初中英语中考复习 15 自然风光 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

这是一份初中英语中考复习 15 自然风光 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版），共7页。试卷主要包含了thusands f成千上万的，tired 疲倦的;劳累的，amaze 使惊讶;感到惊讶等内容，欢迎下载使用。

相关话题范文解析引路
（一）
The Yellw Muntain
The Yellw Muntain is lcated in the suth f Anhui Prvince. It is ne f the mst well-knwn muntains
in China. Every year, thusands f turists at hme and abrad cme t visit it.
It's a little far frm the city. It takes yu abut three hurs t get there by bus. Climbing the muntain may make yu a little tired. Hwever, n the way t the tp f the muntain, yu can enjy the sea f cluds, wndrus pines and unique rcks arund yu. In the early mrning, when the sun rises, the sky lks very beautiful.
Yu wuld be amazed by the wnderful scenery there. It is really wrth visiting.
参考译文
黄山
黄山位于安徽省的南部。它是中国的名山之一。 每年，成千上万的中外游客去那里游览。它离市区有点远。坐汽车的话，大概要3个小时才能到达那里。爬山可能会使你有点累。然而，在向山顶前进的过程中，你可以欣赏环绕着你的云海、奇松和怪石。清晨，当太阳升起来时，天空看起来非常美丽。
你会惊讶于那里的美丽景色。它真的很值得去游玩。
亮点词汇
1.thusands f成千上万的
2.at hme and abrad海内外;中外
3.tired 疲倦的;劳累的
4.unique 独特的;独一无二的
5.amaze 使惊讶;感到惊讶
出彩句型
is lcated in... ...位于
2.It is ne f the mst well-knwn...它是最著名之..。
3.It takes y... t d sth.这会花费 (时间等)去做某事。
4.On the way yu can... 在...的路上，你可以...
5.It is wrth ding sth.值得做某事。
高分点评
本文围绕中国的一座名山一黄山展开， 介绍了它的概况、云海、奇松、怪石、日出等，呈现出绝美的山上奇景。作者的文笔非常出色，"sea f cluds" "unique rcks"等表达惟妙惟肖地展现了黄山之景。文中的句式多变，如“it”引导的形式主语句、动词的-ing形式作主语等，都是文章的加分点。
（二）
Beihai Beach
Beihai Beach is very famus in my city. The beach lies in the nrth f the city, abut 8 kilmetres away. lt's ne f the best beaches in the city.
The sand n the beach is fine, sft and clean. And the water is clear with small waves.Therefre, it's very suitable fr swimming and playing beach vlleyball. Many peple cme here t spend their hlidays. Everyne says it is a beautiful place t travel. Mrever, the peple here are very friendly.
I think yu all can enjy yurselves here.
参考译文
北海滩
北海滩在我的城市非常出名。这个沙滩位于城市的北部，距离城市大约8公里。它是城中最好的沙滩之一。
沙滩上的沙质很好，又柔软，又干净。海水很清澈，带有小小的浪花。因此，这里非常适合游泳和打沙滩排球。很多人来这里度假。每个人都说这是一个适合游览的美丽的地方。而且，这里的人非常友好。
我觉得你们都会在这里玩得很开心。
亮点词汇
1.sft 柔软的
2.wave 波浪
3.suitable 适合的
4.beach vlleyball 沙滩排球
5.enjy neself玩得开心
出彩句型
1... lies in... 位
2.The water is clear with small waves.海水很清，带有小小的浪花。
3.It's very suitable fr.. 非常适宜做
4.Many peple cme here t spend their hlidays.很多人来这里度假。
5.Yu all can enjy yurselves here.你们都会在这里玩得很开心。
高分点评
本文将北海滩的美丽景色呈现在我们面前，充满了作者对这一片沙滩的热爱之情。 文章中的句子均简单明了，如表示位置的"lie n.."、描述海水的"The water is clear with small waves"，都清楚地描述了海滩的朴素之美，展示了作者扎实的语言功底。
相关话题满分作文必背
（一）
Green grasses，blue lakes and beautiful muntains are waiting fr yu!Welcme t clrful nature pare!
There is a clean river. There are sme clrful flwers. There is a beautiful muntain near the nature park. The air is fresh. The sky is blue. The cluds are white. The tree is green. The bridge is tall. The grass is green. I can run n the grass. There is a path near the lake. There are many fish in the lake. There is a frest in the nature park. There are many trees n the muntains. There are many flwers near the path.
Lk! There are sme birds in the sky. One, tw, three…… h! S many!
I like this nature park very much. I am s excited.
参考译文：
绿色的草，蓝色的湖和漂亮的山脉在这里等你!欢迎你来到色彩丰富的自然公园!
这有一个干净的河流，有许多色彩丰富的花朵，有一个漂亮的山脉在自然公园里。空气是新鲜的，天空是蓝的，云是雪白的，树是绿的，桥是高的，草是绿的。我能在草上奔跑。湖泊旁边有一条小路，有许多鱼在湖泊里，有一片森林在自然公园里，有许多树在山脉上，有许多花在小路旁边。
我非常喜欢这个自然公园，我好兴奋!

（二）
Beautiful spring spring with light ftsteps cming tward us, in this seasn fr revival, everything arund becme full f vitality, let's find tgether fllwed in the ftsteps f spring, the beauty f spring!
Spring thunder rumbled with cntinuus rain, rain misten the whle f the earth. Feline winter in the land f grass after the baptism f the spring rains are scrambling t drill ut f the earth. Althugh small, althugh very thin, althugh very sft but the grass is very strng, they will still stand tall, spring back t prevent the grwth f the grass. The earth cvered with a layer f green.
Spring is a clurful flwers blming seasn, lk at the shps pened, yellw primrse, blw the trumpet, as if t say: "spring is cming!" Yellw peach blssm zhankai smiling faces, this beautiful peach blssm fr park added a lt f vitality, peach blssm has a lt f clr, have a plenty f mei red, r pink, and white. The peach blssm is s delicate, mei red and pink peach blssm is s shy like a sensitive plant, nt all f the peach blssm is temperamental. Lk at that white peach blssm is that race t the pen atmsphere, t meet the baptism f the rain. Mre let a persn like rape, far lk like the bundless yellw carpet n the shp. Spring is s beautiful!
Lk at that, in the field a view f jubilatin, farmers are permeated with smile n her face, trying t sw tgether. The distance f children put the kite, they release their dreams. It was a happy mment.
It was a beautiful spring, the spring f hpe, jy f spring. In the spring, we als want t sw, planted the seeds f hpe with hard sweat in it t make it a little bit f grwing up, fly ur dreams!
参考译文
美丽的春天春天迈着轻盈的脚步向我们走来了，在这万物复苏的季节，周围的一切都变得生机勃勃，让我们跟随着春的脚步一起寻找春天的美丽吧!
轰隆隆的春雷带来了绵绵的春雨，春雨滋润了整个大地。在土地里猫冬的小草经过春雨的洗礼后个个争先恐后的钻出了大地。虽然很小，虽然很细，虽然很柔软但小草非常的坚强，它们仍会挺直腰板，春寒又袭都阻止不了小草的生长。给大地披上了一层新绿。
春天是一个五颜六色、百花盛开的季节，看那迎春花开了，黄黄的迎春花吹起了小喇叭，好像在说：“春天来了!"一朵朵桃花绽开了笑脸，这美丽的桃花给公园增添了许多生机，桃花有很多颜色，有的是玫红的，有的是粉红的，还有雪白的。玫红色的桃花是那么娇滴滴的，而粉红色的桃花呢却是那么的羞涩像含羞草一样，可不是所有的桃花都是那么的娇气。看那白色的桃花是那样的大气都竞相开放，迎接春雨的洗礼。更让人喜欢的是油菜花，远看就像铺上了无边无际的黄地毯。春天好美丽呀!
看那田野里，一片欢腾的景色，农民脸上都洋溢着微笑，一起来努力地播种。远处小朋友放着风筝，他们放飞了自己的梦想。那真是快乐的时刻。
这真是一个美丽的春天、希望的春天、快乐的春天。在这春天里我们也要播种，种下希望的种子用辛勤的汗水浇灌它让它一点点的长大，放飞我们的梦想吧!

（三）
A Spring Mrning
It was early in the mrning. The sun was just creeping(爬) ut f the eastern hrizn(地平线) and glden red was penetrating (穿透) thrugh the white cluds and acrss the sky. The lakes, the trees and the bambs lked as if they were all gilded. The grund was cvered with tender grass, n whse blades sme dew drps were glistening(晶莹剔透) under the sunshine.
Birds flew arund the wds singing cheerfully and restlessly. Sme bys were quietly jgging alng the path, while a cuple f girls were reading alud under the trees lining the bank f the lake.
A gentle breeze came up, wrinkling(使…起皱) the surface f the lake. It was really a beautiful and lively mrning.
参考译文
春晨
清晨时分，太阳从东边的地平线慢慢爬起，一片金黄透过白色的云彩，划过天空。湖泊、树木和竹林都似乎染上了金边。地面上长满了绿油油的小草，小草的叶片上，几滴露珠在阳光的照耀下晶莹剔透。
鸟儿在树林里飞翔，不停地欢唱。一些男孩子沿着小路安静地慢跑，而一些女生则坐在湖边成排的树下大声朗读。
一阵清风吹来，湖面掀起了涟漪。真是一个美丽动人而又意气盎然的清晨。