读后续写 喜乐篇 课件 2023届高考英语

这是一份读后续写 喜乐篇 课件 2023届高考英语，共35页。PPT课件主要包含了对语篇结构的把控能力，创造性思维能力，读后续写考查的能力，How等内容，欢迎下载使用。
把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力
语言运用的准确性和丰富性
Hw t cmplete a narrative article
Step ne: thrugh reading(wh; when; where; what; why; hw)Step tw: lgical pltting(the plt, the underlined wrds, the given tw sentences, reasnable ending)Step three: vivid writing (linking wrds, details, sentence structures)
The Micr-skills Training in writing 表达微技能之准确的动作神态描写： 喜乐篇
Lve Will Melt Yur Heart
Interpretatin f the Text 文本解读
Para. 1 After a few minutes, I thanked Mr. Dan fr spending a bit f his day with us. Para. 2 A few days later, we visited Mr. Dan’s tidy huse.
1.What's the style f the passage?A. Narratin (记叙文)B. Expsitin (说明文)C. Argumentatin (议论文)
whwhen wherewhathwwhy
2.Persn(人称): First persn? Secnd persn? Third persn?
3.Tense(时态): Past tense ? The simple present tense?
Read fr the clue f the stry
Interpretatin f the Text 文本解读 (Wh)
Reading fr the relatinship f the characters
Interpretatin f the Text文本解读(When)
The day befre my daughter Nrah’s furth birthday
As I was distracted（分心） by…
The fllwing day—her birthday
Befre I culd hush her…
Interpretatin f the Text 文本解读(Hw)
The way Nrah (the little girl) shwed her thughtfulness and empathy(Para. 1) t Dan(the ld man)
Reading fr the plt develpments.
The day befre Nrah’s furth birthday
standing up in the cart
waving and prclaiming
went n t explain…
cautined me t mind the elderly persn…
placed her sft hand n
turned t me and asked
kept his hand in hers
kissed the tp f his hand
placed it n her cheek
As I was distracted by
Interpretatin f the Title 标题解读
Nrah’s lve fr Dan
melt Dan’s heart
Lve between Nrah and Dan
melt “my” heart
Reading the underlined wrds fr creatin
10 underlined wrds: Nrah，best，lve，girl，excitedly，turned t，pht，sft，Dan，magic
Nrah, I , Dan
lved, turn t
best, excitedly, sft, magic
Interpretatin f underlined wrds 划线词解读
Para. 1 After a few minutes, I thanked Mr. Dan fr spending a bit f his day with us. Para. 2 A few days later, we visited Mr. Dan’s tidy huse
Interpretatin f given infrmatin续写首句解读
Interpretatin f given infrmatin续写首句解读
Para. 1 After a few minutes, I thanked Mr. Dan fr spending a bit f his day with us.
Given Infrmatin
1. She went n t explain that she has a sft spt fr mature flks: “I like ld peple the best because they walk slw like I d and they have sft skin like me. They all gnna die sn, s I’m gnna lve them befre they die.” (Para 1)
2. Nrah was busy standing up in the cart, excitedly waving and jyfully prclaiming, (Para 2)
1)Emtinal develpment(Nrah)
2) Emtinal develpment(Dan)
3. She placed her sft hand n tp f his. He wrdlessly stared at her with twinkling eyes as she kept his hand in hers, kissed the tp f his hand and then placed it n her cheek.(Para. 3)
4.His expressin changed frm cnfused t stunned(惊讶) t delighted. (Para. 3)
Interpretatin f given infrmatin 首句解读：Para. 1 After a few minutes, I thanked Mr. Dan fr spending a bit f his day with us.
New Infrmatin
What’s Mr. Dan’s respnse t my gratitude? What did he say? ③ What did I d afterwards? ④ Why did Mr. Dan feel dwn in his life? ⑤ Hw did I knw Mr. Dan’s address?
Interpretatin f given infrmatin首句解读：Para 2. A few days later, we visited Mr. Dan’s tidy huse.
Plt develpment:
Dan had a gd time with us n Nrah’s birthday. We knew the address f Dan’s tidy huse.(based n the previus plt)
① What did I see in Mr.Dan’s huse?② What did Nrah d there?③ Hw did Dan say and feel then?④ Hw did Nrah change Dan and heal him?
NewInfrmatin
The Micr-skills Training in writing 表达微技能之动作神态：喜乐篇
在续写文本中，我们可以通过情绪情感、心理活动、具体动作、对话独白、场景描写以及修辞更多种方式使得文章血肉丰满，厚实感人。
Para.3: His expressin sftened as he replied, “Well, hell, little lady! Happy birthday! ”.
词的积累：名词：excitement, jy, pleasure动词：cheer, yell形容词：happy, glad, pleased, cheerful, delighted, verjyed, merry, 副词：jllily, enjyably, cheerfully, jyfully
在续写文本中，记叙文的续写经常存在着字数不足，信息量不够，表达干瘪的缺点，无法准确传达故事类文章的情感因素。可以通过对于人物动作神态的扩充来丰富文章。
词块和句的积累： 1. The smile n her face shne like a diamnd.2. A smile f understanding flashed acrss his face.3. A ripple（涟漪） f excitement ran thrugh them.4. Laughter lingered（徘徊） arund the rm.5. My face was shining with indescribably wild jy.6. A wild gaiety（愉悦,欢乐） tk hld f her.7. Unfrgettable were her eyes that shne like diamnds and lips held in a steady smile. 8. I was wild with jy/delight. 9. I was pleased beynd descriptin.10. She wre a shining smile n her face.
11. Her smile lit up the whle rm. 12. She shed（流出） tears f jy. / Tears f happiness flwing dwn her face.13. Her eyes were sparkling like diamnds.14. Her eyes shne/beamed/twinkled/danced with pleasure/delight/jy/sweetness.15. Her flushed（发红，发光） face was shining with excitement.16. Jy welled up inside her.17. I was flating n air.18. Amusement gleamed（闪烁） in his eyes.19. Because f that smile, ur hearts jump and dance fr jy, sweet frm the heart filled t the bdy. 20. Her heart swells with happiness/jy.
Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换1.外婆把车停在路边，急忙走向Bbby的前门，整个人兴奋地颤抖。Grandma parked dwn the street, rushed t Bbby’s frnt dr____________________________________________. (运用连动句句型扩充句子内容) . ② Grandma parked dwn the street and rushed t Bbby’s frnt dr, ________________________________________. (运用非谓语动词丰富文章句型)
and trembled with excitement
trembling with excitement
2. 我从未见过如此可爱的小动物，欣喜若狂地追了上去。① ________________________________________________________ I was wild with jy and fllwed its track. (运用such … that … 句型)②_______________________________________________________, I was wild with jy and fllwed its track. (运用倒装句)
I had never seen such a lvely creature in my life that
Never had I seen such a lvely creature in my life
3. Paula的脸通红，声音也兴奋地颤抖起来。Paula’s face turned red____________________________________________. (运用with + n. + ding结构) ② Paula’s face turned red, ________________________________________. (运用独立主格结构)
with her vice quivering with excitement
her vice quivering with excitement
4. Nrah非常开心，几乎就要跳起来了，眼泪含满了眼眶。① Nrah was ____________________________________and tears filled her eyes. (运用s…that…句型) ② ____________________________________________________ with tears filling her eyes.(运用s放在句首的倒装句)
s happy that she almst jumped up
S happy was Nrah that she almst jumped up
5. 听到他们对圣诞老人说谢谢，她的眼中闪烁着一丝快乐的光芒。① ________________________________________, her eyes were sparkling like diamnds. (运用非谓语动词)②___________________________________________ a ripple f excitement gleamed in her eyes. (运用强调句型)
On hearing them say “Thanks” t Santa Clause
It was hearing them say “Thanks” t Santa Clause that
6. 当他们看到爸妈，如释重负，眼里含着泪光。
_______________________________________, they felt relieved with spark in their eyes. (运用时间状语从句)(When they sptted/caught sight f their parents)② __________________________________________________, they felt relieved with spark in their eyes. (运用“一……就”句型)
When they sptted/caught sight f their parents
The mment/instant they sptted/caught sight f their parents
7. Jennifer睁大昏昏欲睡的双眼，她脸上挂着的微笑使整个房间变得明亮.Jennifer’s sleepy eyes pened wide and her face __________________________________________. (运用定语从句)
wre a smile that brightened up the whle rm
8. 他的眼泪落了下来，他奔向妈妈温暖的怀抱，对她说谢谢。____________________________, he ran t mum’s warm hug, and said gently, “Mum, thank yu.” (运用with + n. + ding结构) ________________________, he ran t mum’s warm hug，and said gently, “Mum, thank yu.” (运用独立主格结构)
With tears drpping frm his eyes
Tears drpping frm his eyes
9.他不敢相信，睁大了眼睛。看到这个惊喜，他不知道说什么来表达他的喜悦。It was _________________he made his eyes wider. (运用s…that…结构) _____________________, he culdn’t speak anything t express his happy feeling. (运用非谓语动词)
s unbelievable that
Lking at this surprise
Pssible versin
After a few minutes, I thanked Mr. Dan fr spending a bit f his day with us. He tre up and said （神态和动作描写）, “N, thank yu. This has been the best day I’ve had in a lng time.” With a kind and gd-humred spirit（神态和动作描写）, he turned t my daughter. “Yu’ve made me s happy, Miss Nrah.” They gave each ther a lving hug（神态和动作描写）and Nrah watched him until he was ut f view. I was blwn away by this meeting and psted the stry and a pht f them n my Facebk. Later that night, I received a private message, frm which I learned that Mr. Dan’s wife, Mary, had passed away six mnths earlier, and he had been lnely and depressed since his belved had gne. I asked fr Mr. Dan’s phne number and called him a few days later.
A few days later, we visited Mr. Dan’s tidy huse. We spent nearly three hurs with him that day. He was patient and kind with my talkative, cnstantly mving girl. Nrah asks abut Mr. Dan every day. She wants him t be OK and feel lved. Mr. Dan thinks abut Nrah t. After anther recent visit, he tld me that he had slept sundly every night since meeting my girl. “Nrah has healed me,” he said. That left me speechless(神态及动作描写） and my cheeks wet with tears（神态及动作描写）. Seventy-eight years separate these tw peple in age. Smehw, their hearts and suls seem t recgnize each ther frm lng ag.
评点：这篇文章对于人物喜乐的描写不多，但出现的地方都恰到好处地推动着情节的发展。实际上，文中小女孩Nrah的父亲和老人Dan的喜乐情绪中都夹杂着感动，是一种混合的情感（mixed feelings）。如老人流泪感谢父女俩陪他度过的快乐时光，显示了老人既开心又感动的心情；而当他感谢小女孩Nrah时，老人是和蔼愉悦的。这些描写符合老人面对一位成年人和一位小孩时不同的情绪表现，老人的形象立刻就丰满起来了。而故事的结尾处，小女孩的父亲被女儿和老人之间的感情而感动，因此感动地流泪。从旁观者的角度进一步凸显了文章的主题：爱会融化人的心。