高考英语开放式作文专项训练
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这是一份高考英语开放式作文专项训练,共28页。
开放性作文
1.为鼓励更多的学生参加体育运动,中学生21世纪报英语网站现面向全市中学生征集体育故事,请你完成“My Sports Story”并投稿,内容包括:
1.你喜欢的运动项目(football /basketball /swimming/ running /cycling…);
2.你是怎样开始运动和进行练习的;
3.运动带给你的益处及运动体会。
注意:
1.词数80-100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
1. When I was younger, …
2. I never thought…
3. The first time…
4. Before I knew it, ….
5. Soon I found...
My Sports Story
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2.假如你是校英文报Problem&Advice栏目的编辑, 收到一个学生的求助信, 信中他说近期网课学习效率低, 与父母关系很紧张, 请你回信给予建议, 内容包括:
1.表示理解和安慰;
2.给出建议:
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数120左右:
2.开头结尾已给, 不计入总词数。
Dear Worried Friend,
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Loving Editor
3.你校组织高一学生去新农民社区参观住宅和蔬菜种植。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,介 绍这项活动,内容包括:
1. 时间和地点;
2. 参观过程;
3. 活动意义。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Visit to a New Farmer Community
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4.假如你是高一学生李华,受邀二十一世纪英文报线上访谈,谈谈你疫情居家期间的收获。内容包括:
1.自制力;
2.薄弱学科;
3.与父母沟通。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇:self-control自制力
It is my honor to be invited to participate in the interview with 21st Century News online.
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5.假设你是学校英语俱乐部成员,该俱乐部将举办主题为“How did you spend this Spring Festival?”的交流活动,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,届时与大家分享。
内容包括:
1.你是怎样过这个春节的;
2.你的感受或收获是什么。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! I’m honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
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Thanks for listening!
6.假定你是李华,你校英文报正在举办以“My Experience of a Club Activity” 为题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1 .活动过程;
2 .你的感受。
注意:3 .写作词数应为80左右;
4 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Experience of a Club Activity
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7.为了呼吁学生崇尚科学精神,学习科学家的优秀品质,你们学校的校报“英语天地”栏目向学生征集英语征文——如果你想要当一名科学家,需要具备哪些品质?请你写一篇征文。
注意:
1. 词数80左右:
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3. 题目已给出,不计入总字数。
What qualities should a scientist have?
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8.你在某英文网站看到一个题为“Be Prepared for the Future Career”的中学生征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括你的未来职业及你如何做准备。
注意:词数100左右。
Be Prepared for the Future Career
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9.疫情期间,很多志愿者奔赴疫情防控一线,争当疫情防控先锋。假设你是深圳市一名防疫志愿者,请与大家分享你的志愿者经历和感受。
内容包括:
1.志愿者生活;
2.志愿者活动意义;
3.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。参考词汇:epidemic 流行病;传染病
My name is Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my life during these days as a volunteer in the worldwide epidemic.
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10.假定你是李华,你要参加学校英语报以“Practice makes perfect”为题开展的征文活动。内容包括:
1. 你对这句谚语的理解;
2. 你个人的实践经验;
3. 这句谚语对学习生活的指导意义。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Every proverb brings people some wisdom
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11.你校英文报开设了“经典阅读”专栏,将举办主题为“Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated”的征文活动。请根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)阅读经典的人越来越少的原因;
(2)阅读经典的好处;
(3)你的建议。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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12.Your school paper has established a new column called “Your future house”. Write a short passage of what your future house will be like to contribute to the paper. The passage should include at least 80 words.
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13.请根据以下信息,介绍一位热门人物。
姓名:莫言(管谟业)
出生日期:1955年2月17日
出 生 地:山东省高密市一个穷苦人家
兴趣爱好:自幼喜欢阅读、书法(calligraphy)
性格特征:开朗、幽默
主要成就:2011年凭借《蛙》获中国最高文学奖“茅盾文学奖”;
2012年获诺贝尔文学奖(Nobel Prize in Literature)。
评价:第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家,被誉为是对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之一。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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14.假定你是李华,上周五你校邀请一位心理学家为全校师生做了关于“如何与他人和谐相处”的讲座。请你就本次活动给校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动时间和地点;
2.讲座的内容;
3.活动反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:心理学家 psychologist
A Lecture On Getting On Well With Others
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15.你校英语报举办以“A Dish for My Family”为题的短文竞赛。请你写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.做菜的原因:
2.菜品介绍。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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16.“青春有几年,疫情占三年”,三年疫情你有怎样的思考与理解?请结合亲身事例,写一篇80词左右的文章。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
As the word goes, “Youth has a few years, and the epidemic accounts for three years”.
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17.Follow the pattern of the film review above and write yours. Words should be at least 80.
The content should include:
1. Your general view of the movie;
2. Your summary of the story;
3.Your detailed analysis of the movie;
4. Your reflection on social problems.
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18.Read and make another conversation with at least ten lines about money.
Hello! I’m George from Hawaii.
And I’m Crystal from America.
And today’s question is do you worry about money? So, Crystal? Do you worry about money?
No, I do not worry about money.
What? Why? How is that possible?
Well, I have a good job at the moment, they pay me well. And I have a lot of working hours.
Oh, make sense. I work like a dog but I get paid well.
So, these days I don’t really thought about money these days. How about you?
Lucky. I have nightmares about money, you know. I have horrible hours these days, you know.
I get less and less hours of work and ... everything is so expensive.
But then well, what they said the more money you have the less happiness you feel.
Was that by puff daddy? No...let’s start it over.
Your conversation:
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19.假定你是某英文新闻报记者李华。最近,一位母亲领着一位6岁男童进入女厕所,并联合自己丈夫辱骂指出问题的女大学生。关于“妈妈能不能带男孩子进女厕所”引发社会广泛讨论和关注,请你写一篇英文新闻报道,内容包括:
1.事件描述;
2.提出解决措施。(不少于3条)
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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20.据报道,北极冰川消融速度加快,全球变暖的趋势日益明显,请你以“What Can We Do to Reduce Global Warming?”为题为班级英语角写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.现状描述;
2.我们能为地球“降温”做什么。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:北极the North Pole;冰川glacier
What Can We Do to Reduce Global Warming?
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参考答案:
1. My Sports Story
When I was younger, I never thought I would meet a drowning child needing my help. But I can’t swim at that time. I was very nervous and managed to draw him out of river with a long stick. I thought if I had had the ability to swim, I could have helped him more easily and quickly. So, from then on, I have paid special attention to games, especially swimming. Every afternoon, I go swimming in our small river. And I always ask my PE teacher to instruct me to practice in a right way.
Now, besides swimming, I like football, basketball, running, cycling and so on. Sports help me keep healthy, happy, and energetic.
【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生写自己的运动故事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心:nervous→worried
成功做某事:manage→do sth. successfully
能力:ability→capability
关注:pay attention to→fix attention on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:And I always ask my PE teacher to instruct me to practice in a right way.
拓展句:And I always go to my PE teacher who can instruct me to practice in a right way.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I was younger, I never thought I would meet a drowning child needing my help.(由When引导的时间状语从句和省略连词that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I thought if I had had the ability to swim, I could have helped him more easily and quickly.(由省略连词that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
2.Dear Worried Friend,
I’m sorry to know that you have some problems taking online lessons these days. I understand quite well that you feel terrible in terms of your relationship with your parents. So I’m here to offer some help.
To improve your online learning efficiency, engaging yourself in class actively can help a lot. Why? Because answering teachers’ questions and thinking positively leave little room for you to be absent-minded. When it comes to how to strengthen the relationship with your parents, it is advisable for you to be open with them. Promise to them that you will be responsible for your schoolwork, so they don’t need to worry too much. When you feel down, listening to your favorite music or playing sports can make you relaxed. Talking to friends online is also a good idea.
Hopefully, these suggestions will be of some help to you. Take good care of yourself and I am sure you will have a pleasant online learning experience.
Loving Editor
【导语】这是一封建议信,要求考生以校英文报编辑的身份给一个向你求助的学生回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
回答:answering → responding to
涉及:when it comes to→offer to
明智的:advisable→ sensible
感到难过:feel down→ don’t feel yourself
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I understand quite well that you feel terrible in terms of your relationship with your parents. So I’m here to offer some help.
拓展句:Understanding quite well that you feel terrible in terms of your relationship with your parents, I’m here to offer some help.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To improve your online learning efficiency, engaging yourself in class actively can help a lot.(动词不定式做目的状语和动名词作主语)
【高分句型2】When it comes to how to strengthen the relationship with your parents, it is advisable for you to be open with them.(使用了时间状语从句和不定式作主语)
3.One possible version:
A Visit to a New Farmer Community
This afternoon, our school arranged for Senior One students to visit a new farmer community.
We were warmly welcomed by the villagers when we arrived. They showed us around their homes, which are newly-built modern buildings equipped with furniture and electrical equipment, and the living environment there is very comfortable. Then we visited the vegetable farm, where the farmers were growing various green vegetables.
The activity has left a deep impression on us and deepened our understanding of our country.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“高一学生去新农民社区参观住宅和蔬菜种植”这一活动为校英文报写一篇报道;内容包括时间和地点、 参观过程、以及活动意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参观: visit→ pay a visit to
舒适的:comfortable→ cosy/pleasing
多种多样的:various→ a variety of
理解:understanding→ appreciation
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:The activity has left a deep impression on us and deepened our understanding of our country.
拓展句:Not only has the activity left a deep impression on us but also deepened our understanding of our country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】They showed us around their homes, which are newly-built modern buildings equipped with furniture and electrical equipment, and the living environment there is very comfortable. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Then we visited the vegetable farm, where the farmers were growing various green vegetables.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
4.It is my honor to be invited to participate in the interview with 21st Century News online. I’d like to share with you what I got when I stayed at home during the epidemic.
First of all, I have formed the ability of self-control. I tried my best to manage my time wisely, spending most of my time studying. To keep healthy, I spared some time to do some exercise every day. Besides, I have improved my poor English. I made full use of a lot of time to memorize the vocabulary and practiced the spoken English. What’s more, I have learned how to communicate with my parents. In my spare time, I talked a lot with my parents about everything, which made the relationship between us closer than befor.
That's all I got during the stay at home. Thanks.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在受邀二十一世纪英文报线上访谈时,谈谈疫情居家期间的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尽力:try one’s best →spare no effort
抽出:spare →set aside
此外:besides →what’s more →in addition
充分利用:make full use of →make the most of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To keep healthy, I spared some time to do some exercise every day.
拓展句:I spared some time to do some exercise every day in order that I can keep healthy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I tried my best to manage my time wisely, spending most of my time studying.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】In my spare time, I talked a lot with my parents about everything, which made the relationship between us closer than before.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
5. Hello, everyone! I’m honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
On New Year’s Eve, my family gathered together and had a reunion dinner while watching the Spring Festival Gala. When the clock struck 12, my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns, put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily. Additionally, I played sports and games with my friends besides learning.
I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, and meanwhile I learned lots of life skills. After all, the Spring Festival is important because it’s a new beginning which brings hope to us and it’s also a time to show our gratitude and take our responsibility.
Thanks for listening!
【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生以“How did you spend this Spring Festival?”为主题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
敲击:struck→hit
燃放:set off→let off
翻修:decorated→renovate
张贴:put up→post
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, and meanwhile I learned lots of life skills.
拓展句:I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, during which I learned lots of life skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When the clock struck 12, my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.(由When引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns, put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily.(由What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
6. My Experience of a Club Activity
I still remember my first experience as an English host in the New Year's Eve party.
My partner and I arrived at the lecture hall an hour early. As she helped me with my makeup, I felt incredibly excited and nervous. Afterwards, I practiced my lines several times on the stage to have a better performance. When the party eventually began, I walked onto the stage with a trembling heart. Looking at the audience, I presented the opening remarks as confidently as I could. With the applause of the audience, I was encouraged and had a confident smile on my face.
This experience has made me a more confident person and I have a firm belief that opportunities only come to those who are prepared.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My Experience of a Club Activity”为题,写一篇记叙文,描述活动过程以及这次经历带来的的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
难以置信地:incredibly → unbelievably
紧张的:nervous → anxious
坚信:have a firm belief → strongly believe
机会:opportunities→ chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Afterwards, I practiced my lines several times on the stage to have a better performance.
拓展句:Afterwards, I practiced my lines several times on the stage so that I could have a better performance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Looking at the audience, I presented the opening remarks as confidently as I could. (运用了非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】This experience has made me a more confident person and I have a firm belief that opportunities only come to those who are prepared.(运用了that引导同位语从句以和who引导的定语从句)
7.What qualities should a scientist have?
As far as I am concerned, a scientist is supposed to have some scientific qualities as follows:
Firstly, scientists should be interested in, and curious about certain things. They pay attention to various aspects of the research problem and keep exploring. In addition, scientists need to be imaginative and willing to experiment bravely with new ideas and methods. As we all know, scientists are often intelligent and able to form independent opinions and methods. Caution and persistence are also necessary for scientists to succeed.
Becoming a scientist is not easy. Stick to the dream and it will become a reality sooner or later.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇征文,介绍一下想成为一名科学家需要具备的品质。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢:be interested in →be crazy about →be fond of
此外:in addition →besides →what’s more
各种各样的:various →a variety of →all kinds of
观点:opinion →view
2.句式拓展
定于从句变主语从句
原句:As we all know, scientists are often intelligent and able to form independent opinions and methods.
拓展句:It is known to us all that scientists are often intelligent and able to form independent opinions and methods.
【点睛】[高分句型1]As we all know, scientists are often intelligent and able to form independent opinions and methods.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Stick to the dream and it will become a reality sooner or later.(运用了“祈使句+ and +陈述句”结构)
8. Be Prepared for the Future Career
To make full preparations for the future career, we first need to know what we want to be and figure out the ways to achieve it.
As for me, I want to be a teacher when I grow up. First of all, if I want to be a good teacher, I need to get ready for my lessons before class and always listen carefully in class so that I can get into a key university. What’s more, I am supposed to have adequate teaching experience which can not only help me to sharpen my teaching skills but can help me to better understand my students. Last but not least, a teacher’s personality plays an important part in being a good teacher. Therefore, I should be always patient and willing to help my students.
I think all above is helpful to me to be prepared for the future career.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生给某英文网站看到一个题为“Be Prepared for the Future Career”的中学生征文活动投稿,内容包括你的未来职业及你如何做准备。
【详解】1.词汇积累
理解:comprehend →understand
此外:besides → what’s more
应该:should →be supposed to
因此:hence→ therefore
2.句式拓展
陈述句变强调句
原句:Last but not least, a teacher’s personality plays an important part in being a good teacher.
拓展句:Last but not least, it is a teacher’s personality that plays an important part in being a good teacher.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, I am supposed to have adequate teaching experience which can not only help me to sharpen my teaching skills but can help me to better understand my students.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I think all above is helpful to me to be prepared for the future career.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
9.My name is Li Hua. I used to be a volunteer in the worldwide epidemic. Let me tell you something about the life during these days as a volunteer in the worldwide epidemic. First, I gave out facial masks to those in need in many communities. Then I went to the supermarket to remind people to keep a social distance between each other. In my school, I also made a speech about how to fight against the epidemic.
It is meaningful for me to take part in the voluntary work. To begin with, it helps raise the citizens’awareness of protecting themselves. In addition, it gives me a chance to make more friends and improve my social skills. Most importantly, people’s spirits have been inspired so that we can get through this hard time positively.
The experience as a volunteer made me feel tired but proud of myself. I believe that only when we work together can we build up a world full of harmony and beauty.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇文章来分享自己在疫情期间当志愿者的经历和感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:first→first of all
在困境中:in need→in trouble
提高:raise→promote
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The experience as a volunteer made me feel tired but proud of myself.
拓展句:Though the experience as a volunteer made me feel tired, yet I’m proud of myself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Most importantly, people’s spirits have been inspired so that we can get through this hard time positively.(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe that only when we work together can we build up a world full of harmony and beauty.(运用了部分倒装)
10.Every proverb brings people some wisdom
The famous saying “Practice makes perfect” is widely accepted today. In my opinion, it means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again, we’ll be able to perform it perfectly.
The practice of learning English is a good example. As for me, I started to practice English when I was very little. Nowadays, not only am I able to communicate with foreign friends easily but I can read English novels, newspapers and magazines. The proverb has helped me a lot in my English learning process.
So if you plan to study something new, just try your best to practice. It’s of great benefit to your learning life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就自身实践经验谈谈对“Practice makes perfect”的理解,同时说明这句谚语对于学习生活的指导意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
接受、认可:accept→recognize
能够:be able to→be capable of
帮助:help→assist
计划做某事:plan to do sth.→intend to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:So if you plan to study something new, just try your best to practice. It’s of great benefit to your learning life.
拓展句:So if you plan to study something new, just try your best to practice, which is of great benefit to your learning life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In my opinion, it means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again, we’ll be able to perform it perfectly.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句,从句中含有if引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】Nowadays, not only am I able to communicate with foreign friends easily but I can read English novels, newspapers and magazines.(运用了not…only, but…(also)句型和部分倒装句型)
11.Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated
Nowadays, many people, especially the young, are unwilling to spend time reading classics. Some reasons account for this phenomenon. For one thing, people tend to do fragmented reading, which brings them fast information without deep thinking. For another, some people feel it no use reading classics, since they are outdated and disconnected with their current life.
There is no denying that we can benefit a great deal from reading classics. To start with, it is significant for readers to learn about society by reading great works about history and culture, thus enriching our knowledge in many aspects. Additionally, classics provide a chance for us to enhance our aesthetic taste with their beautiful and unique language styles.
From my perspective, classics are a precious spiritual treasure of all human beings, which we should value and inherit. Therefore, I advocate all of us reading classics and absorbing the essence of great literature.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生参加校英文报举办的主题为“Reading Classics Will Never Be Outdated”的征文活动,写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:to start with→to begin with
此外: additionally→besides
提供:provide→offer
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To start with, it is significant for readers to learn about society by reading great works about history and culture, thus enriching our knowledge in many aspects.
拓展句:To start with, it is significant for readers to learn about society by reading great works about history and culture, which can enrich our knowledge in many aspects.
【点睛】【高分句型1】For one thing, people tend to do fragmented reading, which brings them fast information without deep thinking.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】For another, some people feel it no use reading classics, since they are outdated and disconnected with their current life.(运用了since引导的原因状语从句)
12. The house of the future will be filled with technology and it will make my life convenient and comfortable. My house will know not just whether someone is home but who someone is. Home-security cameras can identify family members upon arrival, and let me know through my smartphone when an unfamiliar face is detected. Already, certain washing machines can assess the size of each load and how dirty the clothes are to determine how much water to use. An “intelligent oven” will use sensors and cameras to figure out what kind of food I am preparing, and then adjust the temperature and cooking method accordingly. In a word, my future house is amazing.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求你针对未来房子的设想写一篇文章投稿给校报。
【详解】1.词汇积累
充满:be filled with→be full of
评估:assess → evaluate
决定:determine→decide
聪明的:intelligent→smart
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The house of the future will be filled with technology and it will make my life convenient and comfortable.
拓展句:The house of the future will be filled with technology, which will make my life convenient and comfortable.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My house will know not just whether someone is home but who someone is.(运用了whether和who引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】An “intelligent oven” will use sensors and cameras to figure out what kind of food I am preparing, and then adjust the temperature and cooking method accordingly.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
13.范文
Born into a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955, Mo Yan, whose original name is Guan Moye, showed great interest in reading and calligraphy in his early years. What’s more, he is not only outgoing but he also has a strong sense of humor. Mo Yan has a talent for literature and he won China’s highest literature prize, Mao Dun Literature Prize by his book Frog in 2011. To all Chinese’s excitement, a year later he became the first Chinese writer to be awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature, which will certainly make great contributions to the development of Chinese literature.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇人物介绍,要求考生根据所给的信息对热门人物莫言进行介绍。
【详解】1.词汇积累
原名:original name→ former name
更重要的是:What’s more→More importantly
天分:talent → gift
贫穷的:poor→ needy
2.句式拓展
简单句变倒装句
原句:What’s more, he is not only outgoing but he also has a strong sense of humor.
拓展句:What’s more, not only is he outgoing but he also has a strong sense of humor.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Born into a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955, Mo Yan, whose original name is Guan Moye, showed great interest in reading and calligraphy in his early years.(使用过去分词短语作状语以及whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】To all Chinese’s excitement, a year later he became the first Chinese writer to be awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature, which will certainly make great contributions to the development of Chinese literature.(使用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
14.
A Lecture On Getting On Well With Others
Last Friday witnessed a wonderful lecture at our school lecture hall delivered by a psychologist who specializes in interpersonal communication.
He explained the relevant information about how we should get along well with others in detail.
All the teachers and students learned a lot from the lecture, making them have a new perspective of getting on well with others. At the end of his lecture, we showed our respect for him with applause. The lecture was also warmly received outside our school especially students’ parents.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道,要求考生报道上周五你校邀请一位心理学家为全校师生做了关于“如何与他人和谐相处”的讲座一事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
相关的:relevant→related
鼓掌:applause→claps
专长于:specialize in→be expert in
尊敬:show respect for→be respectful for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All the teachers and students learned a lot from the lecture, making them have a new perspective of getting on well with others.
拓展句:All the teachers and students learned a lot from the lecture, which made them have a new perspective of getting on well with others.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last Friday witnessed a wonderful lecture at our school lecture hall delivered by a psychologist who specializes in interpersonal communication. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] He explained the relevant information about how we should get along well with others in detail. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
15.A Dish for My Family
Every time I taste the dishes made by my mother, I’m always overwhelmed by the love in them. I think I should do something for my family as well.
This Saturday, I will make carrot and fish soup for my mother and father. Their screen time has led to blurred vision and eye strain. Carrots are said to be an excellent source of vitamin, which is good for eyes. Fish is a healthy food, rich in essential nutrients like protein.
I can’t imagine how happy my mother and father will be when the dish is served.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“A Dish for My Family”为题,写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
导致:lead to→result in
极好的:excellent→fantastic
极其重要的:essential→very important
对……有好处:be good for→be beneficial to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Fish is a healthy food, rich in essential nutrients like protein.
拓展句:Fish is a healthy food, which is rich in essential nutrients like protein.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Carrots are said to be an excellent source of vitamin, which is good for eyes. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Every time I taste the dishes made by my mother, I’m always overwhelmed by the love in them. (运用了Every time引导的时间状语从句)
16. As the word goes, “Youth has a few years, and the epidemic accounts for three years”. Three-year epidemic ended, but many moving stories around us are still fresh in my mind. Faced with the epidemic, everyone did their best. Our teachers who were quarantined away from home taught lessons during the day, and helped us with our homework after school, giving us support and making us positive. With their help, we could study in peace.
The epidemic is over. Although it has brought sorrow to us, it seems that everyone values life more. As students, we treasure the opportunity to learn.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文,要求考生结合亲身事例来谈谈你对三年疫情有怎样的思考与理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
结束:end→come to an end
令人感动的:moving→touching
珍惜:treasure→cherish
机会:opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Three-year epidemic ended, but many moving stories around us are still fresh in my mind.
拓展句:Although the three-year epidemic ended, many moving stories around us are still fresh in my mind.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Our teachers who were quarantined away from home taught lessons during the day, and helped us with our homework after school, giving us support and making us positive. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Although it has brought sorrow to us, it seems that everyone values life more. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
17.Forrest Gump, directed by Robert Zemeckis and starring Tom Hanks, is one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me.
It depicts several decades in the life of Forrest Gump who is unfortunately born with a lower IQ than ordinary people, but an open-minded person with strong determination. He witnesses and unwittingly influences several defining historical events in the 20th-century United States. He achieves great success at last. Not only is he a football star, but he is also a war hero and later a millionaire.
The film is filled with tender feelings and kindness. Furthermore, it conveys a message that we should take a positive attitude towards life. No matter what difficulties we meet in life, we should not give up. All things considered, this is a real masterpiece.
【导语】本篇书面表达是影评。要求考生写一篇影评,内容包括对电影的总体看法、电影主要内容、对电影的详细分析和对社会问题的思考。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
不幸地:unfortunately→unluckily
无意中:unwittingly→unknowingly
最后:at last→finally
充满:be filled with→be full of
困难:difficulty→hardship
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All things considered, this is a real masterpiece.
拓展句:As all things are considered, this is a real masterpiece.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Forrest Gump, directed by Robert Zemeckis and starring Tom Hanks, is one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】No matter what difficulties we meet in life, we should not give up.(运用了no matter what引导的让步状语从句)
18.Hello! I’m Robert from China.
Hi, I’m Alice from India.
And Alice, my question today is whether money is the most important thing in our life. So, what do you think?
Yes, it is. Without money, we wouldn’t be able to live a good life. It is money that buys us clothes, food, house and everything we need.
Sure, I agree with you to some degree. But I think there is something more important than money.
What’s that?
Families and love. Money can buy material things, but it is love that makes us really happy.
I understand. Will you tell me more about it?
I have two kids and I always buy things for them. But do you know what brings me real happiness?
Not the things you buy?
No, it is the smile on their faces that brightens my day and the love for them that makes me happy.
Emm…maybe you are right.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于普通对话。要求考生写一段与钱有关的对话。
【详解】1.词汇积累
是否:whether → if
重要的:important → significant
过上好的生活:live a good life → lead a good life
快乐的,高兴的:happy→ pleased
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Without money, we wouldn’t be able to live a good life.
拓展句:If we didn’t have money, we wouldn’t be able to live a good life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] And Alice, my question today is whether money is the most important thing in our life.(运用了whether引导表语从句)
[高分句型2] But do you know what brings me real happiness? (运用了what引导宾语从句)
19.
Recently, a mother led a six-year-old boy into a women’s toilet and insulted a female college student who pointed out the problem with her husband. Whether a mother can bring a boy into a women’s toilet has aroused wide public discussion.
However, this problem can be solved. First of all, more family toilets should be built in public places. Second, people should be more tolerant and understanding. Third, when women use women’s toilets, they should protect their privacy so that even if a boy enters, it will not cause any problems.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道,要求考生写一篇新闻报道,报道最近一位母亲领着一位6岁男童进入女厕所,并联合自己丈夫辱骂指出问题的女大学生一事,并提出解决措施。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:recently→lately
引起:arouse→cause
然而:however→nevertheless
首先:first of all→first and foremost
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Second, people should be more tolerant and understanding.
拓展句:Second, it is suggested that people should be more tolerant and understanding.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, a mother led a six-year-old boy into a women’s toilet and insulted a female college student who pointed out the problem with her husband. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Whether a mother can bring a boy into a women’s toilet has aroused wide public discussion. (运用了whether引导的主语从句)
20.参考范文:
What Can We Do to Reduce Global Warming?
It is reported that the glacier at the North Pole is melting faster than ever. There is no doubt that the earth is getting warmer and warmer. It’s time for us to take action to reduce the amount of green gases.
To begin with, we can turn off the electrical appliances when they’re not being used. In addition, it’s necessary to use things made from recycled materials rather than raw ones. Furthermore, more trees should be planted, which can absorb carbon dioxide amazingly.
In a nutshell, I do believe our joint efforts do count and will definitely be paid off.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于英语短文。据报道,北极冰川消融速度加快,全球变暖的趋势日益明显,请考生以“What Can We Do to Reduce Global Warming?”为题为班级英语角写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
减少:reduce→ cut down
首先:to begin with→ first of all
此外:in addition→ what’s more
简言之:in a nutshell→ in a word
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, it’s necessary to use things made from recycled materials rather than raw ones.
拓展句:In addition, it’s necessary to use things that are made from recycled materials rather than raw ones.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, we can turn off the electrical appliances when they’re not being used.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Furthermore, more trees should be planted, which can absorb carbon dioxide amazingly.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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