中考英语一轮复习【讲通练透】考点46 书面表达之咨询建议类

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中考英语总复习方法指导
中考英语考点一遍过为了帮助考生更好的冲刺中考英语，从命题趋势、易错警示、方法技巧、跟踪训练、真题再现等几个方面帮孩子更准、更快、更有效的复习。
中考总复习一般分为三轮：
1、第一轮复习为基础知识的单元、章节复习。
通过第一轮的复习，使学生系统掌握基础知识、基本技能和方法，形成明晰的知识网络和稳定的知识框架。我们从双基入手，紧扣中考知识点来组织单元过关。
2、第二轮复习打破章节界限实行大单元、小综合、专题式复习。
第二轮复习绝不是第一轮复习的压缩文档，而是一个知识点综合、巩固、完善、提高的过程。复习的主要任务及目标是：完成各部分知识的条 理，归纳，糅合，使各部分知识成为一个有机的整体，力求实现基础知识重点化，重点知识网络化，网络知识题型化，题型设计生活化。
3、第三轮复习是知识、能力深化巩固的阶段。
复习资料的组织以中考题及模拟题为主，回扣教材，查缺补漏，进行强化训练。同时，要教给学生一些必备的应试技巧和方法，使学生有足够的自信从容地面对中考。


【讲通练透】考点46 书面表达之咨询建议类
四步法写建议类书面表达
1. 首先要知道给出建议的格式：常用书信格式；
2. 然后写出提建议的原因；
3. 最后根据具体的情况给出明确的建议；
4. 写出希望。


英语中咨询建议类作文通常以书信的形式呈现，英语书信类作文的常用表达：
开头部分： 
How nice to hear from you again. 
Let me tell you something about the activity. 
I’m glad to have received your letter. 
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. 
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 
结尾部分： 
With best wishes. 
I’m looking forward to your reply. 
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier. 
We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world.   
We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.   
The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse.   
Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.   
Why not.../Why don’t you...
You can have a try.../Try to do...
Don’t be afraid of...
I believe you can do it. Good luck.
In one/a word/Generally speaking
 
解决方法类作文模板
In recent days, we have to face the problem____________A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ____________（说明A的现状）. Second,  ____________（举例进一步说明现状）. 
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ____________（解决方法一）. For another ____________（解决方法二）. Finally, ____________（解决方法三）. 
Personally, I believe that____________（我的解决方法）. 
Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is waiting us because ____________（带来的好处）.



A
假设你是校广播站李华，你校刚刚主持了“我最爱的校园广播节目”投票，选出了两个最受欢迎的英语广播节目，写一份英文广播稿宣布结果。
名称：Health Station
主持：李云老师
节目内容：根据学生来信，提供关于学习、健康饮食的建议
受欢迎的原因：建议对学生有帮助
名称：Amazing moments
主持：黄海
节目内容：分享世界不同习俗和文化；……（补充一点）
受欢迎原因：……（至少补充两个理由）
Hello, everyone.I am Li Hua.It is my pleasure to announce our top two best-loved programs._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua. It is my pleasure to announce our top two best-loved programs. The first program is Health Station which is hosted by Li Yun. It provides the students with some advice on study and healthy diets according to the letters from them. The reason why the students love the program is that the advice is helpful to them. Besides, Amazing moments hosted by Huang Hai is also popular among our students. It shares different customs and culture all around the world. Students can learn a lot from it. And the host is very humorous, which makes students relaxed and joyful while listening.
Congratulations to the hosts of these programs! Thank you for listening and enjoy your break.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于广播稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍最受欢迎的广播节目的名称、主持人、具体内容及受欢迎的原因。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，讲述最受欢迎的两个广播节目的具体内容，以及它们受欢迎的原因，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
B
深圳市南山区的大南山近期发生了火灾，你们学校的校刊想就此事件写一篇报道。请你帮校刊写这篇报道，介绍该事件的情况，并就中学生们需如何应对自然灾害提出建议。
要点∶
1.事件发生的时间和地点∶2021年1月21日，南山区；
2.事件发生的起因∶因长时间没有下雨，干燥的天气引发了山林火灾；
3.事件发生的经过∶19辆消防车，10支救援队伍，赶赴现场扑灭大火，没有人员伤亡；
4.在日常生活中，如果我们碰到自然灾害，如山火、台风、地震，需要怎么应对（给出至少两点建议）。
要求∶
1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3.80词以上，短文的标题已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇∶救援队伍 rescuing teamn.南山区 Nanshan Districtn.
Forest Fire in Shenzhen
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Forest Fire in Shenzhen
On January 21,2021, a fire occurred in Nanshan District. The study found that the dry weather caused a forest fire because there was no rain for a long time. Nineteen fire engines and 10 rescuing teams rushed to the scene to put out the fire, with no casualties.
If there is a fire, what should you do? When a fire happens, you should call 119 for help first. Second, it’s important to turn off the gas and lights. Third, be careful of the smoke. Cover your face with wet cloth. Last, you mustn’t run into the room. Please get away from the building quickly.
Follow the advice you can protect yourself in a fire.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇火灾报道。按照所给中文提示，介绍深圳市南山区的大南山近期发生了火灾的情况，并就中学生们需如何应对自然灾害提出建议。写作要点必须包括：事件发生的时间和地点；事件发生的起因；事件发生的经过；以及在日常生活中，如果我们碰到自然灾害，如山火、台风、地震，需要怎么应对，至少给出两条建议。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时表述该火灾的基本情况；以一般现在时表述我们碰到自然灾害，如山火、台风、地震时，需要怎么应对，至少给出两条建议；人称代词主要采用第一人称和第三人称进行写作，要确保要点齐全，句子通顺。
C
2021学年第一学期就要结束了，你们的英语校报正在征集主题为“变化！”的稿件。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，描述本学期你的作息时间、作业情况、课内外活动的变化及感受或建议，并向校报投稿。

注意：
1. 词数：不少于80词（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Changes in our Lives
Our lives have changed a lot both at school and at home since September, 2021.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Changes in our Lives
Our lives have changed a lot both at school and at home since September, 2021. This is due to the “double reduction” policy. We used to do our homework till midnight and had no time for our hobbies. At the same time, we always attended many training courses at weekends. So we felt very tired all the time.
However, with the support of the “double reduction” policy, though we go home late, we have more interesting activities we like, like playing football and other ball games, learning playing the piano and violin, handwriting, drawing and so on. We feel very excited when we join in these activities. Moreover, we can have more time to communicate with our parents because we have little homework after school. And we can get on well with our teachers and classmates.
I believe we can study happily and have fun at school because of the “double reduction” policy.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文属于材料类书面表达，根据内容提示和题目要求写一篇短文，描述自己本学期的变化以及感受，承接短文开头补充剩余内容即可。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称；时态上以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。可以采用三段式结构。第一段引出话题及“双减”政策落实前的生活；第二段写“双减”政策落实后，你的变化；第三段写你对这些变化的感受。结构上，注意段与段之间的衔接，保证文章的逻辑性。
D
随着“双减”政策的推进，学校体育运动越来越受到大家的重视。学校英语专栏就“怎样更好的开展学校体育运动？”展开讨论。假如你是李华，请你写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。
要点提示：1. 学校开展体育运动的现状如何？
2. 你认为学校应该如何更好的开展体育运动？（建议至少2个）
写作要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
How do we develop school sports better?
With the promotion of the policy of “Double Reduction”, school sports have been paid more and more attention. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How do we develop school sports better?
With the promotion of the policy of “Double Reduction”, school sports have been paid more and more attention. There are many sport clubs in many schools, such as swimming club, football club and so on. Students can learn some skills and form good exercise habits.
In my opinion, developing school sports is very important. As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. First, the school can add more two P. E. classes every week. Second, the school can set up more sport clubs. Last but not least, the school can hold some competitions to see who is the best in sports.
I think such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。就“怎样更好的开展学校体育运动”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段介绍学校开展体育运动的现状；第二段就学校应该如何更好的开展体育运动提出建议；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
E
科技月就要来了，学校举办英语手抄报比赛。假如你是李华，你对中国的航空航天事业很感兴趣，准备参加比赛活动。英国交换生 Tom 对中国航空航天也感兴趣，请你指导他出一份手抄报，告诉他什么时候完成，建议他都设计一些什么，以及为什么要这样设计。
提示词语:：history, astronaut, pictures, pound
提示问题：
● When will you hand in the poster?
● What will you advise him to design? And why?
Dear Tom,
I am glad to know you are interested in Space and want to make a poster about it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If you need more help, please call me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I am glad to know you are interested in China Space Program and want to make a poster about it. We will hand in the poster before next Friday. I have made a lot of posters about China Space Program. I am happy to share my advice with you. First, you’d better write something about the history of China Space Program. Also you can introduce some famous astronauts. It will help other foreign friends learn more about them. Second, it is a good way to put some pictures about space stations and some famous astronauts. It will attract others’ attentions. By designing the poster, you will feel proud of our great China and you will learn more about China Space Program.
If you need more help, please call me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这篇作文提供的写作背景是你以李华的身份和交换生Tom参加一个英语手抄报比赛，内容是关于中国的航空航天事业。题目要求你指导Tom做一份手抄报，文章中应告诉他手抄报需要什么时候完成、在手抄报上设计什么内容以及为什么这样设计。题目中给出了一些提示词和问题，学生们可以在写作时参考使用。
2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时为主进行叙述。从题干中我们可以得知，文章中应主要包括两个内容：手抄报完成的时间、手抄报的主要内容以及这样设计的原因。写作时应将这两个内容都包括在内，不要遗漏。可根据表达需要进行适当拓展。应注意英语句式结构的特点和表达习惯，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句的使用，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文意的衔接，使文章表达流畅，意思连贯。
F
随着手机功能日益增多，越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动。假定你是某校学生，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，向某英文报投稿。谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。
表现
沉迷于手机娱乐活动（聊天、看电影等），与朋友和家人的交流减少……
危害
对健康不利；影响学习……
你的建议
……

参考词汇：be addicted to沉迷于
注意：
（1）内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右。
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【答案】例文
Today, many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. They are addicted to their mobile phones. They always spend too much time chatting or watching movies on their mobile phones. They have less time to communicate with their friends and family members. They often feel anxious without mobile phones.
Depending on mobile phones too much is a kind of illness. It’s bad for your health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and gets in the way of study.
Phones can help us communicate more easily and know more about what’s happening around the world. If we can use them at proper time and in proper situations, they can help us have a better and happier life.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求针对沉迷手机这一问题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍沉迷手机的表现；第二段介绍沉迷手机的危害；第三段给出自己的建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
G
最近，你美国的笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件，提出你的一些建议。
建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，诚实守信……
要求：
1.80词左右， 开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. I’m glad to help you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. I’m glad to help you.
It’s not necessary for you to worry about them because they are too common in our daily life. I’d like to give you some advice.
First, you should be brave enough to express your ideas. Try to talk with your parents, your teachers or your classmates. You should share your sadness and happiness with them. Maybe they will help you solve your problems. Second, you are supposed to respect your classmates in order to get on well with them. Don’t forget to help them when when they are in trouble. Third, being friendly and helpful is also very important. Try to be kind to the people around you. Help them as often as possible.
Last but not least, you have to be honest to your classmates so that you will have more friends.
I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，你美国的笔友Tony写信向你寻求帮助，他在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，你给他提一些好的建议，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充。
2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态。人称用第二人称，在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等，注意写作时紧扣主题，要点齐全，结构严谨，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。
H
8．假如你是Millie的朋友, 请你根据表格中的信息给她一些学习生活等方面的建议。
Problem
Advice
英语弱
大声朗读；通过读音背单词;；
经常复习所学内容；参加英语俱乐部选拔。
同学嘲笑情绪低落
不要关注嘲笑你的人；
多用……颜色，因为……
自己发挥一点。

注意：
1.词数：100左右；
2.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear Millie, Thank you for telling me about your problems.
You said you are poor at English. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you think my advice is valuable.
Best wishes,
Lucy
【答案】例文：
Dear Millie,
Thank you for telling me about your problems.
You said you are poor at English. You should read aloud and recite words by pronunciation to improve your ability. You should also review what you have learned often. You can join the English club.
Don’t focus on those who laugh at you. You can use blue more because it represents positive. You should also take part in more competitions to improve your self-confidence.
I hope you think my advice is valuable.
Best wishes,
Lucy
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求针对英语学习给出建议，并针对同学嘲笑情绪低落给出自己的建议。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主，针对英语弱和同学嘲笑情绪低落的问题给出建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

A
（2021·湖南中考真题）
勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德。为了弘扬这种传统美德，杜绝浪费，学校开展以“勤俭节约从我做起”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英文演讲稿参赛。
要点：
(1)生活中常见的浪费现象；（至少3条）
(2)你的建议：（至少3条）
(3)发出号召。
参考词汇：thrift n.节约； virtue n.美德； waste n. & v.浪费； save v.节省； tap n.水龙头
要求：
(1)短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today I’d like to talk about thrift_____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today I’d like to talk about thrift. Thrift is one of the traditional virtues in China. However, there exists much waste in our daily life. For example, some people keep the taps on after cleaning hands. Some people often forget to turn off the lights before leaving the rooms. And many of us throw away lots of food and other things.
I think we should develop a habit of saving things around us. Firstly, remember to turn off the taps and lights in time. Second, we should spend less money on things that we don’t need. Lastly, don’t order more food and clear our plates.
All such small things can help us become a person with good virtues. Let’s fight against waste from now on.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，在写作时要按演讲稿格式来写。在写作时根据汉语提示的内容，列举生活中常见的浪费现象，并提出自己的建议，发出号召。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时；在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯，要有号召力。
B
（2021·湖北中考真题）
在初中三年学习中, 我们做过许多学科作业。请你以“I like / dislike _______ exercises” 为题, 根据所给的内容要点和写作要求, 用英语写一篇短文。
1. 内容要点：
(1)what kind of. . . (like / dislike)
(2)be good / bad for. . .
(3)advice. . .
2. 写作要求：
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
(2)短文应包含以上三个内容要点。
(3)词数80词左右。
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【答案】
I Like English Exercises
In the past few years, we have finished many kinds of English exercises. I like them a lot, especially listening exercises. They are good for developing my listening skills and speaking skills. On the one hand, I can improve pronunciation. On the other hand, I can get more knowledge of the foreign culture.
I think our English teacher should design exercises that are more suitable for us such as speaking and reading exercises. She / He should give us fewer copying exercises.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我喜欢英语练习”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。主要围绕喜欢哪种类型的练习，对自己带来的好处以及自己的建议这几个方面着手写作，要做到无语法和标点错误。
C
（2021·辽宁中考真题）
作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容提示，简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面，并针对此种情况给出合理的建议。
提示：
1、表现：担心考试；考前很难入睡；考试时发挥失常……
2、建议：请从考前学习准备、作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出至少四条缓解考试压力的具体建议。
要求：
1、观点鲜明，结构合理，内容连贯，要用到所有提示内容，并适当发挥；
2、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3、词数：80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
How to Deal with the Exam Stress
We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How to Deal with the Exam Stress
We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us are so worried about exams that it’s hard to fall asleep before them. When we pay much attention to the exam, the test results won’t be good. Parents and teachers will blame them, they will also lose confidence. If we have proper stress, we can work harder, but if we have too much pressure, it may have a bad effect on our study. We should learn to release pressure.
First of all, we should review carefully and make full preparation before the exam. Second, we shouldn’t stay up late to review for the exam. Third, after reviewing for a period of time, we should also relax ourselves appropriately. In addition, if we do well in the exam, we will give ourselves appropriate rewards.
So I hope everyone can deal with the exam stress properly and get good grades.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出考试压力的表现，提出自己的建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，多用情态动词should提出建议，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
D
（2021·辽宁中考真题）
美好生活，健康同行。如何丰富校园生活，促进同学们的身心健康？目前，你校英语网站“VOICE OF TEENS”正在征集同学们的建议。请你结合自己的经历和感受，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享你的建议。
要求：(1)中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
(3)词数80词左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Health is the base of everything. Then how can we keep healthy? The following tips may help you to reach this.
First, eat healthily and regularly. Eating healthily means having a balanced diet, which includes meat, fish, chicken, duck, vegetables and fruit. You should have various kinds of food rather than focus on some particular one. Eating regularly means you should eat on fixed time and miss none of the meals. Second, exercise every day. Exercise can help grow strong and keep illness away. Third, have enough sleep. One may easily get sick without enough sleep.
Following these tips, you will surely be in good health.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍如何保持健康的建议。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第二、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍保持健康的建议：健康饮食、每天锻炼、有足够的睡眠；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
E
（2021·四川中考真题）
近年来，越来越多的人在超市、影院、餐馆等地方消费时，经常使用手机扫码支付。移动支付（mobile payment）深受人们喜爱。假如你是李华，学校即将开展以“Mobile Payment Changes Our Life”为题的征文活动，请根据下列表格中的提示，介绍一下移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。

移动支付
日益流行；改变生活
扫码支付；方便快捷
（举至少1个生活实例）
消费观念
理智消费；购前三思
学会节约；按需购买
要求：
1.语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2.短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；
3.词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：扫码scan QR codes支付 pay三思 think twice理智 wisely
▲
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people.____________________________________________
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【答案】
Mobile Payment Changes Our Life
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people. It is becoming more and more popular in China. It has made people’s daily life very convenient. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes. By mobile payment, we can pay easily and quickly wherever we go. We can have dinner in a restaurant and pay by scanning QR codes with our smart phones. In a cinema, we can buy our tickets in the same way. Mobile payment is changing our life.
However, we should spend money wisely. First of all, think twice about what we want to buy. Next, learn to save, buy what we can afford. Last but not the least, spend on what we really need, don’t buy everything we want.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“移动支付改变我们的生活”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要用一般现在时。分为两段式：第一段介绍有关移动支付的情况，并举例说明这种支付方式的方便快捷；第二段呼吁人们要理性消费。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
F
（2021·四川中考真题）
你校English Corner将以“绿色生活，从我做起”为主题，组织全校英语征文比赛。请你以Going Green Starts with Small Things为题，用英语写一篇征文参赛。
内容包括：
内容要点
具体做法
理由
绿色出行
步行或骑自行车上学
……
厉行节约
节约用电（或水、食物等）
其他方式
……
提出倡议
……

注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：电electricity
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference to reduce pollution and waste.________
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【答案】
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference to reduce pollution and waste.
First, you’d better ride a bike or walk to school, because it’s a green way which doesn’t pollute the air. Second, saving electricity, water and food is necessary. You should turn off the light when going out. Turning off the tap when you brush your teeth can save a lot of water. What’s more, don’t use plastic bags when you go shopping, plastic is harmful to the environment. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful.
How important it is for us to protect the environment! If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better. Let’s do it together from now on.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“绿色生活，从我做起”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段从绿色出行，厉行节约，美化环境等方面提出自己的建议；最后一段提出倡议。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
G
（2021·广西贺州市·中考真题）
近年来、环境恶化导致的问题日益凸显。假如你是某中学学生会主席李华，请你以学生会的名义向同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，为保护环境尽一份力。
提示：
（一）措施
1.节约水电；
2.少用塑料袋，不乱扔垃圾；
3.绿色出行，如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等；
（二）提出希望
要求：1.文章必须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路；适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear friends,
The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, we should do something to protect the environment.
First, it’s very important to save water and energy in our daily life. Don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room. Second, we are supposed to reuse the plastic bags when shopping. What’s more, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. Third, we’d better walk, ride a bike or take the bus when we go out. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful.
How important it is for us to protect the environment! If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s do it together from now on.
the Students’ Union
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“保护环境”写一篇作文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段提出保护环境的建议和措施；最后一段表达希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
H
（2021·广西中考真题）
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jenny因视力减退感到不安，向你倾诉。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封电子邮件给她，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法，并提出建议。
要点提示：
1. 近视原因：阅读坏习惯、使用手机时间过长、……
2. 提出建议：户外活动、做眼保健操、……
3. ……
要求：
1. 文中必须包括以上内容，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息；
3. 词数不少于80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：eyesight视力 mobile phone手机
Dear Jenny,
I’m sorry to know that your eyesight is getting weaker. ____________________________________________
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
I’m sorry to know that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phones or computers for a long time. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. In addition, I never read in the sun or in bed. It’s bad for my eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
【详解】
1.  题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，写出自己认为造成近视的原因以及提出的建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

A
（2022·上海嘉定·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
实践类作业 (Project-based homework) 形式多样，可以个人完成，也可以小组合作完成；可以是写书评 (book review)、影评 (film review)；也可以是完成调查报告 (survey report) 或海报制作 (posters) 等。学校正在为“最喜欢的寒假实践类作业”征询建议。假设你是李华，请你在学校网站给张老师留言，分享你的最喜欢的寒假实践类作业，既可以是你完成过的，也可以是你新的创意，请简单描述实践过程并陈述分享理由。
(注意：1.不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】例文
I think project-based homework is a helpful friend that can guide me to study efficiently. It can not only help us review what we have learned, but also give us a chance to think about the knowledge.
My favorite project-based homework in winter holiday is a survey about lucky money. I interviewed my friends online about how they spent their lucky money. I found half of them used it to buy books or gave away to the poor children while some of them bought snacks or played online games. From then on, I learned to make good use of my lucky money.
I love that homework because it can help us find out the problems and solutions by ourselves instead of copying or repeating something boring.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，题干要求分享最喜欢的寒假实践类作业，可以是做过的或者自己的创意，描述实践过程，并说明喜爱的理由。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，用一般过去时描述做过的实践类作业。写作时可分为三段：第一段叙述实践类作业的优点，引入主题；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的寒假实践类作业；第三段说明喜爱的理由。注意语言连贯，条理清晰，力求无语法和标点错误。
B
（2021·广东白云·二模）最近，广州一直致力于创建全国文明城市(civilized city)。每一位广州市民都为此做出努力和贡献，请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇文章，向某英文报刊投稿，谈谈中学生该如何为创文贡献自己的一份力量。
内容要点：
1. 做文明有礼的中学生；
2. 做好环境保洁，不乱扔垃圾；
3. 遵守交通规则；
4. 积极参加义务工作；
5. 你的建议（1-2 点）
注意：
1. 短文应包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 词数80左右；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Recently, Guangzhou is trying to build itself into one of the national civilized cities. Everyone is trying to make a contribution to it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Recently, Guangzhou is trying to build itself into one of the national civilized cities. Everyone is trying to make a contribution to it. As students, we should also do something to help. Here are some suggestions.
First of all, we should be polite and civilized students. We need to be friendly to people around us. Besides, it’s important to keep the environment clean. Stop throwing rubbish everywhere. What’s more, we should obey the traffic rules. Don’t cross the road until the traffic light turns green. We can also try to help people in need by doing some voluntary work in our spare time. Last but not least, remember to wait in line when we wait for the bus or underground.
If everyone tries their best, I’m sure we will make Guangzhou a civilized city.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给内容要点谈谈中学生该如何为创文贡献自己的一份力量。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时注意内容要点不要遗漏，做到单词，语法无误。可以适当发挥，使行文连贯，条理清晰。
C
（2021·安徽利辛·三模）假定你是李华，你的好友Jack最近在生活中遇到一些问题。请你用英语给Jack写一封电子邮件，给他提供几点建议。
内容包括：1. 勇敢面对；2. 积极沟通；3. 寻求帮助。
注意：1. 词数80—100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使 行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；4. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
It’s natural to meet problems in our daily lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Dear Jack,
It’s natural to meet problems in our daily lives. So you don’t need to worry about it. Here is some advice to share with you.
To begin with, we should be brave enough to face the problems directly. Only in this way, can it be possible to solve the problems. Second, it’s a good way to share our problems with our friends. Also, it’s OK to ask our parents and teachers for help. Most importantly, never lose heart and never give up. Always remember: there are more ways than problem. Problems may make our life more difficult. However, they can also teach to grow up. Don’t be afraid and let’s face them bravely.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题要求根据内容提示给Jack写一封电子邮件，提一些建议来帮助他解决在生活中遇到的问题。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，第一人称和第二人称结合使用。写作时可分为两段来写：第一段简述生活中有问题是很正常的，不要因此而忧虑。第二段结合要点给出建议，第二段可分为三部分写，第一部分写我们要直面生活中的问题；第二部分写出现问题后要积极有效地沟通，并积极寻求帮助；第三部分写决不放弃，要相信办法总比困难多。在写作时要注意符合题意，同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性，可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
D
（2022·上海崇明·一模）Write a letter of at least 60 words on the topic “A suggestion for our school” (以“给学校的一个建议”为题写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。)
在近四年的初中校园生活和学习中，你学到和享受到了很多。但是通过你的观察，学校有些地方还有提升和完善的空间，比如在课后服务、活动项目、学生午餐、学校设施、校园文化等等方面。要求：请你结合自身经历，确定一个主题，给校长写封信，为学校提出一个合理化、可操作的建议，并说说你的理由或感想。
注意：1. 短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Dear headmaster,
I am your student. I want to say something about our school. Although my school life is colorful and happy, I still want to have a suggestion to our school. In my opinion, our school should organize more activities, such as going hiking, holding art festivals, and reading and speech contest. I think our school pay more attention to our study, but ignore other skills. If our school can hold all kinds of activities, students will be more active and improve themselves quickly. It is important for students to grow up healthily.
Your student
【解析】
【详解】
1、题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应先确定主题，然后给学校提出建议，然后说出提建议的理由或感想，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍建议和提建议的理由或感想时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
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（2022·上海静安·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情景写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
新学期带来了新变化。“双减”新规（The new rules）提出：减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。“双减”后，你的生活有了什么变化？请给学校的校长（Headmaster）写一封信，从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面谈谈你是否满意现在的变化以及还有何烦恼，并请对方给你的烦恼提些建议。
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【答案】例文
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you the changes in my life after the new rules.
In the past, I spent lots of time doing my homework and there were many after-school classes on weekends. Now I have less homework and there are more activities at school, including many kinds of club activities. So, my life is much more colorful. In my free time, I like going to the museum to learn about history. Besides, I plan to study computer science by myself.
I am pleased with my life after the new rules. But sometimes, I have trouble controlling myself. I can’t help playing computer games. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my self-control so that I can make the best of my time? Thanks so much！
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一封学生写给校长的信，要求谈论“双减”政策出台后自己生活的变化以及遇到的烦恼，并请校长提出建议来解决烦恼。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，重点描述现在的生活，因此时态主要用一般现在时。可分为三段：第一段说明写信目的；第二段描述“双减”后生活的变化；第三段陈述遇到的烦恼并请求对方的建议。写作时，注意条理清晰，语言连贯，力求无语法和标点错误。
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（2021·四川·石室中学二模）假如你叫李华。第 31 届世界大学生运动会将于 2021 年 8 月 18 日在成都市举行，成都市为了以崭新的面貌迎接本届大运会的举行，号召大家给市长写信，反映现在成都市还存在的环境问题，造成这些问题的原因，提出相应建议，并号召广大市民为大运会做出自己的具体贡献。请根据以上信息写信。
注意：1.注意书信格式；
2.短文需包含以上全部要点，可适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现真实学校和姓名；
4.词数: 100 词左右。
参考词汇: 世界大学生运动会：World Universiade
Dear mayor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear mayor,
The 31st World Universiade will be held in Chengdu on August 18, 2021. We are proud of that. But there are still environmental problems in Chengdu. We don’t have clean water because of water pollution. Some factories pour the waste water into the river. And there are so many factories and cars that there is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution. Some people throw away rubbish everywhere. The streets are not clean enough.
In order to welcome the Universiade and make our city more beautiful, it’s time for us to protect the environment in Chengdu. Firstly we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. Don’t use plastic bags. Also we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them. We can drive as little as possible. The government should stop the discharge of waste water and gas from factories. If we all play a role in the environment, our city is more and more beautiful. The World Universiade needs everyone’s efforts!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作。首先介绍成都市存在的环境问题并介绍造成这些问题的原因，然后就这些污染提出建议，最后号召大家为大运会做贡献。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态主要采用一般现在时态。在提出建议时，可以采用we should…we can…we must…等句式。写作时注意连词的使用，使叙述完整，条理清晰。
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（2021·山东历城·二模）假设你是李华, 你所喜爱的English Corner周报创刊十周年之际征集读者意见。请你根据以下内容给主编写封信。
内容主要包括：
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者；
2.赞赏该报优点：1）内容丰富有趣2）介绍名人成功故事；
3.提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。
注意：
1.词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of English Corner!
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of English Corner! I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.
There are many advantages of English Corner. Firstly, it covers with national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to English Corner, we all well-informed and keep up with the changing world.
As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that English Corner can provide articles about English learning for us.
Finally, I hope that English Corner will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据提示内容给English Corner的主编回复一封信。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为四段式：第一段表达自己是English Corner的忠实粉丝；第二段表达English Corner的优点；第三段提出建议；最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
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（2021·广东罗湖·二模）假如你是李华，你所在的学校将举办以 “你好，深圳！（Hello, Shenzhen!）”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示和要求，完成一份英文演讲稿。
要点：1.列举深圳取得的成就，如：人们生活环境的改善，收入的増加等；
2. 提出至少两条可使深圳更美好的建议；
3. 呼吁大家行动起来共同努力。
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
（参考词汇：经济特区special economic zone；粤港澳大湾区Greater Bay Area；可不使用参考词汇）
Dear fellows,
As we all know, Shenzhen has made great achievements.
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Thank you for listening!
【答案】One possible version:
Dear fellows,
As we all know, Shenzhen has made great achievements.
It is amazing how many achievements Shenzhen has achieved in the past few years. The living environment of Shenzhen citizens has been improved and people here are glad to receive higher income now.
In order for Shenzhen to become better, there are three suggestions. First, it is important to pay more attention to education so that children can be taught well. Second, we need to continue to raise people’s income for them to live a better life. At last, Shenzhen had better spend more time developing technology. In this way, our lives can become more convenient.
In my opinion, if we try our best to improve people’s lives, we can make Shenzhen a better city in our country.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求根据提示内容，介绍深圳的发展并提出建议。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用现在完成时和一般现在时。作文要从深圳取得的成就，使深圳更美好的建议和呼吁大家行动起来三方面入手。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。