出相应的理由。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时。正文第一部分先表述自己更喜欢哪种教学方式；第二部分给出相应的理由，同时注意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展；第三部分总结全文。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。 三、电子邮件6．（2022·上海杨浦·统考三模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）假设你是李平，最近收到加拿大朋友Jack的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。I’m doing a school project about how teenagers use computers each day. For example, how much time did you spend on a computer yesterday? What kind of things did you do? What do you think are the problems of spending lots of time on computers? 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Jack,I’ve read your E-mail. Now let me tell you a little bit about how I use computers myself.     First, I spent about two hours on the computer yesterday. I mainly looked up some information on the Internet and watched some videos. And I don’t think it’s right to spend too much time online every day. Because it hurts our eyes and affects our study. So we should use computers properly.Yours,Li Ping【详解】1.题干解读：本文一篇电子邮件，根据Jack的电子邮件内容给他回复一封邮件。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，介绍昨天的事情应用一般过去时，表达自己的观点时应用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时要根据邮件中的问题来回复。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 四、看图作文7．（2022·上海嘉定·统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the pictures about “A spring outing”（根据所给图片，写一篇关于“春游”的短文，题目可以另拟，字数不少于60词，标点符号不占格。）climb a mountain               pick up paper and bottles               throw…into dustbins ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One possible version:A spring outing    Spring in March, accompanied by the comfortable weather and warm sunshine, our class had a spring outing on Saturday.We went to Renmin Park and hold some activities. All of my classmates were so excited that we looked like the birds just coming out from birdcage. We climbed a mountain and went boating. We picked up paper and bottles then threw them into dustbins. At the same time, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of spring. Some people in the park also joined us and had fun. We had a happy day and the relationship of us were getting closer.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片提示，写一篇关于“春游”的短文。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文时态是一般过去时，主要用第一人称来书写。在写作时应该注意符合题意，做到无语法和单词拼写错误，可适当补充细节使文章连贯。 五、书信作文8．（2022·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。假定你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊最近和妈妈发生了争吵，好几天不说话了。为此她非常烦恼，想让你给出出主意。请你根据下面的提示写一封建议信。1.认真思考争吵的原因；2.主动和妈妈沟通，说出自己真实的想法，并了解妈妈的真实想法；3.和妈妈一起寻找解决问题的方法。注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Dear Su Shan,    I’m sorry to hear that you have such problem. It’s common to have different opinions with our parents. First you should think about the reason why you argue with your mom. Then you should apologize to her, because we should respect the old. What’s more, you should face-to-face communicate with your mom. Tell her your feelings and ask her feelings. You can find out the key to solve this problem with your mom. I think your mom will understand you.    I think my suggestions can help you. Look forward to you reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对好朋友苏珊和妈妈的问题提出针对性的建议。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。根据提示内容，从思考争吵的原因，主动和妈妈沟通，寻找解决问题的方法等方面提出建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。9．（2022·上海宝山·统考一模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.（请根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）假设你的好朋友李华最近沉迷于电脑游戏，无心学习。他的父母和老师都非常担心，作为他的好朋友，请你给他写一封信：表达你对他的担忧，告诫他沉迷电脑游戏的危害以及摆脱目前这种状况的方法。（信件格式已给）The following is for reference only1. lose oneself in ...2. be worried about ...3. communicate with ...___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Dear Li Hua,I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to computer games. Spending too much time and energy on games is harmful to your health. I’m worried about you. If you lose yourself in games, you may become isolated from the real world and ignore the beauty and love in life.You can try other things to distract your attention. You can play basketball or take part in other sports with your friends. It can not only help you keep healthy, but also strengthen your friendship. Besides, you can communicate with your parents and friends, sharing you happiness and sorrow with them. Last but not least, you can read some interesting books to expand your knowledge in your spare time.I will be happy if you get rid of the game. Look forward to your good news.Yours,Lily【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应根据题目要求写信讲述自己对朋友的担忧，讲述玩电脑上瘾的弊端，并讲述摆脱游戏的方法。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主，讲述游戏的危害和摆脱游戏的方法及建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。 六、便条10．（2022·上海徐汇·统考二模）Compare your school with Blue Sky School and write at least 60 words to leave a comment on school life at Blue Sky School and briefly describe how your school life is different from a school day at Blue Sky School and what may probably make such differences.假如你是李华，对比一下你的学校和 Blue Sky School。请用至少 60 个词给 Blue Sky School的学生留个言，并简单描述一下你的学校生活与 Blue Sky School 的不同之处以及原因。如必须出现学校名，请用ABC School 代替。【答案】Dear Blue Sky School students,Blue Sky School is a little different from my school. Bay Gardens Resort, a hotel near Blue Sky School, runs a breakfast club at the school, where students can enjoy delicious breakfast for free. It is fantastic. But I have to eat breakfast at home before I go to school. Because my parents and teachers don’t allow us to have breakfast at school.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写一个留言条。给Blue Sky School的学生简单描述一下自己的学校生活与 Blue Sky School 的不同之处以及原因。2.写作指导：本文时态应用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。留言条格式与书信格式基本相同，首先顶格写Dear...，然后下一行开始写正文，首行缩进，最后右下角署名。写作时注意保证单词语法正确，语句通顺。