2023届高考英语二轮复习天津高考英语书信写作训练作业含答案

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习天津高考英语书信写作训练作业含答案，共22页。试卷主要包含了假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，假如你是中学生李华，假如你是晨光中学的李津，假设你是晨光中学的李津等内容，欢迎下载使用。
书信写作
1．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友Chris得知你校正在积极开展“绿色校园行”活动，非常感兴趣，便写信给你，希望你介绍相关情况。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
（1）简单介绍开展“绿色校园行”活动的目的；
（2）介绍你校开展了“绿色校园行”活动的主要做法（如减少资源浪费，鼓励废旧物回收利用，垃圾分类等）；
（3）表达希望了解美国学校如何开展类似活动，征求建议。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
绿色校园行Green Campus Campaign垃圾分类 waste classification
Dear Chris，
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Yours，
LiJin
2．假如你是中学生李华。暑期将至，为了给同学们的假期出游提出好的建议，你校的英文报纸欢迎同学们投稿，对于出境游发表自己的看法。请为你校的英文报纸写一篇文章，
内容需要包含以下要点：
1. 近来出境游热的原因（请给出1-2个原因）；
2. 在出境旅游中出现的一些问题（如不文明的现象等；可以自由发挥）
3. 你对出境游的看法和建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Nowadays more and more people enjoy traveling abroad with their family during their holidays. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假如你是晨光中学的李津。最近，你得知你的外国朋友Tom每天都用快餐作为午餐，你觉得这不是个好习惯，请你给他写一封信，建议他尽量少吃快餐。
文中应包括：
1. 常吃快餐的危害
2. 提出建议
参考词汇：营养nutrition
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
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Best Wishes
4．假设你是晨光中学的李津。你在上网时发现一个国外的英语学习网站，你很喜欢里面的 内容。 请你根据以下提示，用英语给该网站写一封电子邮件。
（1）表示感兴趣；
（2）其中一些栏目对学习很有帮助（词汇，阅读等）；
（3）提些建议（建立交友平台，介绍不同国家的文化等）。
注意：
（1）词数不少于 100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：栏目 column 网站 website
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Jin, a Chinese student in Senior Three.
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5．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见。请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件：
1. 建议他可以来中国；
2. 阐述你的三条理由；
3. 承诺可提供帮助。
注意：1.词数不少于100字;
2.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.
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Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
6．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下面所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。
1. 自己英语学习的情况：学习方法、习惯等；
2. 对学校英语教学的建议(请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议)。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Dear teacher and schoolmates,
It’s a great pleasure for me to be here and share my experience ...
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Thank you for listening.
7．假设你是李津，正在你校学习汉语的英国交换生Mike对中国古诗词很感兴趣。请用英语给他写一封邮件，邀请他3月17日上午9：30在学校报告厅与我们一同观看CCTV3频道《经典咏流传》中的一期节目。
（1）时间、地点和观看人员；
（2）内容：欣赏以歌曲形式咏唱的经典古诗词
（3）建议：提前了解一些中国古诗词，观后谈感受。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
《经典咏流传》 Everlasting Classics 咏唱 chant
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8．假设你是李津，你的美国朋友彼得希望成为中国第十届残运会志愿者，他向你写信询问残运会的相关情况，并求助怎样学好汉语。请用英语给他写一封回信。
要点：
1、收到来信，获悉求助；
2、残运会的相关情况（时间：2019年8月25日；地点：天津；意义）；
3、学好汉语的两条建议。
注意：1、词数不少于100；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：第十届残疾人运动会 the 10th National Games for Persons with Disabilities
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Jin
9．假如你是高三学生李津，你想选择一所外地的大学，而你的父母想让在本市上大学，你很苦恼，请给你在中国留学的美国朋友Tom写一封求助信，主要内容包括：
1. 你的苦恼
2. 你和父母各持己见的理由
3. 询问Tom的建议
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
Long time no see. As it won’t be long before I graduate from high school, I have to choose an ideal university in advance, which makes me really annoyed.
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Yours,
Li Jin
10．假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友 Jim 即将升入中国的一所高中学习，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；       
2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；
3.课后积极完成作业，巩固知识。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案
1．Dear Chris，
I’m glad to receive your last letter asking about the Green Campus Campaign in our school. Now let me tell you something about the meaningful event.
Aiming to create a green campus which is beneficial to us physically and mentally, our school carried out the Green Campus Campaign, which encourages the recycling of waste materials, reduction of the waste of resources and waste classification. Since the campaign was carried out, all the students have shown great enthusiasm. We all agree that the concept of "green campus" does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind, so we decide start from small things around us, start from ourselves, and make an effort to help create a green campus.
If your school also holds such activities, please tell me about them. I will appreciate it if you offer some suggestions.
     I’m looking forward to your reply.
                                                                                                       Yours，
LiJin
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友Chris得知你校正在积极开展“绿色校园行”活动，非常感兴趣，便写信给你，希望你介绍相关情况。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。（1）简单介绍开展“绿色校园行”活动的目的；
（2）介绍你校开展了“绿色校园行”活动的主要做法（如减少资源浪费，鼓励废旧物回收利用，垃圾分类等）；（3）表达希望了解美国学校如何开展类似活动，征求建议。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； Green Campus Campaign（绿色校园行），mentally（心理上），physically（身体上），waste classification（垃圾分类）， recycling（回收利用），reduction（减少），beneficial（有益的），environmental（环保的），create（营造），meaningful（有意义的），concept（概念），enthusiasm（热情）及appreciate（感激）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有aim to（目标是），beneficial to（有益于），carry out (开展)，do harm to（对……有害），refer to（关于）以及make an effort to（努力），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“our school carried out the Green Campus Campaign, which encourages the recycling of waste materials, reduction of the waste of resources and waste classification.”，定语从句“Aiming to create a green campus which is beneficial to us physically and mentally,”，宾语从句“We all agree that the concept of "green campus" does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind”，形式宾语“I will appreciate it if you offer some suggestions.”，非谓语动词“I’m glad to receive your last letter asking about the Green Campus Campaign in our school.”及“Aiming to create a green campus which is beneficial to us physically and mentally, our school carried out the Green Campus Campaign”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
2．             Nowadays more and more people enjoy traveling abroad with their family during their holidays. With the development of economy and people's living standard，Chinese people can afford to go abroad. Besides，more people are becoming interested in foreign cultures.
However，some people don't behave so well in foreign countries. For example，they drop litter everywhere，as well as spitting randomly in public，which not only shows bad personal qualities，but also does great harm to the image of our country.
Personally，traveling abroad is a good opportunity to widen our vision. At the same time，everyone has the responsibility to uphold the image of our motherland，a civilized county with a long history. I suggest we inherit our ancient traditions and behave in a way that befits our values when traveling abroad.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求写一篇关于出境游的议论文。
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求写一篇关于出境游的议论文，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①出境游很热门；②近来出境游热的原因；③在出境旅游中出现的一些问题；④出境游的看法和建议。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：traveling abroad（出境游），living standard（生活标准），drop litter everywhere（随意扔垃圾），spit randomly（随地吐痰），inherit our ancient traditions（继承优良传统）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合议论文的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。
非限制性定语从句的使用For example，they drop litter everywhere，as well as spitting randomly in public，which not only shows bad personal qualities，but also does great harm to the image of our country.
宾语从句及虚拟语气的使用I suggest we inherit our ancient traditions and behave in a way that befits our values when traveling abroad.
3．Dear Tom，
I’m worried to know that you often eat fast food for lunch these days. I don't think it's a wise choice Though fast food is convenient and delicious in taste，even becomes more and more popular in China，I still believe it can't provide us with adequate nutrition. To teenagers，it is usually not a balanced   diet and low in cleanliness To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch，you'd better take some home-cooking for lunch or buy some fresh food from the school canteen I don’t mean fast food should be refused in your life. But just choose it when you are really in a hurry ，or it will surely take some side effects to you，
I hope you can take my advice seriously and enjoy all kinds of delicious and healthy Chinese food.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假如你是晨光中学的李津。最近，你得知你的外国朋友Tom每天都用快餐作为午餐，你觉得这不是个好习惯，请你给他写一封信，建议他尽量少吃快餐。文中应包括：1. 常吃快餐的危害；2. 提出建议。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Confucius Institute （孔子学院），the Chinese poetry competition（中文诗词比赛），my sincere congratulations（衷心的祝贺），further study（深造）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I’m worried to know that you often eat fast food for lunch these days.句中that引导宾语从句；Though fast food is convenient and delicious in taste，even becomes more and more popular in China，I still believe it can't provide us with adequate nutrition.句中Though引导让步状语从句；To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch，动词不定式作目的状语。
4．Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Jin, a Chinese student in Senior Three. When surfing online I came across your website, which interests me very much. I am writing to let you know my personal feelings as well as make some suggestions.
What interests me most is the diversity of the columns, some of which are of great help to my studies. Thanks to the columns, not only have I had my vocabulary enlarged but I have also improved my reading ability. In addition to that, I would like to make some practical suggestions to make the website more accessible to Chinese students. First of all, it would be great to set up a platform where students from both countries can make friends and exchange thoughts and ideas. Besides, it couldn’t be better to introduce some cultures of different countries so that people can avoid some misunderstanding in communication. I think offering some classical music is also a wise option.
I really hope these suggestions can be helpful in making the website more popular.
【分析】本文属于应用文，要求写一则书信。
【详解】第一步: 根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一则书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①发现一个国外的英语学习网站，你很喜欢里面的内容；②表示感兴趣；③其中一些栏目对学习很有帮助（词汇，阅读等）；④提些建议（建立交友平台，介绍不同国家的文化等）。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：personal feelings（个人感受），column（专栏），vocabulary（词汇），set up a platform（建立一个平台）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。
非限制性定语从句的使用When surfing online I came across your website, which interests me very much.
主语从句和定语从句的使用What interests me most is the diversity of the columns, some of which are of great help to my studies.
5．Dear Mike,
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week. I have been thinking about the question you asked me. From my point of view, you can choose to come to China after finishing your studies for the following reasons.
For one reason, Chinese development has offered quantities of job opportunities for the young over the past 30 years. What’s more, what you are studying is badly needed in China. As a matter of fact, many big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, China is a country with so many different cultures and traditions from the west that many foreigners enjoy living and working here. I am sure you will adapt to the environment quickly and enjoy your stay here.
If you come, I will do what I can to help you.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见。请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件：1. 建议他可以来中国；2. 阐述你的三条理由；3. 承诺可提供帮助。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：development（发展），offer（提供），job opportunities（工作机会），badly（非常），hire（雇用），cultures and traditions（文化和传统），foreigner（外国人），environment（环境）及enjoy（喜欢）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有think about（考虑），from one’s point of view（依某人的观点），quantities of (大量的)，what’s more（更重要的是），as a matter of fact（事实上）以及adapt to（适应），而且还使用了定语从句“I have been thinking about the question you asked me.”，so...that...句型“For another reason, China is a country with so many different cultures and traditions from the west that many foreigners enjoy living and working here.”，主语从句“What’s more, what you are studying is badly needed in China.”，宾语从句“If you come, I will do what I can to help you.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
6．Dear teacher and schoolmates,
It’s a great pleasure for me to be here and share my experience of learning English with you.
To begin with, we should learn to learn efficiently, adopting some effective methods. Besides, developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefits me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what has been taught after class. Most importantly, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio and consult some English information from the Internet and other sources in my spare time, which helps to improve my English.
Now, I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in class. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines in order to make us better understand English. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and English corners.
Thank you for listening.
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇发言稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇发言稿：假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下面所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。包括：1. 自己英语学习的情况：学习方法、习惯等；2. 对学校英语教学的建议(请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议)。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；efficiently（高效地），adopt（采用），effective（有效的），method（方法），habit（习惯），preview（预习），consult（查阅），improve（改进），benefit（使受益）及actively（积极地）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有get involved in（参与），listen to（听……），would like to (愿意)，in order to（为了）以及such（例如），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Most importantly, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio and consult some English information from the Internet and other sources in my spare time, which helps to improve my English.”，状语从句“Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines in order to make us better understand English.”，非谓语动词“To begin with, we should learn to learn efficiently, adopting some effective methods.”及“Besides, developing a good habit is also of importance.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
7．Dear Mike,
How is everything? As you are interested in classical Chinese poetry, I’m writing to invite you to join us in watching an attractive show, Everlasting Classics, at 9:30 a.m. on March 17 in the school lecture hall.
It is a hit program on CCTV3, in which a number of classic Chinese poems are chanted in beautiful tunes. We plan to exchange our reviews after watching the show together, so I suggest you should learn in advance some poems to be shown and their background. The list of them is attached to this email.
Looking forward to your participation and I believe you will enjoy it and learn a lot.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，（1）时间、地点和观看人员；（2）内容：欣赏以歌曲形式咏唱的经典古诗词；（3）建议：提前了解一些中国古诗词，观后谈感受。第二，人称为第一人、二、三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，发出邀请。第二段，1） 时间、地点和观看人员；（2）内容：欣赏以歌曲形式咏唱的经典古诗词；（3） 建议：提前了解一些中国古诗词，观后谈感受。第三段，期待回复。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：exchange, participation, enjoy, learn, classical Chinese poetry，invite sb to do sth, join sb in sth ,Everlasting Classics, at 9:30 a.m. on March 17 in the school lecture hall, hit，program, on CCTV3, classic Chinese poems, in advance, be attached to.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子：It is a hit program on CCTV3, in which a number of classic Chinese poems are chanted in beautiful tunes.；so I suggest you should learn in advance some poems to be shown and their background.。
第五步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式：如in which引导的定语从句It is a hit program on CCTV3, in which a number of classic Chinese poems are chanted in beautiful tunes. 省略that的宾语从句和虚拟语气so I suggest you should learn in advance some poems to be shown and their background.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
8．Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter, saying you are hoping to be a volunteer in the 10th National Games for Persons with Disabilities, China and eager to learn Chinese well. I’d like to share with you the following information in detail.
The Games will be held on August 25th in Tianjin, which can not only provide a platform for disabled people to show themselves, but also an opportunity for foreigners to learn about China. As for Chinese learning, the best way is to practice it with local people. In addition, attend a Chinese class or discussion group and don’t be afraid of making mistakes. After all, one can’t avoid making mistake when learning a foreign language.
If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to write to me and I’ll be extremely glad to help.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封信。
【详解】根据提示信息，假设你是李津，你的美国朋友彼得希望成为中国第十届残运会志愿者，他向你写信询问残运会的相关情况，并求助怎样学好汉语。要求你用英语给他写一封回信。
1.首先注意时态以将来时为主。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大段：第一段告诉对方收到来信，获悉求助；第二段告诉他残运会的相关情况（时间：2019年8月25日；地点：天津；意义）；第三段简述一下学好汉语的两条建议。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文中使用了几个高分句型。1. The Games will be held on August 25th in Tianjin, which can not only provide a platform for disabled people to show themselves, but also an opportunity for foreigners to learn about China. 本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句，且从句中含有not only…but also引导的并列句。2. In addition, attend a Chinese class or discussion group and don’t be afraid of making mistakes. 此句是and连接的两个并列句，本句中使用了衔接词in addition。3. After all, one can’t avoid making mistake when learning a foreign language. 本句是when引导的时间状语从句，且使用了衔接词after all。4. If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to write to me and I’ll be extremely glad to help. 本句含有if引导的条件状语从句和and连接的并列句。
9．Dear Tom，
Long time no see. As it won’t be long before I graduate from high school, I have to select an ideal university in advance, which makes me really annoyed. My parents and I failed to reach the agreement on whether to go to another city for further education.
In my parents’ eyes, I’m still the little boy who is so fragile and innocent that I can’t be away from home. They believe without their tending, my life will be in a mess. However, I have been a young adult and anxious about independence and liberty. I have determined to prove myself via leaving for the university away from Tianjin. Furthermore, living in a strange but new city can not only broaden my horizon but also improve my communication ability.
For you have been away from America and studied in China for a few years, I really need your advice on how to persuade my parents to be in favor of my ideal and convince them that I can intend to my safety and health.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于求助信。
【详解】根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于求助信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①想选择一所外地的大学，而父母想让在本市上大学；②自己的理由；③父母的理由；④询问Tom的建议。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：an ideal university（理想大学），reach the agreement（达成一致），independence and liberty（独立和自由），persuade（说服）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合演讲稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。
Whether+不定式的使用，My parents and I failed to reach the agreement on whether to go to another city for further education.
Not only …but also的使用Furthermore, living in a strange but new city can not only broaden my horizon but also improve my communication ability.高级句式的使用，展现了作者对英语较好的驾驭能力。
10．Dear Jim,
Having learned that you'll be a senior high school student, I am delighted. In your last email you mentioned that you were confused about how to study well in your senior high school. Now, I'd like to share my study tips with you.
First, you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly. In this way, they may offer some great advice on both your study and life. Second, why not involve yourself in each class actively, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later? Third, it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.
I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，你的美国朋友 Jim 即将升入中国的一所高中学习，请给他写一封电子邮件，给他一些学习建议。
【详解】第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封电子邮件，要求考生给Jim 即将升入中国的一所高中学习，请给他写一封电子邮件，给他一些学习建议。全文以一般现在时和第二人称为主。文章要点均已经给出，总体难度较小。
第2步：组织要点。1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；3.课后积极完成作业，巩固知识。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为be confused about、share …with …、communicate with、involve oneself in等。同时注意电子邮件的惯用语和习惯表达。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如communicate with、involve oneself in等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，分词做状语Having learned that you'll be a senior high school student, I am delighted.非限制性定语从句和宾语从句…which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.同时文章还运用了一些串联成分，如first、second、third这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。