2023届高考英语二轮复习读后续写：人物对话描写课件

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习读后续写：人物对话描写课件，共14页。PPT课件主要包含了practice，yelled，大声喊，wondered，想知道，sighed，加语气，加嗓音，加情感名词，加副词等内容，欢迎下载使用。
对话(dialgue)是故事角色在整个故事中对彼此或对自己说的话。它可以用来揭示人物的性格和个性，它也可以用来推动情节向前发展，并展示情节发展的过程。 对话描写的原则：1)对话描写必须为推动故事情节服务。是情节发展的一个环节，每段出现 一两句即可；2)对话描写必须反映人物的心理与情感，刻画人物的性格；3)对话描写不宜过长，侧重口语化词汇，避开生僻词汇；4)对话描写要尽可能结合动作描写，明确对谁说，具有画面感；5)对话描写中学会使用几个感叹词，表示说话人的喜、怒、哀、乐等情绪。
What is the functin f dialgue in a stry？
Read the tw essays. Find ut hw many dialgues they have and the verbs used t start the dialgues.
1.“As yu can see, Mark treasured the bk.” He added. 他补充说，如你所见，马克珍惜这本书。2. Peter asked “Is it enugh?“ The shpkeeper smiled, “These are mre than the cst.” 彼得问: “钱够了吗？” 店主笑着说: “这比成本值得多。”3.He cntinued, “Withut yur encuragement, I culdn’t have flwn the skit s high. I really had a wnderful time tday.” 他继续说: “没有你的鼓励，我就不能把风筝放得如此高。 我今天过得非 常开心”4.“Lk, there’s a shark ut there,” I screamed. “看，外面有条鲨鱼，” 我尖叫道。
Sme examples abut hw t “say”
Tip 1 表达“说”的那些词
1.“Dn’t let g f the rpe! Keep calm!” ______ Dad. “别放开绳子!”保持冷静!”爸爸_________。2. I ___________: “Is he running fr help r is he running away and leaving me sliding t the bttm?” 我________:“他是跑去求救呢还是跑开了，让我一个人滑到水底?”3. “I might never see yu again,” she _______. “我可能再也见不到你了。”她_______着说。
1. “I wuld lve t,” said Emily in a pleasant tne. 2.“I didn’t mean t,” she murmured in a lw vice.3. Charles raced t me and cried in excitement, “Yu did great! I am s prud f yu!”4“Hw can yu d this！” she said angrily.5.“David, running is yur favrite sprts, right?” I said t him with a smile. 6.“Abslutely!” replied Jhn, excitement shining in his eyes.
Tip 2: 在对话中加入语气，嗓音，情感，副词，神态等，让你的描写更生动传神。
Tip 2: “said”的补充式描写（+声音+神态+动作）
1） "," he said +adv.2）"," he said with a +adj. + n. (表情名词, 如smile) 3）"," he said with/ in + n. (情绪名词，如anger, delight, astnishment等) 4）"," he said, his vice/palms... +adj. /ding. (独立主格结构) 5）"," he said in a +adj. + vice（形容词，如lw / gentle/ trembling/ cheery/ determined等）
"..., " he said sadly.
"..., " he said with a slight frwn.
"..., " he said in astnishment.
"..., " he said , his palms sweating.
"..., " he said in a trembling vice.
said with a gentle vice
replied in a lw vice
praised him
Try t make sme imprvements.
With a blanket n his hands, Abe asked mum where she had been. Mum tld him she had been t the twn.
1.---- “Where did yu g? It’s t late and yu seem frzen. ” Abe asked with a blanket n his hands. ---“Well, I went t the twn…”Mum answered.
Tip 3: 把对话转为间接宾语，删除多余对话
2.Abe passed the milk n t her. ---“Wait, I have smething fr yu t .”Mum said.
As Abe passed the milk n t her, mum said that she had smething fr Abe t.
that he was a gd by. “ Yu are wrthy, yu are lved.”I
said with determinatin.