江苏省泰州兴化市2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

江苏省泰州兴化市

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年江苏省泰州兴化市中考一模英语试卷

七、书面表达。(共1题；计25分)

假如你是李华, 请仔细阅读征文要求, 并用英语写一篇短文投稿。

要求：

（1）文中必须包含所有要点, 可适当拓展。

（2）语义连贯, 书写工整。

（3）文中不得出 现真实的人名和校名。

（4）词数:100左右, 己给句子不计入词数。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing this letter to share my thoughts of doing housework.

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Yours,

Li Hua

2022年江苏省泰州兴化市中考一模英语试卷

九、书面表达。（共1题；计20分）

108. 你校English Corner将以“绿色生活，从我做起”为主题，组织全校英语征文比赛。请你以How to live a green life为题，从低碳生活、节约资源、保护环境等方面写一篇英语作文。

要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

2.写作要点齐全，并做适当发挥；

3.文章不得出现人名、校名或地名，否则不得分；

4.词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

How to live a green life

Everyone can make small changes in their lifestyle and help reduce pollution and waste. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年江苏省泰州兴化市中考一模英语试卷

八、书面表达（20 分）

成长是生命的主旋律。在你的生命中一定出现过一个对你帮助很大、影响很深的人。这个人可能是你的父母、你的老师或你的朋友……请用英语写出你和他（她）的故事以及你的感悟。题目自拟。

内容包括∶

1. Who has helped /influenced you a lot?

2. What has he /she done?

3. How have you changed?

4. . .

要求∶

1. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。

2. 语意连贯, 层次清晰, 书写规范。

3. 不少于100词。

Title: ______________________________________

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答案：

2023年江苏省泰州兴化市中考一模英语试卷

96．例文：

Dear Editor,

I’m writing this letter to share my thoughts of doing housework. I think it is really important. It helps us learn basic life skills and develop the right view of life.

I always help my parents do housework at home. Last Sunday, after breakfast, I began to help my parents wash clothes. Though washing clothes is not so difficult, it took me a long time. After that, I tried to tidy my bedroom. I first made the bed and then put away my clothes and school things. Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework with my parents, but also learn life skills. And my parents felt proud of me.

I think doing housework can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. Above all, I can develop good working habits and value the importance of working hard through my experience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为征文启事；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“征文启事”中的上周做的家务介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图，引出自己对于做家务的观点；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自身做家务经历、自己和父母的感受、做家务的必要性”几个方面重点介绍；

第三步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

develop the right view of life 培养正确生活观

put away 收拾好

value the importance of working hard 珍惜努力工作的重要性

[高分句型]

 Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied. （现在分词作状语）

 I not only share the housework with my parents, but also learn life skills. （not only...but also...句型的应用）

2022年江苏省泰州兴化市中考一模英语试卷

【答案】例文：

How to live a green life

Everyone can make small changes in their lifestyle and help reduce pollution and waste.

First, we can ride bikes or walk to school rather than going by car, as this can help reduce air pollution. Second, we should turn off the lights when going out as well as turn off the tap when we brush our teeth. Besides, we shouldn’t use plastic bags when we go shopping, because plastic is harmful to the environment. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment greener.

If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s do everything we can to live a green life and protect our planet.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以How to live a green life为题进行写作，文章开头已给出，写作时注意衔接，写作内容不仅要包含写作要点，还要做到适当发挥。

2.   写作指导：本文主要用第一人称进行写作，时态主要采用一般现在时。可分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据低碳生活、节约资源、保护环境三个写作要点，提出自己的意见，并做适当发挥；第三段提出倡议。写作时要保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

2021年江苏省泰州兴化市中考一模英语试卷

One possible version:

My English teacher

My English teacher has helped me quite a bit. Because of her, I have become more confident and improved my English a lot.

When I first entered middle school, I often felt afraid to speak English. My English teacher talked with me in person and encouraged me to be brave. She told me that no one is a perfect speaker. I understood that as long as I put in more effort, I can overcome any challenge. She gave me a lot of chances to speak in public and even helped me take part in a speaking competition! Little by little, I fell in love with English and got better grades.

I am very thankful to my English teacher. I hope that she will be happy and healthy every day. I’ll remember her forever.