专题13书面表达-2023年中考英语考试研究（无锡专用）

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专题13 书面表达-2023年中考英语考试研究（无锡专用）

无锡市中考英语历年（2019-2022）真题展示
【2019无锡中考】
八、书面表达 (本大题共 15 分)
假设你叫李文，是无锡阳光中学(Wuxi Sunshine Middle School)的一名学生。今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，此次会议的主题是A Green World。你草拟了发言流程图，请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。

注意事项：
1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.流程图中包括部分非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在 90 个左右，发言稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总数。
4.发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
4. 发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】
Good morning, everyone!
It's my great honour to give a speech. Let me introduce myself to you first.
My name is Li Wen. I'm from Wuxi, China. I study in Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. I am 14 years old. We all hope we will have a green world. So as for our China, We have done something to make the world. For example, We took some actions for some factories. We have closed some factories which do great harm to our environment. Besides, We are also studying new energy. including cars with new energy. We hope we can do more for the beautiful world.
As a student, We also can do a lot of things. We can turn off lights once we leave the room. And we should save the water especially when we take a shower. What's more. We can use bags made of cloth in the supermarket. Hope we have a green world in the near future. Thank you!

【2020无锡中考】
八、书面表达
63.今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求介绍你所读过的一本书。你草拟了写作流程图，请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
Choose a book
"Alice in Wonderland"
"Gulliver's Travels"
...
↓
Describe the book
Who is it about?
What happened?
What kind of book?
↓
Tell the reason
Why do I like it?
...
注意事项：
1.短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.提供的书名非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3.词数在90个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】
The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the shark and the sea.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book. Man is not made for defeat.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求根据草拟的写作流程图，介绍你所读过的一本书，用英语写一篇短文参加活动。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：share with，tell about，fight against，on the way back，give up。
句型：This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea. 这本书讲述了一位渔夫的故事，他幸运地在海上捕到了一条大鱼。who在句中引导定语从句，修饰前面的a fisherman。

【2021无锡中考】
九、书面表达（本大题共 15分）
今年以来，数位中科院院士相继离世，在社会各界纷纷表达惋惜之余，"谁是真正的偶像"的话题被再度热议。为此，Teens 英文报特辟了主题为"Who You Admire Most"的专栏，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容，仅供参考。
Actors/Singers/...
Scientists/Doctors/...
Jackie Chan （Chinese kung fu superstar）
Date of  birth ：Apr.7.1954 （Hong Kong）
Achievements：act in nearly 100 films；many awards；many years  of charity work；help people in over 30 countries.
Yuan  Longping （Father of Hybrid Rice）
Date of  birth ：Sept.7.1930 （Beijing）
Achievement：develop a new type of hybrid rice （1970s：20% more per  unit）；the World Food Prize （2004）；save  millions of lives.
注意事项：
（1）短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数在90个左右，短文标题已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】
After learning the English text books of Junior Three，I'm lucky to get to know many famous people indifferent fields. Among whom Jackie Chan has impressed me most.
He is a Chinese kung fu star. （成龙基本信息）He was born in Hong Kong on Apr.7，1954.（生日） He is such a well﹣known actor and director that many people like him. He has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. His movies are very exciting. In order to make the movies real and excellent，he plays the roles of the movies carefully.【高分句型一】
So I admire him very much. Sometimes，he can hurt himself. He does many years of charity work.He helps people in over 30 countries. I should learn strong spirits from him.【高分句型二】（成就）
【解析】
【高分句型一】
In order to make the movies real and excellent，he plays the roles of the movies carefully.为了使电影真实而精彩，他精心地扮演电影中的角色。In order to为了...
【高分句型二】
I should learn strong spirits from him.我应该向他学习坚强的精神。learn from向...学习

【2022无锡中考】
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。

注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】
The Person I Want to Thank
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。

无锡市历年考情解读
考察题型
具体的考察情况
演讲稿、发言稿
根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。
Teens 英文报特辟了主题为"Who You Admire Most"的专栏，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作流程图
根据草拟的写作流程图，介绍你所读过的一本书，用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，此次会议的主题是A Green World。你草拟了发言流程图，请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。

考点分析
欣赏以下的句子：
1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world. 
在这个迅速发展的世界里，对每个人来说，学好英语是非常重要的。 
同样句型包括：It is important/（necessary, difficult, possible。。。）for sb. to do sth. 

2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make. 你工作越努力，你取得的进步就越大。 
(1)The+比较级..., the+比较级... 
(2)比较级+and+比较级（The world is getting smaller and smaller.） 
If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.  如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献，世界会变得更加美好。 
类似的句型还有：If necessary…, they can… 

3.The best way to remember new words is to practice them everyday. 
记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。 

4. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful. 
人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。 

5. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.  随着现代科技的迅速发展，互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。 
  
巧用短语搭配：
不得不做某事：have no choice but to do sth./ have nothing to do but do sth.
有/无必要做某事：There is no need (for sb.) to do sth./ It is necessary (for sb.)to do …
最好做某事：You’d better do sth. / It’s better to do sth.
做某事没困难：have no difficulty in doing sth. / have no trouble in doing sth.
感谢某人：thank sb. / be thankful to sb./ express one’s thanks to sb.
求助某人：turn to sb. for help / ask sb. for help / with the help of / with one’s help
惊奇：to one’s surprise/ only +不定式（表意外结果）
表达观点：in my opinion / I think / I believe
原因如下（很多）：the reasons are as follows. /here are many reasons for it.
浪费金钱（时间）：it’s a waste of money / time …

掌握常用句型： 
1.in  order  to   
为了实现他的梦想，他学习非常努力。   
He worked very hard in order to realize his dream.     

2.so…that   
他们太累了，除了伸懒腰什么都做不了。
They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.     

3.would  rather…than   
他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。
He would rather listen to others than talk himself.    

4.not only…but also 

5.find it adj  to do…   
我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记。 
I find it necessary to take down notes while listening.

模拟预测（2022年无锡市一模二模）
【无锡江阴市2022年中考英语二模试卷】
九、书面表达 (本大题共 20 分)
65. 为弘扬“奉献、友爱、互助、进步”的志愿服务精神，你校英文俱乐部正在举行“Volunteering Around Us”的征文评选活动，请根据下列图表提示，写一篇英文短文介绍你所在的社区志愿者活动项目“Sunshine For All”以及你做志愿者的经历，以供参评。
注意事项：
1. 短文须根据图表自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 图表中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在 100 个左右，短文的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

Sunshine For All is a project started by a group of kind people in my neighbourhood.
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【答案】
Sunshine For All is a project started by a group of kind people in my neighbourhood. Its aim is to help those neighbours in need. Volunteers often meet at the community center and share their different skills. They help people with all kinds of problems, like shopping for old people and fixing broken computers.
Once, I volunteered to look after Mrs Zhang, an old woman living alone. I helped her clean her flat and look after her pet dog. After a day’s hard work, I felt tired but I was very happy.
I think it is meaningful to be a volunteer. If everyone tries his best to help others, our world will become a better place. （100 words）
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据图表提示信息，写一篇英文短文介绍你所在的社区志愿者活动项目“Sunshine For All”以及志愿者的经历。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。可采用三段式写作，第一段介绍这个项目的目的，地点和服务内容；第二段介绍你做志愿者的经历和你的感受；第三段表达你对这个志愿者活动项目的看法。

【无锡市滨湖区2022年中考英语一模试题】
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 阳光中学为培养学生个性，拓展学生技能，开展了选修课。假如你是阳光中学九年级学生李华，请你用英文向七年级新生写一篇推荐信，推荐一门你最喜欢的选修课。以下信息为非限定性内容，仅供参考。

DIY Course
Travelling Course
…
Things to do
·traditional Chinese arts:
paper-cutting, clay figurine(泥塑)…
·birthday presents…
·share DIY stories
·watch videos to enjoy natural beauty, such as…
·share travelling experiences
…
Reasons to recommend
·What do you think of it?
·What can you learn from it? (at least 2 points)
注意事项：
1.推荐信须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意：
2.词数在100个左右，推荐信开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数：
3.推荐信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息：
4.推荐信内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear schoolmates,
I’m glad to hear that our school will offer you some optional courses._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
I’m glad to hear that our school will offer you some optional courses. I want to recommend the DIY Course to you.
You can make traditional Chinese arts in DIY courses, such as paper-cutting and clay figurine. You can not only experience the process of creation, but also learn about our colorful Chinese culture. You can also make unique birthday presents for your family members and friends by yourselves. They will be surprised and keep the presents forever. You can share your DIY stories with others. It is a good topic.
I like DIY Course very much and I recommend it to all of you. I learn about strong practical ability and creation ability during the courses. I learn how to cooperate with others, too. I hope you will have a good time in DIY Course.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求向七年级新生推荐一门你最喜欢的选修课。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍可以在喜欢的选修课上做什么；第三段介绍自己对选修课的看法以及自己学到了什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

【无锡市华庄中学2022年中考英语二模试卷】
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 由贾玲导演及主演的电影《你好，李焕英》是一部充满温情的电影，激发了观影者对身边人感情的共鸣。你观影之后感触颇多，发现许多感恩的人和事，要就此写一份日志。
感恩父母
悉心照顾、不辞辛劳……
感恩老师
耐心教导、善于激励……
感恩同学
合作分享、互相帮助、共同进步
感想和打算
我很幸运……（请结合自身实际，但不得提及自己的姓名相关信息）
要求：
1.上面的提示供参考，可适当发挥，要使语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚；
2.段落开头已给出，不计入总词数；要求写100个词左右。
Today I watched a film called Hi, Mom. It tells a story of Jia and her mother showing her longing and regret at failing to see her mother before she died. I was touched by its raw emotion.
I have become a 15-year-old middle school student. During the past few years, I have gained a lot and I don’t want to be a person full of regret like Jia in the film.
So first, I should say thanks to my dear parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Today I watched a film called Hi, Mom. It tells a story of Jia and her mother showing her longing and regret at failing to see her mother before she died. I was touched by its raw emotion.
I have become a 15-year-old middle school student. During the past few years, I have gained a lot and I don’t want to be a person full of regret like Jia in the film.
So first, I should say thanks to my dear parents. They take care of me without any complaint. They work hard to support the whole family. They are always trying their best to make me live a better life.
Second, I’m thankful to all my teachers for their great help and support. They are patient enough to spend lots of time explaining problems to me. Besides, they always encourage me when I am in trouble. It’s selfless of them to devote their time to education.
Finally, I also feel very grateful to my classmates. We work together and share things with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. As a result, we have made great progress.
I think I am lucky to have so much love and care. I will never forget these happy days together. I am going to do well in the future so that they can be proud of me.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇日志，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，首先表达要感谢父母，接着按照要点阐述父母如何照顾和关爱我们；其次表达感谢师长，结合具体事例阐述老师们的耐心教导和鼓励；接着再表达对同学的感谢，可结合具体事例阐述同学间的互帮互助、共同成长；
第三步，抒发自己的感情及打算并书写结语。
[高分句型]
①Besides, they always encourage me when I am in trouble.（when引导时间状语从句）
②It’s selfless of them to devote their time to education.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
③I am going to do well in the future so that they can be proud of me.（so that引导目的状语从句）

【无锡市惠山区八校2022年中考英语一模试题】
九、书面表达 （本大题共20分）
85. 假设你是李华，你所在的阳光小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。

注意事项：1. 内容必须包含图表中所提供的要点，并作适当发挥；
2. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯，符合情境；
3. 词数在100个左右，首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Charles
【答案】
Dear sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year.
There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. We are hard-working and glad to take on new challenges. We care for and respect each other. In my neighborhood, we get along well with our neighbors. When some neighbors have problems, we are always ready to help them. We always live a green life to protect the environment. We never throw litter everywhere. We have a balanced diet to keep healthy. We often take an active part in volunteer activities to help people in need.
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Charles
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文。要求我们根据所给图表内容写一封英语推荐信，推荐自己的家庭参加“模范家庭”的评选。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；第一段紧接开头，从家庭成员、邻里关系、绿色生活和慈善活动等方面详细说明了参加评选的理由；第二段表达殷切的希望。检查时注意是否遗漏要点，语言表达是否符英文习惯。

【无锡市蠡园中学2022年中考英语二模试卷】
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 为了迎接端午节的到来，你所在的社区将举办一天的庆祝活动。为保证活动顺利开展，现社区将招募活动志愿者。假如你是李明，阳光中学初三学生，想要成为一名志愿者。请根据志愿者招募要求、根据所提供的流程图、并结合自身情况，写一封申请信。
Volunteers wanted!
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming and our community will hold some activities on that day to celebrate it. Some volunteers are needed. Can you tell us something about yourself? Why you want to be a volunteer for the activity? And most importantly, what can you do for those different people in our community?
If you want to join us, please let us know.
We are looking forward to hearing from you soon!
The Sunshine Community


注意事项：
1. 必须包括所有的提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合语境，省略号处补充完整；
2. 词数在100个左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear sir/madam,
I would like to be a volunteer for the activity to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival in our community.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear sir/madam,
I would like to be a volunteer for the activity to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival in our community.
I am Li Ming, a grade 9 student from Sunshine Middle School. I am friendly and willing to chat with others. It’s meaningful to be a volunteer for the activity because I can introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to others and help them know more about the story of Qu Yuan.
Besides, I can help different people in need. For example, I can help children do some DIY job like making 5-colord rings. What’s more, I can make some rice dumplings for the elderly and help them clean their houses.
I hope I can become a volunteer for this community activity!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据招募要求和流程图写一封申请信；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时；采用第一人称口吻；可采用4段落格式，第一段：开门见山，说明写信的目的；第二段：自我介绍和做志愿者的目的；第三段：阐述自己能做些什么；第四段：再次表明自己的愿望。

【无锡市梁溪区2022年中考英语二模试卷】
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 随着科技的发展和疫情的影响，网络学习备受青睐。假如你是李华，受邀为全校同学作以“To be a smart online learner”为主题的演讲。请你结合自身的经历，用英文写一份演讲稿，对网络学习的利或弊发表观点并提出相关建议。以下信息为非限定内容，仅供参考。
My experience
In early April, I had online classes. …
My opinion
Its advantages
Its disadvantages
provide different kinds of resources
offer us a great chance to …
influence our attention
do harm to …
My advice
develop good learning habits, …
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear students,
I’m glad to stand here to give you a speech on how to be a smart online learner.
In early April, I had online classes. I searched for something useful on the Internet. And I handed in my homework to the teachers online every day. It was really a special experience for me.
There’s no doubt that online learning has its advantages. For example, it can provide us with different kinds of resources, which are of help to us. Besides, it will offer us a great chance to manage our time by ourselves.
In order to be a smart online learner, we should develop good learning habits, make a study plan and make full use of the resources.
That’s all. Thanks for listening! (100 words)

Possible version two:
Dear students,
I’m glad to stand here to give you a speech on how to be a smart online learner.
In early April, I had online classes. I wanted to chat with my friends online at first. But soon I couldn’t catch what the teacher said. So, I paid more attention to the classes. As a result, I have made great progress in my studies.
However, online learning has its disadvantages. For example, it’s much easier to influence our attention. What’s more, too much screen time can do harm to our eyes.
In order to be a smart online learner, we should develop good learning habits, take notes to go over what we have learned and be strict with ourselves.
That’s all. Thanks for listening! (100 words)
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给材料内容，以“To be a smart online learner”为主题，写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。根据提示材料，从在线学习的优势和劣势着手进行描述，写作时要注意保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

【无锡市天一实验学校2022年中考英语二模试卷】
八、书面表达 （本大题共20分）
65. 碳排放（carbon emissions）过量导致全球自然灾害频发，污染严重，危害人体健康。无锡政府积极探索，采取植树造林、节能减排等方法，助力无锡领跑零碳发展新赛道。你校为此开辟了“Working toward a brighter future”专栏，请你根据流程图英文写一篇文章投稿。

Possible ways to reduce carbon emissions:

参考词汇： 回收利用 recycle 再使用 reuse 塑料 plastic 灾害 disaster 能源 energy
注意事项：
1. 短文需根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 提供减碳手段图标信息和参考词汇非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 短文必须写在答题卡的指定位置上，不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Working toward a brighter future
We need to reduce carbon emissions because pollution has become one of the most serious problems in the world today. It leads to many natural disasters. Also, it’s harmful to humans’ health.
Luckily, our local government has taken action. People are asked to separate waste into different groups. People are encouraged to walk or ride instead of driving cars. Moreover, we have planted many trees.
In fact, we can do more for a brighter future. For example, it’s wise to use new types of energy. These new types of energy cost very little and will never run out. Last but not the least, they produce little pollution.
【解析】
1.题干解读：题目要求围绕“Working toward a brighter future”这一主题介绍减少碳排放的必要性、我们为此做了什么及还应该做些什么。要参考已给出流程图，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称为主，结合具体语境来选择合适的时态。文章可分为三段式：第一段写减碳的原因；第二段写政府采取了哪些行动；第三段给出更多可行建议。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。


【无锡市外国语学校2022年中考英语二模试卷】
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
70. 假设你是无锡市第五中学的张颖，你的英国笔友珍妮想了解中国学生课外阅读的情况。请根据下图提示，给她回一封电子邮件。

注意事项：
1. 回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
2. 所给斜体字提示为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 回复的邮件中不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Jenny
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Ying
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about the extra-curricular reading in our school. In fact, most students in our school haven’t realized the importance of extra-curricular reading. Therefore, the time devoted to reading is limited. Some students prefer comic books to classic reading materials. Here are the reasons. Some students haven’t formed a good habit of reading. Others have so little interest in reading that they would rather spend time on videos or computer games. Some people have no time or interest. Reading is good for both our life and study, which can open up a new world to us. So it is necessary for students to take up reading. Since last year, I have read many world classics, such as a Dream of Red Mansions. I have learned a lot about Chinese history.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Ying
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和现在完成时”；
③提示：注意回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
第一步：表明写作意图。根据所给内容要点，给英国笔友珍妮回一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国学生课外阅读的情况。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先点明主题；其次介绍中国学生课外阅读的现状；接着介绍学生不喜欢阅读的原因；接下来介绍阅读的好处；最后介绍我的阅读经历。
第三步：书写结语。表示祝福。
[高分句型]
①Others have so little interest in reading that they would rather spend time on videos or computer games.（so…that…引导结果状语从句，表示“如此……以至于……”）
②Reading is good for both our life and study, which can open up a new world to us.（which引导的定语从句） 
③So it is necessary for students to take up reading.（It is+形容词+for sb.+to do sth.”意为“对某人来说做某事怎么样”）

【无锡市锡山高级中学实验学校2022年中考英语一模试题】
九、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 本届冬奥会是科技的盛会，各种高科技频繁亮相，无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机，让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假设你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。
请你根据以下思维导图用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。

注意事项：1.短文须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.省略号部分必须用适当信息补充完整；
3.词数在100个左右，短文开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4.短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phone brings both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through it. As for the robot, it can help us with housework, help our children with their homework and so on. It saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed train has greatly improved our travel speed. It travels at high speed. It’s very fast and comfortable. The electric car has also changed our life. It can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent. It is convenient and green.
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【解析】
1.题干解读：审题可知，这是一篇演讲稿写作；要求根据所给的思维导图介绍身边的科技，谈谈其对生活的影响及其优点，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文应以第三人称、一般现在时为主来描述。短文的开头可结尾已给出，写作时注意承接上文，写作中内容要包含题目所给的提示内容，并在此基础上选用合适的连词，短语和句型来进行串联和拓展；注意做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。

【无锡市锡山区锡北片2022年中考英语一模试题】
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 正在筹备中的2022年北京冬奥会再次让体育运动成为人们关注的社会热点话题之一。学校也提倡同学们积极参加体育运动。请你写一篇发言稿在学校大会上号召同学们参加到体育运动中来！你草拟了发言流程图，请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。

注意事项：
1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在90个左右，发言稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m very glad to have a chance to make a speech here
Sports can bring us many advantages. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m very glad to have a chance to make a speech here.
Sports can bring us many advantages. First, sports can make us fit and strong. Second, when we’re sad, taking part in sports can help us forget about our sadness. Finally, sports can teach us some lessons about life.
But sometimes sports can bring us some trouble, especially when we cannot plan our activities properly. Too much exercise may make us hurt.
I like doing sports because I gain a well balanced life through sports. I can also get more chances to make more friends and get closer to nature. Sports add happiness to my everyday life.
That’s all. Thank you.
【解析】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据思维导图中的内容，写一篇发言稿，号召同学们参加到体育运动中来。要包含图片中所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称和第一人称为主，使用一般现在时来写作，演讲稿的格式题干中已给出，只需写正文信息，分段讲做运动的好处、注意事项及自己的经历和感受。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

【无锡市锡山区锡东片2022年中考英语一模试题】
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 青少年在成长过程中常遇到各种问题。假如你是李平，你的外国好友Erick写信询问你在平时的生活和学习中遇到问题是如何处理的。请你根据以下流程图用英语写一封回信分享你的经历。

注意事项：
1. 英文信须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 英文信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 信件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Erick,
Thank you for writing to me. It’s a great pleasure to share my experiences. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about your problem? How did you deal with it? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Ping
【答案】
Dear Erick,
Thank you for writing to me. It’s a great pleasure to share my experiences.
I thought I had a lot of homework. I was worried about my studies. After talking with the teacher, I started to plan my time wisely. If I made full use of my time, I could improve my working efficiency. I used to have a lot of hobbies, but I had so little spare time that I seldom played with my friends. I also felt stressed. I asked my friends for help. They advised me to keep a balance between my study and my hobbies. Don’t give up my hobbies, but choose a hobby. I sometimes quarreled with my friends because of some small things that made me unhappy. My mother advised me to think more about the happy days with my friends. I have learnt to be tolerant.
What about your problem? How did you deal with it? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Ping
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应承接短文开头，然后介绍自己的问题和感受，最后介绍如何处理问题和结果，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；介绍在平时的生活和学习中遇到问题是如何处理的时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。

【无锡市新吴区2022年中考英语二模试卷】
八、书面表达（本大题共 20 分）
65. 为增强安全意识，学校英语俱乐部将开展“How to protect ourselves”的讨论，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容，仅供参考。
How to protect ourselves

At school
get along with our classmates;…
In public
never run after each other;…
On the Internet
protect our personal information;…
…
…
注意事项：
1. 短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右，短文标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
How to protect ourselves
There is lots of possible danger around us It’s important for us to learn how to protect ourselves. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!
【答案】
How to protect ourselves
There is lots of possible danger around us. It’s important for us to learn how to protect ourselves.
First of all, it’s necessary for us to get along well with our classmates. Never forget your teachers. Ask them for help while meeting any danger at school. Second, not doing something dangerous in public is also important. Remember not to run after or crowd with each other, especially not push past others. Third, be careful to make friends online. Don’t give any personal information to others. Never meet e-friends alone. Let your parents go with you if you have to. Last but not least, we must follow the traffic rules outside and don’t carry too much money with us.
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇提纲类作文，以“How to protect ourselves”为题参照表格中要点信息进行分析。写作时需包括表格中所有要点，并适当拓展。
2.写作指导：本文以第一、二人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍如何从三个方面保护自己，可以多采用祈使句句式；第三段原文已给出；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。

【无锡市新吴区2022年中考英语一模试题】
八、书面表达 （本大题共20分）
65. 2022年立春，北京冬奥会如约而至。在这个世界共襄的冰雪盛会，有人成功了也有人失败了。胜败乃兵家常事，体育竞技场亦是如此。那么，对于你来说，成长过程中是成功更能鼓舞士气还是失败更能激励斗志？请你选择一方面，写一篇发言稿，陈述你的观点并给出你的理由。以下信息为非限定性内容，仅供参考。

注意事项：
1. 发言稿须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右，发言稿的首尾已在答卷纸上给出，不计入总词数；
3. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4. 发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Everyone wonders what’s best for us teenagers, but no one knows what that is. It might be succeeding, but it might be failing.
I think failure teaches more. First of all, failure makes people patient. It took Yuan Longping and his team nearly ten years to develop a new type of hybrid rice. Secondly, we’ll become modest to others because of seeing ourselves clearly. J.K. Rowling is such an example. Spud Webb’s story also shows we can do almost anything if we never give up working harder. Finally, failure gives us a deep view of things. Though failing to win the third gold, Yuzuru Hanyu proved that one of the great challenges in life is well being ourselves rather than comparing with others.
Actually, both success and failure are only two leaves of the tree. The process is more important than the result. Just remember what it is that we have loved about the thing in the first place.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文主要是讨论成长过程中是成功更能鼓舞士气还是失败更能激励斗志，要表达自己的观点，可根据题干中的提示进行写作，也可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段表明自己的观点；第二段描述理由和举例说明；最后一段进行总结。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

【无锡宜兴市2022年中考英语二模试卷】
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假如你是李华，最近，你看到TEENS上正在开展以“Colourful school activities”为主题的征文活动。请结合图片提示，介绍学校开展的活动，并陈述你参加此活动的理由或收获。
1. 征文稿要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 思维导图非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数 100个左右，征文稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 征文稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
My school life is colourful, especially the school activities. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I like my school. Colourful school activities always make me happy.
【答案】
Colourful school activities
My school life is colourful, especially the school activities. In the past three years, I have taken part in all kinds of school activities. I like singing and I’m a member of the Music Club. We get together to practise singing twice a week. Singing can also cheer me up when I am in a bad mood. I sometimes go to the Drawing Club. Everything is quiet and peaceful while drawing. I hope to be a world-known artist.
Besides, our school held the sports meeting last week. I ran the third but I felt satisfied. I’m looking forward to the Reading Week. We can share thoughts with each other. At the same time, I also participated in the Hope Project and the Arbor Day activity as a volunteer. Helping others and the environment makes me feel fulfilled.
I like my school. Colourful school activities always make me happy.
【解析】
1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文，以“Colourful school activities”为主题根据内容提示介绍学校开展的活动，并讲述自参加活动的理由和收获。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时。正文可分为两个部分：第一部分介绍自己平时会参加的社团活动；第二部分介绍自己参加的某些学校组织的活动。写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示进行描述，同时注意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展；文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。